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高考英语写作真题训练50题含参考范文学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、概要写作1．Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Hugging’s Evolutionary OriginsAfter long stretches of social isolation, many of us are longing for the warmth of a hug. Degges-White, a professor focused on social relationships, says that our need for a hug goes all the way back to the survival of our species. When we’re born, we can’t care for ourselves and we need to be comfortable with being held in order to survive. We’re rewarded with a rush of feel-good hormones that come from a nice embrace.When we hug, our brains release the oxytocin hormone, making us feel connected. This connection and sense of community has an important evolutionary role because for humans, the security of our small groups and later communities was crucial to survival. Close contact helped build civilization. We may not know what we are getting from greeting our friends and family with a hug; we just enjoy it. It isn’t until those experiences are taken away that we feel pain and sadness. An elbow bump or air greeting are not enough. Research published in the journal Psychological Science has shown that hugging has a “stress cushioning” effect that may even protect us from chronic illness and infections.When children don’t experience healthy touch, it can impact their development. Kids who didn’t grow up being held, miss out on that sense of safety and protection. They may act out or isolate themselves from those around them. In some cases, the opposite may also be true. Some children may show too much affection, eager for any form of positive attention that they didn’t get at home.Still, to hug or not to hug? That’s the question right now. According to Degges-White, if you’re both vaccinated, go for it; research has shown that the risk of transmission is extremely low. And if you’re vaccinated but you don’t know for sure whether the person you’re hugging has also been vaccinated, it’s still most likely safe.【答案】Hugging has an evolutionary origin. First, new-borns need hugging to survive, for it makes them feel comfortable. Besides, hugging means close contact, which helped to build civilization. When people hug, they feel more bonded. Additionally, hugging helps people feel less stressed and its absence can affect kids’ development negatively. Therefore, huggingis recommended for people who are vaccinated.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇说明文。
1、不要再用more and more了；该词组被评为中国恶俗词组榜第一！！老师说。
可以用a growing number of..2、inevitable。
不可避免。
3、should/would/could/may/might；为什么要用这个5个词？首先，语气比较委婉，不会很肯定，显的谦虚；其次，可以不考虑动词的形式；所以这五个词被称为最贱的词。
4、physically beneficial身体健康；副词+形容词的表达方式，比较好看，接下来也会有举例；5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous 举世闻名6、科技类作文；科技发展。
outlineFOR：Convenient&efficient 方便、高效Enrich lifestyle 丰富生活Environmentlly friendly（副词修饰形容词）绿色环保AGAINST：Physically harmful/detrimental 危害健康Negative impact on the youth 危害青少年Insecurity of information 信息不安全7、开头方法一：BackgroundCon troversy (2 different/opposite ideas)As/Being a controversial issue，。
作为有争议的问题。
Now days，the issue on。
is highly debatable，and ideas vary from person to person。
不同的人有不同的观点。
（不要用different people 。
）Some would claim 。
，while some others may suggest。
一些人认为。
另一些人认为。
Some would claim。
，while the idea。
is still held by some others。
读后续写素材积累：跟名著学遣词造句读后续写基本以记叙文为主，记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。
环境描写是记叙文的要素之一，指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。
其中，社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。
自然环境是指自然界的景物，如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。
我们今天来看看英语名著是怎么描写动作、情绪和环境。
动作描写He looked at me very gravely, and put his arms around my neck.他非常严肃地看着我，用胳膊搂住我的脖子。
——《小王子》I didn’t know how long I sat there helplessly waiting, but eventually I heard the door flung open as he rushed into the hut.我不知道自己无助地坐在那里等了多久，但最终我听到他冲进小屋时，门猛地打开了。
——《弗兰肯斯坦》This idea was so upsetting to Tom that he jumped out of bed and ran to the window.这个主意让汤姆很不高兴，他从床上跳起来，跑到窗边。
——《圣诞颂歌》The car has gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.车子几秒钟就开走了，爱丽丝难以置信地摇摇头。
——《爱丽丝梦游仙境》I ran back home, smiling and skipping along.我蹦蹦跳跳地笑着跑回家。
Her pulses beat fast, and the blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.她的心跳加快，热血温暖了身体的每个部位，使她感觉到身心完全地放松了。
2020年上海高考英语写作讲义目录第一部分遣词造句 (2)一. 词汇升级 (2)（一）高分词汇积累 (2)（二）出彩表达 (8)二、句型升级 (14)（一）基本句型回顾 (14)（二）高分句型中的语法亮点 (15)（三）句型素材积累 (17)第二部分图画作文 (23)一、写作基本思路导读------三层次，十模块 (23)二、各层次的常用表达 (23)第三部分图表作文 (34)一. 图表作文攻略 (34)二. 模板详解 (36)第一部分遣词造句一. 词汇升级（一）高分词汇积累1．It occurred to sb. that … / it dawned on me that… 替换think / sb. have an idea that …I was about to pay for the shopping when it suddenly dawned on me that I'd left my check book at home. 我买完东西要付钱时，才突然发现我把支票簿留在家里了。
Suddenly it dawned on me that they couldn't possibly have met before.我突然明白他们以前不可能见过面。
2．devote替换spendHe devotes (spends) all his spare time to reading.3．seek替换want / look forThey sought(wanted) to hide themselves behind the trees.4．nothing but替换onlyIt is the audience that support the stars, but some of them insist that their achievements result from nothing but their own efforts. 是观众支撑着那些明星，但有些明星认为其成功完全来自自己的努力。
