高中英语2024届高考复习应用文写作练习与讲解1019(共三篇)

高考英语应用文写作讲解与练习一、申请信申请信有很多种，比如求职申请，加入某组织或活动的申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验，能力，成就以及愿望等。

申请信的语气要诚挚友好，对于申请的内容和原因要表达清楚，再表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。

[P1]自我介绍，信息来源，写信目的[P2]详写自身优势及类似经历等[P3]表示感谢，期盼获批及获批后的打算等【固定思维】[P1] 写信目的，信息来源Learning/Knowing that there will be (事) in/at/on...(地点) on/next (时间)，I’m writing the letter to apply to do sth.P2: 详细自身优势，经历等以及申请成功后你可以做的一些事情，这个事情可以与你的优势或经历综合在一起去写。

思路：个人优势：语言，社交，文化，经历，性格，这些优势可以让你在所申请的活动或组织中做什么样的事情。

The advantages that I have over others are followed.First of all, I have a good command of(精通，掌握) +语言/技能，which allows me to do sth.Besides, I’ m skilled in(擅长) + 社交/文化方面，making me do st but not the least, I’m a very diligent student with a nice character and I’m used to working as a +身份 before, so that I believe I can be fit for the position.P3: 表示感谢，期望获批I will appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to be part of you.I should be grateful if I can get this opportunity.【模拟题】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、通知：紧急疏散演练（广东省汕头市2024年普通高考第一次模拟考试）假定你是校学生会主席李华，为了提高学生安全意识，学校决定于下周一开展紧急疏散演练。

请你用英语写一份活动通知，告知学校的留学生，内容包括：1.参加人员、时间、路线；2.注意事项。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：紧急疏散演练 urgent evacuation drill写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般将来时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段介绍演练目的；第二段介绍演练的参加人员、时间、路线（要点1）和注意事项（要点2），第三段再次强调。

【参考范文】NoticeIn order to raise students' safety awareness, our school is scheduled to carry out an urgent evacuation drill.The drill falls on next Monday at 2:00 PM. All students will participate in the drill, international students included. Upon hearing the fire alarm, all students will line up in two columns in the corridor, go downstairs under the mand of the teachers in class, and evacuate from the east and west sides of the teaching buildings to the open area. We will end up gathering on the playground after a head count of each class by the monitor. During the evacuation, security and public order really count, and it is essential to keep quiet and avoid crowding.Life is not a game, so is the drill. Your understanding and cooperation are highly appreciated. (132 words)The Students' Union【中文翻译】通知为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定开展一次紧急疏散演练。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、分享信：外语周活动（浙江强基联盟2023学年第一学期高一12月联考）假定你是李华，上周你校第十五届“外语周（Foreign Language Week）”活动结束。

请你写信给英国笔友Kate，告知她该活动的相关信息，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动收获。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山交代写作目的——分享外语周活动；第二段介绍活动目的（要点1）、活动内容（要点2）和活动收获（要点3）；第三段期待对方分享。

【参考范文】Dear Kate,I hope this letter finds you st Friday witnessed the end of my school’s 15th "Foreign Language Week".I am writing to share it with you.Aiming to inspire students' interest in English learning and improve their English communication skills, the Foreign Language Week had a wealth of activities, ranging from a speech contest and a dubbing competition, to a drama performance.The activity enabled me to learn through fun, exposing me to the beauty of the language and bringing me a feast for both eyes and ears.What about any activity in your school? Your sharing is highly expected.(101 words) Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的凯特：见信好。

高中英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、申请信：跨文化演出主持人（2024届高三上学期月考二）假定你是李华，正在新西兰某中学学习。

你校将举办跨文化演出活动，请你给活动负责人Mr. Brown写封信，申请当主持人。

内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的优势；3.期待答复。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山介绍写信目的：申请成为主持人（要点1）；第二段介绍自己的优势（要点2）；第三段答复（要点3）。

