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2019届高考英语二轮复习必刷题型：16短文改错二含答案解析短文改错（二）1、假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文,请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除 :把剩余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
改正 :在错词下划一横线,并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意 :1.每处错误及其改正均仅限一词;2.只同意改正10 处 ,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talkwith others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.2、假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文,请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（3）及答案.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Robert,Thank for your letter of May 12th. How glad I was when I get it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a mo nitor of my class. I am about to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day.Best wishes！Yours truly,Bob【参考答案】2.Dear Robert,Thank（改为Thanks 或for 前加you）for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get （改为got）it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends (改为friend) .Now allow (加to) me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study （改为studying）in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a （去掉a）monitor of my class. I am about （去掉about）to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after （改为in）twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very （改为so）much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully（改为full）use of every hour and study far into the night every day.Best wishes！Yours truly,Bob.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2015届高考英语二轮复习优化训练：短文改错A短文改错(2014·荣成模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I traveled on the 8:00 a. m. train from Glasgow to London King’s Gross on last Thursday. I was quite angry with the service of your company. The train didn’t come on time. It was forty minute late when it left Glasgow. A man at the stationminutesapologized to us, but he didn’t give us some reasons for the delay. We then had anyfurther delays on the way. As∧result, I missed my plane, which made meadisappointing. The service on the train was very poor. The trip spent more than disappointed tookfive hours or only soft drinks were sold. Besides, something is wrong with the air but wasconditioner and it became extreme hot. Because of your good service, I feelextremely poor/badyou should make up for my loss.B短文改错(2014·沈阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（1）高考英语专题之短文改错从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。
它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。
其考查要点的主要方面有：知识点一：词法性错误1.冠词：冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及定冠词the的混用和漏用。
主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
(1)After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.解析因hour以元音音素开头。
答案a→an(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.解析因此处并非特指，而是泛指。
答案the→a(3)Good health is person's most valuable possession.解析这里的a表泛指。
答案person's前加a (4)Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.解析此处的winter holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。
答案a→the(5)Suddenly，I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.解析catch sight of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见”答案去掉a2.名词：名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
山西黎城县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精选（3）及参考答案短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers.It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers，grass and trees anywhere.We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot.We understood them farther.On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day.We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave school and learn social experience.答案：We'll never forget the day whichwhen my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistrychemicalfactory lastweek.It was a largerlarge one with nearly 2,000 workers.It looked ∧likea garden and we could seecolorful flowers，grass and trees anywhereeverywhere.We also visited some workshops and saw workersworked working very hard.We talked with them and learned a lot.We understood them fartherfurther.On the wayhome we felt tiringtired .We all thought that we havehada very good day.We really hoped that we could getmore chances oftoleave school and learn social experience.短文改错。
2019高考英语二轮复习经典题型短文改错（二）1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
短文改错限时组合练2(限时25分钟)ALast month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match.I took the place with my classmate,Wang Bin,who had been serious injured before the match.During the match,I try my best to move and pass the ball.I shot a couple of time but I scored none,what made me very worried.All my teammates comforted me but they gave me a lot of encourage.We played as a team and did everything we could win the match.In an end,we won.It was a fantastic memory that would be worth treasuring it forever.BListening to English radio programmes help me get used to how fast native speakers talk.I also repeat which I hear to help myself experience with the feeling of the language.Sometimes I even recorded my voice so I can listen to me and compare my pronunciation with the radio hosts’!My biggest headache is how to polite in English.It’s much easy to just say “Open the window!” in Chinese than in English,where that can so und real terrible.I have to think about what I’m talking to and then decide whether to say “Open the window,please!” or “Would you mind open the window,please?”CI remember clearly that when I was on my eighteen birthday,my father gave me a present—a picture book.The colorfully pictures and the stories in the book make me excited.“My dear son,” he said,“to be a great man,you have to read a plenty of books.” From now on,I started to make friend with all kinds of books.Books opened a window to the beautiful world in front of my eyes.In books,I met a variety great people.Now,I have grown up.My bookshelf is filling with books,among that is the little picture book given to me by my father.I’ll continue finding books to read.Read books is for me just like chatting with my best friend.DIt’s been a long st month,my aunt and uncle returned work,so they needed someone to look after their child.I offered to give them the hand.I had thought I was able to do that but things turned out so differently.First,they fought from time to time but I couldn’t stop from it.Then,the mess they made really annoys me.At lunchtime,I was busy preparing food while screaming to stop them beating each other.I wished I have not made that crazy offer.To her great relief,my grandma came that afternoon,which meant that finally I was able to go home—after cleaning up the garbage everywhere and collected the toys on the floor.How a busy day!EThe Wangs,the family of five,are our neighbors.It has been seven years since they have moved here.The oldest of the family is the grandma.She is over seventy but her hearing is poor.So you talk to her,you have to speak loud than usual.Mr.and Mrs.Wang have two twin daughters.Although I had known them for seven years,yet it is difficult for me to tell one from the others.The Wangs are particular warm-hearted.It seems that they are always ready to help whomever is in need.I am glad I have so good neighbors.参考答案短文改错限时组合练2ALast month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match.I took the place。
高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错优选十篇1. He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstarJay Chou up to no w? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcaston October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasn ’t lived down to publicexpectations and has suffering a storm of criticism( 责备 ).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, itis only thanks to another celebrity ( 名人 )guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling( 林志玲 ), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating( 收视率 ).2、 Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Somepeople liked to buy goods online. And I don ’t like it, because online shopping is le ss reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can ’t feel the items that isusually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at ourown expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.In word, online shopping isn ’t reliable at all.3、 Dear Li Mei,With the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. I think that youneed is a right study method. What we all know, there are three stage instudy — preview, study in class and review, among which review was the most important. You should first make a review plan, and then stick on it. I follow my review planstrictly and have made a progress in my study. It turns out to be good enough. Ofcourse, there are more than one way to review. So long as you review regular, I ’m sure you can find more ways to study well.If you have any question about s ubjects, ask me I ’ll be glad to help you . We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon.Yours,Li Hua4、 Dear Mr. Li,I ’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was re ady to leave I find my bicycle ’s fronttyre （轮胎） flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn money with me. I had to look for a place along the street Unluckily,there were not any bicycle repair shops were’t have any to get my bicycle repairing. open in the early morning.So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way.That ’s how I was late for school.Please don ’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn toteachers for help if necessary.Yours,Wang Hui5、 Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I wasenjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. Iwent up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child strugglingin the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doinganything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into t he water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him backto safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone elseis in need.6. I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossingthe street on a zebra c rossing while a young man drove a motorbike t owards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit thegirl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn ’t move. The young man didn ’ t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon thepolice arrived.They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it isvery dangerous to drive very fast.7、 To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make theswitch from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a metal which can be harmful to human, especially youngchildren. Lead in the bags is not possible to pollute food. However, as time wentby, lead can come out as a result of repeating use. The bags with many pictures isfound to contain more lead than plain reusable bags without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.8、 When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in rememberingthe names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of themonths, possibly it won’ t be very harder for us to remember them. The followingis one of example. January named after God Janus. He was a strange god becausehe has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look forward or backwardat the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the monthon which one looks forward to the new year and it ’ s also a period of time how people think about the past year.9、 We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world. Everyone know weshould keep the balance of nature, or we don ’ t always do as we say .A species can become endangered with different reasons. But the very important one is their living places are ruined. Wecut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and they are going to be dieout.Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. Weshould do everything which can be done to change the situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.10、 Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. BillGates attended public elementary school or the private LakesideSchool, there hediscovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13.In 1973, Gates entered into HarvardUniversity as a freshman. In her junior year,Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft,guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He provedto be success in the IT field.once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down whilewas加 he 或去掉 wastalking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.3、 66.boy 前加 a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook69.but改为and 70.√ 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months4、 To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch fromitpaper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by∧ Florida newspaper saysto athat reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. 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高考英语二轮复习：短文改错（1）一、改错题（共10题；共50分）1. ( 5分) （2021高三上·安徽开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Today I'll talk a little bit about Italian culture. Music plays a important role in the culture of Italy. Italian music is heavy influenced by its history. And the piano and the violin are said have been invented in Italy. Italians are fond of spend time with their families. In the old days, Italian families were used to be large. However, they are smaller in size now. Family member always get together at every festival. As for sports, one of the most popular sports in Italy are football. The Italian national team is one of the better in the world. Another popular sports include volleyball, basketball, boxing or bike riding.2. ( 5分) （2021高三上·蚌埠开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2021年高考英语二轮复习：短文改错 练习题精选假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文:文中有10处语言错误。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm sorry to hear that you lose the Chinese Talent Contest holding in your city last week. I quite understand how I feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well after the contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not the results. While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, what will benefit you great in the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will have best opportunities in the future.【答案】I'm sorry to hear that youlose lost the Chinese Talent Contest holding holdin your city last week. I quite understand how I you feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well be after forethe contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not theresults result . While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, w what hich will benefit you great greatlyin the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is the mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will havebe best tter opportunities in the future.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
第二部分专题十六短文改错(二)ADear Sir or Madam，My name is Li Hua. I am writing this letter to tell you my terribly flight experience on BA793 on March 3rd, 2016. The first trouble started when a flight was listed as “delayed”. We were stuck at the airport but no one come to offer us any explanation. Seven hours before, when all the passengers finally got on board the plane, we were told we had to keep on waiting for another hours due to the bad weather! If we had informed earlier, we would have chosen to stay in the wait room. What was worse, upon my arrival, I found my suitcase buying by my best friend out of shape, and its handle were broken!I am looking forward to an explanation about this unpleasant experience and I strongly suggest your company did something to provide good service to passengers.Yours，Li Hua 1．第二句中的terribly改为terrible考查形容词。
那是一次非常糟糕的经历，应该使用形容词修饰名词。
2．第三句中的a改为the考查冠词。
上文已提到作者的航班，所以此处应使用定冠词。
3．第四句中的come改为came考查时态。
根据上下文可知此处用一般过去时。
4．第五句中的before改为later考查行文逻辑。
七个小时后，作者和其他乘客登上了飞机。
5．第五句中的hours改为hour考查名词的数。
句中的another后应该接可数名词的单数形式，而不是可数名词的复数形式。
6．第六句中的had后加been考查被动语态。
如果乘客被提前通知，他们就会选择在候车室里等着。
7．第六句中的wait改为waiting考查固定短语。
waiting room等候室。
8．第七句中的buying改为bought考查非谓语动词。
根据本句中的by my best friend可知，箱子是我最好的朋友买的，所以用过去分词作后置定语。
9．第七句中的were改为was考查主谓一致。
主语是its handle，是第三人称单数。
10．第八句中的did改为do考查虚拟语气。
根据本句中的动词suggest可知，其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，从句中谓语动词要使用(should＋)动词原形。
BEarly one morning in April, 2016, it was raining hardly. I was seating in my classroom by myself. “We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You'll say goodbye to your newclassmates.” That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears. Although I had studied at school for only two months, I really loved everything there. What's more, the teaching conditions here is much better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.1．第一句中的hardly改为hard考查副词。
此处修饰raining，表示“雨下得大”，应用副词hard；hardly表示“几乎不”，不符合句意。
2．第二句中的seating改为sitting/seated考查动词。
seat使就座，表示“就座”可用be seated；另外，也可将seating改为sitting，表示“正坐在”。
3．第三句中的back去掉考查动词词义。
return返回，其后不加back。
4．第五句中的That改为What考查从句引导词。
此处为主语从句，引导词在从句中作宾语，且指物，应用what引导。
5．第五句中的on改为in考查介词。
此处表示“在耳边响起”，用介词in。
6．第六句中的at后加the考查冠词。
school后有时间状语for only two months，特指我才读了两个月的学校，故在school前加定冠词the。
7．第六句中的there改为here考查副词。
此处表示现在的学校，应用here。
8．第七句中的is改为are考查主谓一致。
主语是复数形式conditions，故谓语动词用复数are。
9．第八句中的which改为who/that考查定语从句。
child后为定语从句，先行词为a child，指人，且在从句中作主语，故可用who或that引导。
10．第九句中的Therefore改为However考查行文逻辑。
句意：但是，我来到北京后，我见到了很多以前从未见到过的事物。
根据语境，上下文表转折，故应用however 衔接。
C(2016·辽宁大连高三调考)Nothing is impossible! If you have a dream, your dream will must come true as long as you always work hard. To tell you truth, my dream is common. I want to be a doctor. There was a time that I was in hospital. I saw with my own eyes that a doctor fights all night to save a baby's life. I was touched by the kindly behavior of the doctor. I think doctors are the greatest. We can make patients recover from a disease. However, I am determined to be a doctor to help whomever suffers from illnesses. I hope that I am able to help people keep healthy. At the same time, I will devote myself to treat patients. In a word, if I become a doctor in the future, I will try my best to help each patient. From now on, I will spare no effort to study every subjects so that I can go to a key university.1．第二句中的must去掉考查条件状语从句。
在if引导的条件状语从句里，用一般现在时代替一般将来时，而主句用一般将来时，谓语动词用will do，故将must去掉。
2．第三句中的truth前加the考查定冠词。
to tell you the truth说实话。
3．第五句中的that改为when考查定语从句。
分析句子结构可知本句含定语从句，修饰先行词a time，且关系词在定语从句中作时间状语，故用when引导。
4．第六句中的fights改为fought考查时态。
主句用的一般过去时，故从句也用一般过去时。
5．第七句中的kindly改为kind考查形容词。
修饰名词behavior用形容词kind。
6．第九句中的We改为They考查代词。
此处指代的是上文提到的doctors，故用They 代替。
7．第十句中的However改为Therefore考查行文逻辑。
前后句是因果关系，故用Therefore 连接。
8．第十句中的whomever改为whoever考查从句引导词。
help后是宾语从句，而从句中缺主语，根据语境可知此处表示“无论谁”，故用whoever引导。
9．第十二句中的treat改为treating考查固定搭配。
devote…to doing sth.致力于/将……奉献于做……，其中to为介词，后应接动名词形式。
10．第十四句中的subjects改为subject考查名词的数。
every后接单数名词，故将subjects 改为subject。
DSenior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university？” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one's development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion, a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn't obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.1．第一句中的student改为students考查名词的数。
