your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When it's washed, it fades in color. Now I
can't wear it. 大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状 况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。
because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless
让步顺序 递进顺序
过渡性插入语
though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever what’s more, besides, to make the matter worse,what’s worse I think, I’m afraid, you know, As we all know
步
①主语和谓语
②背景(适当增加时间、地点条件等)
骤 4.联句成文: ③逻辑关系
④开头与结尾
⑤语篇衔接
5.检查修改，规范誊写。
学会使用恰当的连接词
时间顺序
空间顺序
对称顺序
转折顺序
因果顺序
条件顺序
first, second, then, finally/at last , soon immediately, suddenly here, there, on one side…on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand but, however, while, though, otherwise
