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初三英语书面表达英语作文汇编复习题及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink

提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?

●What are you going to do there?

●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?

Dear Pete,

How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in

Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Peter，

How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，

动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。

句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

2．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。

因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy...

2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...

3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Dear schoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers.

____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua

【答案】Dear shoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”

There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more

sports activities for us.

In order to build ourselves stronger and s tronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达

长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。武汉马拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。内容包括以下要点：

1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；

2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；

3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；

4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；

5.补充一至亮点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

2.次数60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；

3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译

参考词汇： event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道

Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.

Li Hua

【答案】Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.

I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言，并增加一些内容，使文章更加充实。其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。

4．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下

面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。

注意事项:

1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;

2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David,

I'm really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history.

I'm sure you'll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Thomas,

I’m really hap py to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.

It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.

“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.

Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes.

I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：●What's the season in China now? ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。

句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。

【高分句型二】

I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。

you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。

5．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your

help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

6．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。

要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。

3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.

Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom 【答案】Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.

Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t st ay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom 【解析】

【详解】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。时态为一般现在时态。要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

7．（·广东中考模拟）学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。

1.形成良好的学习习惯：听讲、复习；

2.保持健康的生活方式：饮食、起居；

3.处理好跟他人的关系：友善、分享；

4.其他建议......（至少2条建议）

注意：

（1）词数80个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分

Dear fellow schoolmates,

Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal suggestions to share with you. …

【答案】First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and hand in your homework in time .Whenever you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help.

More importantly, good health is important for success in the exams. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. Besides, you’d better have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food.

As we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and happiness with others.

Last but not the least , it is necessary for us to relax. You can do some sports such as walking or playing balls. Listening to music and seeing movies are also good ways to relax.

Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，也是提纲类作文。学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。结合所给材料可知本文时态是一般现在时。使用的句型主要有祈使句和建议性句型（You should，we should, you can，you’d better 等）。认真阅读提示，审清主题，根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，要包含所给的所有内容并适当发挥。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在80词以上，不要写的太少。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：首先，我建议你养成良好的学习习惯。上课认真听讲，及时交作业，遇到困难请向同学或老师寻求帮

助。更重要的是，良好的健康是考试成功的重要因素。你需要早起早睡以获得充足的睡眠。此外，你最好均衡饮食，避免吃垃圾食品。众所周知，良好的人际关系可以使我们快乐和舒适。善待他人，帮助有困难的人。我们应该和别人分享悲伤和快乐。最后但并非最不重要的是，我们有必要放松。你可以做一些运动，如散步或玩球。听音乐和看电影也是放松的好方法。希望你能享受你的学校生活，有一个光明的未来。

【点睛】

本书面表达是给学弟学妹的一封信，给他们提出学习建议。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, More importantly, As we all know, Last but not the least ,）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

8．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．

要求：

1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境

It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______

【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．

There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．

In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．

【解析】

【详解】

高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．

句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．

高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

9．（·安徽中考模拟）近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :

1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;

2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;

3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;

4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :

1.词数80-100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,

I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________

In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.

Yours

Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,

I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.

In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.

Yours,

Daming 【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

10．（·辽宁初三）生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________

【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.

My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she c ares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.

She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

11．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）每个人在成长过程中，都会遇到很所不同的困惑，但为实现梦想我们应该克服困难，解决问题。现阶段，你有什么困惑吗？请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What are your troubles at present?

（2）What will you do to solve these troubles?

要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

My troubles at present

During the process of my growth, I have met different

troubles.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________

【答案】My troubles at present

During the process of my growth, I have met different troubles.I am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I grow up?". This is something I really have no answer for myself.I am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like.Is there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示的内容，请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。例文点评：短文先列出自己的烦恼是什么，之后再写如何解决这些烦恼。词汇、句式要丰富多样，为文章增色添彩。

高分亮点：短语：relate to ；grow up；be worried about ；would like to do sth；find out ；ask for help等。

句式：I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I grow up?". I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like. I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.用了宾语从句；I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. 用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

12．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。

1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。

2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。

3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。

4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。

5.请就此事谈谈你的看法......

要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads 在……犹豫不决 hesitate in

Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back

【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Bec ause the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.

In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口，最后我就这件事谈谈我的想法。此处on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

13．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

14．（·陕西中考模拟）假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

15．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……

注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间

+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确

性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

16．（·江苏中考模拟）三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以“I remember ”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。

要点如下：1. What’s the event?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. How did you feel at that moment?

4. How has the event changed your life?

注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。

2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

I remember

How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.

【答案】I remember

How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.

When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.

Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.

It was a wonderful and unforgetta ble experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to

hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

17．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

（1）5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

（2）早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

（3）上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

（4）第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

（5）我的旅游感受……

参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway

王府井大街 Wangfujing Street

故宫 the Palace Museum

北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck

要求：

（1）词数:80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing

During the May Day Holiday，

I______________________________________________________________

【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.

First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited

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