英语应用文写作之祝贺信说课讲解

高中英语祝贺信写作教案【教学目标】1. 了解祝贺信的基本格式和写作要点；2. 学习使用恰当的语言表达祝贺的情感；3. 提高学生的英语写作能力和表达能力。

【教学重点】1. 祝贺信的格式和写作要点；2. 如何使用正确的语言表达祝贺的情感。

【教学难点】如何使祝贺信的内容充实有趣。

【教学准备】教师：PPT，祝贺信样本学生：纸笔【教学过程】一、引入1. 教师用PPT展示一些祝贺信的图片，激发学生对祝贺信的兴趣。

2. 引导学生讨论日常生活中什么样的场合需要写祝贺信。

3. 自己操练一段祝贺的对话，引导学生掌握祝贺的表达方式。

二、学习祝贺信的基本格式1. 教师用PPT呈现祝贺信的基本格式，并讲解每个部分的作用。

2. 让学生阅读并分析一个样本祝贺信的格式。

三、学习祝贺信的写作要点1. 教师用PPT展示祝贺信写作要点，并让学生做笔记。

2. 引导学生分析样本祝贺信中的写作要点，帮助学生理解。

四、练习写作祝贺信1. 提供一个具体的写作情境给学生，例如：你的好友考试取得了优异的成绩，写信祝贺他。

2. 学生在纸上写出自己的祝贺信。

3. 学生之间互相交换祝贺信，并提出修改意见。

五、分享优秀作品1. 学生选取一两封他们认为写得很好的祝贺信，分享给全班同学。

2. 教师点评学生的写作，给予肯定和建议。

【教学延伸】1. 扩展学生的写作能力，可以让学生写出更加复杂的祝贺信。

2. 引导学生探讨不同类型的祝贺信，如生日祝贺信、毕业祝贺信等。

【教学总结】本节课我们学习了祝贺信的基本格式和写作要点，并进行了实际写作练习。

写祝贺信时，我们需要注意格式的准确性，同时也要用恰当的语言表达祝贺的情感。

希望大家能在今后的写作中有更好的表达能力。

【作业】1. 请同学们回家后根据今天的学习，写一封祝贺信给自己的朋友或亲人，并注意信件的格式和语言表达。

祝贺信1.congratulate sb. on.… 祝贺某人……2. express/send my sincere congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人送上我诚挚的祝贺3. give/offer my congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人表示祝贺4. Congratulations on your success. 祝贺你的成功。

5. wish you success in… 祝你成功6.Have the opportunity to do sth. 有机会做某事7. succeed in doing sth./be successful in doing sth. 在……中获得成功8. be proud of. ./take pride in… 自豪，以……为骄傲9. Practice doing sth. every day 每天练习做某事10. Win the first place 赢得第一名11. come true 实现，成真12. achieve one’s dreams实现某人的梦想13. be of great help/benefit 有很大的帮助／好处14.witness your success 见证你的成功15. Everything comes to him who waits. 功夫不负有心人。

首段：祝贺所取得的成绩1.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest. 我写信祝贺你的英语演讲比赛获得第一名。

2. Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.祝贺你高考成功。

祝贺信祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。

1.首段：说明写信目的；2.中段：陈述对方成功原因——详细说明祝贺缘由并肯定对方为此付出的努力；3.尾段：再次表达祝贺。

一、首段1. I feel very happy for your dream has come true.我很高兴你梦想成真。

2.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺。

3.Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.祝贺你高考成功。

4.I’m much delighted to learn/hear of your success/achievements in... I would like to extend my warmest congratulations to you.得知你在……方面的成功/成就，我非常高兴。

我想向你致以最热烈的祝贺。

二、中段1. It’s wonderful to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself.知道你实现了自己定下的目标，真是太好了。

2.It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.这是很久以来我听过的最令人兴奋的消息。

3.I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest.获知你在英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名我很开心。

2023届高考英语写作讲义：应用文结构精讲之祝贺信祝贺信的祝贺缘由多种多样——你的朋友升学，比如考上一所国内名校、被国外的某所名校录取等等。

你的朋友在某场比赛中获奖，比如作文大赛、演讲比赛、游泳比赛等等。

你的朋友在所工作的单位升职加薪、在学校拿奖学金等等这一类。

以下我们围绕祝贺信的祝贺缘由，展开作文模板的分类精讲。

作文模板Dear XXX开头段：在开头段先交代写信的背景，也就是自己为啥要祝贺的背景信息。

说自己很高兴得知对方怎么怎么①I have learnt, with great delight, you have won the first prize in the National Middle School Students' writing competition.我高兴地得知，你在全国中学生作文比赛中获得了一等奖。

②This highlight moment in your life prompts me to reply at once, and, in my peculiar way, to attempt to offer my warmest congratulations.你生命中的这一重要时刻促使我立即回信，并以我特有的方式向你致以最热烈的祝贺。

③I am more than overjoyed on hearing that you........(说对方咋了)，which drives me to write this letter to extend my utmost congratulations on....听说你……，我非常高兴，这促使我写这封信向……致以最热烈的祝贺。

④I am writing to offer/express/extend my sincerest congratulations on what you have achieved.（这里可以具体写一下对方取得的成就）我写信对你所取得的成就表示最诚挚的祝贺。

2024年新高考英语一轮复习写作专题05 祝贺信1．（江苏省镇江市丹阳市2023-2024学年高三试题）假如你是李华，你的美国网友David 参加校园戏曲艺术节获得了一等奖。

