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浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写（43）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What’s worse, he found that he only had one dime（一角硬币）left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn’t eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while “Would you please give me some … a drink of water?” the boy dare not to look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?”“You don’t owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger physically, but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
如何写书面通知写作任务你受学生会委托为你校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：1. 短片内容：学校的发展；2. 放映时间、地点；3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
NOTICEStudent Council写作指导一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一份书面通知，请大家观看一部英语短片。
二、谋篇布局本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出，所以同学们只需写出正文部分即可。
正文部分可分为三部分：第一部分：介绍活动目的、时间和地点；第二部分：介绍活动内容；第三部分：号召同学们参加活动。
三、组织语言第二部分：介绍活动内容。
普通表达高级表达The movie tells about the development of our school and it is sure to be useful and moving. The movie, which introduces / presents / describes the history of our school, is certain to be instructive and full of emotion.It shows the story of our school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong. If you are interested in it, don’t miss this valuable chance.It’s a good way for us to know when our school was created, what it has experienced and how it has achieved success.You are welcome to discuss with others and express what you think about the movie. ★You are welcome to have a discussion and write down your own comments after watching the movie. ★We do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the movie.普通表达高级表达Everyone is welcome and we hope you can enjoy it. We will witness the glory of our school, so don’t miss this precious opportunity.范文普通范文NOTICETo make students know our school better, an inspiring English short movie, Growing Together, will be shown in the lecture hall at 2:00 pm on September 28th.The movie tells about the development of our school and it is sure to be useful and moving. It shows the story of our school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong. If you are interested in it, don’t miss this valuable chance. After the movie, you are welcome to discuss with others and express what you think about the movie.Everyone is welcome and we hope you can enjoy it.Student Council高级范文NOTICETo make students have a full understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie, Growing Together, will be screened in the lecture hall at 2:00 pm on September 28th.The movie, which introduces the history of our school, is certain to be instructive and full of emotio n. It’s a good way for us to know when our school was created, what it has experienced and how it has achieved success. Moreover, you are welcome to have a discussion and write down your own comments after watching the movie.We will witness the glory of o ur school, so don’t miss this precious opportunity.Student Council说明：本写作任务改编自2018年高考英语全国卷II，有改动。
必背19书面表达必背范文通知设你是学生会主席李华，当地电视台将举办外国人参与的”汉字听写大赛"，委托你向学校国际部留学生通知相关事宜，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：1.参赛日期：2018年3月15日；2.复习范围：中国四大名著中的词汇；3.奖品：中国四大名著套书；4.联系人及电话：李华。
注意：词数100左右。
Notice【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是应用文中的书面通知，写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。
应用文写作是语言交际能力的一个重要部分，能够体现出考生综合语言运用能力以及逻辑思维能力。
通知类书面表达要注意语言的得体性、交际性和准确性，最能考查考生的实际交际能力，是高考考查的重点之一。
本篇书面表达根据题干和要点提示可分三段来写：第一段：交代写作背景，引入话题，表明写作意图。
第二段：要点列举，包括时间、要求和奖品。
第三段：互相转告，有问题联系李华。
【范文赏析】NoticeTo help you further understand Chinese culture, the local TV station will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition. I'd like to share with you some details about it.As scheduled, the competition is to be held on March 15, 2018. You are supposed to get prepared before the competition. Above all, it's recommended that you read the Four Great Classical Novels and fbcus on the phrases in them. Whoever wants to go, please sign your name here as soon as possible. Don't miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize " a set of the Four Great Classical Novels ”Writing 2假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。
书面表达常见应用文1、通知（2018年新课标全国卷II）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1.短片内容：学校的发展； 2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
NoticeBoys and girls,May I have your attention,please?Recently,an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.Welcome to join us end enjoy it!Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Together,which is about the development of our beloved school.As a result,it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,it will be in the library from2:00to4:00in the afternoon on June9th.What’s more,everyone of you will be welcomed to take part in it,enjoying the movie,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully,you would make it to our activity.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student Union2、申请求职信假如你是红星中学学生李华，在网上看到一则面对所有国家征集北京冬奥会志愿者的消息，你喜爱冰雪活动，想去担任志愿者。
