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In conclusion, it is clear that at least 93% of farmland degradation worldwide was related to human activities in 1990s and although the dominant cause varies in different continents, Europe suffered most during that period.
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In conclusion, there are some other types of aids rich countries may choose to provide more efficient help. Meanwhile, if financial aid is offered, we have to make sure that the money is being spent on where people really need it and not on filling the pockets of corrupt politicians. . (261 words)
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It is obvious that advanced technologies and science are the driving force behind the rich nations. Hi-tech products, innovations, and good management can greatly improve the productivity of whole society and hence the wealth is accumulated at high speed. Therefore, to help the poor, we’d better to give them tools of making fortune.
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As can be seen from the table which highlights the different situations in the three regions: North America, Europe, and Oceania, Europe was most seriously affected and 23% of land there turned into less productive, largely caused by deforestation(9.8%). Moreover, 13% of agricultural land in Oceania became worse, mainly due to over-grazing which alone contributed 11.3%. By comparison, the condition in North America was much better and only 5% of total land degraded. Over-cultivation was the major trigger there, providing 3.3%.
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Poverty is one of the most important problems many developing countries face. However, what types of international aids are more effective for them is a controversial issue. In my view, what the poor countries need most is not financial aid or loans, but advanced technologies and talents in some key areas.
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Moreover, the developed countries can not only send expert teams to poor nations to build roads, dams, factories and other infrastructures, but train talents and experts for them. The rich countries can provide scholarship or financial help to the students from the poor regions, which some famous western universities are actually doing. It is a wiser way to deliver help.
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3月考题预测 我的预测： 1. 旅游 2. 政府类 3. 妇女 4. 老龄化 5. 媒体广告 6. 全球多元文化 7. 科技 8. 教育
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四段式 前提： 1. 中立 2. 语法好，句子间逻辑清晰 3. 正反双方各2个论据
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Lecture 4 : 作业评讲、Task 1, 说明文、高分范 文、预测、论句
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These two diagrams illustrate the main reasons of land degradation in the world and its different impacts on three areas during the 1990s.
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Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly. Others believe that there are other more effective forms of international aids. What’s your opinion?
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This is not to say that, under no circumstances, should the rich countries not provide aid in form of money. Of course, money definitely can help the country out of many urgent problems. But how can we assure that the money will be spent in proper ways?
According to the first pie chart, livestock’s over-gazing was the biggest factor leading to the barren land, accounting for the 35%. This was followed by deforestation and over-cultivation, representing 30% and 28% respectively. Other unidentified reasons made up the left proportion, 7% collectively.