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第1章雅思（IELTS）考试指南1.1雅思考试简介1.雅思考试性质雅思（IELTS）考试，全称International English Language Testing（国际英语语言测试系统），为剑桥大学考试委员会外语考试部、英国文化协会和IDP教育集团共有，而在中国的雅思考试主要由英国文化协会负责。

该考试以其特有的可靠性和权威性，目前已得到全球多所院校机构、政府部门和职业机构的认可。

该项考试是为打算在交流语言为英语的国家或地区进行学习或工作的人们所设置的英语语言水平考试。

2.雅思考试分类和目的雅思考试分为学术类（Academic）和培训类（General Training）两种类型，学术类在于测试考生是否有在英语环境中就读高校本科或研究生课程的语言能力；普通培训类适用计划移民、出国工作或申请国外非学术培训、中学课程的考生，侧重点在于评估考生是否掌握足够英语技能在英语国家生活的能力。

1.2雅思考试试题分析及解题技巧雅思考试是对考生听说读写四项英语交流能力的测试，测试内容包括听力、阅读、写作和口语共四部分。

雅思考试的试卷结构如下所示：雅思学术类和培训类考试总时间均为2小时24分钟，其中对于听力和口语部分，学术类和培训类考试的测试内容完全相同；而阅读部分和写作部分则使用不同的试题。

需要注意的是除口语外，听力、阅读和写作均在同一天进行测试。

1.雅思听力试题分析及解题技巧雅思听力部分主要是对考生在英语语境中，对实际使用中英语的适应和理解能力的测试。

雅思听力由四部分构成，难度会依次递增，第一部分为两人对话，第二部分通常为一段独白（对话的形式较少出现），第三部分为多人对话（最多四人），第四部分又是一段独白。

其中前两部分内容涉及社会课题，而后两部分与与教育或培训课题相关。

听力时间为30分钟，录音结束后会有10分钟誊写答案的时间，需注意雅思听力中的录音只放一遍。

雅思听力的测试形式多样，其中历年考试中考过的题型达到十几种，主要包括选择题、简答题、完成句子题、完成笔记/表格/图表/摘要/流程图/时间表题、为图表/设计图/地图做标记题、分类和配对题等。

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IELTS Sample Articles (1)1. Discuss (观点类之对立观点)Directions: It has been more than 30 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. Discuss.For over fifty years, a number of nations have been involved in the exploration of outer space. This research has been very costly, of course. Has this money been well-spent or wasted?Some people believe that all or most space research should be eliminated because of its incredible expense, not only in terms of money, but also in terms of scientific and human resources. These people point out the fact that it cost billions of dollars to send astronauts to the moon, but all they brought back were some worthless rocks. These people say that the money and effort now being wasted in outer space could be spent on more important projects right here on earth, such as providing housing for homeless people, improving the education system, saving the environment, and finding cures for diseases.However, other people believe that space research has provided many benefits to mankind. They point out that hundreds of useful products, from personal computers to heart pacemakers to freeze-dried foods, are the direct or indirect results of space research. They say that weather and communication satellites, which are also products of space programs, have benefited people all over the globe. In addition to these practical benefits, supporters of the space program point to the scientific knowledge that has been acquired about the sun, the moon, the planets, and even our own earth as a result of space research.I agree with those people who support space research and wish it to continue. Space research, as shown, has already brought many benefits to humanity. Perhaps it will bring even more benefits in the future, ones that we can not even imagine now. Moreover, just as individual people need challenges to make their lives more interesting, I believe the human race itself needs a challenge, and I think that the peaceful exploration of outer space provides just such a challenge.2. Opinion (观点类之事物性质)Directions: Many people think that nowadays people are being subjected to more and more pressure in their work, and thus are having less and less time to relax.What’s your opinion?In modern society, especially in big cities, hard work has undoubtedly become a very important feature of ordinary people’s everyday life. It seems that may people are under the impression that their work is becoming more pressing and urgent, and thus they sacrifice more and more leisure time.In the first place, with the rapid development of science and technology, work today is more demanding than it used to be. For example, college graduates nowadays have to master English, computer science and driving skills before they can find decent jobs. People have to spend more time acquiring new techniques and skills. And their spare time tends to be fully occupied, not with leisure pursuits, but with work-related pursuits.In the second place, competition is becoming more intense. Many people feel anxious that they may be “laid-off” if they can’t work as hard as others. And they also feel at a disadvantage before new graduates. Therefore, it is understandable that people keep themselves involved in intensely hard work in order to preserve their positions.The worst aspect of this phenomenon, in my opinion, is that the huge pressure of work will gradually affect people’s mental health. Excessively hard wok means that people can never get rid of the fatigue of their work, even in their leisure time. This means that they can not enjoy a normal life.In a word, in modern life overwork is stealing our leisure time. However, I believe this problem will be settled eventually with the development of science and technology.3. Problem + Reasons + Recommendations (问题+原因+办法)Directions: It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not the relationship between family members is as close as before. Diverse contributing factors can be identified. In the following, I would like to present my point of view.Great changes have taken place in family life along with the development of society. One of them is that the once-extended family tends to become smaller and smaller. Many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents.Compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work, so that they can achieve success, or at least a good standard of living. As a result, they can’t afford to spend their leisure hours with the ir families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds.In addition, the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the member of their families. Their free time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the Internet or playing video games. They come to lose interest in communication with the other members of their families.In view of such alienation within families, I do believe that urgent steps must be taken. For members of families who live away from one another, regular contact on the phone can bring them the care that they need. Family reunions on holidays or other important occasions can make a difference as well. For those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. In the final analysis, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.4. Agree or disagree (观点类之驳斥文章)It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?A criticism often heard these days is that the subjects taught in schools tend to be too academic, and contribute little to preparing a young person for the real-life tasks he or she will have to perform after graduation. They say that academic subjects are rooted in the past, and are not useful for solving modern problems. I disagree with this point of view for three reasons.My first reason is that it is the duty of parents, not teachers, to prepare their children to deal with the practical affairs of life. The home, not the classroom, is the ideal place to learn about home management and interpersonal skills. As for work abilities and attitudes they are best learned “onthe job” and under the supervision of an experienc ed older worker.My second reason is that academic subjects have withstood the test of time. They represent the accumulated wisdom of our ancestors down through the ages, and, far from being impractical, they equip us with the knowledge and confidence to make sound judgments about any problems which may crop up. In addition, academic subjects are good for training us in mental discipline, while practical subjects are weak in this regard.My third reason is based on the saying “Man does not live by bread alone.” Schooldays devoted solely to instruction in down-to-earth practical matters would be dull indeed! Lessons in the best literature of the world, and the epoch-making scientific and geographical discoveries of the past enrich our lives and make us feel that we are part of the great family of mankind.All in all, the teaching of academic subjects in schools is entirely appropriate. It is my firmly held view that practical subjects have no place in the classroom. On the contrary, the curriculum should be more academic!Appendix: Quotations for All of You1.It’s a funny thing about life; if you refuse to accept anything but the best, you very often get it.– Maugham2.If you do not plant knowledge when young, it will give us no shade when we are old.– Chesterfield3.All the advantage isn’t in running fast, but rather in getting an early start. – Rabelais4.There is nothing like a dream to create the future. – Victor Hugo5.Write it on your heart that every day is the best day of the year. – Ralph Waldo Emerson6.Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow. – Emerson7.You cannot create experience. You must undergo it. – Camus8.Life does not have to be perfect to be wonderful. – Annette Funicello9.No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourself. – Ralph Waldo Emerson10.He who has never failed somewhere … that man can not be great. – Herman Melville11.Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of life. – Goethe12.What people say you cannot do, you try and find that you can. – Henry Thoreau13.He knows not his own strength that hath not met adversity. – Francis Bacon14.You only live once. But if you work it right, once is enough. – Fred Allen15.Man is the artificer of his own happiness. – H. D. Thoreau16.We must become the change we want to see. – Mahatma Gandhi17.The mind is everything. What you think you become. – Buddha18.People do not lack strength; they lack will. – Hugo19.Wisdom outweighs any wealth. – Sophocles20.Learn to labor and to wait. – Henry Wadsworth Longfellow。

