雅思大作文案例分享及解析

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析:毕业后GAP的利弊8.28雅思大作文Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?一些学生高中毕业后选择出去旅游或工作一段时间而不是直接上大学。

这样做对他们的学业有什么好处和坏处？思路解析这是一道利弊类的大作文，讨论的是高中毕业后gap一段时间对学生学业的利弊影响。

这个话题2020年8月曾考过一道同类型的题目，因此同学们一定要认真准备。

审题的时候要注意限定对象：高中毕业即将升入大学的学生，讨论的点可以分别围绕旅游和工作来展开，利弊一定要针对学业来说。

同学们在回应写作任务的时候利弊都要展开写，然后阐述自己的立场。

我们一起来归纳下GAP的好处和坏处。

我们先来看坏处：出去旅游或工作延缓了大学的学习时间，这样会在学业上给学生带来一定的挑战，比如被同龄人超过，重新熟悉知识点有困难等。

刚毕业的高中生出去工作或旅游很容易分散精力，对他们之后的大学学习是有不利影响的。

最后我们再来看下好处：出去工作对一个高中毕业生来说是一个好机会，可以学习到课本以外的知识，有助于开阔学生的眼界，进而更好地理解这个世界。

高中毕业出去旅游可以趁机放松心情，在放松的同时思考未来的学业方向，为之后更好地学习做足准备。

高分范文It is true these days that many high school leavers choose to start their work or take a trip before going to university. While a gap year can bring some immediate drawbacks, I am convinced that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for their lives.On the one hand, young students are very likely to encounter several difficulties when delaying their university study. One of these problems is the delay in academic progress caused by spending one year off school. It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision. As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers. Besides, the life outside the university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences.On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the positive effects. A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university. Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only an understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help thembecome more mature. When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university right away.In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the benefits of a gap year are more significant for the reasons mentioned.相关词汇high school leavers 高中毕业生start their work 开始工作take a trip 旅游long-term benefits 长期益处encounter several difficulties 遇到一些困难academic progress 学术进步become familiar with 对……熟悉catch up with 赶上；追上overwhelming adj. 势不可挡的, 压倒一切的; 巨大的inexperienced adj. 经验不足的,不熟练的potential dangers 潜在的危险outweighed vt. 比…重（在重量上）；比…重要；比…有价值applying for a position 申请职位extensive experience 丰富的经验advantageous adj. 有利的。

剑桥雅思14Test1大作文解析雅思写作7分，肯定算高分了。

很多雅思培训机构，甚至学生出分写作6.5时，也要大肆宣传一番。

你们一直以为的7分作文的词汇可能长下面这个样子：但实际上，7分作文的用词长下面这个样子。

在雅思写作的4项评分标准中，前面两项的TR(任务回应)和CC(逻辑连贯与衔接)，本质上是优于后面两项的LR（词汇）与GRA（语法）的。

因为写议论文，最重要的并不是长难句和华丽的词藻，而应该是你的观点和你的论证过程。

以剑桥14Test 1的大作文为例：Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.这又是一道文邹邹的题，题目要我们去讨论：遇到坏的情况时，到底是要接受呢，还是要奋进起来，去改进这些坏情况？我们请AB两个同学来讨论一下：A：“当然不能被动地接受了，我们要用智慧，用方法去突破困难。

”B：“这要看这个坏情况是什么，如果改变不了的，我们就不要无谓地挣扎；如果能够改变的，我们就要去主动解决问题”。

你们觉得哪位同学的话，更有道理呢？这个题目是一个讨论双方的题目：Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.也就是不管你同意观点1，还是同意观点2，还是两个观点都不同意，你都得双方都作出讨论；如果没有双方都讨论的话，那么在TR(任务回应)方面，就会立马被扣上严重的一笔。