英语写作策略——遣词造句比较下面用英语写出的句子。
（1）越来越多的学生发现学英语变得越来越重要了。
✧More and more students find learning English has become increasingly important.✧Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasinglyimportant.（2）如今人们消耗的蔬菜越来越多了。
✧More and more people are eating vegetables nowadays.✧Vegetable consumption is on the rise nowadays.（3）经济的发展需要越来越多的服务人员。
✧We need more and more service people with the development of economy.✧There is an increasing demand for service people with the development ofeconomy.（4）越来越多的证据显示第二种管理风格比第一种更有效。
✧More and more evidence is showing that the second style of management is moreproductive than the first one.✧The evidence is mounting that the second style of management is more productivethan the first one.措词攻略(一)（1）使用书面语词汇（2）善用具体词汇形体化A. The injured footballer limped（跛行）slowly off the field.B. The victorious army marched（迈进）into the conquered city.C. The pedestrians rushed（快步走）here and there in the rain.D. The man, whose wife was expecting the first baby, was pacing（踱步）nervously up and down the hospital corridor.E. The manager strode（大步走）into the office and asked who was late for work.F. We wandered（瞎转）around for hours looking for the house.G. She just drags（步履拖沓）along after us wherever we go.感官化A. Rain came down and broke the silence.B. After a long hush, big raindrops came pitter-pattering down, shattering the eerie silence.细节化speak讲话 talk交谈tell讲述 explain解释mention提及 narrate讲述lie撒谎 whisper耳语discuss讨论 utter出声persuade劝说 quote引述libel诋毁 murmur低语comment、observe、remark评价declare、announce宣称（3）同义替换A. We loved the food so much, especially the fish dishes.B. I prefer walking alone.C. I really admire people who can work in such difficult conditions.D. I want to travel because I enjoy meeting people and seeing new places.E. She is fond of playing the piano.F. Babies are attracted to bright colours.G. I don’t care for coffee.H. Many soccer fans are crazy about David Beckham.I. He’s the first real boyfriend she’s had and she’s mad about him.J. Many Westerners are keen on Jackie Chan’s kungfu films.K. He has been addicted to the drug.L. Some adults are hooked on computer games as well.（4）注意搭配搭配松散：A. My teacher helped me very much. (a lot)B. Chinese economy has developed very much. (rapidly)C. A friend must know you very much. (well)搭配错误A. quick foodB. My father is an excessive smoker. (应该说a chain/ heavy smoker)C. They did a lot of effort to finish the job on time. (应该说made great efforts)D. I proposed to take a final party with other classmates. (应该说organize/ throw a farewell party)措词攻略(二)（1）长短句更替A. The animal trainer dove into the pool. The trainer was skilled and athletic. She was excited when she dove into the pool. She swam with two dolphins. The dolphins were babies. The dolphins were playful. The trainer swam with the dolphins for over an hour. When the trainer swam with the dolphins, she was happy.B. The skilled, athletic animal trainer excitedly dove into the pool, where she happily swam for over an hour with two playful baby dolphins.C. The animal trainer was skilled and athletic. She excitedly dove into the pool, where there were two playful baby dolphins. She swam with them happily for over an hour.下面是五种将短句变长的方法，请注意划线部分的改动。
（一）：遣词造句【芝麻开门】句子是文章的基本单位。
成功的作品是由清晰而合乎语法规则的句子组成的。
然而一个好的句子除了能够准确表达作者的意思，还需要简洁生动，这是在考试中获得高分的法宝。
一、句子要简洁A hero is nothing but a product of his time. 时势造英雄。
写作要求精练，因为，简洁的表达能起到更加强调的作用。
我们要写出效果好、影响大的文章，就要想方设法1）避免使用空洞、多余的短语；2）避免过多地使用较长的句子结构，如并列句和从属句等；3）避免不必要的重复。
改写下面的句子1）Owing to the fact that I had a lot of work to do, it wasn’t possible for me to accept their invitation._____________________________________________________________________________2) He is a man who is honest, who always pays his just debts, and who observes the golden rules in his dealings with others._____________________________________________________________________________3) My hometown is a quiet, peaceful place. It is quiet and peaceful because of the small number of people living there.______________________________________________________________________________二、语言要生动写作时要吸引读者的兴趣，句子就需生动、充满活力。
英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(一)1.用词准确，得体写作中每个词汇的选取都要符合语言环境的要求。
其中，动词最为重要。
(1)我把钥匙忘在车里了。
A：I forgot my keys in the car.(F)B：I left my keys in the car.(T)(2)我的梦想实现了。
A：My dream has become true.(F)B：My dream has come true.(T)2.选词多样写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学习的较为高级一些的词汇。
(1)我几乎睁不开眼睛。
A：I can not open my eyes.(一般)B：I can hardly keep my eyes open.(优秀)(2)他是个新手。
A：He is a new one.(一般)B：He is a green hand.(优秀)3.短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。
(1)我再也不能忍受他跟我说话的方式了。
A：I can no longer bear the way he speaks to me.(一般)B：I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to me.(优秀) (2)他对我在课堂上所说的置若罔闻。
A：He didn't listen to what I said in the class.(一般)B：He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.(优秀)4.避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。
(1)我喜欢读书而我的兄弟则喜欢看足球赛。
A：I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.(一般)B：I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.(优秀)(2)杰克是我们学校的学生。
