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浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)2022届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（二十）写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,按照其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever intended to be fully absorbed in your work but found yourself distracted（被分心）by e-mail, the Internet and other things throughout the day? "People often lose their concentration when they are bored or when they are engaged in several challenging tasks at the same time." says Peter Bregman. "They sometimes feel the need to escape from what's difficult or boring, so they jump out," he says.The part of the brain devoted to attention is connected to the brain's emotional center. Any strong emotion--quarrels with colleagues, problems at home –can interrupt our attention. Studies over the last decade have shown that too much work to do at a time can easily lead to distraction.Refocusing is hard for many people. Robert Epstein suggests the following, "Stop and listen to music for a few minutes. Go for a short walk or take a deep breath. While you breathe in deeply, count to five slowly, hold it and breathe out very slowly." This can blow out all the tension and the unwanted in your mind to restore your focus.Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you'velost focus inorder to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.二、词汇讲解1. intend to do sth 决定…,想要做…It is still far from clear what they intend to do.现在还彻低不清晰他们毕竟想做什么。
高考英语写作指导一、应用文写作评分标准总分15分，按5个档次给分。
1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
（先锁定档次，再具体给分）2.词数少于60词和多余100的，从总分减去2分。
3.评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
4.拼写和标点符号（切忌逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，要么用分号，要么用连词）是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
5.如书写较差，以致影响评阅，将分数降低一个档次。
（注意保证书面整洁，不要有太多乱涂乱画的痕迹。
）档次描述第五档（13-15分）完全覆盖了试题规定的任务；覆盖所有要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（10-12分）完全完成了试题规定的任务；虽漏掉了1-2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要因尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务；虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；全文内容连贯，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
写作步骤（1）仔细审题，明确写作要求。
那审题需要审什么？一审文体要求。
了解题目要求写作的文体是应用文之书信、通知，演讲稿等。
熟悉文体后即可确定全篇的写作格式与写作风格及段落结构之间的逻辑关系等。
二审人称与时态。
浏览题干要求后明确全文写作时态和人称，行文中做到两条主线贯穿始终：上下文人称统一，时态前后照应。
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做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
1.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Migrant workers(2022秋·全国高三阶段练)In the past twenty years, there has been an increasing tendency for workers to move from one country to another. While some newly independent countries have restricted most jobs to local people, others have attracted and welcomed migrant workers. This is particularly the case in the Middle East, where increased oil incomes have enabled many countries to call in outsiders to improve local facilities. Thus the Middle East has attracted oil-workers from the USA and Europe. It has brought in construction workers and technicians from many countries, including South Korea and Japan.In view of the difficult living and working conditions in the Middle East, surprising it is not that the pay is high to attract suitable workers. Many engineers and technicians can earn at least twice as much money in the Middle East as they can in their own country, and this is a major attraction. An allied(联合的)benefit is the low taxation or a complete lack of it. This increases the amount of pay received by visiting workers and is very popular with them.Sometimes a disadvantage has a compensating(补偿的)advantage. For example, the difficult living conditions often lead to increased friendship when workers have to depend on each other for safety and comfort. In addition, many migrant workers can save large sum of money partly because of the lack of entertainment facilities. The workis often complex and full of problems but this merely presents greater challenge to engineers who prefer to find solutions to problems rather than do routine work in their home country.One major problem which affects migrant workers in the Middle East is that their jobs are temporary ones. (They are nearly always on contract, so it is not easy for them to plan ahead with great confidence. This is to be expected since no country welcomes a large number of foreign workers as permanent residents.) In any case, migrant workers accept this disadvantage along with others, because of the considerable financial benefits which they receive.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________【答案】For two decades, migrant workers, including construction workers and technicians from South Korea and Japan, are becoming more common, particularly in the Middle East. Working there, they can earn more due to low taxation or a complete lack of it, and harvest the friendship while working with others. However, a major problem they must overcome is the temporary job.【文本导读】本文是一篇说明文。
高考英语概要写作指导及训练一、写作指导摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述。
它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题。
写摘要主要包括三个步骤：（1）阅读；（2）写作；（3）修改成文。
第一步：阅读A．认真阅读给定的原文材料。
如果一遍不能理解，就多读两遍。
阅读次数越多，你对原文的理解就越深刻。
B．给摘要起一个标题。
用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为标题。
也可以采用文中的主题句作为标题。
主题句往往出现在文章的开头或结尾。
一个好标题有助于确定文章的中心思想。
C．现在，就该决定原文中哪些部分重要，哪些部分次重要了。
对重要部分的主要观点进行概括。
D．简要地记下主要观点——主题、标题、细节等你认为对概括摘要重要的东西。
第二步：动手写作A. 摘要应尽量用自己的话完成。
不要直接引用原文的句子。
B. 应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序。
这样你就不必重新组织观点、事实。
C. 摘要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息，以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。
D. 写摘要时可以采用下列几种小技巧：1) 删除细节。
只保留主要观点。
2) 选择一至两个例子。
原文中可能包括5个或更多的例子，你只需从中筛选一至二个例子。
3) 把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子。
如果材料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子，那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。
4) 避免重复。
在原文中，为了强调某个主题，可能会重复论证说明。
但是这在摘要中是不能使用的。
应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。
5) 压缩长的句子。
如下列两例：“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.”可以概括为：”He was very brave in battle.”“He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.”可以概括为：“He was in financial difficulties.”6) 你还可以使用词组代替整句或者从句。