遇到这种文邹邹的题，我们是避不了，要用比较语文式的文邹邹去展开的。

Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree.正文：Nowadays, environmental problems is (are/have been) one of the most serious phenomenon (Chinglish, 改为dangerous issues)that threat almost some(every) industrialized countries are facing. However, whether only countries use the resource in environment to increase the quality of life is a controversial issue. （我觉得应该改为：Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development.）In my opinion, it is unavoidable that countries break the surrounding(破坏环境？不这样搭配) if they want to develop the industry and the level of life. (In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result.)Nowadays, environmental problems have been one of the most dangerous issues that threat almost every industrialized countries. Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development. In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result.First, it is obvious the purpose of long-term human activity is to make industrial development（make development没有这个用法哦）and improve the quality of life. This means that there are more and more rubbishes when we are working.（为什么用这么多there be 句型呢）Therefore, if we want to promote the economic （promote economy）, we may damage our environment in the daily life.（in the daily life 很生硬, 改为in unconscious ways）Firstly, the very existence of human beings indeed exerts various influences on the natural environment, such as water pollution, disafforestation and the greenhouse effect. Besides that, human waste pollution has become more and more noteworthy with the fast sprawl of urban districts concerning the unprecedentedly speed of economic development.Moreover, with the population growing by （没这个搭配哈, with the amount of population growing/increasing 差不多）, we need a loads of resource（resources）to support our life. For example, it is allowed by government that every family can get child more than one since 2014 in China.(普遍二胎政策不是这样翻译的哈，还是自己要多查资料) So it maybe（may）consume more resources than before. (it consume，it指代的是什么？)Moreover, larger pollution demands greater amounts of resources to support, a phenomenon that consequently adds more man-made pressure to the natural environment. For instance, Chinese government has issued the universal two-child policy which originally aims at optimizing the demographic structure but may simultaneously bring greater demands of natural resources from the environment.That is not to say we must damage(damage用太多了) our environment if we want to get an increase. Of course, we can raise public's green awareness or encourage low carbon lifestyle when we are working in). But still, it is bad for environment when we develop our)However, it is not always vicious with the intention to develop national strength especially for industrialized countries. If proper measures were taken by both the nation and individuals, a great deal of waste and pollution can be avoided during the development of industries and improvement of civic life quality. For the government, certain restrictive policies on overexploitation of natural resources are beneficial to build a better environment. As for citizens, appropriate appeals to abstemious awareness as well as low-carbon lifestyle can be supplementary solutions to a brighter future.In sum(有这个短语吗？), there are a loads of（重复用了两遍）disadvantages to environment if we want to increase the level of our life（level 不用increase）. Meanwhile, we should not ignore there are some methods to decrease the damage（damage不用decrease）.To sum up, although disadvantages can be arisen in the process of national proceeding and individual advance, it is the cooperative endeavors of the country and the public that can prominently reduce the damage caused by economic growth.问题小结：1.动宾搭配问题很严重，标黄色的部分都是搭配不得当的。

12月17雅思大作文真题解析及Task：Some people think getting old is bad for them in the modern world, while others think older people today live better lives in the past. Discuss both views and give your opinion.这一篇可能用的到的关键词有：1. the old, old people, the elderly, seniors, the aged2. extended family, core family, be isolated/separate from3. in the past, decades ago; at present, currently, in the current era, contemporarily正文：When it comes to the issue about the life quality of the elderly, some people argue that the life quality of the old has been improved a lot, but others believe that individuals still dread growing older.On one hand, the elderly’s lives are better guaranteed by governments in the current era. In the past when there existed wars and other disasters like famine, old citizens cannot enjoy their lives comfortably and their safety may even be threatened. However, with peace and development becoming the mainstream currently, governments of most countries focus on economic development. Then, the social welfare system could function better to maintain the life quality of the elderly and their security could be ensured as well .On the other hand, it seems that seniors also have new problems contemporarily. In the past when individuals lived close to their extended family, the emotional ties among them were much stronger andthe old might not feel lonely. However, people nowadays intend to dwell individually in order to better protect their privacy and freedom. Such a phenomenon leads to that many old people have to live separately from their children, because of which they are prone to feel being isolatedat present.From my own perspective, these two opinions do not necessarily contradict each other and both of them reflect the truth about the elderly’s lives. It is true that modern technology enables seniorcitizens to better enjoy their lives. For example, laundry machines and intelligent vacuum cleaner robots successfully liberate the elderly from labor-intensive work, which allows them to spare more time on leisure activities. However, it cannot be denied that mental health may be a potential issue for many old people since they lack interaction with their children or other relatives. Thus, in order to really improve the elderly’s live s, the elderly could attempt to visit their children and friends more frequently to avoid mental diseases, such as depression.【拓展阅读】雅思写作技巧1.Task Achievement (任务完成度)——就是你是否覆盖了所有的写作要求雅思写作有大小两个写作任务(Task1和Task2)，大家在写作之前一定要进行审题，其实雅思写作是很容易偏题或是审错题的!Task 1小作文大多数情况出的是常规的表图、线图、条形图，再就是出现频率不那么高的流程图了(话说一个月一次的频率)，然后就是频率更低的地图题，还有一种就是物品比较题，这种很少会碰到。

