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高考英语备考之书面表达提分策略Teaching Aims：Develop the student s’ strong awareness to learn to improve their Englishcompositions in their future writings by guiding them to share , enjoy and practice the usages of the five writing strategies in various past tests .(通过引导学生感受历年各地在高考真题或模拟检测题的书面表达中五种提分策略的应用来培养学生在日后的写作训练中运用各种提分策略来提升书面表达档次的意识)Step 1: Reading and Thinking:Read through the two Students’ compositions given to you from our latest test and think about the following questions: Which one do you think is better? And why ?Step 2:提分策略(一):整齐和谐的并列句在历年高考写作中的运用Enjoy and Learn(分享-感悟)1.(天津高考)All the classmates are friendly and kind, so you don't need to worry aboutthe difficulty.2.(四川高考)As a matter of fact, I don't like to go any more , but I'm afraid I'll lose theirfriendship.3.(全国Ⅱ)I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something forenvironmental protection.4．(福建高考)Some choose to avoid them while others decide to deal with them.5．(陕西高考)First, my English is very good and I'm open-minded and warmhearted, so I'm getting along well with everyone.6.(四川高考)Keep it in mind, and gradually we can gain this good learning habit andbenefit from it.7.(福建高考)I was about to give up when my best friend encouraged me to go on.8.(全国卷Ⅱ)People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses.＊＊英语写作中并列句的常用句型＊＊1．both...and...既……又……2．either...or...或者……或者……；不是……就是……3．neither...nor...既不……也不……4．not only...but (also) ... 不仅……而且……5．not ... but...不是……而是……6．...while/whereas…… 而，……却,……7．祈使句＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句名词词组＋and＋陈述句8．...when...……这时……(1) sb. was doing sth. when... 某人正在做某事，这时……(2) sb. was about to do sth. when... 某人正要做某事，这时……(3) sb. had just done sth. when... 某人刚做完某事，这时……练习一：Translation exercises (翻译练习):1.如果你对我们俱乐部感兴趣，你可以到俱乐部来或者给我们打电话。
作文句型精讲为了。
而{句型}笫二节书面表达（满分25分）2013年全国卷1作文题目假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：李明：高个子,戴眼镜航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好.为了参加一个重要会议，我叔叔李明将要去你的城市。
2015年全国卷1作文题目假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
要点如下：1、栏目介绍；2、稿件内容；3、稿件长度：约400字；4、交稿日期：6月28日前.为了更好地了解美国节日风俗和中学生的生活，我们学校准备在外国文化栏目刊登一系列短文。
2015年全国卷2作文题目假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)，请给外教露西写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：1、出发及返回时间2、活动：包饺子、表演节目等为了丰富老人们的生活，我们决定和同学们一起去敬老院为他们举办一场节目。
【提炼】作文必备句型：为了。
，某人做某事1.To do...,sb. do sth.2.In order to...,sb. do sth. 基础3.主句，aiming to do sth.4.主句，the purpose of which+be+to do sth. 升级为了参加一个重要会议，我叔叔李明将要去你的城市。
My uncle,Li Ming, is going to visit your city,aiming to take part in an important meeting.为了更好地了解美国节日风俗和中学生的生活，我们学校准备在外国文化栏目刊登一系列短文。
专题10 书面表达（I、II、III卷模式）【构建知识体系】【剖析全国高考真题】——预测高考命题方向书面表达2021年命题解读和近年考点再现1.【2020·全国新课标I】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。
请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
2015年天津高考英语作文题目及参考范文高考英语频道为大家精心提供2015天津高考英语题目以及参考范文，更多高考资讯请关注我们网站的更新!第二节：书面表达(满分25分)61、假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。
请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1、自我介绍;2、拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;3、询问对方的其他需求。
注意：(1)词数不少于100;(2)请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生会 the Student union范文：Dear Chris,This is Li Jin, an 8 grade student from Chenguang Middle School, China. As the president of the Student union , I want to talk with you about the donation of books on behalf of my school.I'm very glad that there are so many American students loving Chinese. I think Chinese is an intersting language. of course, I guess it is not so easy for you to learn it. Actually, to help you learn Chinese well,we will donate to your class 300 books which are all about traditional Chinese history. With these books, I hope that all of you can know more about Chinese history and culture. Also maybe they can help you learn Chinese smoonther.By the way, do you have any other help? If there is any demand, I would very happy to help.Yours, Li Jin。
2015高考英语复习学法探究专项指导书面表达基础五大句型结构讲与练句子是表达思想的最基本的语言单位。
无论是书面表达还是口头表达，都凭借意义连贯的一系列句子以表达人们的思想。
要写好一篇文章，无论是长篇大论，还是百字短文，都必须写好一个个句子。
写好句子的关键就在于培养起句子框架结构能力。
而动词句型框架意识、修饰语的定位意识以及英语主语表达方式辨别意识则是英语句子框架结构能力的核心所在。
所以有必要强化训练各个有关句式句型，为迅速提高英语书面表达能力打下扎实的基础。
一、主系表结构【练习】◆人类居住的唯一家园是地球。
The only home for man to live on is the earth.❖失败为成功之母。
Failure is the mother of success.♦所有这些词典都对我帮助很大。
All these dictionaries are a great help to me.⌧门口那辆摩托车不是我的。
The motorcycle at the gate is not mine.⍓倘若我是你，我就采纳他的建议。
If I were you, I follow take his advice.【练习】◆中国自然资源丰富。
China is rich in natural resources.❖王先生正忙于备课。
Mr. Wang is busy preparing for his lessons.♦他对他儿子学习上的进步感到自豪。
He is very proud of his son’s progress in study.⌧他们缺少时间和钱。
