高中英语作文.ppt

对平时英语学习的启发： 1.牢记重点词汇/短语。 2.背诵经典例句。 3.熟悉各种文体。 有选择性地背诵一些各种文体有代表性的优秀范文。 4.平时多仿写。 在平时的作文课或英语日记中仿照刚学过的文章的 例句来表达自己的观点和感受。
学生佳作点评 As is known to us， studying in groups is an opportunity to learn from each other.As for a high school student,we should realize the importance of teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit in the group and learned our disadvantages. Only in this way can we make progress every day. In our class,I join a group of 6 students in studying chemistry. At the encouragement of my teacher ,I regained self-confidence.While studying in class,I tried to make myself understood.
三.遣词造句。
1.在我的高中生活中，我认识到团队合作的重要性。 In my high school life,I realise the importance of teamwork. 2.为了丰富我们的学校生活，我们班决定排演一场 英语短剧。 To enrich our school life ,our class decided to put on a short English play. 3.起初，我很害羞，不敢参加活动。 At first,I was shy and didn’t dare to join in the activity. 4.后来，在我的同学们的鼓励下，我积极参加了活动。 Later on,at the encouragement of my classmates,I took an active part in it.
点评：
1.词汇、短语和句式的选用。 本文围绕所给写作素材的提示展开叙述，文中使用了许 多高级词汇和复杂的句子结构。 ①运用了高级词汇 ： enrich /put on /at the encouragement of /turn out 等， ②运用了复杂句式： ▲as引导的非限制性定语从句：as it turned out ， ▲how引导的感叹句：how important it was to work together with others in a group， ▲现在分词：practising and enjoying all of it作方式 状语/伴随状语, ▲强调句结构It is/was…that…等， 这些都是本文的亮点，显示出考生扎实的英语运用能力。
四.连句成篇。（参考答案） In my high school life,I realise the importance of teamwork.Just as the saying goes,one tree doesn’t make a forest. It happened when I was in Senior One. To enrich our school life ,our class decided to put on a short English play. At first,I was shy and didn’t dare to join in the activity. But later on,at the encouragement of my classmates,I took an
5.我们一起合作，一边练习一边欣赏所有这一切。 We worked together with each other,practising and enjoying all of it. 6.结果表明，我们的表演是最成功的。 As it turned out,our performance was the most successful. 7.从这件事中，我懂得了在团队中与别人一起合作 是多么重要啊。 From this I learned how important it was to work together with others in a group. 8.就是从那一时刻起，我懂得了团队合作的重要性。 It is from that moment on that I have learned the importance of teamwork.高Biblioteka 英语作文与写作策略
点评2011年湖北高考英语作文
英语作文与写作策略
英语作文的写作决不能信马由缰，正如做事一样，凡事预则 立，不予则不立。提前打好草稿是必不可少的，打草稿也是有 规则可循的。 必须要遵从四个基本步骤： 一.审题。 1.审文体。 阅读题目要求，明确应该写成何种文体：记叙文、说明文、议 论文、应用文（书信、日记、邀请函、欢迎辞、欢送辞、通知 等）
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active part in it. How happily we worked together with each other,practising and enjoying all of it.Finally, as it turned out,our performance was the most successful,and from this I learned how important it was to work together with others in a group. It is from that moment on that I have learned the importance of teamwork.
2.写作要点。
此题没有明确的要点提示，只列出了英语论点，有关校园生活的 一个事例必须要作者结合自己的亲身经历来叙述，这属于自我创 造的部分。 从写作背景素材看，本文写作应该梳理出下面几个要点： ①引入话题。 可以这样导入：多年的学校生活使我知道，团队合作很重要。 ②叙述实例。 结合自己的学习实际展开想象与发挥，紧密围绕校园生 活与teamwork展开叙述。比如，可以提到自己刚进高中的时 候，为了丰富我们的学校生活，班上要排演一个英语短剧，起初 自己很害羞，不敢参加活动，后来在同学们的鼓励下，我积极参 加了排练，大家在一起合作，认真排练，最后汇演结果表明，我 们的表演是最成功的。 ③简单总结。 叙述完了具体事例之后，然后使用强调句式，对前面的叙述进行 简单的总结：正是从那时起，我认识到了团队合作的重要性。
二.准备词汇、短语和句式。
1.团队合作的重要性 importance of teamwork 2.丰富我们的校园生活 enrich our school life 3.排演英语短剧 put on a short English play 4.参加活动 join in the activity 5后来 later on 6.在…的鼓励下 at the encouragement 7.积极参加 take an active part in 8.与…一起合作 work together with 9.表明 turn out 10.从…中了解到/认识到… learn…from… 11.从那一时刻起 from that moment on 12.强调句式 It is/was…that…
2011年高考英语作文题目(湖北卷)
第二节：短文写作(共1题;满分25分) 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人 合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。 Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people. 注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语; ②除诗歌外，文体不限; ③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例; ④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称;
2.文章结构分析。
①在开头话题导入部分， 用In my high school life,I realise the importance of teamwork.开门见山地点明主题。 ②在中间叙事文段， 用不定式To enrich our school life 作目的状语，
并且使用了decided to do sth 和put on 短语，清楚地 表达了考生的意愿； 在叙事的结尾， 使用了as 引导的非限制性定语从句，and 连接两个并 列 分句，以及how引导的感叹句作为learn 的宾语从句， 句式灵活多样，感染力强。 ③在最后的总结文段， 用强调句式It is/was…that…总结全文，再次呼应本 文的主题，达到全文浑然一体的效果。
Last,I get applause of my classmates.I , therefore,took an active role in various activities.I had learned something from teamwork. From then on,I realised I should study harder than ever before. Undoubtedly, it was by studying in a group that I made great progress. Don’t be shy! In the future, we should make good team up with everybody around us.