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2024高考英语读后续写范文As I finished reading the book for my high school English class, I couldn't help but reflect on the powerful themes and messages it contained. The story not only drew me in with its engaging plot, but it also left me with a deeper understanding of the world and the human experience.The characters in the book faced numerous challenges and obstacles, yet they persevered with resilience and courage. Their struggles resonated with me, serving as a reminder of the strength of the human spirit in the face of adversity. Additionally, the book shed light on important social issues, prompting me to consider the complexities of the world welive in.Furthermore, the relationships between the characters were intricately woven, showcasing the impact of love, friendship, and sacrifice. I found myself empathizing withtheir experiences and reflecting on the value of meaningful connections in life.Overall, the book left a lasting impression on me. It inspired me to think critically about the world around me and to approach life with empathy and understanding. I believe that the lessons I've learned from this book will stay with me for years to come, shaping my perspectives and influencing my actions.In conclusion, the book was a captivating and thought-provoking read that has enriched my high school English experience. I am grateful for the opportunity to have delved into its pages and explored the profound ideas it contains. This literary journey has certainly broadened my horizons and deepened my appreciation for the power of storytelling.。
高考英语读后续写4篇四篇文章选自“2023高考英语浙江省名校模拟真题速递第三期”(标记说明:黄色为非谓语动词,红色为三连动,蓝色为从句,斜体为并列句)1.(2023春·浙江·高三校联考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My great-grandmother Eileen is fierce, loyal and strong and a bit of a legend in her own lifetime, which now stretches to 92 years. I should add that we’re not allowed to call her Gran, because she says it makes her feel old.That summer, I lost my job and felt hopeless. One day, I paid a visit to her. She picked up a box which she placed on the coffee table.“There you go,” she said. “You do know what you’re doing with these things, don’t you?”It was a new phone. Her current mobile was pretty ancient. I was amazed it was still going.“Yes,” I said.“Good. That’s why I ask you. You young people know more about such things than us oldies. You can take it home with you and get it all set up,” she went on. “Then,when you bring it back, you can show me how to use my new phon e, such as getting on the internet, sending e-mails and so on.” She smiled so sweetly that I felt a surge of love for her.I grabbed the box and stood up. Setting up the phone would be easy. It was teaching her how to use it that may prove challenging(强调句).The following day I headed back to my great-grandmother’s with the phone. “Here’s your phone. It’s al l ready to use.”For the next hour, I was busy setting up her passcode and fingerprint recognition, which she said was like something out of James Bond.She chose a picture for her screen and it was all going so well until I tried to show her how to swipe (滑动屏幕). “What do you mean, swipe?” she asked. She was 92, I reminded myself. This had been tiring for her.She pressed at the up arrow and got angry when nothing happened. When I finally got her to swipe, she didn’t put the right amount of pressure on and the menu slipped away. After what seemed like hours, she threw the phone across the room and it landed on the sofa.“Take it away!” she howled. “I want my old phone back!”I picked up the phone and was about to leave to give her time to cool down when I realized I didn’t want to go home when she was angry and upset.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
高中英语读后续写优选10篇(原文内容+续写范文+范文译文)【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者才13岁就承受着家庭的变故,并且失去了宠物小马驹的陪伴,他很孤单,需要陪伴。
父亲在当地市场买了一匹老马,尽管Cowboy很丑,她还是很喜欢他在身边;一个叫贝基的女孩骑着一匹棕色的大马参加比赛,当作者在与她竞争时,她轻易的赢了,但是贝基得意的笑让作者决心打败她,并且最终做到了。
【续写范文】My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboy's big red neck and entered the arena. At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line.No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time. Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. I can be the master of myown destiny.【范文译文】终于轮到我了。
万能结尾句助人结尾句Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
感动感悟结尾句Whether rich or poor,we should be happy to do something for society.This is because giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富,我们都应该为社会做点什么。
这是因为给予是幸福的源泉。
脱险结尾句That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it.It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里,没有什么能够抹去它。
事实证明,只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境成长改变结尾句1.学习知识促“改变”It's never too late to learn.Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。
每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战,做更多的尝试。
2.发挥天赋促“改变”Actually,each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with.As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest,and also make efforts,we can create miracles in the end.事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋,只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹。