They are short of time and money.⍓你真糊涂，竟然相信他说的话。
It’s very foolish of you to believe what he said.他总是乐于助人。
He is always ready to help others.【练习】◆这个童话很有趣。
高考英语书面表达一．图表作文的框架As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,___________ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. On one hand, ____.On the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that-. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.范文由于巨大的学习压力、升学压力，很多高三学生都在一点程度上存在健康问题。
下表是对某高三年级学生的调查表，请根据表格内容，综述高三学生当前存As is apparently shown in the chart above,problems both mentally and physically, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as poor sight, and a large percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercises. 40% of the students surveyed won ' t obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claimed that they didn't have enough communication with others.As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes:" All work no play make Jack a dull boy." Without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. Therefore, I suggest that we should be given less homework and more time to have out-of-class activities. Only in this way can we have a healthy life.二．对比议论文框架_____ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say __ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of __. What is more, __Moreover____.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides), _____. Thirdly (finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____. The reason is that _____. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.三．求职信基本步骤：1.点出消息来源，明确求职心愿2.提供个人简历，展示自身优势3.简述获职打算，请求尽快回音范文假如你是李华，是学校“爱心俱乐部”的成员，英语成绩非常突出，有两年的英语家教经验，认为志愿者工作能使人数量信心，培养良好的交际能力。
请写篇应聘信，开头结尾已给。
Dear student union：I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I read it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five.Now I am writing to apply for this opportunity.First, allow me to make a brief introduction about myself. I am Li Hua, a member of the Loving Heart Club in our school, and I have a good command of English. My two years' experience as a tutor has taught me that working as a volunteer can build our confidence and enable us to develop our communication skills, which are a necessity in our social life.When I read your ad, I became fascinated, I believe that being a volunteer at your village is obviously more than just teaching, it is helpful to broaden my horizons and improve my understanding of the world. I would appreciate it so much if you could consider my application.I am looking forward to your early reply and please e-mail me soon.Yours,LiHua四．图画作文1.根据图画写一篇短文，叙述东东与其妈妈发生的故事。
要求：1．不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要就此现象要发表自己的感想；2.字数120左右；3.开头已给出。
参考范文：On Monday morning, on his way to school, Dongdong found a little girl lying on the ground, crying. He was on the point of helping the girl when his mother stopped him and said, “Don‟t do that or others will think it was you who knocked her down.” The next day, the mother was astonished to see Dongdong just ignored the fallen oil bottle on the ground. Dongdong said to his mother, “If I had got the bottle to stand, you would have thought I knocked it down.”I t otally disagree with the way Dongdong‟s mother brings him up. Personally, parents should help their children become considerate and helpful, though helping others may sometimes bring them trouble. After all, helping others is an essential aspect of building up a harmonious society. We all need some help, right?2.根据下面一幅图画，以“Give Children More Encouragement”为题写一篇英语短文，说明图画反映的主题，并就图画主题发表感想。
As is vividly shown in the picture,will make greater progress if teachers and parents give them more encouragement.Encouragement will get students motivated and make them more confident. As a result, they will study harder andexperiences with you which show the great significance of encouragement.to be poor at English , which madeencouraged me, telling me to believeencouragement that made me regainEnglish and I am proud that I am good at it.From what I have mentioned above, I can safely draw the conclusion that（一）阅读下面一段话，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法：“My parents are always coming into my room to check what I‟m doing and it drives crazy! When I escape to my room, it‟s my time to relax. I want to shout: …Enough already! Leave me alone!‟ ” —Sara, aged 16 Do your parents check your tests? Snoop (窥探) through your room? Read your diary? If so, how can you convince them to give you more privacy（隐私权）you want and need? And give some advice to students like Sara. Give an example. 注意：1．短文应结合自身实际谈建议：2．词数120左右，不必拟标题。