Test 1Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.1.For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life.2. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.注意开头段写法，说明背景句+观点的方式已经被雅思官方认可，而且一般就两句话。

但是这两句话作者并不是随意的简单同意替换，句型上来说一定要丰富。

比如作者用了一个用了一个时间状语从句+一个条件状语从句。

平时在行文练习中，一定要注意开头段的长句子输出，如果大家无法用一个句子说清楚背景，可以用两个句子，介绍背景加题目观点。

另外一个句子来表达自己观点。

从现在官方范文来看，几乎所有开头段都表达了作者的观点。

3. People who stay with the same organisation will have the advantage of a thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes.4. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security with a promise of a good pension when they retire.5. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.第3句，中心句，表达长期从事一份工作的主要好处第4句，中心句的拓展，解释在长期工作的情况下，如果工作努力，又会得到什么好处第5句，解释雇主对忠心员工提供的好处, including的用法一定要学会别动不动就such as很多同学一遇到稍微抽象的问题，就不知道该怎么拓展了。

11月30日雅思大作文真题参考范文2019年11月30日雅思大作文题目：当今时代不需要动物食品或动物产品了吗？In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?解析&审题本题是2016年3月12日原题重现。

有人说，现在我们不需要食用动物，或者不需要使用动物产品了，你同意吗？动物保护者当然会同意，理由很简单，当今的科技已经可以制造食品来替代动物食品，也不再需要用动物的皮毛制品来保暖。

同时，斩杀动物可能破坏环境平衡，从而使人类自身遭殃。

但是，如果完全拒绝动物食品，人类的营养又会成问题。

所以，不妨这样破题：将动物分成野生动物和家养动物，对于野生动物，我们不能过度猎杀以保护环境平衡，但将家养动物作为食品，或者药品，则是可以的以保证人类充足营养。

小编这里使用的破题技巧是：将animal进行分类，然后分别讨论。

这是写作破题的一种常用技巧，即将题目中的关键词进行分类细化，然后根据不同类别进行讨论。

老师笔记1.Nowadays, some people think it unnecessary for us to use animals for food, clothing, or medicines any longer because modern technology has found the substitutes for them. While I certainly agree that now we do not have to kill wild animals for the purpose of our survival, I think we need food from domestic animals for our health.现在，许多人认为我们不再有必要使用动物制成的食物、衣服和药品，因为现代科技已经找到了它们的代替品。

英语考试作文8日雅思大作文写作真题范文解析：社会资源浪费问题2018年9月8日的雅思大作文终于考到了环保类话题，Nowadays people are living in a “ thrown-away”society where they use things for a short time and then throw away. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?探讨社会中出现的一次性社会（浪费型社会）的形成原因及影响。

