作文指导

作文指导一．写作中的注意事项1.考场作文基本分三段来写：总(阐明观点)——分（把作文中的信息写完，千万不要漏掉，可适当自己发挥一下）——总（总结，并可以说说你的建议，希望，使主题得到升华。

）2.作文中要善于使用连接词，使你的文章衔接自然，条理清晰。

3.写作时，一定注意你的字数，中考作文一般都是要求写80-100字，所以你的作文不能少于80，也不能多于100，否则，都要扣分。

4.写作时，一定得注意你的书写，印象分是很重要的，不要求你的字有多漂亮，但一定得工整，干净。

5.写作时，一定得使用你有把握的字，词，句，若没有把握，就换个思路，角度去写，千万不要写出来的句子都是有语病的（特别是开头和结尾）。

否则，你的作文分数很低。

6.为使你的作文有亮点，能使改卷老师眼前一亮，你可以使用1.多种句型（简单句：陈述句，疑问句，祈使句，感叹句；复合句：宾语从句，定语从句，状语从句——见“综合训练册”）；2.多种语态（主动语态和被动语态）；3.名人名言，谚语（注：这点只是在你有把握的情况下再使用，若没把握，就不要使用，以免出现许多错误，到时，不加分反而减分）。

7.写作前，一定得打草稿，草稿打完，不要急着抄在答题卡上，还要把你的草稿再检查一遍，看是否有些错误是可以避免的。

8.作文一定得自己写，不要在前面抄一篇（这样是不给分的）。

千万不要不写，一分也许名次就往后退了一大截。

二．连接词，名言，谚语连接词：1. Firstly…..Secondly……Thirdly……Finally/What’s more(外而且) ；besides(另外，此外); in fact(事实上)2.On the one hand,……….on the other hand…….3.In short(简而言之)=All in all; In my opinion(在我看来)4.First,….Second,….Last but not least；in a word(换句话来说)5.There is no doubt that…..(毫无疑问)；As far as I know,(据我所知)6.With the development of the society,(随着社会的发展)7.from the bottom of my heart(从我内心深处)注（见先前发的作文指导资料）名言，谚语，好句（有把握可以使用，亮点）1.As the saying goes(常言道)，“Don’t leave today’s work fortomorrow.”(今日事今日毕)2.Early bird gets the worm.(早起的鸟儿有虫吃)3.Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成)4.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.(入乡随俗)5.It’s the thought that counts.(礼轻情意重)6.Failure is the mother of success.(失败是成功之母)7.Knowledge is power.(知识就是力量)8.Smile to the world, and the world will smile back to you.(你对世界微笑，世界也会对你微笑）9.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.(一天一个苹果，医生远离我)10.S afety must come first.(安全一定要摆在第一位)11.O ur friendship will last forever.(我们的友谊将会天长地久)12.N othing is impossible.(一切皆有可能)13.A friend in need is a friend indeed.(患难见真情)14.P ractice makes perfect.(孰能生巧) 15.Time is money.16.All roads lead to Rome.(条条大路通罗马)17.No pains, no gains.(一分耕耘，一分收获)18.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(只工作，不玩，聪明的孩子也会变傻)19.Every coin has two sides.（每枚硬币都有两面=事物都有两面性）20.Love me love my dog.(爱屋及乌)三．作文评分标准和档次第五档（很好）：（20—18分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无错误，行文连贯，表达清楚。

第四档（好）：（17—14分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。

第三档（一般）：（13—9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。

第二档（较差）：（8—5分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。

第一档（差）：（4—0分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。

四．范文范文1. 对他人的失败，你给与的安慰Dear Li Lei,Failure(失败) is common in daily life.So, when you meet with failure, don’t feel upset.Here is some advice to deal with(处理) it.-----------总Firstly, As the saying goes，“Failure is the mother of success.”You Should n’t lose your confidence when you fail. You should try to find out What’s the reason for your failure. Secondly, keep calm.(保持冷静)It won’t be useful if you are angry. Staying calm will give you time to think carefully. You can do it by communicating with your friends, listening to music, and so on(等等）. Thirdly, don’t care(在意）other people’s thoughts. After all,(毕竟）everyone may fail in his life. What’s more,stop worrying, and start to welcome the new life with smiles. Smile to the world, and the world will smile back to you.(你对世界微笑，世界也会对你微笑）。

——分In short, everything will go well.-----------总范文2.提倡节约，反对浪费，光盘行动In modern days, more and more people get richer and richer.But as they begin to live a happier life, they pay less attention to food-saving.Nobody worries about food and few can think of the people in hunger(n.饥饿) in the other parts of the world.----------------总We should carry out the Clean the Plates Campaign(倡导光盘行动)，calling on (号召) people to save food.Firstly, we are told to eat up(吃光)all we have on our plates. Secondly, when we go out for dinner,we must pack(打包) home all we can’t finish. Last but not least, if we see people wasting food, we should stop them.--------------------分In this way, not only can we save a lot of food and reduce(减少) the rubbish but also we can develop a good habit of saving.(not only放句首，要倒装) Let’s join the campaign.-------------------------------总范文3.难忘的初中生活How time flies.(时间飞逝)My colorful middle school life is nearly ending.Here is what I think about myself.------------总In the past,I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them.I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball. But now, I am interested in history,because it is very interesting.I have many interests(兴趣) such as reading books, playing sports and so on.(等等) In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn toenjoy my new school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful.--------分Believing myself is the key to(是…的关键) success.--------------总范文4.安全问题Today, more and more people pay attention to safety and are worried about it. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.---------------------总Firstly, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Secondly, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. What’s more,we ought to(应该) eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad(使用了定语从句)will do harm to our health. As the saying goes(常言道),“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”-----------------------------------------------------------------分All in all, safety must come first.----------------------------总范文5.保护环境，低碳生活（low-carbon life）（常用句型）1.As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.2. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.3.But some people don’t care about it.They pay less attention to it.4.Something must be done to stop the pollution.5. It"s our duty to protect our environment。