2023年高考英语新全国I卷读后续写范文11篇阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.I chose Paul Revere’s horse as m y subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice.What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care.注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
让知识带有温度。
高考英语作文专题复习:读后续写10篇范文高考英语作文专题复习:读后续写10篇范文1. 阅读下面短文,按照所给情节举行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Thanks to my conservative(保守的) Jewish background, I didn’t believe in angels. That is, not until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home.After divorce, my two daughters not only lost the security of a whole family, they also tearfully left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrowtwo-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town.I arranged to take my vocat ion during my children’s winter school holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: cookie baking, games, a pizza night, and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights. With expectation, they seemed to be in good spirits.The week before the school break, however, terrible news of family disasters arrived. By Christmas Eve, gloom clouded our vacation plans. An afternoon outing for movie did little to improve our mood.On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful, six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑) against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement built, and the girls begged to keep the tree.“Maybe it’s for us,” insisted my older daug hter.第1页/共3页千里之行,始于足下“Yeah,” echoed my younger child. “I bet an angel brought it to us!”I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to a Jewish family. Caught up in their happiness, I pronounced the tree “ours.”We dragged it inside and headed out to the only supermarket in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With holiday goods marked down to half price, I gave a nod of approval to a tree stand(底座), two boxes of multicolored balls, a package of six Santa figurines(小雕像), a 100-foot string of mini lights, and one paper angel.Paragraph 1:Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny living room.Paragraph 2:The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.One possible version:Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny livi ng room. Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas tree. We strung the lights, hung the multicolored balls and placed the paper angel on top. Finally, with a girl in each of my arms, we sat in the darkness, attracted by the twinkling Christmas tree lights. There was full of joy in our new home.The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.We’d feel complete with a “Jewish Angel” Christmas tree in member of our heaven-sent gift. For many years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the top of each tree. Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked第2页/共3页让知识带有温度。
2023英语新高考一卷读后续写范文第一段:The car had been driving for hours through the snowy Alaskan wilderness. It was freezing outside and the wind was howling, yet the determined driver kept his foot on the gas pedal, his eyes fixed ahead through the icy gusts. The passengers, huddled together in the backseat, tried to ignore the bone-chilling cold and the darkness that had fallen upon them. They were on a mission to rescue a young girl who had been kidnapped by a ruthless gang. The driver, a former cop, knew that every moment counted and that they were running out of time.第二段:As they approached the abandoned warehouse where the girl was being held, the driver's trained eyes detected a movement in the shadows. He pulled the car over and, grabbing his gun, got out cautiously. His heart pounding, he signaled to the passengers to stay back and covered them with his weapon. Cautiously, he inched towards the warehouse, his gaze fixed on the entrance.第三段:Minutes later, a figure emerged from the darkness of the warehouse. It was the kidnapper, holding the girl tightly byher arm. The driver's heartbeat quickened and he raised his gun, but he knew he had to make sure he had a clean shot before he fired. He crept closer, trying to get a better angle.第四段:Suddenly, the kidnapping revealed a startling truth. The girl's captor was actually her father, a man who had been driven to desperation by financial hardship. The driver lowered his gun and stared at the distraught father and daughter. The passengers, watching from behind, were dumbstruck by the revelation.第五段:The driver knew that he had to make a decision quickly. He could either turn the father in and end the drama here and now, or he could try to find a way to help this broken family reconcile. He thought about the girl's safety and about the father's broken heart. In the end, he decided to try and find a way to help them both.第六段:He motioned for the father to put down his weapon and step away from the girl. The father, tears streaming down his face, complied with the order. The driver then approached the girl and comforted her while calling the police to explain thesituation. The passengers, moved by the scene, gathered around to offer whatever help they could.