You should spend about20minutes on this task.The graph shows the impact of vaccinations on the incidence of whooping cough, a childhood illness,between1940and1990in Britain.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.The graph shows the changing number of cases of whooping cough in Britain from1940to1990,and how the introduction and use of a vaccine for the disease affected the pattern.Apparently,there was a direct link between the administration of the vaccine and the number of cases of whooping cough among children during this period in history. Overall,the number of cases fell from a high of170,000to almost zero. However,there were significant fluctuations in the trend.For example,just after1940,there was a surge in the number of cases from50,000toapproximately170,000.Although the figure fell back in the next few years, it peaked again in the early1950s and fluctuated considerably until the introduction of a vaccination in the late1950s.Following this,the number of cases dropped sharply to well below20,000 in the mid-1970s,until a sudden fall in vaccinations,from81percent to30 percent,resulted in a parallel rise in the incidence of the illness.Figures then went up again to60,000around1980,but gradually fell back to their earlier level as vaccinations were resumed.By1990,94percent of children were being vaccinated against whooping cough,and there were few,if any, cases.(208words)。

IELTS Task 1范文1.A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000. It is evident that both nations saw considerable fluctuations in fertility, with lows during the 1940s and highs during the 1950s.1920 to15 percent in 1935, China’sThis was followed by a period of exponential growth, with fertility in the countrypercent in 1950.in this figure.The US birth rate, meanwhile, and 13 percentin 1950, followed by a steady fall.It is interesting to note that whileuntil 1950, the gap between the two after this time as fertility in China slid away.2.Given are two figures concerning criminality in Britain. The first provides data on the rates of conviction among men and women of various ages, while the second indicates the gender balance of the UK prison population.the rate of conviction among Britsof both during adolescence the age of about 20. men are far more likely to offend than women.From a negligible 2 percent among 10-year-old boys, the male conviction rateto approximately 20-year-olds. The percentage of0 percent among girls of 10 to some 5 percent for 20-year-olds. The however, see dramatic decreases in criminality among both sexes. A mere 2 percent of crimes are committed by 60-year-old men and 0 percent by women of the same age.As for the proportion of male and female prison inmates, men outnumber women 24 to 1. Some 96 percent of all prisioners are men, while the remainder are female.A glance at the two pie charts provided reveals the relative popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.Of these activities in both years, at 32 percent in 1985 and a slightly lower 30 percent in 1995. Yet, by far the most significant change to take place during this period was the increased popularity of computer games. Not a single respondent to the survey rated playing computer games as their preferred leisure activity in 1985. However, by 1995 this figure stood at 27 percent –the second highest overall. Also more popular in 1995 was talking with friends, at 26 percent compared to 21 percent a decade earlier.In stark contrast, however, all other activities decreased in popularity. Eating out –which was the second most widely enjoyed pastime in 1985,percent of respondents – slipped to a mere 8 percent in 1995. Likewisealso considerable decreases in the popularity ratings of talking withactivities and (as previously mentioned) watching television.4.Given are two figures providing a comparison of internet use in five European countries (namely Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain and the UK) in 1995, 2000 and 2004, as well as the popularity of internet shopping in these countries.It is evident from the information provided that Britain had by far the highest number of internet users in all three years. From 16 million in 1995, the number of British users climbed steadily to 22 million in 2000, before soaring to a staggering 41 million in 2004. Second in terms of internet use was Germany. This country saw a threefold increase during the period in question, from 5 million people in 1995 to 14 million in 2000 and 15 million in 2004. A similar increase took place in France. The two nations with the fewest internet users, meanwhile, were Switzerland and Spain. It is also interesting to note that internet shopping was far more common in the UK than in any other country listed.In fact, the prevalence of internet shopping in Britain was double that of Germany and triple that of Switzerland. France and Spain, meanwhile, had moderate levels of online shopping.A glance at the table provided reveals a number of clear differences between the major metro systems of the world in terms of age, scale and annual carrying capacity.One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established metro systems are considerably shorter than the older ones. Completed in 1863, the London underground is the oldestthe longest, extending for 1100 kilometres.stark contrast, howeverand 2001 respectively– are far shorter. The formerthe latter just 14 kilometre s.With regard to yearly carrying capacity, the metro systems mentioned in the table vary greatly. The Tokyo metro is equipped to carry the largest number of passengers, at 1434 million. With 850 million, meanwhile, the Paris metro has the second largest carrying capacity. The systems with the smallest capacities are those of Kyoto and Washington DC, transporting just 11 million and 70 million people per year respectively.6.Given are two column graphs comparing the rates of secondary and tertiary education among males and females in various different parts of the world.compared with only 20 Asia, meanwhile, have moderate levels of secondary education – between 40 and 50 percent for both sexes.With regard to higher education, the figures are much lower throughout the world. In Europe, some 50 percent of adult females and 45 percent of adult males gain a higher education.Sub-Saharan Africa The figures for Latin America and East Asia are marginally higher thanAlso noteworthy is the fact that receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia, but less likely to receive a tertiary education in all regions except Europe.。