请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

内容包括：1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：校园戏曲艺术节Campus Opera Art FestivalDear David,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear David,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the First Prize in the Campus Opera Art Festival.You really deserve the honor for what you have devoted to Chinese traditional opera these years. Not only have you had a good knowledge of Chinese culture through reading books, but also you have gained a deep insight into traditional opera art by entering all kinds of Chinese opera contests. You have made it a habit to practiseBeijing Opera on a daily basis, which is the key to your success.Congratulations again! I’m looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese culture.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。

高考英语祝贺信写作讲解与练习一、写作框架二、语言表达（1）首段：表明祝贺事由1)请接受我对…….真诚的/衷心的/热烈的祝贺。

Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on…2)非常乐意向你致以我对….的祝贺It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on…3)很高兴得知你在….方面取得成功/成就，我想向你致以衷心的祝贺。

I was delighted to learn of your success/achievements in…4)很开心得知你被选为……祝贺！我们所有人都对你在…..方面取得的显著成就感到自豪I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…Congratulations!All of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements on…中段：具体阐述祝贺的内容1）这是你为自己的勤奋和坚持所应得的回报It is a reward you really deserve for your industry and persistence.2）我知道，没有勤奋和坚持，你不可能取得这样的成就。

I know that you would not have achieved this without diligence and perseverance.3）就我所知，是你对于….的努力使你取得了杰出的成就。

As far as I am concerned, it is your efforts to…that lead to y our brilliant achievements.尾段：再次表达美好祝愿:1）请接受我最真挚的祝贺和对所有美好未来的最美好的祝愿。

（一）文体概述祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。

书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。

（二）基本结构：【首段】简要说明祝贺事由，表达激动和祝贺；【中间段】对方取得成绩、过去努力和优点；评论事件；【尾段】展望未来，表达愿望和祝福。

二、祝贺信的写作模板及常用写作句式（一）写作模板Dear ,(首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ . It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your___________.(评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and wellrounded（全面的）________in every respect.(展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! Yours（二）祝贺信首段、中间段、尾段常用写作句式（必背，灵活应用）1. 常用篇首段：问好+背景+激动(1) I'm writing to congratulate you with all my heart on...(2) I am writing to offer you _______________(我最真诚的祝贺）on your winning the prize.(3) Hearing the news that you…, I was unable to ______________（控制我的激动）keys:(2)my sincerest;(3)contain my excitement2. 篇中段：展开评论事件+赞扬收信人(1) There is ___________(不可否认） that your success partly lies in your talent for tennis.(2) It was ____________(你的兴趣和天赋） that pushed you hard (to train every day).(3) What distinguished you from others was your effort, which ___________(最终得到回报）.(4) No one can deny yo ur effort in the past days, which made it possible for you to …(5) It was persistence and determination that led you,__________(一步步）, to your success.(6) You deserved the prize / to win the petition due to_________________(你展示出的信念，努力和勇气）.(7) It is quite inspiring, as no one from our school ___________(曾经赢得）the contest before. Undoubtedly, your success is a great honor for both you and our school. We are proud of you.(8)You couldn’t have made such remarkableachievements ____________________(没有你坚持的努力）.keys:(1) no denying(2)your interest and talent(3)paid off eventually(5)step by step(6)the faith, effort and courage you showed/demonstrated(7)has ever won(8)without your continuous effort3.结尾段：再次祝贺+祝愿(1) Again, I’d like to take thi s opportunity to express my heartfelt congratulations and best wishes to you. I wish you ______________(更伟大的成功） in the future.(2) Best wishes for your even better progress in the future.(3) Please __________(接受）our sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.(4) Congratulations again and I’m looking forward to your _______________(更长远的成就）.keys:(1) greater success(3) accept(4)further achievements三．典例实例及练习（一）典例实例：假定你是李华, 得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。

一、文体概述祝贺信是指在日常生活中，你得知同学或朋友考试取得好成绩、竞赛获奖、考上大学等，给对方祝贺的信件。

书写时应做到真诚、自然和亲切。

结构：说明事由并表明祝贺→肯定对方的付出及优点等→表达自己的期望（分享经验或交流探讨）。

时态：一般现在时和一般过去时二、套用句式表示祝贺：1.It is exciting news for me to learn of you winning…. Congratulations on your success.2.I was delighted to learn of you winning.... Please accept mysincere /hearty/ warm congratulations.3.I am really happy to learn that you have won…. It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations.4.I have learned with delight that you have won....I am writing to express/send/extend/give/offer my sincere congratulations to you.5.I feel very proud of you. And it’s really good news to your family.(你高兴的心情)3. I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest. Congratulations.4. I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.肯定对方的付出：1. I know this is surely owing to your diligence. You deserve it.2. It is a reward you deserve for your hard work.3. To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, "No pains, no gains."4. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.”5. I strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly, your hard work and determination contribute to your success.6. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in it. Now you prove to us all you are a good Guzheng player.7. As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Guzheng every day, because of which you have made great progress.8. With your excellence, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.请求交流切磋：1. Congratulations again. Kindly let me know when you have free time to talk with me.2. At last, I hope to play Guzheng with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.3.Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you. I feel like communicating and playing with you. Sincere congratulations to you again!4. My best wishes for your further success.三、练习：1、假定你是李华，你班的澳大利亚交流生 Catherine 在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”书法大赛中荣获一等奖，请你给她写一封邮件。