第七段:The police arrived minutes later and took over the situation. The father was arrested and the girl was reunited with her mother. The driver and his passengers were praised for their bravery and compassion by the authorities. As they drove away from the warehouse that night, they knew that they had made a difference in that family's life. They had saved a little girl from a fate worse than death and given her hope for a brighter future. And while they were leaving the scene, one passenger turned to the driver and said," You know, sometimes it's not about saving a life but about saving a soul."第八段:The driver smiled and nodded in agreement. He knew that tonight, they had saved two lives - one girl's body and one father's soul. And he also knew that every life saved was a victory no matter how small or how great it might seem. He thought about how one small act of kindness could change someone's life forever and he realized that he was part of something much bigger than himself - a force for good in this world that could never be measured or fully understood. But healso knew that it was there - in his heart and in the hearts of all those who had been moved to help that night - and it was enough to keep him going in his own journey of saving lives one at a time.。
高考英语作文读后续写20篇附范文**1. 范文一:****原文:**Last summer, my family and I visited the Great Wall. The moment we arrived, we were greeted by its majestic beauty. As we started our climb, I noticed a small girl sitting on the steps, looking lost.**续写:**Approaching her, I asked if she needed help. She nodded and said she had separated from her parents. Together, we searched for them, eventually finding them at a nearby restaurant. Her parents were relieved and grateful,offering us a meal as a token of their appreciation. That day, I learned that kindness can bring people together in unexpected ways.**中文翻译:**去年夏天,我和家人参观了长城。
我们一到那里,就被它雄伟壮丽的景色所迎接。
当我们开始攀登时,我注意到一个小女孩坐在台阶上,看起来很迷茫。
我走近她,问她是否需要帮助。
她点了点头,说她与父母走散了。
于是,我们一起寻找他们,最后在附近的一家餐厅找到了他们。
她的父母非常感激,请我们吃了一顿饭作为感谢。
那天,我学到善良可以以意想不到的方式将人们聚集在一起。
**2. 范文二:****原文:**The school festival was upon us, and everyone wasexcited about the talent show. Alice, a quiet girl in our class, had been practicing a piano piece for weeks.**续写:**On the day of the show, Alice's hands trembled as shesat at the piano. She closed her eyes and began to play.The music filled the room, captivating everyone. When she finished, there was a moment of silence, followed by thunderous applause. Alice smiled shyly, her confidence restored. That performance marked a turning point in her school life.**中文翻译:**学校节日即将到来,每个人都对才艺表演感到兴奋。
2023年新高考1卷英语读后续写范文一、读后续写概述读后续写是高考英语中的一种重要题型,主要考查学生的阅读理解能力和写作表达能力。
在读后续写中,学生需要根据所给文章的内容和语境,进行合理的想象和创作,将故事情节延续下去。
二、范文示例以下是一篇2023年新高考1卷英语读后续写的范文,供大家参考:Title: The Missing KeyOnce upon a time, there was a little girl named Alice. She lived in a small village and had a happy life with her parents and grandparents. One day, while playing in the garden, Alice found a small key hidden in the grass. She picked it up and showed it to her parents, but they didn't know what it was for.The next day, Alice took the key to school and showed it to her teacher. The teacher also didn't recognize the key and suggested that Alice keep it safe until she found out what it was for. So Alice put the key in her backpack and forgot about it for a while.Months passed, and one day, Alice's parents announced that they were going on a trip to the city. They asked Alice to stay at home with her grandparents while they were gone. Alice wasexcited because she would finally have some time to herself.While her parents were gone, Alice decided to explore the house. She found a locked door that she had never seen before. Curious, she took out the key she had found in the garden and tried it in the lock. To her surprise, the key fit perfectly!Alice opened the door and found a hidden room full of old furniture and dusty books. She started exploring and found a hidden staircase leading down into the basement. Curious, she followed the staircase and found an old chest full of gold coins and jewels.Alice was thrilled! She had found a hidden treasure! But she also realized that this was not just any treasure. It belonged to her family, and she needed to find out where it came from and what it was for.She decided to write a letter to her parents and tell them about her discovery. She also asked them to help her figure out what to do with the treasure. She knew that it was important and that it might even be worth something. But she also wanted to make sure that it was done right and that no one would get hurt in the process.Days passed, and finally, Alice's parents returned home from their trip. They were excited to hear about Alice'sdiscovery and答应帮助 her figure out what to do with the treasure. They started researching family history and found out that the treasure had belonged to their ancestors and had been hidden for generations.After much research and discussion, Alice's parents decided to donate the treasure to a local museum where it could be properly displayed and preserved for future generations to enjoy. Alice was happy with their decision because she knew that the treasure would be safe and that people would get to appreciate its beauty and history.From then on, Alice's life returned to normal, but she always remembered her adventure and the hidden treasure she had discovered. She learned a valuable lesson about family history and the importance of preserving our cultural heritage for future generations.。
