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第四章公文文体4.1 公文文体特点及翻译要点Practice 1DefinitionsArticle l The term Technical and Sales Information as used herein shall mean all data and information which Party A owns on the date hereof or may develop or acquire during the term of this agreement, and which relates to the manufacture and/or sale of licensed Products and includes detailed assembly drawings, parts lists, material specifications and manufacturing methods and procedures relating to the Licensed Products as well as sales and publicity materials such as catalogs, explanation materials, pamphlets, photographs, layout books, and sales materials. 【参考译文】定义：第一条本协议所用“技术与销售情报”的含义，是指甲方在本协议签订之日或存续期间发展或获得的，同生产和（或）销售“特许产品”有关的所有数据和情报，包括与“特许产品”相关的详尽组装图纸、配件表、原料规格、生产方法、生产程序以及诸如产品目录、使用说明书、小册子、照片、图样书册、销售等宣传资料。

Practice 2Sales AgreementThe agreement, (is)made in Beijing this eighth day of August2003 by and between ABC Trading Co., Ltd., a Chinese Corporation having its registered office at Beijing, the People’s Republic of China(hereinafter called “Seller”)and International Trading Co., Ltd., a New York Corporation having its registered office at New York, N.Y., U.S.A. (hereinafter called “Buyer”).【参考译文】购销合同本合同于2003年8月8日在北京签订。

Course Name：Applied Translation 应用文体翻译2012级本科英语专业2013-2014学年上学期Content: Practical translation drills翻译方法实训（第二周）Goal: to employ translation skills covered in the previous week flexibly in translation practice. Emphasis: not to be confined to specific translation skills, but rather different versions are encouraged with special attention to the boldface in the following sentences.Assignment & Summary: First render the following into Chinese and do back-translation and finish translation diary after class.(1) Each of these U.S. companies is attempting to offer convenient services to customers by centering on their strong business lines._______________________________________________________________________________ (2) An increasing number of Japanese discount stores and other retailers import and sell low-priced Japanese music CDs pressed abroad._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (3) Long-term interest rates have soared almost fourfold in the past three months after the rates hit a record low in mid-June._______________________________________________________________________________ (4) The primary task facing WTO members at the latest meeting was to pave the way for a broad agreement on issues discussed at the trade round launched in 2001._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (5) The decline in exports, which have been a driving force of the nation’s economic growth, is a major concern._______________________________________________________________________________ (6) International trade occurs when a country does not have enough of a particular item to meet its needs._______________________________________________________________________________ (7) Problems arising from the declining birthrate and graying of the population were recognized nearly half a century ago._______________________________________________________________________________ (8) Huge investment costs, such as those for developing environment-friendly technology, have made it difficult for an automaker to survive competition on its own._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (9)This consideration decided our invitation to the mayor for the first China National Stone Products Fair._______________________________________________________________________________ (10) Assuming the laboratory tests go well, and you can quote us a competitive price, we’dcertainly be able to place more substantial orders on a regular basis._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (11) The change in plan resulted from a misjudgment on the part of the firm’s top management on what the company’s employees and business partners wanted._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (12) The success or failure of terrestrial digital broadcasting hinges on the prices of television sets and the development of new services._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (13) A commonplace criticism of American culture is its excessive preoccupation with material goods and corresponding neglect of the human spirit._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (14) International countertrade is a practice whereby a supplier commits contractually—as a condition of sale—to reciprocate and undertake certain specified commercial initiatives that compensate and benefit the buyer._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (15) A foreign business representative, neither overly sympathetic toward China nor overly disposed against it, would need to be convinced on a number of scores before he could responsibly commit his firm to taking an equity position in a Chinese enterprise._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ (16) Yet it is painfully apparent that millions of Americans who would never think of themselves as law-breakers, let alone criminals, are taking increasing liberties with the legal codes that are designed to protect and nourish their society._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Translation Diary:Translation skills you consider the most useful and state the reasons_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Difficult points you find in the above drills_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Contrast the original version with the one the lecturer has explained and find out the differences ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please find time to do back-translation and try to commit useful English expressions to memory and write down the difficulties you encounter in the process._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________。