专题六书面表达应用文写作常见8大文体(一)——普通书信/电子邮件一、写作架构要规范可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。
具体写作结构为：二、靓点句式背一番(一)1．I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。
2．There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。
3．Sorry to reply to your letter so late.抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
(二)主体部分常用语1．I’ve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion, you should ...我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。
在我看来，你应该……2．If necessary, we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.如果有必要，本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。
(三)结尾常用语1．I’d appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信，我将非常感激。
2．Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。
三、润色完善很关键(2018·度过高三毕业后的暑假。
请你给Peter回复邮件，内容包括：1．对暑假的期盼；2．你的假期计划及理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(一)准审题、准表达保基本分定体裁电子邮件定人称第一人称为主定时态一般现在时为主定要点定结构开头：引入话题，写邮件的背景(期盼暑假) 主体：假期计划及理由(去北京旅游、兼职等) 结尾：表达心情，并期待对方尽早回复[中档作文]Dear Peter，I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination❶.Then I can do a lot of amazing things❷.First❸，I plan to take a trip to Beijing❹.It is the center of politics and culture❺.It can not only broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture❻.❼I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good chance❽for me to promote myself.I belie v e❾the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I hope I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)Dear Peter，I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination, (1)during which I can do a lot of amazing things (❶❷句合并升级为定语从句)．(2)To start/begin with (词汇升级❸), I plan to take a trip to Beijing, (3)the center of politics and culture (❹❺句合并升级为名词短语作同位语)．(4)Not only can it broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture (升级句❻为倒装句)．(5)What’s more(❼前加过渡词汇), I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good (6)opportunity (词汇升级❽) for me to promote myself.I (7)hold the firm belief that (词汇升级❾) the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I (8) do hope (升级句为强调句) I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua四、“一题两用”错不犯Dear Peter，You can’t imagine what glad I was when I received your letter asking me for the plans in summer holiday.Actually, I have been longing for a relaxed and meaningful summer holiday.The first thing coming to my mind is to get a driving license, what I think is a must for most college student in China.Apart from a completely relaxation, I also plan to take an English course to improve my speaking English.In addition to, I want to take active part in different social activities to better myself.I believe the holiday must be fascinating before I finish the College Entrance Examination.I can’t wait to enjoy them!Yours，Li Hua 答案：第一句：what→how第二句：relaxed→relaxing第三句：what→which; student→students第四句：completely→complete; speaking→spoken第五句：去掉第一个to; take后加an第六句：before→after第七句：them→it应用文写作常见8大文体(二)——邀请信一、写作架构要规范难。
书面表达专题训练 [通知]通知是一种常用应用文体，用来把有关事情告知特定的读者或听众。
通知的正文就是通告的内容，这是主体局部，包括通告的对象、事由、时间、地点等。
它分为书面通知和口头通知两种，这两种通知在格式上有较大差异。
书面通知的常见形式有一般通知、布告、海报等。
它们一般张贴在布告栏或黑板上。
通知的正文上方有Notice(或全部大写NOTICE)或Announcement(或全部大写ANNOUNCEMENT)为题目。
以海报形式出现时，通知常以海报内容为题，如Lecture, Football Match等。
当然题目中还可以出现发通知的单位，如Student Union Notice, English Department Announcement，通知题目要求居中打印、书写，有时为了强调，甚至可以以粗体形式出现。
书面通知一定要有发通知时间与落款。
出通知的时间一般写在通知正文的下方左角，落款于右下角，当然时间与落款也可都写右下角。
书面通知的正文一般用第三人称来写。
时间、地点、参加者、内容、须知事项是通知的要点，应直截了当地一一予以说明。
我们既可以用包容量较大的长句，也可以用简明的短语，前者正式，后者易懂易记。
在正文中切忌添枝加叶的评论。
一般情况下通知以段落形式出现，海报如此按信息分行居中书写或打印。
口头通知一般不用写题目，也不必有出通知的时间。
发布口头通知首先说明被通知的对象，在正文前面有呼语且顶左格写，如：Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls 等等。
为了引正听者的注意，需另起行不顶格写一些引人注意的话，如：Be quiet, please! May I have your attention? Attention, please! 等。
口头通知要口头发布，因而可以用较随意口语体，如：I’ll, I’ve等。
口头通知在完毕时要有完毕语，这是因为口头通知需要用一些语言明确通知的起止，如用That’s all. 表示通知到此为止宣布完毕。
短文类01（通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道）（解析版）短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。
以下对通知、倡议书、发言稿、新闻报道类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
一、通知1. 思维导图段落要点首段引起注意，表明目的正文主要内容（时间、地点以及内容等）结尾邀请参加+注意事项2. 基本模板NOTICETo enrich our school life and arouse students’ ent husiasm for ______(活动主旨) , ______(活动)is going to be held at ______(活动地点) on ______(活动时间).Contestants are required to ______(活动要求). All entries must be submitted to ______(报名地点) by ______(截止时间) . All the ______(参赛内容) will be graded carefully by our foreign teachers. Winners of the contest will be awarded with ______(颁发奖品).Those who show their keen interests in the activity will be highly appreciated. Keenly anticipate your participation.Student Union3. 写作实操技巧你校学生会将举办一次以中医药（traditional Chinese medicine)为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个书面通知。
内容包括：1.比赛目的；2.比赛时间及地点：11月4日下午3点，报告厅；3.报名时间及地点：10月26-30日，学生会办公室。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高三英语作文模板通知英文回答：Dear students,。
