读后续写必背片段讲义-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写I finally worked hard for my college试题呈现：Living in the shadow of my two elder sisters at college who already had their lives planned out since they were little, I was always undecided about everything. As a teenager, I was fickle(反复无常的). I would like one thing for a week and then hate it the next. But I was constantly searching for the beginning of the rainbow. Changing my dream from a vet to an astronaut, I thought there were various options available to me. However, my parents would shake their heads and repeatedly asked me such questions as, “Why can’t you be more like your sisters? What are you going to do with your life? Aren’t you interested in anything at all?” After a couple of shrugs(耸肩), my parents usually stopped talking. I was not sure if they gave up or anticipated my dull reactions. I often responded, “I couldn’t answer all of your questions now.”Actually, my parents just had high expectations that never seemed to be fulfilled. Plus, like other parents, they just wanted to give the best to me and expected me to achieve success. The arguments with my parents seemed childish. One day, my mother made her thoughts clear, “Your grades aren’t high enough. No schools are going to want you, dear. We didn’t pay so much money for nothing.” Hesitating for a while, I said, “No matter what you say, I believe I will enter a good college.” Still, I let my emotions control myself.Certainly, I had never planned not to go to college. After another debate with my mom, I decided to make a change. No longer would I sit back and let my parents mistake me for a bad boy. It was time to take action.I knew it was a crucial year at high school. Releasing my feelings, I began to collect all the knowledge I had learned and review it with all my heart. I didn’t argue with my parents any more, but instead turned to my sisters for help and tried my best to study. Finally, I took the national college entrance examination with ease and confidence.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

读后续写III句型：1. He hurried back, only to find his house broken into.2. It was the first time that he had indulged in life’s joys.3. The more nervous he felt, the more clumsy he got.4. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse.5. Hardly had he got home when the rain poured down.1. No sooner had he seated himself than Sarah hurried in.2. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and so did Tom.3. The door burst open and out rushed Tom.4. She walked towards the lake, and then came an excited scream.5. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness inwine.6. Not only did I have special gifts for everyone on my list, but I had a fewdollars out of my budget to spare by Christmas.7. Only then did I realize that I misunderstood her.8. Not until I was told the truth did I discover the actual situation.9. It was not until I was told the truth that I discovered the actualsituation.10. I felt as if I were floating in an ocean of happiness.11. All the air seemed frozen and she felt as if she had been abandoned bythe whole world.12. Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldn’t have been here.13. But for /Had it not been for your help, I couldn’t have made it.14. She suggested we go camping in the village, her eyes glittering withexcitement.15. There being no bus, we had to walk home.16. She gazed at me, waiting for me to nod my head.17. I ran up and down the stairs in the dark, panic filling my chest andmaking it difficult to breathe.18. Stunned by the scene in front of us, we just stood there with our mouthwide open as if we were in a dream.19. With the things bought, they headed for the church.20. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact thather mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed.21. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where shefinally came to herself.22. As the day got closer and closer to him, his heart beat so wildly that hefelt more and more nervous.23. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing her journey.24. Absentminded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to expressher love to us.25. Although she felt a little sad, she never gave up on it.26. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find out our way back.27. Tired and relieved, she couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’sarms.28. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted the spot.29. Having walked for quite a long time, she found herself lost.30. He was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel.31. To her great surprise, Tom appeared in time. Their cry which was full ofhappiness broke the silence in the valley.32. In the dark street, there wasn’t a single person to whom she could turnfor help.33. This unexpected appearance frightened my horses, which made it runwildly.34. On hearing the announcement that he won the first prize, he was wildwith joy.35. What a happy scene it was that the big family sat together on ChristmasEve, opening the presents I carefully chose.36. It suddenly occurred to the him that the family inside was in greatdanger.37. Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear andacplish your goal.38. It is determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fearand acplish your goal.39. It is determination and optimism that really count.40. He was about to leave when he saw Eddie in his new jacket.41. As she worked with him, his mind seemed to e to life.42. It wasn’t long before he slipped into the yard.43. He hung up the phone before I could answer it.44. They came to a small village before they knew it.45. He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news. The instantZahra saw the shoes, her face lit up.46. On hearing the unexpected news, he felt seized by a burst of sadnessand couldn’t help crying bitterly.47. Behind the counter was an old woman, who helped me find my record.48. Mac said in a shaky voice, t ears gathering in his eyes. For him, lifecould never be more beautiful.49. Dad remended buying a new one, while mom insisted on our goingback to fetch it.50. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey, a pleasantsmile would spread over my mom’s face.51. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited andrelieved.52. I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed.53. It turned out that people liked it on the Internet, only to make me acelebrity.54. Knowing the story behind it, Dora was too overjoyed to utter a word.55. What if he opened the book and looked though it at that moment?56. A is to B what C is to D.Reading is to the mind what food is to the body.Parks are to the city what lungs are to the body.57. What touched him most was that I protected his dignity.58. With time slowly going by, his efforts finally paid off.59. With the box tipping over,out came the little one, who was not shy andinstantly got familiar with Poppy.60. It didn’t take long before the two played round the house.61. He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory.62. If only he hadn’t left it in his bedroom!63. An idea flashed into his mind that he could help the family by sellingpopcorns.64. No dream is out of reach for a willing heart. (结尾句)65. A small act of generosity could make a huge difference in someone’s life.66. None of this would have been possible if that man hadn’t given us thegiftkindness.67. When I saw her smiling face, I told myself that I would live my life to thefullest.68. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them can we enjoy ourlife.环境描写：1. The crystal water was gentle as I waded(蹚过) through it; the sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas.2. Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten(闪烁) gently as it reflected the sun's rays.3.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready.4. Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground was cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping(包裹) everything within its soft embrace.5. A gust of wind(微风) blew and parted the drooping branches of the willow like a curtain.6. A cold breeze wafted(飘过) through my hair.7.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbled (翻滚) through the valley.8. The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glassclear surface.9. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispering to her loving mother.10.The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the buildings.11. The dark, rainy evening, the wind and the thundering clouds had me entirely in their power.12. Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.13. It was still sweet day of early summer; the leaves seemed greener, the flowers brighter, the birds merrier than before.14. Darkness fell; the night was bitterly cold.15. The clouds parted and the sun shone.16. The thick fog blanked the field.17. There was not a single sound at night. Only the glowworms(萤火虫) were still awake, casually weaving a picture in the night sky.18. On a nearby hill, smoke could be seen rising slowly from the chimney of the house.19. Bathed in the sunshine, all the things seemed to e to life.20. Like a lamp, the moon shone from above. The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.。

