高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评(图画式作文)练习讲评一

专题28 应用文写作备考2023年高考英语二轮复习讲练测--讲练命题解读图画作文一般提供一幅或者多幅图画，要求考生根据题目要求进行写作。

图画作文主要考查考生的观察能力和理解能力，首先它要求考生抓住图画所传递的信息，然后根据自己掌握的信息进行发挥、创作。

此类题型的体裁比较广泛，可以是记叙文，要求将图画中的信息完整地表述出来，也可以是说明文，根据图画内容从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释，说明，还可以是议论文，描绘图画中的一些现象，得出结论，提出解决问题的方法。

解题步骤1.仔细审题，准确定位（1)确定主题。

考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图，从而确定文章的主题。

（2)确定体裁。

仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。

多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文，单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。

（3)确定人称。

日记、周记、议论文一般采用第一人称。

（4)确定时态。

日记、周记类以过去时态为主，而议论文则以现在时态为主。

2.认真读图，进行图文转换考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。

如果图画以系列形式（即两幅以上）出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，以便全面把握图画要传达的主要内容，在写作时不遗漏信息要点。

3.确定段落，草拟提纲根据要点确定段落。

寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。

对于叙事型图画类作文（通常会涉及多幅图，要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行叙述），可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。

写作攻略4.斟词酌句，组句成篇根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。

注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。

5.检查与修改重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。

2022高考英语书面表达专项指导、讲练及习作评析2（2）图画式1假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你和你的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光时的所见所闻，请依照要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

注意：1.描述漫画内容及发表个人感想。

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数150左右（短文标题差不多给出，不计入总词数）；参考词汇：告示牌signMind Your Behavior in Public Places讲评公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展现，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感想，即公民道德缺失缘故与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。

本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。

认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。

本篇的主题确实是标题所表达的内容“Mind Your Behavior in Public Places”，无需考生多想。

围绕确立的主题，认真看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。

文字提示中的要点：“我”和“我”的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光。

（这是交代情况发生的时刻和地点）遣词造句（注意多重表达）1.①Last Sunday, my friends and I went travelling in the Fairy Lake Park.②Last Sunday, I ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit to the Fairy Lake Park.③Last Sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the Fairy Lake Park.④Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.2.①The park was full of fresh air and beauty of spring . The sun was shining. Birds were singingbeautifully.②There was fresh air and beauty of spring here and there in the park with sun shining and birds wereheard singing beautifully.③The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.3.①A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly. They didn’t realizethat there was somebody else around. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lakewithout noticing the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.②A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there wasnobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake and they seemednot to notice the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.③A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there wasnobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, turning a blindeye to the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.④A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were theonly people in the world. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totallyignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.美与丑形成鲜亮对比。

2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题三图表式1）下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。

注意：1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。

2.词数150左右。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Many animals are in danger of dying out.讲评一、图表信息概述审图表抓要点题目中已经明确给我们以提示“描述野生动物种类的变化趋势”。

通过柱形图四年（1980、1990、2000、2010）柱形的高度变化，我们由此得出事物发展趋势：在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降。

从柱形图中找出支撑结论的典型数据。

从1980年的野生动物种类大约有2.5百万，到2010年只剩下1.5百万这些数据的变化，我们可以计算出：平均每年大约减少了30,000。

由以上分析，我们可以得出以下要点：1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降2.平均每年大约减少了30,0003.2010年只剩下1.5百万化要点为句子（注意多重表达）(注意动词应该使用什么时态)1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降①The number of animal species has sharply decreased in the past thirty years.②A number of animal species have quickly disappeared in the past thirty years.③The kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years.2.平均每年大约减少了30,000①There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year.②About 30,000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year.③About 30,000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year.3.2010年只剩下1.5百万①Until 2010, only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left.②There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010.③There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals left till 2010.描述图表信息(加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子)As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.二、分析原因化要点为句子（注意多重表达）1.①Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion.②Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion.③In order to show off, many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur.2.①Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.②Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money.③Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit.讲述原因，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序)三、发表自己的看法围绕原因来自拟自己的看法1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了2.给动物一个良好的生存环境3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物4.人类与动物要和谐相处化要点为句子（注意多重表达）wild animals.②The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.4.人类与动物要和谐相处①Human beings and animals should get along well with each other.②Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals.发表看法，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句)参考答案Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.There are several reasons accounting for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit, which can be seen vividly from the right picture. This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals.In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. A national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment.In addition, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.。