2019 高考英语写作指导.ppt

5. There is little hope of winning.
There is little, if any, hope of winning.
*用好副词
Most researchers believe that, in theory, mobile phones are absolutely safe. 1. Tourism may promote the mutual understanding among nations. Tourism, frankly, may promote the mutual understanding among nations. 2. Comparing all the candidates, I dare to say he is the best choice. Obviously, comparing all the candidates, I dare to say he is the best choice. 3. Technological changes will lead to unemployment. Technological changes will inevitably lead to unemployment.
I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion.
*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that the water is too cold.
2. His words are right. His words, to some extent, are right.
4. My recommendation is a top student in my class named Jack, who enjoys a good reputation among all the students of our school.
中间段： 1. He has so many admirable personal qualities that
3. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms．They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.
I hope that you will take my advice, best wishes that you will have a good time there, it is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation. In short, enjoy yourself. (18分)
2. A leader who has respect for other people at all levels of an organization, for the work they do, and for their abilities, desires and needs, will find that respect is returned.
3. The question deserves thinking over. The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.
4. What he did yesterday was dissatisy no means, was satisfactory.
*用好排比
1. From my observation, many people today spend their time receiving more and more education, working more and more hours, and making more and more money.
Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must have been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldn't be greater. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time we will also spend time helping others in our society teaches us to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose it?
1.你对此事的明确态度； 2.你的理由。
I'm glad to hear that you have access to participate in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community aging hospital to gain a chance to stay in it for free. My reasons are as follows.
*审题（2018年1月高考）
假如你是启明中学的王磊，你的学校最 近准备引进一个机器人充当食堂服务员 或者图书管理员的工作，并在学校的贴 吧上向同学们征求意见。你在贴吧上回 复向学校提出意见。
1.明确提出你的观点； 2.通过比较，说明你这样选择的理由。 （可从工作效率和服务范围等作比较）
*审题（2018年1月静安一模）
一. 审题到位 二. 语言丰富 三. 示范有效
目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象 大使”(image ambassador on campus) 活动 。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的 形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐， 并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。
开头段：
1. From my perspective, the most suitable person is my roommate, Sophia, who has really taught me what the word “excellence” means .
具体事例：
1. Moreover, it was her warm heart that had left me a deep impression. There was once a classmate of hers who had trouble in getting along with others. He was so frustrated that nearly tried to commit suicide. Fortunately, thanks to Sophia’s company and patience, he was inspired to walk out of the darkness. He told me that she seemed to be an angel to him who delighted his whole world.
3. It is possible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a good study method. It is not impossible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a good study method.
如何提高学生英语写作能力
一. 审题到位 二. 语言丰富
各类从句、强调句、倒装句、分词…
2017年1月高考作文题：
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友 李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的 海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住 宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也 可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十 小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿 的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见，写 一封回信，内容须包括：