（试题原题）Sandy and Jane came to see the jobo tree on the hilltop again. Jobos were their favorite fruit, but the tree belonged to a lady who lived in the house by the hill. They heard she was difficult, but that sometimes she would give fruit in return for an errand （差使）.The girls finally gathered their courage to knock on her door. An elderly woman with a fierce look answered, staring down at the girls. “We heard....,”said Sandy, her voice shaky, “that you give jobos in payment for running an errand.”The lady raised one eyebrow, then went into the kitchen and took two baskets. She pushed them into the girls' hands. “Go fill these with jobos, and come right back.”The girls raced up the hill to the tree and filled the baskets with the ripest jobos. Back at the house, the lady filled a bag with rice and handed it to Sandy. “Take this bag and one basket of jobos to the Brown family. And ask them for the payment,” the lady added with a tight smile. “If you return without the payment, you won't get the fruit.”The girls struggled all the way with the bag and the basket. When they were there, Mrs. Brown answered the door. Inside on the floor were three little children, each painting something on papers. Mr. Brown was lying sick in bed. Times were hard.The gi rls handed her the food. “This is from the lady with the jobo tree,” said Sandy.“She asked for the payment, too.” Jane said awkwardly.“The payment! The payment!” The children repeated, waving the paper in their hands happily.Sandy and Jane looked at each other strangely. With a smile, Mrs. Brown handed Sandy a large sealed（密封的）envelope so full that it was almost starting to break open. The girls said goodbye and left quickly. “I wonder,” Sandy murmured, “whether Mrs. Brown can afford to pay for that food.Worried, the two girls discussed what was in the envelope as they walked back.The lady opened the envelope, took out a pile of papers, and smiled.合理推敲，构思情节:Worried, the two girls discussed what was in the envelope as they walked back.回家路上各种猜测(有无payment) 与纠结(拆不拆信封? 能否拿到水果? )--回到女士家中，递上信封The lady opened the envelope, took out a pile of papers, and smiled.揭开真相-_信封里到底是什么? Lady应该经常接济Prown一家最终有拿到jobos? 主题? 层?浅层？深层非一般的故事这个故事，与之前多见的读后续写故事不一样，情节和主题藏而不露，随着情节发展通过各种细节透露线索，制造悬念，续文中也应尽量延续这种风格，不宜使用太多分析和解读性话语，把话说得太白。