翻译实践中翻译与文体的关系作者：石吉芳左静静程曦来源：《校园英语·中旬》2016年第01期【摘要】翻译是人类最重要、最古老的语言活动和思维活动之一，翻译在人际沟通、商务往来、经济发展、社会进步、科技振兴、学术交流、文化传播、文明传承、国际关系、全球治理等方面都起着不可替代的重要作用。

翻译从来都不是单一的纯语言活动，它涉及到经济社会方方面面。

随着文化多样性纵深发展，文体在翻译活动中的地位越来越重要。

基于文体类别上的翻译不但能尽可能传达出原文所要表达的内容和情感，还有利于各种形式的文化有效地对外传播、宣传与交流，文体翻译对于文化交流有着至关重要的价值。

【关键词】翻译文体影响对策文化交流一、引言翻译是一项对源语言表层结构及深层结构深入理解并整合成目的语，以达到意义转换目的的语言活动和思维活动。

这一过程涉及应用语言学、社会语言学、比较语言学、文体学、语义学、符号学、比较文学、心理学及逻辑学等方方面面，可谓博大精深。

其中，从文体学角度探讨文体与翻译的关系对翻译实践的指导作用不容小觑。

这是因为翻译学和文体学两个研究领域的研究目的是相辅相成的，即如何凭借有效的语言手段进行社会交流。

二者都强调交流功能的社会标准；同时，二者也都考虑到文风的时代性及风格的个体化。

随文体之异，原文风格之异，调整译文风格是翻译活动的基本准则之一，从而保证译文风格与原文风格的一致性。

任何一门语言都有形式各异的文体类别，不同类别相对应具备不同的文体特点。

以英语、汉语为例，要想在两种语言转换中顺应原文的需要，做到量体裁衣，译者必须熟悉英汉两种语言中各种文体类别的语言特征，在翻译实践中准确把握原文中的情感、语气、语调、意蕴等，使译文的文体与原文的文体相适应，以及与原文作者的个人风格相适应。

翻译的目的同时还要结合社会的需要。

翻译有文学翻译与非文学翻译两种，文学翻译包括国内外文学作品，然而，非文学翻译涉及到诸多专业学科领域，包括法律、医学、经济等文体。

刘宓庆《⽂体与翻译》（第2版）配套题库（第7~8章）【圣才出品】刘宓庆《⽂体与翻译》（第2版）配套题库第七章应⽤⽂体7.1应⽤⽂体的特点及汉译要点Ⅰ.试将下列⼴告语译成汉语。

1.Not all cars created equal.(⽇本三菱汽车⼴告)【译⽂】独⼀⽆⼆，三菱汽车。

2.You know who you are.(法国Peugeot汽车⼴告)【译⽂】标致，只有⾃⼰知道。

3.Now you can have your cake and diet too.(蛋糕⼴告)【译⽂】有了减肥蛋糕，还犹豫什么，开动吧！4.A deal with us means a good deal to you.(百货公司⼴告)【译⽂】与我们交易，您受益良多。

5.Give a SEIKO to all,and to all a good time.(⽇本精⼯⼿表⼴告)【译⽂】精致时间，精⼯打造。

6.Would you be more careful if it was you that got pregnant?【译⽂】换做是你怀孕了，你会更为谨慎吗？7.If you are what you eat,a visit to North Carolina could make you a veryinteresting person,indeed.【译⽂】⾷物造就⼈的品质，北卡罗来纳成就您的康乐。

8.The driver is safer when the road is dry;the road is safer when the driver is dry.(交通⼴告)【译⽂】道路不沾⽔，司机更安全；司机不沾酒，道路更安全。

9.No Excuses,Guaranteed,Best for Quality,Always Available,Right Price,At YourService.(ASDA超市⼴告)【译⽂】顾客⾄上，放⼼产品，质量最佳，⽅便实⽤，价格合理，竭诚服务。