范文解析本题属于社会生活类话题。

题目问题要求阐述导致“ thrown-away” society 的原因以及该现象导致的问题。

属于说明文类型的文体。

考生在答题时，切忌看清题目要求，不要惯性思维写原因和解决方法。

此外，思考思路时务必结合现实情况，如个体本身没有这样的习惯则联想身边有该类特征的人群，以便快速得到论点。

文章结构 P1：改写现象并写出承接句。

P2：阐述导致该现象的第一个原因，即市场上有大量便宜的商品。

P3：阐述导致该现象的第二个原因，即广告诱导消费者追赶潮流从而丢弃旧物品。

P4：阐述该现象导致的问题。

第一，造成了环境污染;第二，造成了不良生活方式。

P5：总结上文内容。

雅思大作文高分话题表达two contributing factors can be identified 两个促成(该现象)的理由可以被证实it is precisely because of…正因为。

would do sth rather than…宁愿做。

而不。

brand new 崭新的be exposed to 被暴露在。

之下glamorous 富有魅力的dump 丢弃decompose 分解landfill 垃圾填埋法materially abundant but spiritually barren 物质丰富但是精神贫瘠be discouraged from 被阻止。

2015.12.19雅思大作文解析及范文Some people think that traditional culture can be destroyed by using it as money-making attractions to tourists. However, others believe that it is the only way to save traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.本次考题依旧是一道很早之前的老题—旅游对于文化的影响。

正方认为商业化旅游使文化受到损害，反方则认为这是保护文化唯一的有效途径。

考生需要首先对双方进行论证，再给出自己的立场和回答；且如果不认同第二个观点，可从‘only’一次入手，证明赚钱并不是保护文化的唯一方式。

正方观点：旅游景点趋同化（assimilation）使文化失去独特性;商业旅游带来的过多游客导致一些不文明现象（writing graffiti, touching objects, noisy and congested）对景区造成破坏反方观点：有了收入可以更好保护历史建筑；更多游客才能够更好传播/普及非物质文化遗产中立：商业旅游的确会带来负面影响，但是可以最小化其弊端；除了旅游还有别的保护及传承文化的途径（支持本地电影业，普及历史文化教育，定期举办文化活动等）。

下面是以中立的立场写的一篇范文仅供参考：Tourism is developing at an ever-increasing rate along with the heated discussion of the impact it brings about on traditional culture. It is argued that commercial tourism damages the local customs, while others reckon that tourism development provides the protection to traditions.On the one hand, those who perceive the former view argue that cultural traditionsused for tourism purposes may devastate original features and cultural identity. Culture assimilation brought by foreign tourists might be the primary reason. To cater the visitors’ expectation and gain more profits, local operators tend to make changes, for example, branches of McDonald, Starbucks and Costa could be seen in many historical sites of China. The attractions could easily lose the peculiarity but look like the same.On the other hand, the opponents who support the latter view have their sound reasons. First, entertainment facilities and traveller-directed services turn regions into tourist destinations and help inhabitants earn money, which can be employed to protect and renovate the old architecture. Second, intangible cultural heritage can be popularized to a wider range of people by commercializing traditional values. Yu Opera is a typical example of it, which is becoming well known to people outside Henan province of China due to the promotion to travellers and generating revenue by selling related souvenirs.As for me, cultural assimilation is inevitable, but profit-oriented tourism seems not the only way to inherit and preserve indigenous culture. In addition to developing tourism, various approaches such as offering priority to local film industry, popularizing historical and cultural education in schools, and organizing regular cultural activities in local communities can also be extreme supportive. Apart from that, some solutions to lessen drawbacks generated should also be taken to maintain cultural values.。

满分雅思大作文赏析范文第一段：Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what e_tent do you agree or disagree Some feel that the children of low ine families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer e_amination. ( 58words )名师点评：最后 1 句为主题句。

此段的主题句稍微有点特殊它的确否定了前面所提到的观点从而表达出了自己的观点此外还引出了下文。

特别是最后半句：but in fact require closer e_amination 感觉是在抛砖引玉。

范文第二段：The popular wisdom is that children of poorerfamilies learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be pletely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youthand oftentimes erroneously e_pecting the same situationin adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education. (100words)名师点评：第 1 句是主题句。

Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single， global currency that we all use.Do you agree or disagree with this statement？ Would a single currency cause any problems？It is clear to me that the idea of a single global currency is an excellent ideal to work towards. There can be no doubt that trade and travel would be vastly easier. On the other hand I believe that it would cause problems today.The benefits of a single currency can be seen with the use in Europe of the Euro. Whenever you are travelling between countries using the Euro， the problems of currency changing and exchange rates are history. Similarly business between countries using the Euros is so much easier； no more worrying about exchange rate risk and pricing. Everyon e‛s money is the same. The same thing is true with the US dollar. Most countries do not use the US dollar but it is accepted in many places. There are many countries that you can travel to and just take US dollars to use.At present though a global currency would be impossible. Firstly most countries would not accept the idea. Secondly all countries are in different economic states. Some are economically very strong and some are in a state of collapse with inflation ruining the economy. Such countries could not be brought into a world currency as it would cause massive financial instability worldwide. So it is clear that a global currency would indeed cause some serious problems.So， in conclusion I see a global currency as a future ideal but it will not happen in my lifetime. It would make trade and travel much easier but the problems it would cause nowadays would be insurmountable.我很清楚，一个单一的全球货币的想法是一个理想的工作。

11月1日雅思大作文范文解析11月初第一场雅思考试的大作文题目，给各位考生带来了点小麻烦。

题干中赫然在列一个因果关系。

对于备考经验不是那么丰富的考生而言，这是个不小的麻烦。

通常的同意与否类的题目中会有“并列关系〞，“目的关系〞和“因果关系〞。

相对于表达比拟普通的题干而言，这些类题目都不算常见。

今天我们就剖析一下这个因果关系。

11月01日考题如下：Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11011.有明显的背景Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore，children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 0318上题中的第一句明显是个背景的介绍，因此这道题的讨论重点自然就是题干中的第二句。

类似的题目还有：The news media has become more influential in people’s lives. Some people, therefore, think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 023Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 0525Nowadays more and more people are using cell phones and computers to communicate with others. Therefore, they are losing the ability of face-to-face communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1126在仔细读题之后，考生们很容易就能区分开题干中的背景信息，进而就可以明确知道该题目的讨论重点是什么。

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题：社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目：Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。

政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转，比如建设和维护基础设施，提供各种公共服务。

此外，税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制，高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。

政府将用税收资助弱势群体，建立社会保障体系，促进了社会的稳定和发展。

所以，除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体，大部分人都需要缴税。

雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文》介绍。

雅思大作文议论文高分范文解析：吸烟话题Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.Doyou agree or disagree?Key words analysissmoking: 抽烟，这是一个名词，表示抽烟这件事throughout the world: 遍及全世界，同”around the world”In the interest of: 为了…的利益;这里可以理解为”为了公众健康的利益”public health: 公众健康cigarette: 香烟tobacco: 烟草，这边和product组合表示烟草产品Argument:这是属于议论文中的argument类型，通常会在agree或disagree之间进行选择。