【参考范文】Dear Mr. Brown,I am an exchange student from China. I am writing to apply to be the host of the crosscultural performance organized by our school.First and foremost, my proficiency in English makes it easy for me to municate with the audience. Plus, I am very familiar with traditional Chinese culture, and therefore it will be my responsibility to share Chinese stories with the teachers and students in our school to make China voice better heard. Even more important is my rich experience since I have participated in many host petitions in China.I would appreciate it if you could give my application your full consideration. Looking forward to your favorable reply. (111 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的布郎先生：我是一名中国交换生。

高考英语模拟考应用文练习班级考号姓名总分一、介绍、推荐类1.2024年1月浙江首考：投稿+推荐课间体育活动请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ __________________2.浙江省北斗星盟高三适应性考试英语试题：邮件+鼓励竞聘假定你是李华，校英语演讲比赛正在招募主持人，你校交换生 Chris 想竞聘但又很犹豫，请你写一封邮件，内容包括：1.鼓励竞聘；2.你的理由。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信：分享万米接力赛（湖南省长沙市长郡中学2024届高三暑假作业检测卷）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David发来邮件想了解你们学校近期举行的万米接力赛的情况。

请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.比赛目的；2.时间和地点；3.过程及意义。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。

1.基本时态为一般过去时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山说明写作目的——分享学校万米接力赛；第二段写比赛目的（要点1）、时间和地点（要点2）以及比赛过程和意义（要点3）；第三段期待回复。

【参考范文】Dear David,Glad to receive your letter, in which you asked about the 10,000-meter relay race held by our school, I'd like to share it with you.Last Tuesday afternoon witnessed the relay race at the school's playground with the purpose of enriching the school's sports culture and cultivating students' teamwork spirit and collective sense of honor. On the running track, out rushed the players in pursuit of victory with the starting gun going off, and the whole field immediately boiled up, refueling and cheering one after another. Not only did the competition demonstrate the students' youthful vigor and vitality, it also enhanced the unity of the class.What about any activities in your school? Looking forward to your sharing. (119 words) Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的大卫：很高兴收到你的来信。

高考英语应用文投稿写作讲解和练习【写作指导】把握投稿的写作框架。

其写作框架如下：第一段：开门见山，引出话题。

第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。

第三段：表达愿望。

【素材宝库】词汇积累之第一段词汇积累第一段：引出话题1.as we all know,..../ as is known to all,....众所周知......2.it is widelyacknowledged that....人们普遍认为...3.Nowadays, with the development of..../ with the increasing popularity of ...如今，随着...的发展/流行 when it comes to ....当谈到...时4.In the long span of the Chinese history...在中国漫长的历史中......5.When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。

第二段：介绍主题细节1.Not only does exercise build up our bodies but also helps us stay energetic.锻炼不仅能锻炼我们的身体，还能帮助我们保持活力。

2.Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。

3.My favorite scientist is Qian Xuesen, a ________, __________________________ scientist.我最喜欢的科学家是钱学森，一个________，__________________________科学家第三段：表达愿望1.I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and enjoy more popularity.我真诚地希望青年能取得更大的成功，更受欢迎。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、建议信：偶像对高中生成长的影响研究（浙江省名校协作体2023学年第二学期高二年级试题）假定你是高中生李华，将在假期和你校的英国交换生Jack共同完成一项研究性学习任务。

请给Jack写一封邮件，提议研究偶像对高中生成长的影响。

内容包括：1.选题理由；2.实施方案；3.征询意见。

注意：参考词汇：偶像 idol，写作词数应为80个左右。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段表示对合作任务的高兴并提出选题；第二段说明选题理由（要点1）和实施方案（要点2）；第三段征询意见并期待回复。

【参考范文】Dear Jack,I hope this email finds you well! I am more than happy to learn that I will be working with you on a research project during the holiday.The influence of idols on the growth of high school students, I believe, is a good option. As we all know, idols ranging from stars and scientists, to heroes, play a significant role in shaping the values and cultivating the quality of students of our age. We can design and distribute questionnaires to carry out our research, organize a debate petition to give students a deep insight into the influence of idols, followed by the ments on it from the judges in the petition.I’m wondering if my proposal works. Looking forward to your early reply. (124 words) Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的杰克：见信好！得知我将在假期和你共同完成一项研究性学习任务，我非常兴奋。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、分享信：家务达人秀主题展示活动2023学年第一学期浙江省精诚联盟10月高二年级联考假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。