第二章新闻报刊文体2.1 新闻用词的特点及汉译要点Practice 1The huge earthquake that hit off the coast of northeastern Miyagi prefecture earlier this year was a harsh reminder of the more elemental dangers that can threaten economic activity on the crowded and seismically vulnerable Japanese archipelago. Weighing the full implications of the natural disaster will take time. Yet the earthquake at the very least throws a huge question mark over an economic recovery that economists had hoped would gather steam in 2011 after stalling in the last three months of 2010. Although the areas worst hit are far less economically significant than the coastal industry zones, which suffered widespread stoppages after the 1995 Kobe earthquake, the disaster could heighten recent uncertainty among consumers and investors about the prospects for Japan’s continued recovery from its worst postwar recession.Learning from the lessons of the devastating disaster in 1995, the government and insurance companies have been actively encouraging even smaller companies to draw up detailed “business continuity plans” intended to minimize losses and aid quick recoveries. In the longer term, the earthquake is certain to force heavy spending on construction and public works in the affected region. The terrifyingfootage of tsunami carrying away whole buildings makes it clear that dealing with the damage will require huge effort and heavy investment. (212 words)【译文】今年年初，一场强地震重创了日本东北部宫城地区海岸。

英汉对比与翻译从本质上来看，我国传统翻译理论大都是经验型的，而新兴的翻译学理论无一不以对比语言学为理论指导和出发点，因为只有对比研究才能提供关于双语异同的比较准确的认识，从而使翻译研究减少盲目性。

（潘文国，2002：10）开放型综合性学科的翻译学架构可分为“内部系统”（internal scheme）与“外部系统”（external scheme）两个结构体系。

其中翻译学内部系统的核心是翻译理论，翻译的理论体系包括五个组成部分：翻译基本理论、翻译方法论、翻译程序论、翻译风格论、翻译教学法研究。

翻译学的外部结构系统包括三个次系统（subschemes）：哲学思维系统、语言符号系统、社会文化系统。

（刘宓庆，1999：17）翻译学的“外部系统”实际上又是翻译学的基础理论系统。

该系统全面反映了对比研究，尤其是对比语言学和符号学与翻译实践的关系。

由于“英汉翻译”和“汉英翻译”的差异，“英汉对比翻译研究”又可以分为“英—汉对比翻译研究”和“汉—英对比翻译研究”，本课程专门研究“汉英对比翻译”理论、方法论与实践问题，旨在创建符合汉英翻译规律的“汉—英对比翻译研究”，从而为大学英语专业“汉英翻译”教学提供建立在汉英系统性对比基础上的与汉英翻译实践紧密联系的汉英翻译理论与方法论。

本课程共分九个部分：一、汉英对比翻译研究导论二、汉英语言类型对比与翻译三、汉英语义对比与翻译四、汉英句法对比与翻译五、汉英语篇衔接对比与翻译六、汉英修辞对比与翻译七、汉英文化对比与翻译八、汉英对比与文体翻译九、应用汉英对比翻译研究其中第一部分为汉英对比翻译研究导论，第二至第八部分为理论汉英对比翻译研究，第九部分为应用汉英对比翻译研究。

此外各部分基本上均配有翻译实践原文，并提供参考译文。

首先，从语言形态学分类来看，汉语是分析型（Analytic）为主的语言，即语法关系主要不是通过词本身的形态来表达，而是通过虚词、词序等手段来表达。

英语是从综合型（Synthetic）向分析型语言发展的语言，即英语主要通过词本身的形态变化来表达语法意义。

练习材料第一单元地理篇No Giant SkyscrapersChicago and New York are famous for their tall buildings. California cannot be. Its buildings have to be famous for their beauty or their historical importance1. California is earthquake country2.The San Andreas Fault3 is a cause of earthquakes. It is a long crack in the earth that stretches from Southern to Northern California. Rocks inside the earth move and the earth shakes. These earthquakes make the fault bigger4.The most famous earthquake in California happened in 1906. It destroyed most of the young city of San Francisco. People rebuilt the city. They looked at the buildings that did not fall in the earthquake5 and they learned more about building in California.Tall buildings can be dangerous6 in earthquakes. Today California has codes7 that say how a building must be built and how tall it can be.Los Angeles has several earthquakes each year. The tall buildings move8 a little and everyone takes a deep breath. Usually tourists and newcomers are the most frightened. People who grew up in California say, “We’re used to it!”Earthquakes do not stop the building industry in California, but they do make architects work a little harder9. The buildings they design have to look good and stand up in an earthquake. These buildings are good examples of modern California architecture. The Bonaventure Hotel is a few city blocks from the old Mission Church. The Century City Complex is near the ocean. It stands on the site of the old Twentieth Century Fox movie studios. These buildings show that people are not afraid to build in California.水桥在巴拿马，有一座世界闻名的“水桥”，那就是巴拿马运河。