I am writing to inform you of an exciting opportunity to participate in a study abroad program in London. This program is designed to provide you with an immersive experience in the vibrant and diverse culture of London, while also enhancing your academic skills and global perspectives.Program Highlights:Academic Courses: You will take courses at a prestigious London university, alongside local and international students. Course offerings include English literature, history, politics, economics, art, and more.Cultural Immersion: You will live in a homestay with alocal family for the duration of the program, giving you an authentic experience of British life and culture. You will also participate in field trips, excursions, and social events to explore London's landmarks, museums, and theaters.Language Proficiency: You will have the opportunity to improve your English language skills through daily interactions with native speakers. You will also receive language lessons to enhance your fluency and comprehension.Cross-Cultural Understanding: By living and studyingin London, you will develop a deep understanding of British culture and traditions. You will also learn to appreciate and respect different perspectives and ways of life.Program Details:Duration: 6 weeks (June July)。
训练(四十三) 通知+演讲稿
(一)
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校学生会准备举行一次“读书月”(Reading Month)活动。
请你根据下面的提示,用英语写一则书面通知,并号召大家积极参与。
1. 目的:丰富校园生活,开阔视野,提高阅读水平;
2. 内容:每人至少读三本书,并写一篇读后感(impressions of after-reading),于四月五日前交给学生会;
3. 时间:三月六日至四月五日。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 通知的开头已拟好,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
(二)
假如你是红星中学学生会主席。
你了解到你校国际部学生对“全国戏曲进校园”(National Opera on Campus)活动很感兴趣且学校决定承办一次戏剧演出。
请用英语口头通知国际部的学生。
通知内容
包括:
1. 说明事由;
2. 演出信息(时间、地点、内容等);
3. 欢迎参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(三)
假设你是李华,一批英国高中生和你校学生一起参加了为期三周的中国诗词大会(Chinese Poetry Competition)。
现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。
请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1. 回顾诗词大会期间的活动;
2. 谈谈感想或收获;
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
How time
flies!_______________________________________________________________________________ _________
(四)
假定你是高三学生李华,还有一个月就要离开母校,请你写一篇毕业典礼发言稿,内容包括以下要点:
1. 列举高中生活的难忘片段(如学习、活动等);
2. 表达感激之情及美好祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Thank you!
From Li Hua.
训练(四十三) 通知+演讲稿
(一)
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
In order to enrich our school life,we a re going to hold an event called “Reading Month”. The event is aimed at broadening our horizons and improving our reading ability. Everyone
is encouraged to take an active part.
The details of the arrangement are as follows. The event will last from March 6th to
April 5th, during which every participant is required to read at least three books of any
kind. Besides,impressions of after-reading are welcome and should be submitted to Students Union before the last day of the event.
This event is of great benefit to students. We c all on every one of you to join us. Let s enjoy ourselves in the ocean of books.
(二)
One possible version:
Hello, everybody,
May I have your attention, please? I am president of the Student Union in our school.
I ve heard that most students in our International Department are interested in the
“National Opera on Campus”. To satisfy your thirst, we plan to organize an opera show in
our school.
As scheduled, the show will be held in our school hall next Friday. It is expected to
start at 2:30 pm and last about 2 hours. Also, the show is supposed to offer you a variety
of performances related to opera, including singing, dialogues, movements as well as facial make-up, which surely won t make you disappointed. So it s really something you can t miss.
Whoever is interested in it is welcome to be present on time.
That s all. Thank you!
(三)
One possible version:
Dear friends,
How t ime flies!Three weeks have passed since we came to the Chinese Poetry Competition, which we all have benefited from.
During the three weeks, we have studied,lived and competed together,which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. Preparing for the competition has enabled us to know each other better. Your rich knowledge and passion for Chinese poetry leave me a deep
impression. I think all my classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the
various activities.
Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will
be more events of this kind in the future.
Thank you!
(四)
One possible version:
Dear friends,
How time flies! It s about a month before we graduate from this school and we ll go to separate universities. It is my great honour to stand here and deliver a speech.
Looking back on the old days,I can still remember we were quite curious about everything when we first met. And I like the spring outing best, as we were so delighted exposed to nature. Additionally, what impressed me most was the time when we were completely absorbed
in preparing for the university entrance examination. Tired but determined, we fight for
our dreams without any hesitation.
Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude for the care and love from you. I
sincerely hope that after graduation our friendship will last forever.
Thank you!
From Li Hua.。