为了丰富生活，你所在的班级开展了“Housework Talent Show”主题展示活动。

你的英国好友Tim得知情况后，来信询问有关信息。

请你回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.活动内容；2.收获及感受。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山表明写作目的——分享班级主题展示活动；第二段介绍活动具体内容（要点1）；第三点写个人收获及感受（要点2）。

【参考范文】Dear Tim,Learning that you take a great interest in a talent show carried out by our class, I’m writing to share it with you.Last Wednesday afternoon witnessed an activity themed with Housework Talent Show.The students made every effort to show the highlights of their own housework, ranging from cooking impressive food, and cleaning oil stains without using chemicals, to folding what is called tofu quilt, which means a quilt with a square shape.Not only did this activity broaden my horizons, it also gave me a deep insight that work can delight us physically and mentally, creating a better life.(101 words) Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的提姆：听说你对我们班开展的一次主题展示活动很感兴趣，我写信和你分享一下此次活动。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、邀请信：邀请外教参加教师节主题班会（浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考英语试题）假如你是高二（1）班班长李华，你校将于教师节当天在本班举办教师节主题班会活动。

请你给你班外教Tom写封英语邮件，邀请他出席活动，内容包括：1.班会时间和地点；2.活动安排。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般将来时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山发出邀请；第二段班会的时间、地点（要点1）和活动安排（要点2）；第三段期待参与。

【参考范文】Dear David,I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Grade 2. I am writing to invite you to attend our class meeting to celebrate Teachers' Day.The class meeting is scheduled to be held in our classroom at 3 p.m. on September 10th. The students will express their thanks and blessing to the teachers through a series of activities, ranging from recitation and singing to performances. An English play will also be put on to express our gratitude to you for your careful guidance.We would be greatly honored to have your presence. Looking forward to your favorable reply. (98 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的汤姆老师：我是李华，高二（1）班班长。

高考英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分1.健康饮食假设你是学生会主席李华，请你围绕“健康饮食”的主题，写一封英语倡议书，内容包括:1.健康饮食的重要性;2.如何健康饮食;3.鼓励健康饮食。

2.与老师沟通调查显示越来越多的中学生不会与老师进行沟通，只有少数中学生能与老师正常交流。

某英文杂志就此问题向中学生征稿。

请你根据以下要求写一篇100词左右的英文稿件投稿。

内容包括：1.简述调查的结果；2.阐述与老师沟通的重要性；3.谈谈你已有的做法或接下来的打算。

注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.体育与健康假如你是李华，下个月你校将要举办以“体育与健康”为主题的校园体育节。

请你写一封邮件给交换生Peter，邀请他参加体育节，内容包括:1.活动的时间和地点;2.活动的内容和意义。

注意: 1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4.邀请山西太原旅游假定你是李华。

假期马上到来，你打算到山西太原旅游,缓解一下紧张的学习情绪,同时了解一下山西厚重的历史文化。

请你用英语写一封邮件给你校交换生Frank,邀请他一同前往。

注意:写作词数应为80左右。

5.Constant Renewal以日新(Constant Renewal)为主题。

日新意思是天天更新。

从“苟日新，日日新，又日新”到“富有之谓大业，日新之谓盛德”，中华民族的精神一部分贯穿其中。

一代代中国人努力使自身不断更新，使民众、社会、国家不断更新，持续进步、完善，始终呈现新的气象。

它是贯穿在“修齐治平"各层面的一种自强不息、不断革新进取的精神。

6.A Running Exercise Competition假定你是李华，你校上周五举行班级跑操比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括:(1)参赛对象(2)比赛过程(3)活动意义。

注意:写作词数应为80左右;7.How to Improve Myself某英语网站开展关于how to improve myself的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为终身运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者、优雅生活者。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、报道：Sports and Fitness Week（5年高考3年模拟增分测评卷必修一UNIT3）假定你是李华，上周你校组织开展了“运动健康周”活动。

请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动反响。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Sports and Fitness Week写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段交代活动的时间和目的（要点1）；第二段写活动内容（要点2）；第三段写活动反响（要点3）。