该题可采用通篇agree的写作思路，因为从这个立场出发比较好写，理由更充分。

Possible reasons:社会公认的吸烟有害健康抽烟带来的疾病消耗国家财政收入二手烟对他人是很大的伤害Model Essay 1 – Part 1IntroductionThere are a range of different views on the question of whether tobacco should be banned or not. Some people would argue that smoking is a personal choice and that introducing laws to prevent people from smoking would be repressive. However, I feel that tobacco should indeed be made illegal. There are two main reasons for this.Main body 1Firstly, it is important to remember that tobacco is actually a drug. Most countries around the world have strict laws against selling or using recreational drugs. Therefore, if governments want to be consistent in the way they handle the problem of drug abuse, I believe they must ban tobacco as well. This is especially true considering the fact that many drugs which are now illegal, such heroin and marijuana, could be used by doctors to treat various real medical problems. On the other hand, tobacco is useless.Model Essay 1 – Part 2Main body 2Further and even more importantly, though,smoking should be banned for the sake of public health. It is a proven fact that smokingcauses serious illnesses, such as lung cancer and heart disease.Although cigarette companies and pro-smoking groups may claim that people have the right to decide what to put into their own bodies, I would argue that the rights of society are more important than those of the individual. The medical treatment smokers need when they get sick is often very expensive, and it is usually governments and society who pay the bill. Thus, I believe that antismoking laws would be a good idea.ConclusionTo conclude, although governments will probably not ban tobacco in the near future, I feel this should be the long-term goal as there are few habits as pointless and destructive as smoking.。

雅思大作文写作7分范文鉴赏虽然今年6月的雅思考试已经结束，但我还是想为大家带来本场雅思写作大作文真题范文及解析，目的是为了让大家更好地学习。

本期写作话题为：增加年轻人对本国历史人物兴趣的方法。

Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。

这是为什么呢?怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣?范文来自网络：As the globalization of entertainment industry, a great number of foreign celebrities has dashed into our lives, especially for the youth; fascinating super stars is becoming a trend, and even being idolaters has been a lifestyle for many young people. Gradually, more people start to worry about the inheritance of local traditional culture, which is worth considering around the society.随着娱乐产业的全球化，大量的外国名人闯入了我们的生活，尤其是年轻人;吸引人的超级明星正在成为一种趋势，甚至成为偶像已经成为许多年轻人的生活方式。

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任01大作文题目Some people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为他们通过纳税为社会做出了足够的贡献，而另一些人则认为他们的责任比纳税更多。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

02思路解析这是一道双边类的大作文，聊的是人们除了纳税之外是否还需承担更多责任。

审题时需要注意关键词“paying taxes”和“more responsibilities”，也就是除了纳税，公民还应该履行哪些责任，可以促进社会的良性发展。

首先，来看公民纳税的意义。

政府的财政资金很大一部分来自于税收，而有了充足资金，政府才能投资科技、医疗、教育等领域的开发，进行基础设施建设，改善居民的生活质量。

然后再来看除了纳税其他的责任。

公民还应当遵纪守法、积极参与社区建设、尊老爱幼、保护环境等，每个人都应该为社会的有序健康发展出一份力。

03高分范文Tax is the main source of revenue for the government. Therefore, some people feel that paying taxes is the biggestresponsibility that citizens have towards their country. However, others disagree with this view. In their opinion, citizens have several other responsibilities too. I totally agree with them.It is important to pay taxes because governments need moneyto fund various social and infrastructural projects. Therefore, by paying taxes each citizen is making a significantcontribution to the development of their country. However, in my opinion, this is not enough. Just because someone pays taxes it does not necessarily mean that they are good citizens. It isalso wrong to assume that all those poor people who do not pay taxes are not contributing anything to their country. There are lots of criminals who pay taxes. Their financial contribution to the economy is negligible when we consider the amount of damage they cause.Tax is just one of the many contributions that a citizen can make. It is equally important for citizens to abide by the law, respect the social norms and help fellow citizens in need. When people obey the rules, respect others and do volunteer worksthey help create a harmonious society where everyone feels happy and safe.To conclude, paying taxes is just one way of contributing to the society. Being a law abiding citizen who volunteers to help whenever they can is even more important.04相关表达responsibility 责任pay taxes 纳税infrastructural projects 基础设施建设项目making a significant contribution to 对……做出重要的贡献criminals 罪犯negligible 可忽略的, 无足轻重的equally important 同等重要abide by the law 守法do volunteer works 做志愿工作harmonious 和谐的surroundings 周边的环境responsibly 负责地;有责任感地。

雅思作文真题解析及范文分享为了让大家更好的备考雅思写作，小编给大家整理了雅思作文真题，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

小作文题目是：The chart below shows the average time 16-22-year olds spent on playing video games in four different countries between 1992 and 2002.Summarize the details. Select and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.范文解析该柱状图难度中等偏下，数字相对较少，共有8个数字。

让我们先来看一下3w(when, where, what)。

When是过去的两个年份1992和2002，切记用过去时态。

Where为四个国家，what为16-22岁的年轻人花费在视频游戏上的时间。

可以看出when和where两个变量，要求我们描述这十年间的变化趋势和国家之间的静态对比。

所以考生可以按照时间为主线去分段，也可以按照国家去分段。

雅思小作文真题范文：The bar chart compares the amount of time spent on video games on average by youngsters aged between 16-22 years old from four countries in two years 1992 and 2002.该柱状图对比了1992年至2002年期间，来自四个国家、年龄在16岁至22岁之间的青少年平均花在电子游戏上的时间。

It is evident that in 1992, the largest amount of time (85 hours) allocated to video games was from young people in country B. This was narrowly followed by country C and country A where respectively 78 hours and 76 hours were spent while it took the minimal hours for this age group to play video games in country D, standing at merely 50.很明显,在1992年,最大的时间(85小时)分配给视频游戏是年轻人的国家。

雅思7月7日作文真题实例：建更多铁路和地铁好，还是修扩更多道路好？下面三立在线小编为大家提供的雅思7月7日作文真题实例：建更多铁路和地铁好，还是修扩更多道路好？“People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that governments should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more roads and widening existing roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”解析&审题本题是关于城市生活中的交通问题。

此类问题是雅思考试的常客，各位烤鸭需要认真对待。

唐老师目前收集到的相关考题如下：The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2014/1/9，2017/1/21)解决交通堵塞问题的最好办法是全天候提供免费公共交通，你是否同意?In many towns and cities, the high volume of road traffic has been a problem.What are the causes and what actions can be taken to solve the traffic problem? (2012/7/21)交通堵塞的原因是什么，怎么解决？In some countries,the government has tried to reduce traffic.For instance,they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative? (2016/1/30)高峰期征受堵塞税能否解决交通堵塞问题？Increasing the price of cars and petrol is one of the best ways to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2018/3/10)提高汽车及汽油价格是解决交通和污染问题的最佳办法，你是否同意？Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?(2018/5/5)将大公司和工厂搬迁到乡村地区，可以解决城市交通和住房问题。

2019年雅思大作文解析及范文：电脑游戏对儿童的影响Some people think that computer games are dangerous for children in every way; Other people think that computer games help children's development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为电脑游戏在各个方面都会对儿童产生不利影响，有人认为电脑游戏有助于孩子的发展。

请讨论双方的观点并给出你自己的观点。

While it may be disliked by many, the modern gameindustry is a part of our world. From its humble beginningsin the 80s, the computer game industry has exploded into a10-billion dollar empire. It is a debatable issue whether these games are good or bad. In this essay, I intend to delve into the pros and cons of these games and finally give my opinion.There are many advantages of computer games. To begin with, computer games playing introduces children to computer technology. Secondly, some games provide practice in problem solving and logic e.g. Age of Empires. Video games have proved to improve visual skills. They also improve motor and spatial skills. Children who play computer games have better reflexes.What is more, these modern games make learning fun. The cost of failure is lower. This encourages risk taking and exploration. If the kid gets the answer wrong or their character dies, they just start the game over and try again. Finally, some games have therapeutic applications.On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of these technological inventions. Firstly, overdependence on these games leads to social isolation as these are usually played alone. Secondly, some games have violent characters and seeing their violent acts leads to aggressive behaviour in children. Moreover, these games can confuse reality and fantasy. For example, when children play car racing games then they may race their own vehicles in real life which can lead to accidents. Finally, many games do not require action that requires independence and creativity.To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that on the whole these games are very good and certainly their advantages outweigh their disadvantages but these should be played in moderation. Parents should limit the game playing time and see to it that homework and chores are done before playing.。

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