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英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)(课堂PPT)

英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)(课堂PPT)
1.特别提醒:在写作中，谓语务必不能用： be动词+动词原形\动词第三人称单数
2.Question:什么时候谓语应用上be动词?
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Attentions :be动词的正确使用
1. 名词\形容词\介词短语\副词\非谓语等不能单独做谓语, 应与be动词连用构成谓语.2.be动词还用在被动与进行时中：
be+done \ be+ doing
样你母亲就轻松很多）
→ If you could share the housework, re relaxed.
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Attentions:
在学生习作中，常会用到以下几种复合句:
1. what引导的主语从句/表语从句，what 不能省略。
2. that引导的主语从句/表语从句，that 虽然没有意思， 但不能省略。 3. Which\who 引导的非限制性定语从句。
Translations:
①我支持他去帮助那些需要的人(in favour of)
IIianmfainvofuarvofurhoifm thoimhetlophtehlep ntehednye.edy.
②他代替我们去处理这个问题(instead of )
HSehewilnlstdeeaadlowfituhs thoisdeparlobwlietmh itnhsitseapdroobflem. us.
英语写作中几种常见的经典错误
some mistakes we often make in writing
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English? Chinglish?
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1. We become no words don’t talk about friends.
2. His some behaviour I not agree.

英语写作常见错误PPT课件

英语写作常见错误PPT课件

Journalistic fragment sentences are used for
emphasis.
2021/3/12
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Fragment: Purdue offers many majors in
engineering. Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
I found Madame Bovary more interesting than any French novels I’ve read.
ends up writing another.
2021/3/12
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End-stop error
I asked the guard for directions she told me the time instead.
--I asked the guard for directions. She told me the time instead.
Or: Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.
Mixed constructions occur in a sentence when the
writer starts out writing one sentence pattern and
Possible Revision: Purdue offers many majors
in engineering, such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
Fragment: I need to find a new roommate.

英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)PPT演示课件

英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)PPT演示课件

③电视的亮度应调到最低。(turn down )
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe
mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
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四、典型错误4
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二、典型错误2 在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.
1. Using Ipods can listen to music and read e-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍） →Using Ipods , we can listen to music and read e-books. →Ipods can be used to listen to music and read e-books. 2. Through reading can obtain various knowledge. (通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识) →we can obtain various knowledge from reading. → Reading can help us obtain various knowledge.
help us make more friends.
②如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子，他们就能够获得更多的
知识。
→ If donating some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ If we donate some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ we donating some books to these children, they

写作常见错误与分析-PPT

写作常见错误与分析-PPT
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例： The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污 染。) 剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。 改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不
连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八． 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词 语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这 方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写 作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们 往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不 当的错误比比皆是。
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十． 不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结

英语写作常见错误PPT课件

英语写作常见错误PPT课件

Mixed constructions occur in a sentence when the
writer starts out writing one sentence pattern and
ends up writing another. GUCAS English Depart. Hu
2020/8/17
--If you find that writing is hard, it’s because it is hard. It’s one of the hardest things that people do.
Reason: For a group of words to be a complete sentence, it must have an independent clause with a subject and a predicate.
Jiangbo
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End-stop error
I asked the guard for directions she told me the time instead.
--I asked the guard for directions. She told me the time instead.
-- Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers.
Or: Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.
英语写作常见错误与分析
GUCAS English Depart. Hu

英文写作常见错误PPT课件

英文写作常见错误PPT课件
processed，apologize，grateful，delay，stock，prompt， first-time，would，note，firm，assure，repeat，records，
amend，accept，track
Please return the ___ form asap so that your order can be processed without any ____.
Homework: (5.2-5.9)
1. In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown aren’t very busy.
2. Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
一、主语错误
3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire
knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
We _______be _______ if you could supply bank references. Our normal terms for _____customers are 50% ______. I have spoken to my line manager, and we are pleased to
英文写作常见错误

科技英语写作中典型错误分析

这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。

This new method has the advantages of high efficiency and easy adjustment.本文首先讨论了这种信号的特点，然后讨论了它的产生。

This paper begins with the discussion on the features of the signal, followed by the description of its generation.这台设备的特点是操作简便，价格低廉。

This device is characterized by (its) easy operation and low price强调指出了光强随圆柱体直径变化的正弦规律。

The sine law of the variation of the light intensity with the cylinder diameter has been emphasized.我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。

Our method is different from those presented (described) in the paper available (published before) on (discussing) the same problem.只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解它的优点。

Only through the study of the performance of the system, can we understand (appreciate) its advantages.若自偏电路设计不当，LC振荡器会出现间歇振荡。

If the self-bias circuit is not designed well (properly), chopping oscillations will take place in the LC oscillator.本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种机辅设计手段。

英语写作常见错误ppt课件

学生作文中常爱引用一句谚语或格言来开头,于是 在There be句型后紧跟着又出现了一个谓语动词。 实际上,要表示“常言道”英语中有现成的说法， 如：“As the saying goes”, “As a proverb has it” 等。还有些学生的作文开头就是“There has different ideas about...”，连基本的“There be”句 型也被改造了。
(2) 形容词和名词的搭配:英语中形容词和名词搭配 的现象也很普遍。例如:形容女子美丽,我们常用 beautiful或pretty,但形容男子漂亮时,我们则须用 handsome或smart。又如:strong和powerful为同义词, 我们只能说strong tea和 a powerful car;反之,则不能 被接受；
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3. 词语搭配不当。
何为搭配？语言学家JR.Firth(1957)将搭配定 义为词汇间的相互关联(You shall know a word by the company it keeps.)。 Halliday&Cowie都强调搭配是词语的“共 现”。需指出的是词汇之间的搭配基本上 是约定俗成的，没有什么道理可讲。英语 中的习惯搭配范围很广,种类很多。常见的 有:
常见错误
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中国人学英语总是受到汉语的干扰。英语 写作是语法概念、词汇知识、修辞手法等 交流手段的综合运用。缺乏对英语习惯表 达法的了解及缺少写作技巧的基本训练， 英语写作中就会出现各种错误
.
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一、结构错误
1. There be 句型拖泥带水。如：
There is an old sentence says “Practice makes perfect.”

科技论文写作中常见错误.ppt

[ ] -------, Metallurgical and Materials Transactions [ ] -------, Metall. Mater. Tran. [ ] -------, Metall. Mater. Trans. [ ] -------, Metall. Mater. Transactions [ ] -------, Met. Mater. Trans.
中国 科学 院金 属研 究所
(C) Subscript (下标)
Fe2B—Fe2B Ni3Al---Ni3Al Nd2(Fe,Co)14B---Nd2(Fe,Co)14B H3PO4---H3PO4 PO2---PO2
(D)Capital and small letters
中国
科学 院金 属研
philips lab.---Philips Lab. K. c. Turkdogan---K. C. Turkdogan
hydrogen’s charging---hydrogen charging specimen’s thickness---specimen thickness rod’s center---rod center Prof. Wan’s result density’s difference—density difference 有生命体加所有格；无生命的不加‘s
northeastern university--Northeastern University
(E) Singular and plural numbers
中国 科学 院金 属研 究所
X-rays diffraction---X-ray diffraction a three-stages pattern---a three-stage pattern two-phases magnet---two-phase magnet two kind of blades---two kinds of blades a three-point bending test

英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)精品PPT课件


The tasks for this lesson: 1.复合句中缺少必要的连接词
2.逻辑性错误
3. be动词用错 4.主语用错 5. There be 句型用错 6.谓语与非谓语混乱
一、典型错误1
在写作中,复合句缺少相应的连接词。
1. You should do is to adjust yourself. (你所应该做
三、典型错误3 Be 动词使用不当
1.We are often blame the teachers for their strict demands. (我们常常会责备老ar师e 的严格要求) 2.However, other students against the idea. (然而, 其他学生都反对这个观点)
的是调整好自己)
→ What you should do is to adjust yourself.
2. My dream is I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao. (我的梦想是成为林书豪一样的运动
明星)
→ My dream is that I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao.
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
What upsets us most is that many people are not aware of its importance.
2.我们最好要保持放松,这对我们的学习有积极的影响。
We had better keep us relaxed, which will have an active effect on our study.
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例 10 汉语原句 对A的识别和对B的确定是使用这一方法的先决 条件。 英语错句 The recognition of A and determining B are the prerequisite for the use of this method. 改 正 后 的 句 子 The recognition of A and the determination of B are the prerequisites for the use of this method.
例 15 汉语原句 这台新设计的仪器质量很好。 英 语 错 句 This new designed instrument is in good quality. 改正后的句子 This newly designed instrument is good in quality. 或：This newly designed instrument is of go的教科书没有提到这一点。
英 语 错 句 The now existed textbooks do not make mention of this point. 改正后的句子 The existing textbooks（或The textbooks available）have made no mention of this point.
例5 汉语原句 只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解 它的优点。
英语错句 Only through studied the performance of the system, its advantages can be understood. 改 正 后 的 句 子 Only through the study of the performance of the system, can one（或we）understand （或appreciate）its advantages.
例 11 汉语原句 最后提出了实现这种方法应注意的一些问题和 解决方法。 英语错句 At last, we provided some problems that could be noted in implementing this method and solving ways. 改正后的句子 Finally, some problems that deserve to be noted in implementing this method and their solution are presented.
例4 汉语原句 我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述 的不同。
英语错句 Our method is different from previous articles discussed the same problem. 改 正 后 的 句 子 Our method is different from those presented（ 或 described）in the papers available（ 或 published before）on （ 或 discussing）the same problem.
第二十八章 科技英语写作中的典型错误
例1 汉语原句 这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。 英语错句 This kind of new method have the advantage of high efficiency, easy adjustment. 改正后的句子 This new method has the advantages of high efficiency and easy adjustment.
例 16 汉语原句 锡的熔点没有铅的高。 英语错句 Tin does not have a melting point as high as lead does. 改正后的句子 Tin does not have as high a melting point as lead does.
例 17 汉语原句 这台转动的机器将在一二分钟后自动停下来。 英语错句 This running machine will stop of itself after one minute or two. 改正后的句子 This running machine will stop of itself in one or two minutes（或 in a minute or two）.
例 19 汉语原句 这个问题有待解决。 英语错句 This problem waits to solve. 改正后的句子 This problem remains to be solved.
例 20 汉语原句 这个电荷与存在的其它电荷相互作用。
英 语 错 句 This charge interacts with other present charge. 改正后的句子 This charge interacts with other charges
例9 汉语原句 这个方法需要精确的定位，这就使得它的实现 具有一定的难度。 英语错句 This method requires accurate location and this makes its realization have a little difficulty. 改正后的句子 This method requires accurate location, thus making（或which makes）its realization somewhat difficult.
例 12 汉语原句 由于缺陷的存在，构件的疲劳寿命将大大降 低。 英 语 错 句 Because of the existing of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will decrease very much. 改正后的句子 Because of（或Due to）the existence of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will be decreased（或shortened）greatly.
例7 汉语原句 对构件的承载能力做了具体分析。 英语错句 The detailed analysis of the ability of bearing loads of the components is given. 改正后的句子 A detailed（或 concrete）analysis of the ability of the component to carry loads is made.
例 23 汉语原句 这个电压几乎是测不出的。 英语错句 This voltage almost can not be measured. 改正后的句子 This voltage can hardly be measured.
例 24 汉语原句 铜的导电率比铁高。 英语错句 The conductivity of copper is higher than iron. 改正后的句子 The conductivity of copper is higher than that of iron.
例3 汉语原句 这台设备的特点是操作简便、价格低廉。
英 语 错 句 The features of this device are easy in operation and low in price. 改 正 后 的 句 子 The features of this device are easy operation and low price. 不过比较好的一个句型是：This device is characterized by（its）easy operation and low price.
例 18 汉语原句 在这种情况下，输入不会下降，输出也不会下 降。
英语错句 In this case, the input does not fall; the output does not fall, too. 改 正 后 的 句 子 In this case, the input does not fall, neither（或nor）does the output.
例 22 汉语原句 x 的所有值均不能满足这一方程。 英语错句 All values of x can’t satisfy this equation. 改正后的句子 No values of x（或None of the values of x）can satisfy this equation.
例 13 汉语原句 并讨论了这一方法与扫描法相比的优点。 英语错句 As compared with the scanning method, the advantages of this method has discussed also. 改正后的句子 The advantages of this method over the scanning method have also been discussed.
例8 汉语原句 共有M个多边形，其顶点数均为N。 英 语 错 句 There are M polygons altogether, whose vertex number is all N. 改正后的句子 There are M polygons altogether, each of which has N vertexes. 虽然从语法角度来看，定语从句可 以译成“the number of vertexes of each of which is N.” 但这种表示法不好，显得很繁琐。
例 14 汉语原句 已知常数K，就能算出C来。 英语错句 Giving the constant K, C can be calculated. 改正后的句子 Given （或knowing）the constant K, one （或we）can calculate C.（或~, it is possible to calculate C.）