高考英语读后续写: 这些细节描写素材,必须掌握! 《考试说明》中评分原则部分规定,读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。
参考最高档次第五档(21-25分)的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其它因素,可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下特征:1. 内容丰富充实,与所给短文融洽连贯;2. 连接成分应用得当,行文结构紧凑一体,与所提供各段落开头语的衔接紧密合理;3. 使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语;4. 词汇丰富高级,语法准确多变(主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句式、非谓语动词等的使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余);5. 词数充分,150词左右。
评分细则规定少于130词的,从总分中减去2分;6. 拼写准确,英式或美式拼法皆可;7. 标点合理,使用得当。
读后续写基本是以记叙文为主,而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。
一般来说,完成一篇完整的记叙文写作,需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述,其中包括六个基本要素:时间、地点、人物,事情的起因、经过和结果,即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what, who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)。
除此之外,鲜明的主题和生动的语言,也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。
描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用,它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节,有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。
一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。
同样地,议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。
一、情感心理描写在写作中,对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。
人的情感可以分很多种,如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。
在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。
喜悦1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。
2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。
3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。
4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。
More examples:1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.3. I was wild with joy.4. I was pleased beyond deion.5. She wore a shining smile on her face.6. Her smile lit up the whole room.7. She shed tears of joy.8. She was overflowing with happiness.9. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.10. I was floating on air.满意1. The result is satisfactory. 结果令人满意。
2. It is difficult to please everybody. 众口难调。
3. There is always a smile of contentment on her face. 她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
4. She belongs to those who are very difficult to satisfy. 她属于那种极难讨好的人。
5. Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction. 看到任务完成了,他们感到很满意。
惊讶1. I’m surprised to find you here. 在这里看到你我很奇怪。
2. It’s nothing to be surprised about. 这不值得大惊小怪。
3. To my surprise, he didn’t come yesterday. 令我吃惊的是他昨天没有来。
4. She looked at me in amazement. 她惊奇的看着我。
5. Her appearance fairly took my breath away. 她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。
6. Everyone looked at her in astonishment. 大家都惊讶地看着她。
悲伤1. He looks so sad. 他看起来很悲伤。
2. He is no stranger to sorrow. 他生活在悲伤中。
3. His sad story makes her feel pity. 他的悲惨经历使她深表同情。
4. His wife’s disease took away his appetite. 妻子的病令他茶饭不思。
5. The news depresses her. 这个消息让她愁苦。
More examples:1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.3. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.4. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.5. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.6. I tried to fight back tears.7. My eyes were filled with tears.8. A frown(皱眉)now stood on his face.9. These days he was in low spirits.愤怒1. She was burning with anger. 她怒火中烧。
2. He easily loses his temper. 他很容易发脾气。
3. He was in a rage. 他大发雷霆。
4. She was red with anger. 她因为发怒脸涨得通红。
More examples:1. I was seized by anger.2. His anger boiled over.3. He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.4. His voice trembled with anger.5. He gave me a look of burning anger.6. He glared at me with burning eyes.7. His face clouded with anger.感动1. Touched deeply/immensely, we…2. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.3. With tears streaming down her face, she...害怕①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.③She was struck with horror when...④She was choked by fear.⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.⑥Fear flooded over him.⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.二、动作描写动作描写也是描写人的重要一点。
利用适当的词语对表达人们的心理和性格有很大的帮助。
表达说话的动词:speak:说,讲,说话,演说。
着重开口发音。
say:说,说话。
意义非常广泛,是一般用语。
着重内容,指连贯的说话。
talk:讲,说话。
着重说话的动作,而不着重所说的话。
它多指两个人或多个人在一起讲话。
tell:说,告诉,讲。
指把一件事情传达给别人或讲述一个故事等。
有连续叙述的意思。
chat:闲谈,聊天。
多指非正式的,轻松的,愉快的,没有中心地、没有特殊目的地谈话或聊天。
含有亲热的意味。
1. gossip:只在后面说人是非,闲谈他人的事情。
2. Can you child speak yet? 你的孩子会说话了吗?3. He said he wanted to go to town. 他说他想去城里。
4. I want to talk to you about an urgent matter. 我想和你谈一件紧急的事。
5. Tell me what happened. 告诉我发生了什么事。
6. They dropped in for a chat last night. 他们昨晚顺便来闲聊了一会儿。
7. You shouldn’t listen to gossip. 你不应该听流言蜚语。
表示笑的动词:smile:“微笑”。
通常指好意的微笑,无声的微笑,如表示亲切、愉快等。
laugh:“笑”,“发笑”。
指一般的笑。
beam:“笑”。
指面露喜色,带有笑容的意思。
1. She smiled when she saw me. 她看见我时露出微笑。
2. We all laughed loudly when she made a joke. 她说了个笑话,我们都大声笑起来。
3. He beamed on his visitors. 他对着客人们微笑。
表示哭我们可以说:cry:“哭泣”、“流泪”。
意义及用法最广泛。
多强调声音,指呼号和叫喊地哭,一般由于痛苦,悲哀,恐惧,也可能是欢呼引起的。
weep:“哭泣”、“流泪”。
指不出声的哭,着重在由于悲伤而流泪。
sob:“哽咽”,“呜咽”,“啜泣”。
指尽力抑制自己的感情时发出抽泣的声音。
也可以指哭诉。
1. She started to cry when she heard the sad news. 当她听到这个悲痛的消息时,她开始哭了。