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2024届高考英语二轮复习---短文改错教学课件(20张）(共20张PPT)短文改错高考复习专题Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then -for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.____ago__of___years__haveCheck HomeworkAs result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.∧aeverywheretasty_____________manyAlthough we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! (2023课标I)﹨_______wonderful找规律常见设错点？错误不涉及？常见设错点:1.名词2.动词（非谓语和时态、语态）3.形容词和副词(词性转换)4. 介词(短语)5.冠词6. 代词7.连词8.逻辑9. 句型和搭配10. 引导词（连接代词/副词）错误不涉及:① 标点符号②大小写③词序错误④ 带汉语解释的词找规律动词形，名词数还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟介词短语需关注习惯用法要记牢A Limerick冠词连词需关注自己设题DIY只能改10处每句不超两处错两处错不会紧挨着1个多词，1个少词，8个错词删除和增加的几乎都是小词注意English is now an international language. It is used at many international meetings, trades and other fields. It is very important for us to master this language. But how can we learn it wellMost important of all, we should be interested in it. Then we ought to go out to learn, to speak, to read and to write. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Besides, we must practice using it whenever possible. In class, we should answer questions actively. After class, we can talk with our classmates in English. If we come across foreigners, we can also learn from them. If we keep on practicing like this, we are sure to learn this language well in the end.DIYEnglish is now a international language. It is used at many international meetings, trades and other fields. It is very important for us to master this language. But how can we learn it goodMost important of all, we should be interesting in it. Then we ought to go out to learn, to speak, to read and to write. Don’t be afraid of making mistake. Beside, we must practice use it whenever possible. In class, we should answer questions active. After class, we can talk with our classmates in English. If we came across foreigners, we can also learn from about them. If we keep on practicing like this, we are sure to learn this language well in the end.DIY﹨Now, have a try!Practice makes perfect!Even if English hurts me thousands of times, I still regard it as my first love.提示：做题时读三遍第一遍: 浏览全文,掌握大意尽量找到逻辑错误和自己熟悉的点第二遍: 逐句推敲找常规设错点第三遍: 收住漏网之鱼注意: 规范答题，不留空白Nowadays, we have to face a problem that many students had poor eyesight. The situation is becoming more and more seriously.As we all know, it is important for everyone to keeping good eyesight. We should take a series of effective measure to solve the problem.___have______serious______keepmeasures______For one thing, don’t keep our eyes working for long time. We’d betterhave a rest before we have studied an hour or so. For another, take good care of your eyes. Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus.∧aafterour__________Finally, do eye exercises every day, it willalso help you keep good eyesight.Personally, I believe if that we obey therules , we can protect our eyesight frombecome short-sighted.___which______becomingNowadays, we have to face problem that many students have poor eyesight. The situation is becomingmore and more serious. 1______ we all know, it isimportant for everyone 2________( keep) good eyesight.We should take a series 3_____ effective measures tosolve the problem. For one thing, don’t keep our eyes4________(work) for a long time. We’d better have a rest5_______we have studied an hour or so. For another,take good care of our eyes. Don’t read in the sun or in apoor light. Don’t read in bed or 6 _____ a moving bus.Finally, do eye exercises every day, 7_______ will alsohelp you keep good eyesight. 8 __________(personal), Ibelieve 9_________we obey the rules, we can protect oureyesight from 10___________ (become) short-sighted.Asto keepofworkingafteronwhichPersonallyifbecomingNearly five years 1_______, and with the help 2_______ our father, my sister and I 3 _______(plant）some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then-4_______ all these years-we have been allowingtomatoes to self-seed where they please. As 5______ result, the plants are growing everywhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and 6_______ (taste). There are so many 7________ we often share them 8_________ our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants 9__________ (grow) in the same place year after year, we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing10____________(wonder) tomatoes at no cost!agoofplantedforatastythatwithto growwonderfulSummary1. 三读找错误；2. 做后要归纳；3. 平时重朗读；4. 限时忙练手。

