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2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文

2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文

S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.

高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】共45页

高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】共45页

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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本命 就永远 只能是 死水一 潭。 34、当你眼泪忍不住要流出来的时候 ，睁大 眼睛， 千万别 眨眼!你会看到 世界由 清晰变 模糊的 全过程 ，心会 在你泪 水落下 的那一 刻变得 清澈明 晰。盐 。注定 要融化 的，也 许是用 眼泪的 方式。
35、不要以为自己成功一次就可以了 ，也不 要以为 过去的 光荣可 以被永 远肯定 。
高考英语书面表达---建议信 写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)
【完美版】
31、别人笑我太疯癫，我笑他人看不 穿。(名 言网) 32、我不想听失意者的哭泣，抱怨者 的牢骚 ，这是 羊群中 的瘟疫 ，我不 能被它 传染。 我要尽 量避免 绝望， 辛勤耕 耘，忍 受苦楚 。我一 试再试 ，争取 每天的 成功， 避免以 失败收 常在别 人停滞 不前时 ，我继 续拼搏 。

人教版高中英语建议信写作技巧课件(共12张)

人教版高中英语建议信写作技巧课件(共12张)
will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute of your stay here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far from my home. We can go swimming
行业PPT模板：/hangye/ PPT素材下载：/sucai/ PPT图表下载：/tubiao/ PPT教程： /powerpoint/ Excel教程：/excel/ PPT课件下载：/kejian/ 试卷下载：/shiti/ PPT论坛：
I am writing in reply to... I am writing to express my views concerning... I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about... I would like to suggest that... You have asked me for my advice with regard to. and I will try to make some conductive suggestions... You have asked me for some advice on how to improve. I will try to give some useful suggestions... You asked for advice concerning (with regard to). and I will try to make some suggestions... I have received your letter saying. I recommend that...

高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)

高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____

高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件

高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points

高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文

高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文

2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。

高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 PPT课件 图文

______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

高中英语写作-建议信.ppt

and express yourself well in Chinese
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

高考英语作文建议信 PPT课件


我认为原因之一是你也许太害羞了，不敢自信 的和同学交谈。 One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. 也许你担心你的同学会取笑你的口音。因此你 时常感觉到孤单。 Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.
在空余时间，我会邀请你打篮球或者去参加 聚会。我还会介绍好朋友给你。 In our spare time, I will invite you to play basketball or go to some parities. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you. 希望您能尽快的适应新的学校生活。 I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
建议信
（2008年山东题）假如你新华中学的学生李华， 班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法 融入新的班级，感到很苦恼。请根据下面要 点给他写封信。 （1）帮他分析原因 （2）给他提出建议 （3）陈述你帮助他的具体打算 Dear Li Ming, I am sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. ____
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •

高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)


Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
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useful.
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假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政府应采取措施, 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/
recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.
3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗 邻，对着大街，高 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小, 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
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政府应采取措施, 如修天桥等。
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would liould…
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C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
regard.
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider
my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions
在…对面 be opposite to
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•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street…
推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构
Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.
Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
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常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that …
2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of … 5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. 6. You have asked me for some advice with regard to …
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
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4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time，
a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为:
traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞
be choke up with be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
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加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
send…to…, fetch…. , which …
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
书面表达专题
---How to write a letter for advice
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要 点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法
多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成 接 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 词 条理清楚。
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Dear____,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
一般现在时
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书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
个
Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
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适当运用模 板
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模板二：
Dear _____(对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on how to
(引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is
important to . Then, it also helps to .
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加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤
What’s more, … pick up…. make….
To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.
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写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
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3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
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将介词短语提前（全倒装） Next to a primary school
stands/lies/is our school
, fa润ce色d w小it建h议/ facing a main street.
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …