Advanced English Writing-Lesson 1
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初级英语作文高级Advanced English Writing。
As we progress in our English language learning, it is important to continue to challenge ourselves and improve our writing skills. Writing in English can be difficult, especially when trying to convey complex ideas or thoughts. However, with practice and dedication, anyone can become an advanced English writer.One of the most important aspects of advanced English writing is understanding the nuances of the language. This includes not only grammar and vocabulary, but also the cultural and social context in which the language is used. For example, using idioms or slang inappropriately can lead to confusion or misunderstandings.Another key element of advanced English writing is having a clear and concise writing style. This means avoiding unnecessary words or phrases and using strong,active verbs. It also means being able to organize thoughts and ideas in a logical manner, so that the reader caneasily follow the argument or narrative.In addition to these technical skills, an advanced English writer must also have a strong sense of creativity and originality. This means being able to approach a topic from a unique perspective or to find new and interesting ways to express ideas. It also means being able to adapt to different writing styles and formats, whether it be academic essays, creative writing, or business communication.Finally, an advanced English writer must be willing to put in the time and effort necessary to improve their skills. This means practicing regularly, seeking feedback from others, and constantly pushing oneself to learn and grow. With dedication and hard work, anyone can become an advanced English writer.In conclusion, advanced English writing is a challenging but rewarding endeavor. By mastering thenuances of the language, developing a clear and concise writing style, and cultivating creativity and originality, anyone can become an advanced English writer. With practice and dedication, the possibilities are endless.。
第1篇Date: March 15, 2023Location: XYZ University, Language CenterSubject: English Skill Practical TeachingDuration: 2 hoursClass Size: 30 studentsObjective: To enhance students' practical English communication skills through role-playing and group activities.Materials Used:- Whiteboard and markers- Role-playing scripts- Group activity handouts- English dictionaries- TimerIntroduction (10 minutes):The class began with a brief review of the previous week's lesson on business English. I checked for understanding by asking a few questions and provided clarifications where necessary. The students seemed engaged and were ready to continue their practical learning.Warm-up Activity (15 minutes):To get the students comfortable with the English language and to loosen up, I started with a simple warm-up activity. I divided the class into two groups and asked each group to come up with a list of adjectivesthat describe a good leader. Each group had to use the adjectives in a sentence. This activity helped the students to practice their vocabulary and sentence structure in a relaxed environment.Main Activity 1: Role-Playing (30 minutes):The main objective of today's class was to improve the students'practical English communication skills. To achieve this, I introduced a role-playing activity based on a hypothetical business scenario. The scenario involved a meeting between a company representative and a potential client.I provided each student with a script and divided them into pairs. One student played the role of the company representative, and the other played the role of the client. The pair had to negotiate the terms of a business deal, including pricing, delivery, and payment methods.As the role-players began their dialogue, I circulated around the class, offering guidance and feedback. I emphasized the importance of using appropriate business language, clear communication, and active listening. The students were quite engaged in the activity and seemed to enjoy the interactive nature of the exercise.Main Activity 2: Group Discussion (30 minutes):After the role-playing activity, I transitioned to a group discussion to reinforce the learning from the earlier activity. I distributed handouts that contained a list of potential challenges that could arise in business negotiations. The students were divided into small groups and asked to discuss how they would handle these challenges using English.Each group had to come up with a solution to one of the challenges, and then present their ideas to the class. The discussions were lively, and the students demonstrated their ability to think critically and communicate effectively in English.Conclusion (15 minutes):To wrap up the class, I conducted a brief review of the key points covered during the practical teaching session. I emphasized the importance of confidence, clear communication, and active listening in business English. I also provided the students with additional resources,such as online dictionaries and pronunciation guides, to help them continue their learning outside of the classroom.Reflection:Today's practical teaching session was a success. The