IELTSWritingTask1--bysimonIELTS Writing Task 1: describe a processHere is some more advice for describing a process diagram. The question I'm using comes from Cambridge IELTS 6. It's also on this website(go down the page to test 3).Advice:1.Introduction: paraphrase the question statement (one sentence).2.Summary paragraph: write how many steps there are in each of the2 diagrams. You could also mention the first step and the last stepin each process (two sentences).3.Details: describe each step in the diagrams. We'll look at this nextweek.Here's my example introduction and summary paragraph:The figures illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth.There are four main stages in the life cycle of the silkworm, from eggs to adult moth. The process of silk cloth production involves six steps, from silkworm cocoon to silk material.Can you see the paraphrasing I have used? Next week we'll work on describing the stages in each process.paraphrasing:diagrams=figuresshow=illustratestages=stepsthe life cycle of the silkworm=the stages in the life of asilkworm production=process of producing...=process of ...production.there are ...stages=...involves ...steps.Hello Simon,I hope the paraphrasing aboved is correct. I enjoy you daily lessions very much. I am preparing for the IELTS test, and your lessons help me a lot. Thank you very much.Here I have some qustions about this lession. The following is my sentence:There are six stages in the process of silk cloth production, beginning with selecting cocoons. Then the qualified cocoons will* be boiled, unwind into* thread, and the thread will be twisted and finally weaved.My first question is that should I use future tense (will be boiled....) or present simple tense (is boiled)?The second question is that which preposition should i use? (the qualified cocoons will be unwind into* thread: should I use "into") ?I am looking forward to your reply. Thanks again.Best wishesTheresaHi Theresa,Your paraphrasing is perfect. Here are the answers to your questions:1. I would use the present simple to describe processes e.g. "The selected (not 'qualified') cocoons are boiled."2. I would avoid trying to use a preposition - I'd find another way to describe it e.g. "The cocoon is unwound, leaving a single thread". Or, "it is then possible to unwind the cocoon in order to have a thread of silk."Hope this helps,SimonWhen describing stages in a process:1.Start at the beginning. Use words that clearly show the stages (e.g.firstly, at the first stage, after that, next, following this,finally)./doc/a05597000.html,e the present simple tense./doc/a05597000.html,e the 'active' when someone or something does the action (e.g.the moth lays its eggs)./doc/a05597000.html,e the 'passive' when it is not important to say who or what doesthe action (e.g. the silk cloth is dyed).Here are some example sentences from last week's question: The life cycle of the silkworm begins when the moth lays its eggs.After 10 days the silkworm larva is born, and 4 to 6 weeks later the larva produces silk thread.At the first stage in the production of silk cloth the cocoon is boiled in water.Next, the silk thread is unwound and twisted.It is then dyed, to give it colour, or woven to make cloth and then dyed.I have highlighted the passive verbs and the words that mark stages.Advice: you can avoid difficult passive verbs like 'unwound' or 'woven' by writing 'it is then possible to unwind' or 'the thread is then ready for weaving'.IELTS Writing Task 1: describe a tableToday I'm going to look at a question from Cambridge IELTS book 5 (page 98). You can see the question and an example answer on this website.The problem with the example answer is that it is long (233 words) and quite complicated. I'm going to suggest some changes, starting with the introduction and summary paragraph.1. Introduction. Paraphrase the question (make small changes):The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities.2. Summary paragraph. Look for the most noticeable feature or main trend:The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year. It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.Next week I'll add the final paragraphs.Last week I wrote the introduction and summary paragraph for this question. The example answer on the website is good, but it's 233 words long, it contains a few mistakes, and it's a bit complicated.I've now written the full essay. I've followed my usual 4 paragraph structure (see previous Task 1 lessons) and I've tried to make the essay clear and simple.I'd give my essay a band 9, but maybe I'm biased! Please let me know if you find any mistakes in my writing (nobody's perfect), or ask if anything is unclear.Describe a table (Cambridge IELTS 5, page 98)The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities. The table compares the six networks in termsof their age, size and the number of people who use them each year. It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.The London underground is the oldest system, having opened in 1863. It is also the largest system, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per year.Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.(185 words)Analysis of this essay:Simple paragraph structure: Introduction, summary paragraph, one paragraph about the 3 older systems, one paragraph about the 3newer systems.Select key information: There is too much information to include in ashort essay. I found it difficult to write less than 185 words. Notice that Itried to include only one (sometimes two) statistics for each city.Compare as much as possible: e.g. London is the oldest andlargest; Paris is about half the size but serves more people.Commas: Notice how I use commas to add extra information e.g. “…isthe oldest system, having opened in…” I often use the word “with” aftera comma to add a figure to the end of a sentence e.g. “…is the mostused, with 1927 million passengers.”ModelIt is a nice piece of writingI have tried one.The table reveals information on the Underground railway station among six cities during two centuries.As is shown by the table, London, the oldest railway system, has by farthe longest distance with 394 km, closely followed Paris, the second oldest underground railway , with 199 km, or equaling a haft distance of London system. This then preceded the opening of the railway system in Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.Interestingly, although Tokyo has the middle position as regards the kilometers of route with 155 km, it appears to be the highest system used by passengers, with 1927 million. This number is considerably higher than that of both Paris and London. These figures are 1191 and 775, respectively.Surprisingly, Kyoto and Los Angeles have the lowest number of either kilometers of route and passengers per year. In fact, the number of passengers using both of them is a great deal less than that of Washington DC, with approximately three times less , while the distance of Kyoto and Los Angeles railway system isnegligible (ranging from 11 to 28).In conclusion, London has the highest number of kilometers of route, while T okyo occurs to be the successful railway system with the overwhelming majority of passengers(193 ws)IELTS Writing Task 1: comparing (bar charts)。

图表作文讲解2：柱状图和饼状图学生面授老师时间本次课时雅思写作第二课时教学思路1.作文简介、写作技巧2.实例讲解3.分析总结4.课后作业教学目标柱状图、饼状图知识点讲解基本特征和写作方法实例分析讲解重点写作技巧讲解范文学习柱状图和饼状图写作方法备考资料剑桥IELTS4-8教学详细内容：一、写作技巧详解1.柱状图特点➢柱状图是动态图表，切入点是描述趋势。

➢柱状图写作注重“比较”(找出similarity)和“对比”(找出difference)，也就是说需要横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征，也要分别描写各个柱子的个性特征。

➢两种写作方式：其一是对不同时间段内的数据进行比较，适合于数据代表的物体较少且时间界限明确的情况。

另外是对单独数据的全程描述，适合于描述数据对象很多且时间划定不清晰的情况。

2.饼状图特点饼形图与柱形图或者线形图所截然不同的是它没有了横轴与纵轴，而以饼形的分割来表示百分比，可以依照三步审题分析法来进行观察：➢观察共有几张饼状图，以及它们之间的关系是什么（一般说来，雅思图表题中极少见到单饼图）；➢观察每张饼状图中有哪几个区域，以及各个区域分别代表什么；➢观察单个饼状图中各区域间的百分比差异，以及相同区域在各个饼状图间的百分比的比较或发展。

饼状图是所有图表题中最好写的一种，唯一值得注意的地方在于如何丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达，要采取多样性的表达，如25%=a quarter of, 50%=half of, >50%=a/the majority of.描写饼状图中的比例构成就是饼状图图表作文的重点，但也应注意，这种描述并不是对图形的简单重复，对各项数据比例的描述应建立在归纳整理的基础上有条理地进行。

学生不仅要善于找数据，更重要的是要善于从数据或比例中升华出来，找到规律和本质。

常用词汇、句型及模板1.柱状图1）倍数的表达今年的产量是去年产量的两倍➢The output this year is two times(twice) more than last year’s.➢As much as 不可数名词 as many as 可数The books of this semester are two times as many as that of last semester. ➢ A is two times the amount of B不可数➢ A is two times the number of B可数2) 常用套句➢There was …in the number of A from …to … (over next years), which was followed by … and then… until…when there was … for the next … years.➢From…onwards, there was … in the number of A which then increased / decreased …at …% in …➢In …, the number reached (was) …%, but (30) years later there was …➢The number of A increased rapidly from … to … during the (five-year) period. ➢In the (three years) from … through…, the percentage of A was slightly larger / smaller than that of B.➢The graphs show a threefold increase in the number of A.➢Here is an upward trend in the number of A.➢… (year) witnessed / saw a sharp rise in A.2.饼状图1)常用词：percentage, proportion, make up, constitute, account for, take up, ..isdivided into…parts, consume the largest/smallest portion.2)例句：➢The graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…..➢The percentage of A in … is more than twice tha n that of B.➢The biggest loss was to A area.➢There is not a great deal of difference between A and B.➢In general positions, females outnumber males.➢ A much greater percentage of men than women are found in managerial positions. ➢The profit of company A doubled from May to September.3）模板：➢The two pie charts describe ………………………➢The first point to note is …………………………➢Comparing the graphs, …………………………….➢The graphs also suggest that ………………………➢In conclusion, it can be seen from the data that …………………..4）饼状图作文模型The two pie charts illustrate the significant changes in people’s ways of communication from 1970 to 1995.The first graph shows that in 1975, the most popular way to communicate was letter writing, with the percentage of 50%. Others ___________________________, the figures are 32% and 18% respectively.It can be seen from the second graph that ways of communication changed a lot in two decades. By 1995, ______________________________. By contrast, ________________________________.Comparing the two pie charts, we can see that the use of the phones and computers during the same period had both risen considerably. However, letter writing became less popular among the people.In general, people inclined to use more modernized mediums to communicate with others, while the traditional way became less employed.The pie chart depicts the proportion of ___________________________. It consists of six segments, the largest one representing _________, which account for 26% of the total. _____________ takes up 21%, becoming the second largest.__________________________________. The rest proportions, 15% of all, constituting 5% and 10% respectively.From the chart it can be seen clearly that ________________________.二、实例分析分析思路：1.第一幅柱状图的描述单位是百万，即人数；第二幅则是百分比。

Writing task 1st month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sentyou some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friends. In your letter∙thank them for the photos and for the holiday∙explain why you didn’t write earlier∙invite them to come and stay with you2.You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned theshop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter∙describe the problem with the equipment∙explain what happened when you phoned the shop∙say what you would like the manager to do3.You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that youcannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter∙describe the situation∙explain why you cannot continue at this time∙say what action you would like to take4.You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay inyour apartment.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter∙explain where your friend can get the key to the apartment∙give your friend some instructions about using your apartment∙recommend some places to go5.You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter∙describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight∙explain how missing your flight affected you∙make it clear what you would like the airline to do6.There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to themanager of the transport company. In your letter∙describe the problems∙explain how these problems are affecting the public∙suggest some changes that could be made7.Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environmentprojects in your area.Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter∙describe a local environmental issue that affects you∙explain what you would like to do to help∙and suggest how the problem could be avoided in future8.One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer. In your letter∙give your opinion of your friend’s business idea∙tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer∙and explain your reasons for this decision9.You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it.Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter∙tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it∙describe what you learnt in your current job∙and ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment 10.You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter∙ask your friend to send you one of the photographs∙explain why you need that particular photograph∙and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it11.On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover thecost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter∙describe the item you lost∙explain how you lost it∙tell the insurance company what you would like them to do12.There is a problem in the road outside your house.Write a letter to your local councillor. In your letter∙introduce yourself∙explain what the problem is∙tell the councillor what you would like to be done13.You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask yourmanager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter∙explain why you want to take time off work∙give details of the amount of time you need∙suggest how your work could be covered while you are away14.Write to a friend to explain that you had moved house.∙explain why∙describe the new place∙invite your friend to come and stayWriting task 1st month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sentyou some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friends. In your letter∙thank them for the photos and for the holiday∙explain why you didn’t write earlier∙invite them to come and stay with youDear John and Jane,I hope this letter finds you well. I’m just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for thephotos you sent.The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were fant astic hosts, and I couldn’t have asked forbetter guides to show me around.Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrivedhome. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was!Anyway, I’m back to normal now and I’ve handed in all of my assignments. In fact, now that I’m free, why don’t you both come and stay? There’s a spare room here, so you’re welcome to use it whenever you like.Hope to see you soon,Peter2.You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned theshop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter∙describe the problem with the equipment∙explain what happened when you phoned the shop∙say what you would like the manager to doDear Sir or Madam,I am writing with regard to an appliance that I recently bought from your shop.On the 10th May I bought a new washing machine, and it was installed the following day.However, when I tried to wash some clothes, I noticed that the machine failed to spin during the washing cycle. Consequently, it leaves clothes wet but not clean.When I phoned your shop to report the problem, I spoke to an assistant who did not know the procedure for repairs or returns. He assured me that he would report the issue to the storemanager, and that I would be contacted the same day. That was two days ago, and I am stillwaiting for your call.As the appliance is under warranty, I am entitled to ask for it to be repaired or replaced. I have decided that I would like a replacement washing machine. I would also like you to phone me personally when you receive this letter.I await your prompt response.Yours faithfully,John Smith3.You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that youcannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter∙describe the situation∙explain why you cannot continue at this time∙say what action you would like to take4.You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay inyour apartment.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter∙explain where your friend can get the key to the apartment∙give your friend some instructions about using your apartment∙recommend some places to go5.You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter∙describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight∙explain how missing your flight affected you∙make it clear what you would like the airline to do6.There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to themanager of the transport company. In your letter∙describe the problems∙explain how these problems are affecting the public∙suggest some changes that could be made7.Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environmentprojects in your area.Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter∙describe a local environmental issue that affects you∙explain what you would like to do to help∙and suggest how the problem could be avoided in future8.One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer. In your letter∙give your opinion of your friend’s business idea∙tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer∙and explain your reasons for this decision9.You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it.Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter∙tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it∙describe what you learnt in your current job∙and ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment10.You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter∙ask your friend to send you one of the photographs∙explain why you need that particular photograph∙and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it11.On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover thecost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter∙describe the item you lost∙explain how you lost it∙tell the insurance company what you would like them to do12.There is a problem in the road outside your house.Write a letter to your local councillor. In your letter∙introduce yourself∙explain what the problem is∙tell the councillor what you would like to be done13.You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask yourmanager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter∙explain why you want to take time off work∙give details of the amount of time you need∙suggest how your work could be covered while you are awayDear Mr. Smith,I am writing to ask for some time off work next month.The reason for this request is that my brother is getting married. His future wife is Australian, and the wedding will take place in her home city, Melbourne. As the brother of the groom, Icannot miss such a special occasion.To attend the ceremony and make the round trip from the UK, I would need at least five days off work. However, I would like to take the opportunity to do some sightseeing in Australia, and so I am hoping that you will allow me to take a full two weeks’ leave, from the 1st to the 15th of May.I have spoken to my co-workers, and it seems that Peter Jones would be best placed to cover myproject commitments while I am away. I will leave detailed instructions for him on my desk.I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.Yours sincerely,Michael Hall14.Write to a friend to explain that you had moved house.∙explain why∙describe the new place∙invite your friend to come and stay11。

雅思15t1t2作文范文英文回答：The topic of the IELTS Task 1 and Task 2 for IELTS 15is not disclosed here, but I will provide a sample essaythat meets the requirements mentioned. Please note that the essay below is a sample and may not be directly related to the actual IELTS test prompts.Title: The Impact of Social Media on Society.In today's digital age, social media has become an integral part of our lives. It has revolutionized the waywe communicate, share information, and interact with others. This essay will explore both the positive and negative impacts of social media on society.On the positive side, social media has greatly enhanced communication and connectivity. It allows people from different corners of the world to connect and share ideas.Social media platforms such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram have made it easier for individuals to stay in touch with friends and family, regardless of geographical barriers. Moreover, social media has also facilitated the spread of information and awareness about important social issues. It has become a powerful tool for social movements and activism, enabling individuals to raise their voices and bring about positive change.However, social media also has its drawbacks. One of the major concerns is the impact it has on mental health. The constant exposure to carefully curated and often unrealistic representations of others' lives can lead to feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem. Additionally, the addictive nature of social media can result in decreased productivity, as people spend excessive amounts of time scrolling through their feeds instead of focusing on important tasks. Moreover, the spread of fake news and misinformation on social media platforms has become a significant issue, as it can easily influence public opinion and create social divisions.中文回答：社交媒体对社会的影响。

• Finally, you need to describe some specific details. This is where you select, describe and compare individual pieces of information (usually numbers). • Separate this description of details into two paragraphs.
• However, there are a few nice phrases that we can use e.g. Americans are projected to eat 12.2 percቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱnt less meat in 2012 than they did in 2007.
• Maybe you can share your ideas for an IELTS-style description of this graph.
• Put the overview straight after the introduction, and write 2 sentences describing the information in general. • You won't get a high score if you don't write a good overview.
IELTS Writing Task One (1)
• Charts and tables usually show nouns rather than verbs. However, you need to find the right verb in order to write a good sentence. Example:

雅思写作task1范文Task 1 of the IELTS writing exam requires candidates to describe and interpret visual data, such as charts, graphs, tables, and diagrams. This task assesses the test-taker's ability to report and compare data, describe the stages of a process, or explain how something works. In this article, we will provide a sample response for a task 1 question and analyze the key features of a high-scoring answer.The given bar chart presents the percentage of household expenditure on five different categories in a European country in 2016. The categories include housing, food and drink, transport, leisure and education, and finally, other goods and services. It is evident that housing accounted for the largest proportion of household spending, while leisure and education had the lowest share.To begin with, housing was the most significant expenditure for households, comprising approximately 35% of the total budget. This was followed by food and drink, which represented around 20% of the expenditure. Transport and leisure and education accounted for similar proportions, at approximately 15% and 10% respectively. Finally, other goods and services made up the smallest share, at just under 10%.In terms of the key features of a high-scoring response, it is essential to accurately describe the data presented in the visual, as well as make comparisons where relevant. This sample response provides a clear and concise overview of the main trends in the data, including the highest and lowest expenditure categories, as well as the similarities and differences between the other categories. Additionally, the response uses a range of appropriate vocabulary to describe the data, such as "comprising," "represented," and "proportions."Furthermore, the response is well-organized and logically structured, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. The information is presented in a coherent and cohesive manner, with each paragraph building on the previous one and leading to a logical conclusion. This demonstrates the test-taker's ability to effectively organize and present information in a written format.In conclusion, the sample response provided effectively describes and interprets the visual data presented in the bar chart. It accurately reports the main trends and features of the data, uses a range of appropriate vocabulary, and is well-organized and logically structured. These key features are essential for achieving a high score in task 1 of the IELTS writing exam.。

雅思第一环节作文示范模板英文回答：Task 1: Bar Chart。

The bar chart illustrates the number of people who visited different museums in London in 2021. The data is presented in millions of visitors, and the museums are listed in descending order of popularity.The British Museum was the most popular museum, attracting over 6 million visitors in 2021. The National Gallery and the Victoria and Albert Museum were the next most popular museums, with over 5 million and 4 million visitors respectively. The Science Museum, the Natural History Museum, and the Tate Modern were also popular, each attracting over 3 million visitors.The least popular museums were the Imperial War Museum, the Museum of London, and the National Maritime Museum,with under 2 million visitors each.Task 2: Opinion Essay。

In the modern world, it is often said that technology has made it easier than ever to stay connected with friends and family. However, some people argue that technology has actually made it more difficult to maintain meaningful relationships.There are a number of benefits to using technology to stay connected. For example, social media platforms like Facebook and Twitter allow us to keep in touch with people who we might not otherwise see very often. We can also use video calling apps like Skype and Zoom to communicate with people who live far away.However, there are also some drawbacks to using technology to stay connected. One potential problem is that it can be difficult to separate our online relationships from our offline relationships. This can lead to us feeling overwhelmed or even addicted to our devices. Additionally,technology can be a distraction, and it can make itdifficult to spend quality time with the people who are physically present in our lives.Ultimately, whether or not technology makes it easier or more difficult to maintain meaningful relationships is a complex question. There are both benefits and drawbacks to using technology to stay connected, and the best way to use technology is to find a balance that works for you.中文回答：任务 1，条形图。

雅思考试写作范文1there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent acceptance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other tobacco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as agree with this point of view for the following reasons:although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs like heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level of dependence it creates in the of smokers try to rid themselves of cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they developed,chiefly imputable to its chemical explains why smokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furthermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smoking all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,illegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still account for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to the users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinity as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the counter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking should be up to one's own individual have shown that the amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equivalent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoking can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to thirty two per cent.there are those who will say that the black market created by outlawing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product standards of the bootleggers are not as should all bear in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousand deaths a is hard to imagine the limited distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete with this tragic figure.to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is will be no solution other than to control tobacco much in the same way that the government now controls drugs which could allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effects of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.雅思考试写作范文2Nowadays, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. To understand t he solution, let’s take a closer look at the causes of the gap at first.The main reason of the gap is the unequal investment between city and rural area. China is a typical example. While more and more money is being invested to the coastal areas and big cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, the lack of investment barriers greatly the society development of rural area and western regionsThe low education level partly sharps the gap. There is no doubt that the prime force of productivity is education. However, because of poverty, thousands of people go to work without graduating from primary school. The poorer, the few children go to school. This bad cycle finally leads to the dream of rich becoming a dream that is hard to realize.Moreover, the rural area is short of people with high quality. A survey proved that most of university students, whether they come from city or countryside, choose big cities instead of poor areas to work. The rural area can neither adept talent man nor attract talent man. No wonder the gap is increasing largely.Hence, The government ought to knock itself out to decrease the gap as soon as possible. First, balance the investment between city and rural area. In addition, the education level should be improved, especially pay attention on raising high quality people. Besides, let more people realize the latent capacity of rural area in order to attract talent and investment. The set up of CCTV channel12-western region channel is a good example.Only when the ways mentioned above are realized step by step, can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.雅思考试写作范文3the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of as proverb goes:no garden without is not exception.owing a car has a lot of one thing,car provide us the most convient way of can get around freely without spenting a lot of always found driving is so another,its the comfortable to drive a always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night.Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and increasing number of cars contribute the lacking of more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem--traffic addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxide into make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip people contact with frensh air.therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars under heavier traffic can be solluted!雅思考试写作范文4Private cars vs Public trafficAs traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities of developed and developing countries, their governments have to try hard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with them.Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their private cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see they have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy traffic jam. At the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, green house gas CO2, CO1, acid rain gas SO2, fumes and dusts are being released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the environment. Thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road trafficaccidents are also rise dramatically. For example, in a city with 5000 cars, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which also burden the public healthy services.On the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution to these problems. For example city buses and railways are widely used or being constructed by many cities. People can take buses easily, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak time. Actually, Nottingham Transport Company is building its own light railway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the company, “It will be completed in the next year, the tickets will be very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very safe and comfortable.”On the other hand, public traffic had its own disadvantages. Usually it cannot provide door-to-door service. It is inconvenient to go shopping by public vehicles. Sometimes you must wait a long time for the train. And quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving.In conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful approach to deal with these difficulties. One possible way, if not the best, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provide citizens cheaper public traffic services.雅思考试写作范文5Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as inour society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’shealth, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct andprimary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainlytrue; this essay will outline three reasons.The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco isknown to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some,such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause.According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-related diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantlybecoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause.Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smoking among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries， such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not been closed. Tobacco is a global threat.Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Becauseof tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badlyaffected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This behavior severely affects the economy.In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack ofcigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually thebiggest killer of all the drugs.雅思考试写作范文6travelling to a different culture can be an overwhelming,indeed,even an intimidating is very easy for misunderstandings to occur,and tourists are often deterred from places of cultural interest through fear of offending the indigenous would argue,it is up to the locals to accomodate visitors by speaking their language,serving their cuisine,and generally making them 'at home'.without doing this,local perple can be considered as unfriendly and viewed with suspicion by they are dissuaded from staying,which is ultimately detrimental to the local community,as the tourists take their spending-money with them.the counterview argues that acting naturally does not necessarily equate with being a local person wishes to live their life as his or her ancestors have done for centuries then visitors should show respect and allow them to do fact,many would argue that immersing one's self in a different culture is vital in order to truly appreciate is gained bytravelling,potentially,thousands of miles to experience the same language,food and culture that could have been found a few miles down the road from one's is a waste ofmoney,nothing is learned from the experience,and the memories saved will be less vivid. this is the point of view i it is vital for many countries' economies to welcome tourists,it does not have to imitate them so as to encourage their travellers have the right mind-set and show respect,all they need to do is to let the locals carry out their day-to-day lives to gain many insights into the this way,visitor and host can mutually benefit each other,through an increased income,and an enriching experience,respectively.雅思考试写作范文7Recent years, because traffic is convenient day-by-day, people have a more chance to travel around the world. The plane can make us reach any corner of the earth in a short time. Some people think visitors to others countries should imitated local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome culture different.As the a famous saying goes: Do as they do at Rome. The knowledge of local custom can help outside person adapt to the new environment rapidly. Moreover, each place has the own unique culture, may keep in touch more ideology and culture through the local folkways and customs. For instance, a Chinese people came to Britain, he can imitate British life style. Inthis way, He can understand British habit more thoroughly, thus, make himself live a more comfortable life in Britain.On the other hand, the outside thought has a lot of positive influence on local culture too. For example, the outside thought could bring the new theory and inject vigor into local culture. The exchanges of outside thought and traditional culture can help people to find out about the culture of other areas and countries.Making a general survey of human history, it is a positive trend that the nationality has been merging all the time. So, we should not only propagate local culture for the outside people but also study outside culture and custom. In this way, the earth would become a family, all the people would get along harmoniously.雅思考试写作范文8nowaday,the culture shock exists between the tourists and host people consider should try to model themselves on the local culture and totally agree with the above point.firstlly,by abserving and understanding of local culture,the tourists can reduce the chance of offending the locals and misunderstanding consiously and manchu area of china,people think the dog is their you come there,you must always show respects and love to dog,otherwise it will lead to the embarrassment and conflict.secondly,understanding and following the activites of local people can show our respects to doing things with their way,we will be easy to establish the good relationship with local residents often feel friendly when their culture are imitated and are unconsiously bring us into the members of them.in addition,imitating can let us gain insigts into other not only can know whats people's life is like in other counties,we also can be enlarged our knowledge and broaded our horizon,which will be cherish wealth in our life.to sum should adjust themselves adapt to the local habits and customs,which will make them fully enjoy their travel and live in harmony!雅思考试写作范文9Along with the mass use of computer technology in education circles, we are delighted to witness the uncountable conveniences be brought by computer. Some people even argue that teacher will not be important in classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Personal speaking, I oppose holding such a ridiculous conclusion.In the first place, the feature of teaching defines teachers as an essential part in education. It is well known that teaching is a process of mutual-communication: firstly, teachersimpart/initiate knowledge or ideas to students, then students should promptly transfer their feedback to teachers, moreover, teachers will give students the final interpretation according to their specific requirement. Besides, teachers also can (teach students in accordance of their aptitude). In contrast, what computers can do is merely to display materials which havealready stored in their EMS memory or mechanically execute operator’s commands. We actually can not image what our education will being if computers substitute teachers totally. As to another reason, it seems that teacher’s role as a supervis or is more and more overt. Computer is indeed a controversy, it not only can be an efficient education assistant, but also can become an addiction which includes too much violent and (pornographic propaganda). Youngsters do not mature fully in psychology, therefore, without teachers' supervision, many children would spend hours playing computer games or surfing unhealthy websites, which are regarded as a waste of valuable time and intelligence, instead of trying to have a good command of knowledge and skills.We never deny that computers are absolutely an available education implements, furthermore, the combination of teacher and computer technology will greatly improve our education quality. However, from all of the grounds of argument mentioned above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teacher will not be replaced by computer in the classroom. 雅思考试写作范文10Which element between nature and nurture plays the major role in children’s personality and development is always a controversial problem. Of course, which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. Here, I would like to illustrate my point of view about it.Admittedly, different nature determines people have distinguished starting points in their lifetime. To beginning, i n light of medical research, a person’s blood type has considerable influence to his character. General speaking, for example, a person whose blood type is A means that his personality is amiable and tender probably. Besides, the physical condition, even a ppearance may influence a person’s development. Statistics shows that beautiful people are more confident than others, because they do not need to worry about the prejudice from public. Obviously, some parts of our personality have been decided when we born.On the other hand, although nature is important during the course of shaping personality, we cannot ignore another essential element, nurture. There are many factors which affect the development of children, both parental support and education being vital influence. It is reported that the kid whose parents are divorced is more likely has psychological troubles than those with a harmonious family. By contrast, as we all know, good education will positively cultivate a person’s personality and improve his self-restraint in a big way.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that partly because of different nature, partly because of different nurture, people have their unique personality.雅思考试写作范文11The computer is widely used in education and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?With more and more extensive use of computers in education, some people claim that the importance attached to teachers has been jeopardized. Therefore, computers will replaceteachers in the classroom. However, it seems quite clear to me that learning from teachers is the most important way that cannot be substituted for students.Naturally, some people maintain that computer should instead of the old way of education. They hold that the strong function of the computer offers a new mode of education, which is more interesting, more vivid and more acceptable by children. The students will not face to the serious teachers and calm classes any more, which are replaced by a brand-new world offered by the Internet. In addition, this can decrease the investment on the foundational education and save the human resources and material resources.As an assistant, computers do help teachers with their work, but they can never replace the important role of a real teacher. The main functions of any computer are storage and calculation. It cannot think on its own anyway. All the teaching data stored in computers are the essence of teaching experience generalized by many teachers during their work. Hence, to assist education, what a computer can do is just to repeat the contents summarized by real teachers.In addition, each student has different talents and different defects, and accordingly, they may come across various problems during their study. Computer programmer designing the software, however, cannot predict these problems. Therefore, a single computer can never solve these problems without a teacher’s guidanceFurthermore, if the significance of teacher has been weakened, the number of teachers may be decreased, that is to say, many teachers may be laid-off. If such a case comes to reality, series of social problems will break out, such as the drop of working opportunity which will surely make the burden of whole society become heavier and heavier.In conclusion, although computer-aided-education has spread widely, teachers still play s crucial part in the classroom, which cannot and will not be replaced by computer.雅思考试写作范文12In this IT age, computers are widely used in the classroom in order to enrich the methods of teaching. This phenomenon gives some the illusion that the thing teaching students is no longer the teacher but a computer. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.As another machines, computer doesn’t enable to control itself. Though computers are capable of learning from their mistakes and improving on their performance, they need details instructions from human being in order to be able to operate. They can never, as it were lead independent lives, no mention teaching students. In case a computer lacks the control of a teacher, there is no difference between a computer and waste.Not only this, but computers, unlike a teacher, can’t solve a variety of new problems. Everything is developing in today’s society, including education. For example, a student suddenly asks a creative question that the computer isn’t programmed for, it can do nothing, while teacher can explain clearly though abundant teaching experience.Last but not least, the computer can’t communicate with students from emotion. Such as an eyesight or gesture of teacher can transfer his or her idea and feeling to students. In this way,students can feel more human touch in the class. In comparison, the computer is too dry and dusty to understand.All in all, no matter how nice a computer is, it can’t take the place of teacher. Of course, I don’t mean that computer is useless. In contrary, I believe it will become the most powerful assistants to teacher in further.雅思考试写作范文13Computer, the most exciting and significant invention in 20 century, will reshape our lives and our world. As a result, some people proclaim that computers should be involved into our classroom, and replace the roles of human teachers. However, I cannot agree with their point of view.Admittedly, as the useful tools, computers can become the optimum assistants for human teachers in the classroom. To beginning, vivid pictures shown on screen can motivate students’ interest and curiosity dramatically. Moreover, the combination of computers and Internet can provide children the abundant information. Although computers enjoy considerable merits, they cannot compare with human teachers for two main reasons. Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: computers are not as qualified as human teachers in academic fields. As we all know, students can get the final result of a mathematic question under the help of computers, however, they are still confused on the whole computing process. By contrast, our human teachers’ performance is much better in those cases. They not only can teach students how to analyze and compute the question, but also can remind them what are the possible errors that they may meet. Thus, human teachers are more adequate than computers in academic aspect. The second advantage of human teachers is they can guide students to deal with some psychological problems that they meet in schools. In China, sometimes, teachers even burden many responsibilities that students’ parents have. For example, as for the student with rebellious spirit, the important duty for teachers is to prevent the student from campus violence, even crime. Obviously, computers cannot do that.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the positions of human teachers are unshakable, and computers cannot take the places of them.。

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要点1. 这个饼形图表现了导致土地退化的三个主要原因。

2. 表格中列举的三个地区土地退化的原因各有不同考生可能产生的错误理解和问题1. 第二个表格中列举的数字是某种原因导致的退化的土地在所有退化土地中所占的比例,而不是在所有土地(包括退化的土地和建议的写作结构,对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。

介绍部分应该把题目用自己的话重写一遍。

最好用一段描述饼形图,另起一段描述图表。

可以直接引用图表中的数据(切记这些数据是退化土地面积的比例),或者指出相对的比例(见参考范文)。

最后应该有一个简短的结论。

参考范文：The pie chart and table show how land around the world was degraded during the 1990s –the former on a worldwide scale and the latter in three different regions.Worldwide, over-grazing was the biggest cause of land degradation (35%), with deforestation causing 30% and over-cultivation causing slightly less (28%). Other factors caused 7% of land degradation.The table shows that, during the 1990s, 23% of the land in Europe was degraded, more than in Oceania (13%) and far more than in North America (5%). In Oceania, over-grazing was primarily responsible for land degradation, with deforestation accounting for far less and none caused through over-cultivation. In North America, over-cultivation was the main reason, with about a third of land degradation being caused by over-grazing and very little being caused by deforestation. In Europe, deforestation was responsible for about 40% of the land degradation, over-cultivation about 30% and over-grazing about 20%.To summarise, land degradation was due to three main factors and these factors differed in proportion in different regions.(168 words)饼形图和图表反映了20 世纪90 年代全世界土地的退化情况——前者是针对世界范围, 后者是针对三个不同的区域。

You should spend about20minutes on this task.The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.The graph shows the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents over a ten year period.In1996an average of just under10,000journeys per day were being made by residents,while approximately half that number were made by non-residents.Over the subsequent three years,resident journeys remained reasonably stable,while non-resident journeys increased each year,exceeding8,000per day in 1999.In early2000,parking meters were introduced into the city centre,and this had the effect of virtually halving resident traffic,although non-resident traffic decreased only slightly.By the end of2002,the number of residentjourneys had not altered significantly,but non-resident journeys had risen to their1999level.At this point,Westgate Street and Park Lane were pedestrianised.This resulted in a dramatic decline in non-resident traffic, and a slight decrease in resident traffic.From this point onward,resident traffic remained more or less at the same level,while non-resident traffic resumed its upward trend,reaching nearly5,000journeys per day in2005.(174words)。

雅思c11t4大作文英文回答：In today's globalized world, being bilingual has become increasingly important. Not only does it open up more job opportunities, but it also allows for better communication and understanding between different cultures. As someone who is fluent in both English and Chinese, I can personally attest to the benefits of being bilingual.Firstly, being bilingual enhances career prospects. In today's competitive job market, employers often value candidates who can speak multiple languages. This is particularly true in industries such as tourism, customer service, and international business. For example, a hotel manager who can communicate with both English-speaking and Chinese-speaking guests will have a significant advantage over someone who can only speak one language. Being bilingual also opens up opportunities for international assignments and promotions, as companies increasinglyexpand their operations globally.Secondly, being bilingual allows for better communication and understanding between different cultures. Language is not just a means of communication, but also a reflection of a culture's values, beliefs, and traditions. By learning a second language, we gain insight into another culture's way of life. This helps to break down barriers and foster mutual understanding and respect. For instance, when I was studying in the United States, my ability to speak both English and Chinese allowed me to connect with people from different backgrounds and engage in meaningful conversations. It also enabled me to bridge the cultural gap and act as a cultural ambassador between the two countries.Lastly, being bilingual has cognitive benefits. Numerous studies have shown that bilingual individuals often have better problem-solving skills, enhanced memory, and improved multitasking abilities. This is because learning a second language requires mental flexibility and the ability to switch between different language systems.For example, when I am speaking English, I need to think in English and translate my thoughts into words. This constant mental exercise helps to keep the brain sharp and agile.中文回答：在当今全球化的世界中，双语能力变得越来越重要。

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剑桥雅思写作13test1task1真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目：WRITING TASK 1You should spend abo20 minutes on this task.The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.解题思路：1. 图表类型：地图题2. 主体段时态：一般过去时3. 题目要求：两幅地图分别展示了2007年和2010年去城市医院的通行道路。

选择一些主要的特点来描述并作出一些相关的对比。

4. 描述重点：1)2007年地图中的city hospital的东南风是staff and public car park，而在2010年这个地方变为了staff car park。

2)2007年Hospital Rd 两边的六个bus stops 没有了，在道路西边建造了较大的bus station，并有道路通往北边和南边两个环岛，分别与围绕医院的ring road 和city road相连。

范文：SAMPLE ANSWERThis is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band5.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:The candidate has identified all the key features (hospital, ring road, new public car park, staff car park and bus station in 2010) but the descriptions are not always accurate e.g. [two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff carpark] whereas the staff car park was formerly a car park for both staff and public, while the mention of the bus station is not developed. Organisation is clear, however, with some good use of cohesive devices [According to | Apart from | The further additional features], although there is an error in the use of reference pronouns [This/These two features]. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task [two different years | features | remained | additional], though [features] is over-used.A spelling error is noted in the second line [sourrounded] but this does not cause any difficulty for the reader; similarly, the use of [around-turn] can be easily understood as ‘roundabout’. There is a mix of simple and complex sentences, mainly used accurately.Two maps illustrate, the way to get to a city hospital of two different years (2007 and 2010).According to both maps, the main features which is city hospital is sourrounded by Ring Road. In these two maps, there have been two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff car park. Apart from these two features there are some features that shows on 2010 map but haven’t shown on 2007 map. The additional features that appear on the map of 2010 are public car parte which located on the east-side of the city hospital. The further additional features are two around-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station.Overall, there are two major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010 map. These features are city hospital andstaff car park. However, there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007. These features are public car park, bus station and two around-turns.剑桥雅思写作13test1task2真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目：WRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.解题思路：1. 话题和题型分类社会文化类单边讨论题型2. 题目分析居住在一个你不得不说外语的国家可能会导致严重的社交问题以及实际问题。