手惰市安逸阳光实验学校高考高三英语二轮专题复习精练：短文改错（4）短文改错Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode an one­wheeled bike on a small table with a lot of flower on it. She didn't knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a better job. One of them can calculate the number!The most exciting program was see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in her hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt tying to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step of great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in walk across the 8­meter­long tightrope.答案：Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode anaone­wheeled bike on a small table with a lot of on it. She didn't knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a job. One of them calculate the number!The most exciting program was see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in across the 8­meter­long tightrope.短文改错When we were in primary school, we were required to read English every morning. Now we are college students, and keep reading English every morning is still very much important. For one thing, it is well­known that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day. Otherwise, reading English in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we had learned. In addition, keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice your oral English, correct our pronunciations and foster our sense of language. For another, reading English in the morning is a good start for a new day. If we read Eng lish in the morning, we have high enthusiasm to do other things. In short,it is still important to read English every morning as though we are inuniversities, especially for those who are English major.答案：When we were in primary school, we were required to read English everymorning. Now we are college students, and keepkeepingreading English every morning is still very much\\ important. For one thing, it is well­known that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of theday. OtherwiseTherefore， reading English in the morning is definitely good forus to remember what we hadhavelearned. In addition, keeping readingEnglish every morning is a good way to practice yourouroral English,correct our pronunciationspronunciationand foster our sense of language. Foranother, reading English in the morning is a good start forofa new day.If we read English in the morning, we ∧willhave high enthusiasm to do other things. In short, it is still important to read English everymorning aseventhough we are in universities, especially for those who areEnglish majormajors.短文改错I have a bad back which bursts out hurt from time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying with shopping bags and my keys. My keysslipped from my hand but fell to the ground. The problem was that because my back I couldn't bend down to get it. I was just thinking of how to get around this when two teenages girls came up beside me. Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down, picking up my keys, handed them to me and went on my way. When it was a small gesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too many pain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.答案：I have a bad back which bursts out hurthurtingfrom time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying with shopping bags and my keys. Mykeys slipped from my hand butandfell to the ground. The problem was thatbecause ∧ofmy back I couldn't bend down to get itthem. I was just thinkingof how to get around this when two teenagesteenagegirls came up beside me.Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down, pickingpickedup my keys, handed them to me and went on myherway. WhenWhileit was a smallgesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too manymuchpain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.短文改错 Dear mom ，What is everything going at home? I miss you and dad very much. I am pretty good at school, so you and dad do not have to worry me. I am a senior student in high school now and I am busy with my study all the time. I work hard to prepare for a college entrance examination and I think I am doing a great job till now. Teachers care many about meand whenever I have problems, I always ask they. They encourage mevery often ，consider that I can go to the university I dream for. Ofcourse ，I take good care of myself in daily life.I had built goodrelationships with my friends and classmates ，that makes me happy to bewith them.Please take good care of yourselves at home.I love you.Truly yours ，Christi答案：Dear mom ，What Howis everything going at home? I miss you and dad very much. I am pretty good at school, so you and dad do not have to worry ∧ about me.I am a senior student in high school now and I am busy with my study all the time. I work hard to prepare for a the college entranceexamination and I think I am doing a great job till now. Teachers care many much about me and whenever I have problems, I always ask they them . They encourage me very often, consider considering that I can go to the university I dream for of. Of course ，I take good care of myself in daily life. I had have built good relationships with my friends and classmates, that whichmakes me happy to be with them.Please take good care of yourselves athome.I love you.Truly yours ，Christi短文改错The ancient said the world is a book and those do not travel read onlyone page. I like travel, because travel not only allow me to enjoy thegreat rivers and mountains of the motherland, but also brings meknowledge and exercise. Beautiful sceneries make me impressed on andfriendly people make me warm. Travel is a process of discoveries of beautythat would accompany my whole life. I l ike the feeling on the road, whichgreat enriches my life and fields of vision. Being to different places and see different views make me know what big the world is, so that I won't bother about my trouble. I think a broad mind is extremely important to a person, but traveling is a good way to get them. Maybe some people would say that I travel just because I want to relax. There's no doubt about that. No matter for which reason, traveling is attractive to us all.答案：The ancient said the world is a book and those ∧who do not travel read only one page. I like travel, because travel not only allow allows me to enjoy the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, but also brings me knowledge and exercise. Beautiful sceneries make me impressed on and friendly people make me warm. Travel is a process of discoveries discovery of beauty that would accompany my whole life. I like the feeling on the road, which great greatlyenriches my life and fields of vision. Being to different places and see seeing different views make me know what how big the world is, so that I won't bother about my trouble. I think a broad mind is extremely important to a person, but andtraveling is a good way to get them it . Maybe some people would say that I travel just because I want to relax. There's no doubt about that. No matter for which whatreason, traveling is attractive to us all.。