students were actively engaged throughout the class, and they demonstrated significant progress in their practical English communication skills. The role-playing activity was particularly effective in allowing the students to practice real-life scenarios, and the group discussions helped them to think critically and solve problems collaboratively.I believe that the combination of role-playing and group activities provided a well-rounded learning experience. However, I also noticedthat some students were hesitant to speak up during the role-playing activity. In the future, I plan to encourage more participation by creating a supportive and non-judgmental learning environment.Next Steps:- To reinforce the learning from today's class, I will assign a follow-up writing task where students have to write a business letter based on the role-playing scenario.- I will also organize a speaking competition next week to further encourage students to practice their English communication skills.- I will continue to monitor the progress of each student and provide individual feedback to help them improve their language skills.Total Hours Spent: 2 hoursOverall Assessment:Today's practical teaching session met the objectives set for the class. The students showed improvement in their practical English communication skills, and they were motivated to continue learning. I am satisfied with the outcome and look forward to seeing further progress in the coming weeks.第2篇Date: [Insert Date]Subject: English Skill Practical TeachingLocation: [Insert Location]Duration: [Insert Duration]Teacher: [Insert Name]Class: [Insert Class Name/Number]Number of Students: [Insert Number]---Introduction:Today's practical teaching session focused on enhancing the students' proficiency in English through interactive activities and real-life scenarios. The objective was to improve their speaking, listening, reading, and writing skills while also fostering confidence and cultural awareness.---Morning Session (9:00 AM - 10:30 AM):Activity 1: Warm-Up Game - "Two Truths and a Lie"- Objective: To energize the students and encourage them to speak English in a relaxed atmosphere.- Method: Each student wrote down three statements about themselves, two being true and one being false. The class then had to guess which statement was the lie.- Outcome: The students actively participated, improving their listening skills and practicing their speaking abilities.Activity 2: Vocabulary Building - "Word of the Day"- Objective: To introduce new vocabulary relevant to the current unit.- Method: Each student was given a word related to the theme of the day and had to use it in a sentence.- Outcome: The students expanded their vocabulary and learned how to use new words in context.---Mid-Morning Break (10:30 AM - 10:45 AM):- Brief break with a healthy snack and water.---Afternoon Session (10:45 AM - 12:00 PM):Activity 3: Listening Comprehension - "Podcast Discussion"- Objective: To enhance the students' listening skills and their ability to understand spoken English.- Method: The class listened to a short podcast related to the current topic and then discussed the main points in groups.- Outcome: The students demonstrated improved listening skills and were able to articulate their thoughts effectively.Activity 4: Reading Activity - "Passage Analysis"- Objective: To improve reading comprehension and critical thinking skills.- Method: Students read a passage related to the theme and then answered comprehension questions as a class.- Outcome: The students showed good understanding of the passage and engaged in meaningful discussions.---Lunch Break (12:00 PM - 1:00 PM):- Students had a break for lunch, providing them with an opportunity to rest and recharge.---Afternoon Session (1:00 PM - 2:30 PM):Activity 5: Writing Exercise - "Letter Writing"- Objective: To practice writing formal and informal letters.- Method: Students were given a scenario and had to write a letter in response. They could choose between writing a formal letter to a university or an informal letter to a friend.- Outcome: The students improved their writing skills and learned the importance of proper letter format.Activity 6: Role-Playing - "Role of a Tour Guide"- Objective: To enhance speaking skills and cultural awareness.- Method: Students were divided into groups and each group was given a different city as a destination. They had to prepare a role-play as a tour guide, introducing their city to potential tourists.- Outcome: The students showed great enthusiasm and were able to use their English skills effectively to convey information about their assigned cities.---Conclusion:Today's practical teaching session was highly successful in achieving the objectives set for the students. The interactive activities not only helped them improve their language skills but also fostered a positive learning environment where they felt comfortable expressing themselves. The students' participation was exceptional, and they demonstrated significant progress in their English proficiency.Reflections:- The "Word of the Day" activity was particularly effective in expanding the students' vocabulary.- The role-playing exercise provided a fun and engaging way to practice speaking and cultural awareness.