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课时13 书面表达（一）-感谢信Ⅰ.阅读理解AWe may not be aware of it， but ordinary family homes in the U.S. and the rest of the world are not energyefficient.Most of their energy goes to heating and cooling， and a lot of it is wasted，as warm air and cool air escape through fireplace chimneys and thin or poorly fitting windows and doors. A passiv e house loses almost none. “Imagine a thermos(保温瓶)，”said housing developer Brendan O'Neill. “You have insulation (隔绝) everywhere，and it's basically completely sealed. And so the idea is to build a house like a thermos. So the windows are sealed. There's insulation completely surrounding the building. We make it as sealed as possible.”A 147squaremeter passive house， presented by O'Neill Development Corp. as a demonstration unit just outside Washington， was brought to the site in two boxes. “Once it's set and put together， it takes about four weeks to complete the outside construction， to put down carpets，” O'Neill said. “If everything is set in place，you put a house like this together in about four months.” The total cost of building it was $325，000， or about 17 percent more than constructing an ordinary house. But its utility (公用事业) bill is only around $20 monthly， or onetenth the amount for the average house of the same size.While passive houses have been around for a long time， the idea has never taken root in the U.S. There was no driving force to push it.However， David Peabody， an architect who designs passive houses said，“I think climate change is now becoming a larger issue. And I think building standards are catching on to that. So people are becoming more aware of energy.” Peabody said the cost of building passive houses could come down. “What really makes sense for truly affordable housing，” he said，“is to build multistorey buildings.”[语篇解读] 本文是说明文。
高三二轮复习英语精品资料【讲】专题10 书面表达（I、II、III卷模式）【构建知识体系】【剖析全国高考真题】——预测高考命题方向书面表达2021年命题解读和近年考点再现1.【2020·全国新课标I】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。
请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语；2.句式单一，单句较多；3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子；4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语；6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。
高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。
因此，平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。
第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。
换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。
因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。
高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。
它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。
要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略[策略1]“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①(2019·北京卷书面表达)I’m very glad to know that you’re coming to tour in China.→I’m more than delighted to know that you’re coming to tour in China.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.→I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.③(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit for the job.→So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job.④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.→As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.→I feel an urge to make my voice heard.⑥Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.→Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your English.⑦To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is alsorich and colorful.→To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.→Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.[策略2]更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。
2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练15-书面表达（图表类作文）1、下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. 描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；2. 分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；3. 谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。
注意：1. 可参照图表、漫画及下面文章开头所给的提示进行必要的发挥；2. 词数100左右。
开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Many animals are in danger of dying out.2下面的饼状图(pie chart)显示了你对你校学生的兴趣爱好的调查结果。
请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此发表你的看法。
注意:词数120左右。
题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hobbies & InterestsA recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3、近期，某校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。
2020届高三二轮复习英语精品资料【测案】专题10 书面表达班级姓名学号分数________1.（2020·江西高三期末）假定你是李华，你校学生会拟在寒假期间组织消防安全教育课程。
请你以校学生会的名义用英语写一封信，号召同学积极参与，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.课程内容；3.课程的意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实校名和班级信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数；参考词汇：消防firefighting 紧急情况emergencyDear fellow students,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________Student Union 【答案】Dear fellow students,With the winter vacation approaching, the Student Union plans to organize a training class on fire safety, whose details are as follows.As is scheduled, it will be given in the school lecture hall from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. January 20th. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know more about firefighting knowledge. After that, an expert will give a lecture on how to self-rescue and survive in case emergency happens. Then under his professional guidance, we will practise offering first aid to those who get injured.By attending the class, not only will we master some basic and practical safety skills, but also we will raise our awareness of fire safety and try to keep away from danger. The training class will definitely prove to be a useful experience. Whoever interested is welcome to join us!Student Union 【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
北师大版教材高考英语第二轮复习书面表达专题之模块话题作文精选（必修一至选修八）假如你叫陈宇，你的英国笔友Mike在上次来信中谈到了低碳生活这个话题。
最近几个月校倡导学生过低碳生活、过节约生活、做有责任感的公民，引导学生从出行、购物、用水、家电和餐具使用方面反省自己的生活方式。
请你用英文给Mike回信。
回信要点如下：1．你对低碳生活的理解2．你校展开的活动3．你最近生活方式的改变（至少选择三个方面）注意：1．词数为100左右；2．参考词汇低碳生活low carbon lifestyle 3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）Dear Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it. Interestingly, our school called on students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which ranges from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. TV and computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.书面表达：（必修一Unit 2）中国女药学家屠呦呦在2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖，中国人的骄傲。
书面表达--应用文写作【2021届安徽省六校教育研究会高三第一次素质测试】假定你是李华。
为弘扬中国文化，学生会将举办主题为“中国文化”的英语演讲比赛。
作为国际学校学生会主席，你将在比赛开始前发言。
请根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 活动的主题及意义；2. 中国文化博大精深；3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意：1. 词数 100 词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Ladies and gentlemen，Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition. As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share aspects about it with you as follows：Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chinese culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners. And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us. By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.In addition, we are supposed to introduce that Chinese culture is extensive and profound. For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful. For another, Chinese traditional festivals have a long history.In the end, I sincerely hope that this year's activity will be held very successfully. And thank you for your active participation.That's all! Thank you!【解析】这是一篇应用文。
高考英语二轮复习书面表达――图表作文(含答案)高中英语书面表达――图表作文 1、“中国梦”已经成为一个社会热点话题，根据最近央视的社会调查，不同的人群有不同的梦想。
请结合表格提示，用英语写一篇关于“中国梦(Chinese Dream)”的演讲稿在你校将要举行的英语演讲比赛中进行演讲。
不同人群梦想城市居民(Urban residents) 交通(transportation)…、环境…大学生就业（employment）…、食品…农民教育…、医疗（medical care）…你的梦想……注意: 1. 对所给提示逐一陈述, 适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数100 左右。
开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Chinese Dream “Chinese Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.2、某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，结果如下。
请根据表格1所给信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法.。
注意：1 词数120左右 2 文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
表格一 (网购最吸引用户的方面) 表格二（网购用户最担心的方面） 55% 质量问题 27% 售后服务 18% 交易安全 40% 商品种类丰富 33% 商品价格实惠 25%不受时间地域限制 5% 结交新朋友 Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3、假如你是高中三年级的学生李华，你在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。