练习材料第一单元地理篇No Giant SkyscrapersChicago and New York are famous for their tall buildings. California cannot be. Its buildings have to be famous for their beauty or their historical importance1. California is earthquake country2.The San Andreas Fault3 is a cause of earthquakes. It is a long crack in the earth that stretches from Southern to Northern California. Rocks inside the earth move and the earth shakes. These earthquakes make the fault bigger4.The most famous earthquake in California happened in 1906. It destroyed most of the young city of San Francisco. People rebuilt the city. They looked at the buildings that did not fall in the earthquake5 and they learned more about building in California.Tall buildings can be dangerous6 in earthquakes. Today California has codes7 that say how a building must be built and how tall it can be.Los Angeles has several earthquakes each year. The tall buildings move8 a little and everyone takes a deep breath. Usually tourists and newcomers are the most frightened. People who grew up in California say, “We’re used to it!”Earthquakes do not stop the building industry in California, but they do make architects work a little harder9. The buildings they design have to look good and stand up in an earthquake. These buildings are good examples of modern California architecture. The Bonaventure Hotel is a few city blocks from the old Mission Church. The Century City Complex is near the ocean. It stands on the site of the old Twentieth Century Fox movie studios. These buildings show that people are not afraid to build in California.水桥在巴拿马，有一座世界闻名的“水桥”，那就是巴拿马运河。

英语实用文体格式及翻译信函信头-Heading（寄信人地址和日期）信内地址-Inside Address（收信人姓名和地址）称呼-Salutation（对收信人的称谓）正文-Body结束语-Complimentary Closing（写信人谦称）签名-Signature附件-Postscript又及-Enclosure/p.s（用于补漏）Dear Helen,It’s been a few months since I last heard from you. I wonder if you have received the letter and the parcel I sent you last month. The parcel contained several articles you might be interested in. Please let me know whether you have received it or not.Paul has found a new job in a computer company. We are thinking about moving into a bigger house sincethe present one seems a bit too crowded.Please remember us to all our old friends. Best wishes to all of you.With love,Linda 亲爱的海伦：有好几个月没有收到你的信了。

不知道你有没有收到我上个月寄给你的信和包裹。

包裹里有几样你也许会感兴趣的东西。

请让我知道你有没有收到它。

保罗在一家电脑公司找到了一份新工作。

我们正在考虑搬到一栋大一点的房子里去，因为目前住的房子好象太挤了一点。

替我们向所有的老朋友问好。

给你们所有人最好的祝福。

爱你的，琳达请假条Class 1, Grade 1May 14To Department OfficeSecretary GlennDear Madam,I beg to apply for three day’ leave of absence from the 15th to the 17th instant, both days inclusive, in order to return to my hometown to attend my grandpa’funeral, who passed away yesterday.To support my application, I herewith submit a telegram to that effect sending by my father.Should be very much obliged if you will grant me my application.Yours respectfully,Jack Smith 系办公室秘书格兰女士：因祖父昨日去世，特请假三日，自本月15日起至17日止，以便回老家参加葬礼。

文体与翻译一．理论链接到20世纪80年代，随着系统功能语言学的发展，人们从语言功能的角度把与之相对的是传达有较强情感意义和文体学的研究在于：1. 分析各种语言习惯，以便确定哪些特征经常地或仅仅应用于某些场合；2. 尽可能地说明为什么某种文体具有这些特征，而不具备另一些特征；3. 以语言功能为依据，对这些特征进行分类。

（方梦之、毛忠明，2006）1. 语言描写在各个的分析层次，又以同类文献或语料作归纳；2. 语言比较不仅在不同文体间进行，也在同一文体的不同文献品种和体裁之间进行，以便借此找出它们之间的对应关系、共同来源和发展趋向；3.特征之一。

在整个语言系统中，各种文体的同大于异。

许多语言现象或修辞手段不是此有彼无，而是出现频率大小的问题。

当然界限分明的情况也是有修辞手段等风格要素的系列。

二．实用文体的体系ESP：20世纪60年代，“专门用途英语”（English for Specific Purposes/ESP）课程应运而生，其目的和内容不是以普通教育的标准为依据来确定的，ESP又包括科技英语（EST）、商业经济英语（EBE）和社会科学英语（ESS）EAP EOP）两部分。

