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I entered form the south gate. Facing the gate, it was a grand rockery (假山).
——Tourism is the best media to obtain pleasure and romance.
Hale Waihona Puke My pleasant trip to Dalian
Last summer, the weather was hotter than usual, so my family and I decided to go to Dalian and spend a few days there. On the first day, we all got up early and went to the beach to watch the sun rising. We looked to the east. The clouds were reddish, and then turned bright red. Soon the sun slowly appeared and began to rise. The sky around the sun was very bright. The sight was so beautiful that we would never forget. The next day, we visited the Shengya Ocean Park. It lies by the sea. The most attractive part was standing on the conveyor belt to enjoy the beautiful view under the sea. Through the glass, we could see colorful fish swimming around us. It felt like I was a member of them. Leaving the tunnel under the sea, we went to watch sea lion show. Their lovely face and clumsy body made us laugh a lot. On the third day, we went to swim in the sea. The wave slapped on us slightly. It seemed we were lying in mum’s arms. During our stay in Dalian, we enjoyed beautiful scenery and ate a lot of sea food. What a relaxing and pleasant trip!