高中英语作文. PPT 课件

HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?
Why writing is so difficult for you?
Reason 1. don’t know what to write. 写什么 Reason 2. don’t know how to write it . 怎么写
书面表达： 假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一 次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市 就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件， 邀请她一起参加。内容包括：
表达3 升级表达 I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.
直译
定语从句
升级表达
询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解 你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期 待你的回复。
直译
定语从句
升级表达
Reason 3：
希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。
表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together. 表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.
表达1. I know you are humorous and good at telling stories so I want to know whether you are interested in the competition or not. If your answer is yes, I will offer you more detailed information. I am looking forward for your reply.

Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills

2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.

What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance

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8. hold→ held “比赛”与“举行”是被动关 系，用过去分词短语作后置定语。
9. but→ and “随和的”与“受同学欢迎”是 顺承关系，不是转折关系。
10. us→ me 与主语指代一致。
真题演练 (2015陕西卷)假定你是李华, 在校报英语专栏看到 了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读 启事, 并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua
5. 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。 I_w__o_u_ld__a_p_p_r_e_c_ia_t_e_i_t _if_/_I _w_i_ll_b_e__g_r_a_te_f_u_l _if___ you considered my request.

要点二
Writing
Keeping a diary in English, writing English compositions, etc. to improve writing ability
要点三
Speaking
Practicing English conversation with teachers or classes, joining English corners, etc. to improve English listening and speaking ability
On site response and time management strategies
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Time management
Mastering the time management skills of the exam, dividing the time for each question, and not spending too much time on one question
The content criteria include the relevance and depth of the content, as well as the logicality and coherence of the ideas expressed
The structure criteria include the organization and development of the ideas, as well as the clarity and coherence of the overall structure
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Overview of English Composition

一个好的段落要有丰富的句式
1.感叹句 2.倒装句 3.强调句 4.省略句 5.With 结构 6.定语从句 7.各种名词性从句 8.各种状语从句
利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采
1.感叹句 e.g. How disappointed he was! 2.强调句 e.g. It was the young boy that helped the old man. 3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can we solve the problem. 4.省略句 e.g. Come to me if necessary 5.定语从句 e.g. The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned. 6.名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.
3.If you work hard, you will make rapid progress.(祈使句+and） Work hard and you will make a rapid progress. 4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing 形式） Singing and laughing, they went back to school
Ladies and gentlemen,
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people .It used to be poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before. Now It is taking on a new look.

遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
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• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.

• Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• Sentence pattern: • They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. • Eg: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮 明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该 春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落 （承上启下）
• Sentence pattern:
表示观点对比类写作套语
A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes

表示转折关系的并列句 这类并列句常用but （但是；可是），yet（可是；然 而），while （而）等来连接，后面分句与前面分句之间 有意义上的转折关系。
She said she would be late, yet she arrived on time. Certainly he apologized, however, I won't forgive him. I like tea while she likes coffee.
状语从句（Adverbial cause):从句用作状语
When you cross a main road, you must be careful. Sit down wherever you like. As I didn’t know the way, I asked a policeman. You’ll be late, unless you hurry.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物 动词
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
Guide in Writing
丰城二中
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.

表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
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homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。

It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective

我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2.I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更 多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
The ability to develop in this period:
to write a composition with the help of the mind map of writing.
Mind Map (英语作文写作思维导图）
人称 、时态、要点 关键词、词组、句型
审题
组织
规范书写
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
参考句式（核心段）
1 . I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议…… 2. In my opinion,... 在我看来
3. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会…… 4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……
个人认为，做…是明智的
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
亮点关联词
1 . To begin with，… 首先…… 2. Besides,/ In addition，... 其次…… 3. What’s more，... 再者…… 4. Last but not least， 最后…….
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice