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Section ⅤWriting——写一个学生的自我画像[文体指导]本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的“自我简介”。
这种题目要求我们对自身的客观条件，个性特征及未来的理想目标等进行描述整合。
一、基本框架1．开头(beginning)——直接交代自己的姓名、年龄、身高和就读学校等。
2．主体(body)——介绍自己的性格特点、爱好和学习风格、并适当说明原因。
3．结尾(ending)——写出自己对未来的理想或计划。
二、注意事项1．开门见山，直入主题，写清楚自己的姓名、年龄、学校等，不要过于复杂和描述过多。
2．结合自己的性格特点、爱好和学习风格等进行合理描述；注意文章的层次结构，适当选用一些较为高级的词汇和句式。
3．文章结尾要明确自己的理想目标，且为之付出努力。
[亮点句式]常见精彩开头1．My name is...，I'm in Grade 10 at...school.2．I'm...，I'm studying at...school.3．I'm...，I'm 16 years old.4．I'm...，coming from....5．My name is...，studying at a senior high school in....描述性格特征、兴趣爱好、学习方式的常用句型1．I have an outgoing personality so I can make friends....2．I'm an active person and I love sports.3．My favourite subject is....4．I like...best.5．...is my hobby.结尾段常用句型1．I plan to become...in the future.2．My dream is to start my pany when I grow up.3．I wish I would be a．..one day.4．I hope I can become...in the end.5．I feel much more confident that...6．I think that my future tomorrow will....[写作任务]假如你是李华，请根据下列内容，为自己写一篇“自我画像”。
Period Four Grammar—Subjunctive Mood (1)感知以下课文原句，补全方框下的小题1．在虚拟条件句中，谓语动词用一般过去时(be动词常用were)表示与现在事实相反的情况，主句谓语则用“would/should/could/might＋动词原形”表示。
(如句1、2、4和5)2．在虚拟条件句中，谓语动词一般用过去完成时表示与过去事实可能不符的情况，主句则用“would/should/could/might＋have＋过去分词”表示。
(如句3)虚拟语气是英语考查的重点之一。
虚拟语气用来表示说话人所说的话并不是事实，而是一种假设、愿望、怀疑或推测。
其使用情况如下：一、虚拟语气在if条件从句中的用法注意：1．虚拟条件句中有had，should，were时，可将if去掉，把had，should，were提到主语之前，即倒装结构，如：Were theyherenow，they couldhelp us.如果现在他们在这里，他们就能帮助我们。
HadIworked harderatschool，I’dhavegot abetterjob.如果我在学校学习更努力的话，就会找到一份更好的工作。
Shouldheagree togothere，we wouldsend himthere.要是他答应去的话，我们就派他去。
2．有时条件从句表示的动作和主句表示的动作发生的时间不一致，这类句子称为错综时间条件句。
此时主、从句动词的形式应根据各自所表示的时间进行调整。
Ifhe hadtaken myadvicethen，he wouldn’tbe introublenow. 如果那时他听取了我的建议，现在他就不会有麻烦了。
Ifshe wereto leave，I wouldhaveheard aboutit.如果她要走，我会听说的。
3．某些介词或介词短语，如butfor，without，副词或连词，如otherwise，however，or，but等也可以表达一个暗含的虚拟的条件，这种情况下要仔细阅读上下文的语境。
Section Ⅴ Writing—劝说信劝说信是指以信件的形式表达自己的观点或立场，并期待对方认同或接受。
一、基本结构第一部分：引入。
写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。
如果需要的话，也可以大致作一下自我介绍。
第二部分：阐述。
这是说服性信函的主体和核心部分。
写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。
理由要客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明。
同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功力，以便更好地展现自己的立场。
第三部分：总结。
可以用生动的语言重申自己的核心观点，或以情动人、引起共鸣，或升华延伸、画龙点睛。
这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力，切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。
二、增分佳句(一)劝说信开头常用句式——引入观点1．Now it is commonly held that ... They think ... But I doubt whether ...2．These days we are often told that ... But is this really the case ...3．Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ..., but I conceive it differently.4．Currently there is a widespread concern that ...5．Now people in growing numbers are coming to realise that ...(二)劝说信主体常用句式——阐述理由1．The reason for ... is that ...2．The reasons for ... are as follows. First, ... Second, ... Last but not least, ...3．On the one hand, ...; on the other hand, ...4．We may take a common example to show ...5．A recent study suggests/shows that ...6．According to the statistics provided by ..., it can be seen that ...7．There is good evidence to show that ...8．No one can ignore the fact that ...(三)劝说信结尾常用句式——总结1．In short, ...2．In conclusion, ...3．As far as I’m concerned, ...4．From what has been discussed above/Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that ...[题目要求]假设你叫李华，请给Nicolaus Copernicus(尼古拉·哥白尼)写一封信劝说他出版自己的理论著作，这样可以让每个人都了解他的理论，从而推动科学的发展。
Unit 1 Art一、课前基础自查(一)分类记单词——省时高效from the traditional style of painting were the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris. 在那些突破传统绘画风格的画家中有印象派画家，他们在巴黎生活和工作。
句首的全部倒装。
周围，桌上有三本书。
In that picture, around thetable with three books on itsit_three_students.3.Henry Clay Frick, a rich New Yorker, died in 1919, leaving hishouse, furniture and art collection to the American people.亨利·克莱·弗里克是纽约的一位富豪，于1919年去世，把他的房子、家具和艺术收藏品留给了美国人民。
动词ing短语作状语常常表示一种必然的结果。
(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)首先，一座新的体育馆被建立起来，成为我们学校的新地标(landmark)。
To begin with, a new stadium hasbeen built up,becoming_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.二、课堂重点深化1．faith n．信任；信心；信念；承诺[自主体验]单句语法填空①I have lost faith in that company, but I kept faith with the manager.②History is the best teacher. It faithfully (faith) records the development path of each country and foretells the future to us.③Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful (faith) to each other.[系统归纳](1)have/lose faith in 对……有/失去信心keep/break faith with 信守/违背对……的承诺(2)faithful adj. 忠实的；守信的faithfully adv. 忠实地；诚心诚意地[重点强化]佳句时时写④(2014·广东高考写作)依我看来，她的慷慨不仅能帮助那些处于困境的人实现梦想、重拾生活信心，而且还能激励更多人参加这样的善举。
Section ⅤAssessing Your Progress & Video Time[基础测评]Ⅰ. 单句语法填空1. Since his parents died early, he had to earn his own living when he wasa (teenage).2. There are lots of people there who can (actual) help you.3. A survey showed people were (confuse) about what they should eat to stay healthy.4. He spoke three languages (fluent).5. I recommend that he (see) a lawyer.6. This is one of the greatest scientific (advance) of the 20th century.7. They (obvious) appreciate your help very much.8. Someone had to give orders and take (responsible) for mistakes.9. (read) in bed is bad for your eyes.10. I’ll give you all the facts so you can judge yourself. 答案：1. teenager 2. actually 3. confused 4. fluently5. see6. advances7. obviously8. responsibility9. Reading10. thatⅡ. 完成句子1. They(已经习惯) gettingup early in the morning.2. Most people (愿意坐火车而不愿坐汽车).3. While I’m out you might (打扫干净) the kitchen.4. This programme (不适合) children.5. Which university did he (毕业于)?6. Why do so many people(报名参加) the civil service examination every year?7. The man, who had drunk wine before driving, was thought to(对……负责) the accident.8. It is natural for people to (被……吸引) beautiful things.9. Today we’re going to(特别关注) the trouble of homeless people.10. He has recently(开始沉迷于) computer games.答案：1. have got used to 2. prefer trains to buses3. clean up4. is not suitable for5. graduate from6. sign up for7. be responsible for8. be attracted to9. focus on10. become addicted toⅢ. 句式仿写1. I’ll find a way to improve on my own so that I can make the team next year.句式:so that引导目的状语从句仿写:学生应该专注于学习,这样才能有一个更加光明的未来。
Unit 1 Art1.3 Grammar & WritingGrammar: 虚拟语气（Ⅰ）（Subjunctive Mood (Ⅰ)）一、语气的分类语气是动词的一种形式，表示说话人对某一行为或事情的看法或态度。
英语中的语气分为陈述语气、祈使语气和虚拟语气三类。
1．陈述语气表示动作或状态是现实的、确定的或符合事实的，用于陈述句、疑问句和某些感叹句。
☛There are two sides to every question.每个问题都有两面性。
2．祈使语气表示说话人对对方的请求或命令。
☛Please lend me your dictionary.请把你的字典借给我用一下。
3．虚拟语气用来表示所说的不是事实，或者是不可能发生的情况，而是一种假设、愿望或建议等。
虚拟语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示。
☛If I were a bird，I could fly in the air.如果我是一只小鸟，我就能在空中飞行。
二、虚拟语气在条件句中的应用包含条件从句的句子称为条件句。
条件句分为两类：一类是真实条件句，一类是虚拟条件句。
如果假设的情况很可能发生，就用真实条件句。
☛If he has time, he wil come. 如果他有时间，他会来的。
☛He won’t succeed unless we plan well. 他不会成功的，除非我们计划好。
如果假设的情况发生的可能性不大，则用虚拟条件句。
虚拟条件句分为三种，见下表：假设情况条件从句的谓语形式主句的谓语形式与现在事实相反过去式（be的过去式常用were）would/should/might/could + 动词原形与将来事实相反(1) 过去式(2)should + 动词原形would/should/might/could + 动词原形(3)were to + 动词原形与过去事实相反过去完成时（had + 过去分词）would/should/might/could + 过去分词☛If he had time now，he would(could，might)go with you.要是他现在有时间，他会和你一起去的。
Unit 1 Art课时跟踪练（三）Learning about Language & UsingLanguage一、全练语言点，基稳才能楼高[本课语言点针对练习]Ⅰ.单词拼写1．What is the specific (确切的) aim since you are working so hard?2．Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures (人物) in the world.3．Which is your preference (偏爱), tea or coffee?4．They are appealing (呼吁) to the public for donation for the earthquakehit areas.5．His skill in dealing with emergency has earned him a reputation (名声)．6．Most people hope to get permanent (永久的) employment.7．The Chinese civilization (文明) is one of the oldest in the world.8．An agreement seems to be impossible because the majority of the committee (委员会) members are against it.9．Carrying two bunches (束) of roses, he walked happily into the room.10．Severe allergic (过敏的) reactions may accompany the use of the drug.Ⅱ.单句改错1．The software is specific to solve that problem. solve→solving2．Being public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be.Being后加a3．I'd choose the small car in preference for the larger one.for→to4．Disadvantages as they have, online games never fail to appeal a large number of teenagers.appeal后加to5．School started, but I felt more and more as if I am in a foreign country now.am→were6．Being allergic some materials in it made him give up.allergic后加to7．He gave a bunch of flower to his girlfriend.flower→flowers8．Both of his parents died in the war, leaves him an orphan.leaves→leaving Ⅲ.选词填空．To_be_specific,_he is 54 years old, though he looks much younger.2．The present situation is very complex, so I think it will take me some time to figure_out its reality.3．She has_a_preference_for blue, while I like red better.4．The police made_an_appeal_to the public to remain calm.5．You look much younger in_the_flesh than in the photographs.6．My mother is_allergic_to many substances, such as flowers, so she can't touch or even get close to them.7．From the drawer Mr. Mach took out a chain, with a_bunch_of keys dangling at its end.8．More_than twenty people were injured in the accident.[本单元语言点温故练习]Ⅰ.用所给词的适当形式填空1．Our teacher insisted that we (should)_discuss (discuss) the questions in groups of four.2．If I were (be) you, I would ask our teacher for advice.3．If it were_not (not be) for peace, we could not be living a happy life today.4．I wish it were (be) spring in my hometown all the year round.5．I don't have a cellphone. If I had one, it would_be (be) convenient for meAfter repeated failure, he_lost_faith_in_himself.Teamwork is required in order to achieve_these_aims.要达到这些目标需要齐心协力。
专题01 Great scientistsFive Faiths of Newton —＂The Greatest Scientist In History＂＂人类历史上最伟大的科学家＂牛顿的五则信条Patiently Think＂If I have done the public any service, it is due to my patient thought.＂We don’t spend enough time patiently thinking! Albert Einst ein said, ＂It’s not that I’m so smart, it’s just that I stay with problems longer.＂ If you would just block out some time daily to ＂think＂, you could solve many of your problems. You could even solve some of the world’s problems.耐心思考＂我之所以能够为社会作出什么贡献，这都要归功于耐心的思考。
＂我们总是不愿拿出足够的时间耐心思考问题！艾尔伯特·爱因斯坦曾说过：＂我并不是天才，只是我比普通人思考问题的时间更长。
＂如果你能够每天抽出一部分时间＂思考＂，你的很多问题都将得到解决，你甚至可以解决一些全球性的问题。
Labor to be Tactful＂Tact is the art of making a point without making an enemy.＂ Solomon said, ＂A gentle answer turns away wrath, but a harsh word stirs up anger.＂ We can all polish up on our tact, our diplomacy, our discretion, our delicacy, and our gracefulness. Solomon went on to say, ＂Like apples of gold in settings of silver is a word spokenin right circumstances,＂ labor to be tactful inall you do.机智处世＂机智是一门艺术，它不仅能使你表达自己的看法，还不会使你树敌。
2017-2018学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题汉(考试时间:2小时满分:100分)第I卷选择题(满分60分)阅读理解（共20小题,每题2分，满分40分）第一节：阅读理解（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的选项中选出最佳选项。
AWhen you walk along a street in a big city in the United States , you may see clocks in most stores. Radio announcers give t he correct time during the day. People there think that it is imp ortant to know the time. Most Americans have watches. They want to do certain things at certain times. They do not want to be late.Not all people all over the world value time. Suppose you visi t a certain country in South America. You would find that peop le living there do not like to rush. If you had an appointment (约会)with someone, he would probably be late. He would not care for arriving on time. In some countries in South America, ev en the radio programs may not begin right on time, nor do the radio announcers think it important to announce the right time. Many people regard a clock as a machine. It seems to them t hat a person who does everything on time is controlled by a m achine. They do not want a clock or any machine to have that much power over their lives.1. There are clocks in most stores in the US cities because __ ____.A. people in the stores want to sell these clocksB. people think it important to know the timeC. bosses want to make their stores beautifulD. they needn't wear watches when they are away from hom e2. The underlined word "rush" in the passage most probably means ______.A. “run”B. “walk”C.“hurry”D. “move”3. If you had an appointment with someone in some place in South America, he might not arrive on time, and this is becau se ______.A. he didn't have a watch with himB. he forgot to have a look at a watch or a clockC. he didn't like an appointment with someoneD. he didn't think it important to arrive on time4. In some countries in South America ______.A. the radio announcers do think it important to announce th e exact timeB. the radio programs may start a bit early or lateC. most people do not want to be controlled by othersD. many people think a clock has much power5.which statement is not true?A. The radio announcers in South America always announce t he right time.B. You can see clocks in many stores in USA.C.All the people in the world don’t value the time.D. Most Americans own watches.BFitzgerald, a very wealthy English man, had only one child, a son, who naturally was the apple of his eye. His wife died whe n the child was in his early teens. So Fitzgerald devoted hims elf to fathering the kid. Unluckily the son died in his late teens. Meanwhile, Fitzgerald's wealth was increasing all the time. He spent a lot on art works of the masters. Later Fitzgerald hims elf became seriously ill. Before his death, he had carefully pre pared his will as to how his wealth would be settled——to sell his entire collection at an auction(拍卖）.Because of the large quantity and high quality of his collection , a huge crowd of possible buyers gathered for the auction. M any of them were museum directors and private collectors ea ger to bid（出价）. Before the auction, the art works were shown, among w hich was a painting of Fitzgerald's son by an unknown artist. Because of its poor quality, it received little attention.When it was time for the auction, the auctioneer gaveled（敲槌）the crowd to attention. First the lawyer read from Fitzgerald's will that the first art work to be auctioned was the painting of h is son.The poor-quality painting didn't receive any bidders except one——the old servant who had attended to the son and loved him, a nd who for emotional reasons offered the only bid.As soon as the servant bought the painting for less than one English pound, the auctioneer stopped the bidding and asked the lawyer to read again from the will. The crowd became qui et, and the lawyer read from the will: “Whoever buys the painti ng of my son gets all my collection.” Then the auction was ov er.6. Fitzgerald was __________.A. a museum directorB. a master of artC. an art collectorD. an art auctioneer7. Which of the following is TRUE according to the story?A. Fitzgerald took care of his son all by himself.B. Fitzgerald lost his wife and his only son within 10 years.C. Fitzgerald became seriously ill because of the death of his son.D. Fitzgerald decided to leave everything he had to his servan t.8. Fitzgerald's will showed __________.A. his desire to fool the biddersB. his sadness at the death of his sonC. his regret of having no heir (继承人）D. his invaluable love for his son9. What helped the old servant win the whole collection of Fitz gerald's?A. No more than one pound.B. His emotion for his young master.C. Great increase of his wealth.D. His strong passion for art.10. At the result of the auction, the old man would feel more t han ______________.A. sadB. surprisedC. interestedD. expectedCWe parents often take material things for love. “I give him eve rything,” a disappointed mother complains. “New shoes, video -games, and his own TV. You’d think he’d at least show me re spect!”Of course, love and presents are related. Most parents work h ard to earn money. They want their children to have more tha n they did and have better lives. The problem is, most childre n don’t connect the things parents buy with the labor that pays for them. Children have more, but our culture——and television in particular——teaches them that more is never enough. Having more does n ot mean that a child feels loved.From a parent’s point of view, children are not thankful. But thi s has to do with their natural growth. Young children see their parents as all-mighty(万能的). If parents fail to provide what they want, it must be a matt er of choice. It’s normal for children, even school-age ones, not to be able to take another person’s point of vie w. For example, they may dislike their parents for working lon g hours, and not realize that the parent would also rather hav e more time at home.In addition to giving presents, we have to find other ways to e xpress love and create memories. Reading or telling stories to gether, making music and playing games are all ways for fami lies to spend time without spending money. Traditions like rea ding favorite poems and even snowball fights all serve the pur pose（达到目的）. Most importantly, as parents, we have to learn to hold b ack some energy from our tiring jobs. When we’re present for our children, we ourselves become the presents we want to gi ve.11. The underlined word “them”( in Paragraph 2) refers to____ __________.A. the things parents buyB. parentsC. childrenD. bett er lives12. According to the passage, children______.A. want fewer presentsB. want presents rather than loveC. are taught to ask for moreD. can live better without their parents.13. We can judge from the passage that there is _________.A. a heavy job load for some parentsB. a lack of money in some familiesC. misunderstanding between parents and childrenD. love between parents and children14. The last paragraph of the passage means that______.A. our children are good presents to usB. we should spend more time with our childrenC. we ourselves need some presentsD. we should give more presents to our children15. The best title for the passage is .A. Family LifeB. Children’s EducationC. Love and PresentsD. Children and Parents第二节：任务型阅读（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。
姓名，年级：时间：Section ⅤAssessing Your Progress &Video Time[基础测评]Ⅰ. 根据句意及汉语提示写出单词1。
Generally speaking, the writing of poems， stories or plays is often called （创造性的）writing。
2. This has been my worst time for injuries since I started as a（职业的） player。
3. Some students persuaded the wealthy businessman to (捐献) twenty old computers to the primary school.4. My assistant will be in charge of the (部门) in my absence。
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What’s known to us all is that exercise is an important part in weight(减少，损失).6。
At 22 Higgins won the World Championship at his first (尝试） in 1972, and again in 1982.7. You should have a (均衡的) diet， and you should eat fruit every day， and more vegetables。
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Our (抗议) was successful， for the Ministeragreed to reconsider the matter.9. After working devotedly in the company for about 20 years， Mr Li got（晋升） at last.10。
Section ⅤWriting——建议信[文体指导]本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。
这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
一、基本框架1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。
2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。
3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
二、注意事项1．开门见山，直入主题。
在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。
写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。
2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。
在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。
要用事实说话，以增强说服力。
3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。
4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。
[亮点句式]首段常用的句型：1．I'm sorry you have trouble in...2．I am writing to share some advice with you.3．You have asked me for my advice about...4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning...5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestion.提出建议时常用的句型：1．I think it would be a good idea if...2．In my opinion it would be wise to...3．I suggest that you should...4．In my opinion，you'd better...5．I advise you to...6．If I were you，I would...7．Why not...？/Why don't you...?8．How about...？/What about...?结尾段常用的句型：1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details.3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.5．I hope you will take my advice into account.6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.[写作任务]你叫张伟。
Unit 1 Art Section Ⅴ Writing 建议信本单元的写作任务是建议信。
建议信是英语中常见的一种应用文体，就是在你所写的信中发表你的建议与看法。
建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对对方的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。
一、基本结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。
首段：表明意图，陈述事由。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。
通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议。
结尾段：礼貌地总结或表示期盼回复。
二、注意事项1．注意结构。
通常以“三段式”结构行文。
2．客观地提出建议，针对对方的问题，给出你的观点。
3．语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。
三、增分佳句(一)首段常用句式1．I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well.很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地欣赏艺术。
2．I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes.很遗憾你在物理学习方面有困难。
3．I have learned that you have some trouble in learning art and I would like to offer you the following tips.我知道你在艺术学习方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
(二)陈述建议句式1．If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best then you should tell him.如果你觉得这阻止了你做得最好，那你应该告诉他。
2．①It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action.②Only wh en students are not trying as hard as they can is a teacher forced totake action.只有当学生学习不尽力的时候老师才会被迫采取措施。
3．It is high time that we put an end to the trend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
4．It is time to take the advice of eating more fruit.该是采纳多吃水果的建议的时候了。
5．In my opinion, the Great Wall should be protected.依我看，长城应该得到保护。
6．It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success.这真的是一个好主意而且每个人都希望它能成功。
7．You should eat food with less fat.你应该吃脂肪含量更少的食物。
(三)结尾句式1．I do hope you will consider my tips/suggestions.真心希望你能考虑我的建议。
2．I hope you will find these tips helpful.我希望这些建议对你来说有帮助。