【参考范文】Sports and Fitness WeekLast week witnessed a Sports and Fitness Week organized by our school with the purpose of building up the strength of both teachers and students, and freeing them from their busy work and study.On the one hand, the School Union organized the staff to participate in some physical activities, ranging from long ropejumping and ball games, to ball-hugging relay. On the other hand, the Student Union got all students involved in competitions of running exercises, radio gymnastic exercises, and table tennis, as well as physical fitness tests, to enhance the participation of all students.The Sports and Fitness Week has enriched the extracurricular life of both teachers and students, giving them a further insight into the significance of building a leading sports country and enhancing national self-confidence. (129 words)【中文翻译】运动健康周活动为了提升全校师生的身体素质，缓解他们紧张的工作与学习压力，上周我校开展了“运动健康周”活动。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、发言稿：野生动物保护（云南师范大学附属中学2023-2024学年高三上学期适应性月考二）假定你是李华，你校国际部所有交换生将开展主题为“野生动物保护”的交流会，你将作为学生代表发言，请写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.保护野生动物的重要性；2.保护措施；3.其他。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,Thank you for your attention!写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段介绍保护野生动物的重要性（要点1）；第二段介绍保护措施（要点2）；第三段总结。

【参考范文】Dear fellow students,Nowadays, an increasing number of wild animals are being endangered. Man and nature, as we all know, coexist in harmony. The destruction of the environment by human beings and the endless hunting of wild animals result in their extinction, and in turn have a great impact on human survival. Therefore, protecting wild animals really matters.It always comes first for the government to take strict measures to protect the environment and forbid hunting. High technology should also be applied to the improvement of the habitats for the wild animals. Equally important is everyone’s involvement in wild animal protection.Each and every individual’s efforts, I believe, make all the d ifference to the world! (112 words)Thank you for your attention!【中文翻译】亲爱的同学们：当下，越来越多的野生动物正濒临灭绝。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、报道：急救知识进校园（2024年高考新课标卷终极押题卷）上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。

请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.活动的影响。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。

First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山交代活动的时间和主题；第二段写活动的过程（要点1）；第三段写活动的影响（要点2）。

【参考范文】First Aid Knowledge Hits the CampusLast weekend witnessed an activity with the theme of "First Aid knowledge Hits the Campus", which brought a feast of first aid knowledge to students.Our school invited experienced emergency doctors and nurses, who taught the students how to do first aid through vivid explanations as well as demonstrations. What followed was the first aid practice under the patient guidance of the professionals. A student selected from each class were given an opportunity to perform first aid exercises to guarantee their mastery of the basic skills.By learning through practice, not only has this activity improved the students' first aid awareness, it has also equipped them with the knowledge to handle minor injuries and understand when to seek help. （119 words)【中文翻译】急救知识进校园上周末，我校成功举办了“急救知识进校园”活动，为同学们带来了一场生动的急救知识盛宴。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、倡议书：为北京灾区捐款（2024届江苏省苏州四市五区高三9月调研）今年八月，首都北京遭受特大水灾，人民受灾严重。

假设你是校学生会主席，请你代表学生会写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们向灾区献爱心。

内容包括：1.倡议原因；2.号召捐助。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students, The Student Union写作注意要点：1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。

2.写作思路：二段论。

第一段写倡议的原因（要点1）；第三段发出倡议（要点2）。

【参考范文】Dear fellow students,This summer witnessed the big flood in Beijing, which caused great damage to the city and her people. The Chinese nation, however, has always been a big family that helps each other in times of trouble.We still remember the time when medical teams from all over the country and the People's Liberation Army headed straight to Wuhan to fight against the virus when COVID-19 was raging on in the capital city of Hubei.Now, it is time for us to reach out and show the responsibility as a youth in the new era. Let us act immediately and donate our pocket money! Each and every individual’s love, we believe, will make all the difference to the flood-hit area! (119 words) The Student Union【中文翻译】亲爱的同学们：今年八月，首都北京遭受特大洪灾，人民受灾严重。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。