- It is important to ensure that all students have the opportunity to participate in discussions and activities to avoid any feelings of exclusion.Next Steps:- Continue to introduce new vocabulary and reinforce it through various activities.- Incorporate more real-life scenarios into the teaching methods to enhance practical application.- Regularly assess the students' progress and provide individualized feedback to support their growth.---End of Journal Entry[Signature][Teacher's Name]第3篇Date: March 15, 2023Location: Classroom 305, English Department BuildingSubject: Advanced English WritingDuration: 2 hoursObjective: To enhance students' writing skills through practical exercises and to foster critical thinking and creativity.Classroom Setup:- The classroom was well-lit and had a comfortable seating arrangementfor 30 students.- A whiteboard was available for notes and a projector was used to display resources.- All students had access to their laptops or notebooks.Teaching Materials:- Handouts on different writing styles and techniques- Writing prompts and sample essays- Grammar and vocabulary exercisesIntroduction (10 minutes):- Briefly reviewed the importance of writing in various academic and professional settings.- Discussed the objectives of the lesson: to improve coherence, cohesion, and clarity in written English.Warm-Up Activity (15 minutes):- Conducted a brief writing exercise where students were asked to write a short paragraph about their favorite book. This helped to get them warmed up and thinking about writing.Main Activity (60 minutes):1. Writing Styles and Techniques (20 minutes):- Explained different writing styles such as expository, narrative, persuasive, and descriptive.- Showed examples of each style and discussed their key characteristics.- Distributed handouts and had students read through them to deepen their understanding.2. Grammar and Vocabulary (20 minutes):- Highlighted common grammar mistakes that often occur in written English.- Provided exercises to help students practice identifying and correcting these mistakes.- Included vocabulary exercises to enrich their writing with a broader range of words.3. Writing Prompt (20 minutes):- Introduced a writing prompt: "The Impact of Social Media on Society."- Guided students through the process of brainstorming ideas and outlining their essay.- Allowed students to start writing their essays, providing individual assistance as needed.Feedback and Discussion (20 minutes):- After a brief writing period, collected some essays to provide feedback.- Conducted a class discussion on the common strengths and weaknesses observed in the essays.- Shared tips on how to improve structure, coherence, and word choice.Conclusion (5 minutes):- Summarized the key points covered during the lesson.- Encouraged students to continue practicing their writing skills outside of class.- Advised them to seek feedback from peers and teachers regularly.Reflection:Today's class was a productive session focused on enhancing students' writing skills. The variety of activities helped to cater to different learning styles and kept the students engaged throughout the lesson. The writing prompt provided a clear direction, yet allowed for creativity and personal reflection.Some students struggled with structuring their essays and ensuring a logical flow, which is a common challenge. By providing individual feedback and discussing common issues, I hope to address these concerns effectively.For future classes, I plan to incorporate more interactive elements such as peer reviews and group discussions to further develop students' critical thinking and collaborative skills. Additionally, I will provide more resources on grammar and vocabulary to support their writing endeavors.Student Feedback:- Most students reported feeling more confident about their writing skills after the lesson.- They appreciated the clear explanations and the opportunity topractice writing under guidance.- Some suggested having more time for the writing prompt to allow for more in-depth exploration of the topic.Overall, the practical teaching session was successful in achieving its objectives. The students left with a better understanding of different writing styles and techniques, as well as improved confidence in their writing abilities.。
Advanced English WritingA List of Reference Books⏹丁往道等编,1999,《英语写作手册》(修订本),外语教学与研究出版社。
⏹祁寿华,2001,《高级英语写作指南》,上海外语教育出版社。
⏹杨永林,2004,《体验英语写作》,高等教育出版社。