绝密★启用前2014-2015学年度学校3月月考卷试卷副标题注意事项：1．答题前填写好自己的姓名、班级、考号等信息 2．请将答案正确填写在答题卡上第I 卷（选择题）请点击修改第I 卷的文字说明 一、单项选择（题型注释）二、完形填空（题型注释）三、阅读理解（题型注释）试卷第2页，总81页第II 卷（非选择题）请点击修改第II 卷的文字说明 四、单词拼写（题型注释）五、短文改错（题型注释）1．请修改下面的短文。

短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China ’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda ’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas. 【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great-- greatly 【小题3】mean--means 【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging 【小题6】panda-- pandas 【小题7】of 划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live 后加in 【小题9】can--can ’t /cannot 【小题10】Besides --However 【解析】【小题1】一个动作表示持续到现在，还会持续下去用现在完成进行时，had-- have 。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（90）第一节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

As a high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures．There were two foreign teachersin our school in this term．They often go to the English corner so that wecan have a chance to practise a language．I seize every chance to talkthem．However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say,and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic．I would like some advicesabout how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick．第二节：书面表达（满分30分）最近，你校展开了关于中学生吃早饭问题的一项调查，结果显示，只有少数同学认真对待，多数学生草草了事，甚至不吃早饭。

高考英语-短文改错集训（二）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师规定同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同窗写的下列作文。

文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一种单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一种漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多出的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

Passage 1Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experien ce.Passage 2As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a largeair-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began tosearch for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇励志小故事。

专题04形容词和副词1.语篇型填空、短文改错主要考查形容词、副词的句法功能,因此考生需要掌握形容词、副词．．．．．．．．．．．．在句中作什么成分．．．．．．．．。

2.对形容词和副词的构词法(构成形容词的后缀．．．．)的考查是语篇型填空、．．．构成副词．．．．．．．．,“．．形容词．．．+．-．ly”短文改错的重点之一。

3.对形容词、副词的比较等级(形容词及副词比较级、最高级的构成规则．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．;．形容词及副词平级、比较级、最高级的基本句型．．．．．．．．．．．．)的考查是语篇型填空、短文改错的另一个重点。

4.对形容词、副词的辨析(如many和much的区别,hard和hardly的区别,before和ago的区别,so 和such的区别等)是语篇型填空、短文改错的一个难点。

5.对数词的考查主要是基数词和序数词之间的相互转换。

6.对形容词、副词构词法和比较等级的考查仍然是未来高考语篇型填空、短文改错的重点。

1.（2021辽宁六校期中联考,45）It seems that Chinese Spring Festival is becoming a _____(globe) celebration of joy and love.【答案】global【解析】空处在冠词后名词前,作定语修饰celebration,应用形容词形式global。

2.（2021安徽五校联考,66）If you then touch your eyes, mouth or nose, you are (likely) to become infected than those who wash their hands.【答案】more likely【解析】根据空后的"than"可知,此处要用形容词的比较级形式。

3.（2021江苏四市调研,36）It is not only an important part of (tradition) Chinese culture but also a way of life for people of all classes.【答案】traditional【解析】句意:它不仅是中国传统文化的重要组成部分,也是各阶层人民的生活方式。

2021届高考英语二轮复习短文改错+书面表达（四）题组一：1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Once during a flight, I sit next to an old man named Cliff, which was a fan of China. He had been studying Chinese for years, and he tried his best to learning a few new words every day. My friendly neighbor shared some of his life story with me, too. He had owned several businesses and had been failed in a number of them. However, Cliff thought his life was quite successfully. He spoke of his failure with same interest as he talked about his success. His life was wonderful but his experiences were meaningful. I never spoke ill of the people in his life and was thankful with all of them.2.寒假即将来临。