科技英语（EST）✧学术英语：医学英语工程学英语计算机英语化学英语✧职业英语：护理英语工程师英语计算机操作英语实验员英语商业经济英语（EBE）✧学术英语：经济学英语经贸英语会计学英语✧职业英语：会计英语秘书英语外销员英语社会科学英语（ESS）✧学术英语：法律英语新闻英语图书馆学英语✧职业英语：法官英语记者英语图书馆管理员英语实用文体的全部内容。

三．实用文体的翻译要求通达：经常要采用引申、增词、减词、调整词序等手法进行变通。

适切：不可行，现在要求质量好、速度快。

四．译者的职业素质钱钟书：“一国文字和另一国文字之间也不会没有距离，译者的理解和文风跟原作品的内容和形式之间也不会没有距离，而且译者的体会和他自己的表达能力之间还时常有距离。

刘宓庆《文体与翻译》（第2版）配套题库第七章应用文体7.1应用文体的特点及汉译要点Ⅰ.试将下列广告语译成汉语。

1.Not all cars created equal.(日本三菱汽车广告)【译文】独一无二，三菱汽车。

2.You know who you are.(法国Peugeot汽车广告)【译文】标致，只有自己知道。

3.Now you can have your cake and diet too.(蛋糕广告)【译文】有了减肥蛋糕，还犹豫什么，开动吧！4.A deal with us means a good deal to you.(百货公司广告)【译文】与我们交易，您受益良多。

5.Give a SEIKO to all,and to all a good time.(日本精工手表广告)【译文】精致时间，精工打造。

6.Would you be more careful if it was you that got pregnant?【译文】换做是你怀孕了，你会更为谨慎吗？7.If you are what you eat,a visit to North Carolina could make you a veryinteresting person,indeed.【译文】食物造就人的品质，北卡罗来纳成就您的康乐。

8.The driver is safer when the road is dry;the road is safer when the driver is dry.(交通广告)【译文】道路不沾水，司机更安全；司机不沾酒，道路更安全。

9.No Excuses,Guaranteed,Best for Quality,Always Available,Right Price,At YourService.(ASDA超市广告)【译文】顾客至上，放心产品，质量最佳，方便实用，价格合理，竭诚服务。

目　录绪论第一章　理解与翻译第二章　新闻报刊文体2.1　新闻用词的特点及汉译要点2.2　英汉语序对比及翻译第三章　论述文体3.1　论述文体的特点及翻译要点3.2　常见的译词法3.3　译词要点第四章　公文文体4.1　公文文体特点及翻译要点4.2　常见的英语长句、难句汉译法第五章　描写及叙述文体5.1　描写及叙述文体的特点及翻译要点5.2　情态动词的翻译5.3　句子的情态翻译第六章　科技文体6.1　科技文体的特点及翻译要点6.2　英语动词的翻译6.3　被动语态的翻译6.4　连词的翻译6.5　英语计数的汉译第七章　应用文体7.1　应用文体的特点及汉译要点7.2　代词的汉译7.3　介词、冠词及名词数的汉译第八章　翻译三论绪论Ⅰ. 将下列词语译成汉语1. bilingualism【译文】双语学2. stylistics【译文】文体学3. semiotics【译文】符号学4. structuralism【译文】结构主义5. constituent analysis【译文】成分分析6. phrase structure analysis【译文】短语结构分析7. semantic field【译文】语义场8. transformational-generative grammar【译文】转换生成语法9. register【译文】语域10. discourse analysis【译文】篇章分析11. SL【译文】源语12. TL【译文】译入语13. syntactic description【译文】句法描写Ⅱ. 判断下列表述正(T)误(F)1. 结构主义是20世纪50年代中期以后欧美句法研究的主流。

【答案】F结构主义是20世纪50年代中期以前欧美句法研究的主流。

其关注的中心是“成分分【解析】析”，即将句子切分为短语为单位的“结构体”，如名词短语、动词短语等，以此构成句子的结构树形图，从而使句子在结构上成为“可认识的客体”。