⏹Barnet, S., Bellanca, P., Stubbs, M. 2002, A Short Guide to College Writing.Penguin Academics.⏹Hacker, Dinana, 2006, A Writer’s Reference (6th edition), Bedford/St. Martin’s.⏹Ivers, Mitchell, 1993, Guide to Good Writing, Random House, Ballantine Books,Newyork.Brief Introduction to the Course⏹Part One: The Basics of the composition (about 3 weeks)⏹Part Two: Types of Writing (6 weeks)⏹Part Three: Diction, Sentences and Styles (about 1 week)⏹Part Four: Special Assignments (6 weeks)Part One: The Basics of the Composition⏹Steps to writing a composition⏹Thesis statement⏹Beginnings and endings⏹The body paragraphs⏹Drafting and revisingSteps to writing a composition⏹1. Identify the (given) topic or your purpose and focus of writing⏹2. Pump-primer techniques⏹3. Thesis statement⏹4. Outline⏹5. First draft⏹6. Revision and edition, final draftIdentify the (given) topic or your purpose and focus of writing⏹A specific purpose: what are you writing about the topic? Do your readers need to be informed, persuaded or entertained? What do you want your writing to accomplish?⏹A clear focus or direction: eg. How can people learn swimming? (It is impossible for you to inform your readers of every aspect of swimming.)⏹Who will decide the purpose and the focus? Sometimes your teacher will give you the topic; sometimes you have to make your own decision.Pump-primer techniques: prewriting exercises1.Listing2.Freewriting3.Looping4.The boomerang5.Clustering6.Cubing7.Interviewing8.The cross-examination9.Sketching10.Dramatizing the subject1. Listing⏹Try jotting down all the ideas that pop into your head about your topic.Free-associate; don’t hold back anything. Try to brainstorm for at least 10 minutes.⏹As you read over the list, look for connections between ideas or one large idea that includes several small ones.2. Free-writing:⏹Take out several sheets of blank paper, give yourself at least 10 to 15 minutes, and begin with whatever comes to mind on your subject.⏹Don’t worry about spelling, punctuation, or even complete sentences.⏹Don’t change, correct or delete anything.⏹If you run out of things to say, write “I can’t think of anything to say” until you can find a new thought.⏹Finally, you may discover that by continuously writing you will have written yourself into an interesting topic.3. Looping⏹Looping is a variation on freewriting.⏹Firstly, freewrite for at least 10 minutes.⏹Then, read over what you’ve written and try to identify a central idea that has emerged. The idea may indicate the direction of your thinking.⏹After that, put this central idea into one sentence called the“center-of-gravity sentence.” You have now completed loop 1.⏹To begin loop 2, use your center-of-gravity sentence as a jumping-off point for another 10 miutes of freewriting.⏹You should write at least three loops and three center-of-gravity sentences.4. The Boomerang: another variation on freewriting.⏹Begin by writing a statement that comes into your mind about a certain topic.⏹Ant then freewrite on that statement for 5 minutes.⏹Then write a second statement that approaches the subject from an opposing point of view and freewrite for 5 minutes.⏹Continue this pattern several times.An example of boomeranging.⏹What’s your mind about majoring in the Liberal Arts?⏹ 1. Statement 1⏹(freewrite for 5 minutes)⏹ 2. Statement 2⏹(freewrite for 5 minutes)⏹(Statement 1 and Statement 2 are opposed to each other.)⏹ 3. Statement 3⏹(freewrite for 5 minutes)⏹ 4. Statement 4⏹(freewrite for 5 minutes)⏹(Statement 3 and Statement 4 are opposed to each other.)⏹And so on.What are the advantages of boomeranging?⏹Help you find your focus.⏹Make you gain insight into other people’s views of your topic.5. Clustering/mapping⏹Place your general subject in a circle in the middle of a blank sheet of paper and begin to draw other lines of circles that radiate from the original subject.⏹Cluster those ideas that seem to fall together.⏹At the end of 10 minutes, see if a topic emerges from any of your groups of ideas.Try to write on the following topic by clustering.⏹A memorable holiday6. Cubing⏹Imagine a six sided cube that looks sth like the following figure.⏹It has six sides which respectively read as:⏹Describe it⏹Compare or contrast it⏹Free-associate it⏹Analyze it⏹Argue for or against it⏹Apply it7. Interviewing⏹Ask a classmate or friend to discuss your subject with you. Let your thoughtsrange over your subject as your friend asks you questions that arise naturally in the conversation. ⏹Who? When? What? Why? Where? How? ⏹ If, after the interview, you still feel at a loss, question your friend: what would he focus on if he has to write an essay based on the information fromyour interview? Why?8. The cross-examination⏹ Ask yourself the following five categories of questions.⏹ 1. definition: How do people define or explain it?⏹ 2. comparison and contrast⏹ 3. relationship: causes and effects⏹ 4. circumstance: possible or impossible?⏹ 5. testimony 9. Sketching⏹ If you are a visual learner —that is, you respond better to picutures than you do to written descriptions or explanations, you can use this method by drawing or sketching or even cartooning the pictures in your mind. ⏹ In this way, you may be surprised at the details that you remember. ⏹ The picture helps you to put those words on paper. eg. My favorite dog10. Dramatizing the subject⏹ Visualize your subject as if it were a drama or play unfolding in your mind. ⏹ Actor⏹ Action⏹ Motive⏹ Method⏹ SettingAssignment 1: Writing⏹ Step 1: Select one of the large subjects that follow and, through one of the prewriting techniques, find focused topics that would be appropriate for essaysof 250 words.⏹ Step 2: Write an essay of 250 words based on your prewriting exercise. ⏹ Music ⏹ Cars ⏹ Education ⏹ Jobs ⏹ Television commercials ⏹ Politics ⏹ Animals ⏹ Childhood⏹ Pollution ⏹ AthleticsAssignment 2: Reading⏹ Coursebook: Chapter 7: Writing Beyond the Paragraph, P123-140⏹ Or A Handbook of Writing : Part 5, P144-157。