于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。

要点如下：1.司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。

2.希望尽快查清此事。

Dear Sir,I am Li Hua.I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.Last Sunday, I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention.What’s worse, he drove even faster.Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind.But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance.However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【词汇亮点】plain about sth.投诉……2.rude behaviors 粗鲁的行为3.keep on doing sth.一直做某事4.advise sb.to do sth.建议某人做某事5.what’s worse 更糟糕的是6.bear 忍受，容忍7.keep sth.in mind 牢记8.lose one’s balance 失去平衡9.investigate this incident 调查这件事10.take measures 采取行动11.prevent sb.from happening again 阻止……再次发生二、假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在征稿。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信：做英国学生北京之旅导游（2022江苏省启东中学月考）假定你是李华，最近在论坛上看到一位名叫Frank的英国学生发的帖子，他提到自己喜欢中国文化，计划下个月到北京旅游，希望找一名中国学生做导游，你有意向帮助他。

请你根据所给要点用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

要点如下：1.写信目的；2.你的计划；3.期待回复。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。

2.写作思路：三段论。

第一段开门见山说明写作目的——提出愿意帮助做北京之旅的导游（要点1）；第二段写北京旅游的计划（要点2）；第三段期待回复（要点3）。

【参考范文】Dear Frank,I am Li Hua, a freshman from Jiangsu, China. Learning from a post online that you are scheduled to travel to Beijing and want a Chinese student as a tour guide, I’m willing to help out.Given that you are an enthusiast about Chinese culture, I will show you around the most famous cultural attractions in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City , an imperial palace in China, Yuanmingyuan, the Garden of Gardens, and the Great Wall, one of the wonders of the world. Beijing is a city with heavy traffic in the daytime, let alone in holidays or at weekends. It will be preferable, therefore, to take the subway, which provides direct access to some of Beijing's most renowned scenic spots.Looking forward to your early reply. (128 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的弗兰克：我是李华，是一名来自中国江苏的高一学生。

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、投稿帖：A School Day Out 外出的一天假定你是李华，你关注的英语论坛正在征集题为“A School Day Out”的帖子。

请围绕该话题写一帖子，内容包括：1.时间与地点；2.具体活动；3.你的感受。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【写作注意要点】基本时态为一般过去时。

【写作思路】活动时间与地点（要点1），具体活动内容为参观和合文化园（要点2），参观后的感想（要点3）。

【写法指导】1.因本文是投稿帖子，故Li Hua身份不必交代。

2.本篇投稿帖子的格式基本等同于新闻报道，把时间、地点、时间和活动反响交代一遍即可。

【亮点词汇】（1）运用无灵主语witness、分词短语chatting and laughing作伴随状语、not only的部分倒装结构、分词短语enabling作结果状语的结构等高级结构表达；（2）运用upon one's arrival，get a good view of，superb，leave a good impression，expose ...to ...，have a deep insight into等高级词块结构增分。

二、邀请信：邀请外教参加音乐周开幕式假定你是李华，你校将举办一次音乐周（Music Week）活动，请你以学生会主席的身份邀请外教Mr.Smith参加音乐周的开幕式，内容包括：1.时间和地点（本周六晚上六点半，学校体育馆）；2.活动内容（演唱流行歌曲和演奏乐器等）。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【写作注意要点】基本时态为一般将来时。

【写作思路】先交代身份和写作目的；时间、地点（要点1）和活动内容（要点2）；最后期待外教出席并期望回复。

【写法指导】1.因原文本可知李华和外教不是熟识关系，故Li Hua身份要交代。

2.文章注意点：（1）第一段写作目的中邀请外教参加，虽然可以有participate in、get involved in等高级词块表达，但是都不如attend（出席）更加贴合，体现了对外教的尊敬；（2）时间和地点在同一个句子中出现，一般原则上先写地点，后写时间【亮点词汇】（1）as scheduled、followed by、ranging from ...to ...、definitely、bring a feast for the eyes and ears等高级词块的运用；（2）文末再次期盼外教的出席，因已经运用过动词attend，此处为了避免重复运用了名词形式的出席：presence，或者也可用attendance，后面的介词搭配同样用at。