[题目要求]假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发email给你，就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。
请根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封email，推荐他买电子词典。
1．方便、快捷；2．内置多部词典、能发音；3．能储存资料；参考词汇：电子词典electronic dictionary；内存RAM第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为建议信；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第二人称；3．确定时态：主要使用一般将来时和一般现在时。
二、构思第一部分，提出建议——买电子词典。
第二部分，给出该建议的理由：方便、快捷、能发音、能储存资料。
第三部分，希望采纳该建议。
第二步：核心词汇想周全1．a_wise_choice 明智的选择2．lead_to/contribute_to 促成3．convenient 方便的4．as_soon_as_possible 尽可能快5．consult/look_up 查阅(资料)6．meet_with 遇到7．a_number_of/a_variety_of 很多8．why_not 为什么不第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．对你来说，买一本电子词典是一个明智的选择。
(It is＋n. for sb. to do sth.) It_is_a_wise_choice_for_you_to_buy_an_electronic_dictionary.2．有几个因素促成了我的建议。
(there be; which引导的定语从句)There_are_several_factors_which_lead_to_my_suggestion.3．无论你到哪里去，带着电子词典都很方便，因为它比普通字典小得多。
(It is＋adj. for sb. to do sth.; wherever引导的地点状语从句；as引导的原因状语从句) It_is_convenient_for_you_to_carry_the_electronic_dictionary_wherever_you_go _as_it_is_much_smaller_than_the_common_one.4．在电子词典中，你会非常快地得到你所想要的。
(what引导的宾语从句)You_can_get_what_you_want_in_the_electronic_dictionary_as_soon_as_possible.5．查阅这种字典很容易。
(动名词短语作主语；习语a piece of cake)Consulting_this_kind_of_dictionary_is_really_a_piece_of_cake.6．当遇到有用的材料时，你可以尽可能多地储存下来。
(when引导的时间状语从句) When_you_meet_with_the_useful_material,_you_can_store_it_as_much_as_possibl e.7．它能够给你生动、清晰和正确的发音，就像一位老师站在你的旁边。
(主语＋谓语＋宾语；like)It_can_give_you_a_vivid,_clear_and_correct_pronunciation_just_like_a_teache r_standing_by_you.8．这让它从众多的其他字典中脱颖而出。
(make it outstanding)That_makes_it_outstanding_from_a_variety_of_others.9．既然有这么多的优点，为什么不买一个呢？(since引导的原因状语从句；why not) Since_there_are_so_many_advantages,_why_not_buy_one?10．真心希望我的建议会对您有用。
(do强调谓语动词；主语＋系动词＋表语)I_do_hope_my_suggestions_will_be_useful_to_you.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用现在分词短语作定语改写句2There_are_several_factors_leading_to_my_suggestion.2．用with复合结构作原因状语及wherever状语从句的省略形式改写句3With_the_electronic_dictionary_being_much_smaller_than_the_common_one,_it_i s_convenient_for_you_to_carry_it_wherever_going.3．用for合并句4、5You_can_get_what_you_want_in_the_electronic_dictionary_as_soon_as_possible, _for_consulting_this_kind_of_dictionary_is_really_a_piece_of_cake.4．用状语从句的省略形式改写句6When_meeting_with_the_useful_material,_you_can_store_it_as_much_as_possible .5．①用which引导非限制性定语从句合并句7、8It_can_give_you_a_vivid,_clear_and_correct_pronunciation_just_like_a_teache r_standing_by_you,_which_makes_it_outstanding_from_a_variety_of_others.②把句8改为what引导的主语从句；同时把句7改为that引导的表语从句What_makes_it_outstanding_from_a_variety_of_others_is_that_it_can_give_you_ a_vivid,_clear_and_correct_pronunciation_just_like_a_teacher_standing_by_you.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Zhang_Ke，As_for_the_problem_you_put_forward_in_your_last_letter,_I_think_it_is_a_wis e_choice_for_you_to_buy_an_electronic_dictionary.There_are_several_factors_leading_to_my_suggestion._To_begin_with,_with_the _electronic_dictionary_being_much_smaller_than_the_common_one,_it_is_convenient _for_you_to_carry_it_wherever_going._Additionally,_you_can_get_what_you_want_in _the_electronic_dictionary_as_soon_as_possible,_for_consulting_this_kind_of_dic tionary_is_really_a_piece_of_cake._When_meeting_with_the_useful_material,_you_c an_store_it_as_much_as_possible_because_there_is_much_RAM_in_it._What_makes_it_ outstanding_from_a_variety_of_others,_I_think,_is_that_it_can_give_you_a_vivid, _clear_and_correct_pronunciation_just_like_a_teacher_standing_by_you._Since_the re_are_so_many_advantages,_why_not_buy_one?I_do_hope_my_suggestions_will_be_useful_to_you.Yours,_Li_Hua百度文库是百度发布的供网友在线分享文档的平台。