【原题】阅读下面材料，并根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The school I went to had a tradition carried out every year during the eighthgradegraduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors) was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for eight years.I was fourteen and in the eighth grade. I had been a straightA student since thefirst grade and this last year had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My family was so poor that, when I was six, I was given to my grandparents to raise. I couldn't participate in sports at school because we couldn't afford the fees; even though I was quite athletic, there would never be a school sports jacket for me. So, this one, the scholarship jacket, was my only chance.One day in May, close to graduation, outside the history teacher’s classroom, I heard a fierce argument between the principal and my history teacher, Mr. Frank, about giving the scholarship jacket to Joann, whose father is on the Board and owns the only store in town. Frank angrily claimed that he would never lie or falsify (伪造) records.The principal approached me tentatively: “Martha, there’s been a change in policy this year. The Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars for the scholarship jacket this year. So if you are unable to pay the fifteen dollars for the jacket it will be given to the next one in line. Staring at him in shock, I didn't need to ask who that was.“I’ll speak to my grandfather and let you know tomorrow,” I gathered all the dignity. I cried on the walk home from the bus stop. I wanted that jacket so much. It represented eight years of hard work and expectation.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Para. 1 Upon arriving home, I told my grandpa what had happened.Para. 2 The next day, the principal called me to his office.【故事梗概】“我”就读的学校有一个传统——向品学兼优的八年级毕业生授予一件scholarship jacket。

读后续写题目第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was a freezing winter morning. The sun was on its rising journey to warm the world, and Josie was on her way to school. The 10-year-old girl was walking forward followed by her father. As usual, Josie was curious about everything and observing. The office workers were hurrying to work. A guitar player was playing and singing surrounded by passers-by and tourists. A grey and black bird was hopping (双足齐跳) on the ground. Josie imitated (模仿) the little creature, hopping and laughing.那是一个寒冷的冬天早晨。

太阳正在冉冉升起，温暖着世界，乔西正在上学的路上。

这个10岁的女孩在她父亲的身后向前走去。

和往常一样，乔西对一切事物都很好奇，并善于观察。

上班族匆匆忙忙地上班，一名吉他手在路人和游客的簇拥下弹唱。

一只灰黑色的鸟在跳(双足齐跳) 在地面上。

乔西模仿(模仿) 这个小家伙又跳又笑。

When she turned around to see if her father was within reach, she noticed a beggar in rags sitting on the steps of a building with a hat by his feet. He held up a sign with some words on it. With curiosity, Josie held her father's hand and moved closer to the beggar. Josie found the beggar was an old blind man and his sign read, "I am blind. Please help." There were only a few coins in the hat. Josie's father took a few coins from his pocket and dropped them into the hat. “We need to go, honey, or you will be late for school. " The father held the girl's hand and they left, but little Josie turned her head several times until they turned left to another street and the blind man was invisible.当她转过身来看看父亲是否触手可及时，她注意到一个穿着破烂的乞丐坐在一栋楼的台阶上，脚边戴着一顶帽子。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I recently went SKYDIVING! It's something I've been talking about doing since last year, but to be honest, it was planned super last minute. …like within a matter of a few weeks.It all started when I ran into a friend of mine walking home from a local festival earlier this summer. We started chatting about what we'd both been up to this summer and somehow got on the subject of both being interested in going skydiving someday. My friend, Denny, said he'd be on board if I really wanted to schedule a jump and I was so excited to finally have someone to go with!Later that night, we texted back and forth and decided on our jump date a few weeks in the future. When the very Sunday came, we were both FULL of excitement for our first skydiving experience. He had been bungee jumping before and I'd done my fair share of zip-lining, but neither of us figured that either of those of experiences would prepare us for what we had in store.The drive there didn't happen without a slight delay. As soon as we got off the through-way on to the exit towards the small town where the skydiving facility was, Denny's car started to make a strange noise, forcing us to pull over on a busy interstate(州际公路).Only 20 minutes away from WNY Skydiving(the place where we were going), we discovered we had a flat tyre(轮胎). At that point, I felt pretty defeated. Our scheduled time was 4 pm—the last appointment time of the day—so I figured they wouldn't be able to wait for or delay the operations for us since we were racing against the light.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

"Go check out the ice while we go back and get the goal." I can remember my teenage friends saying that as they dropped me off by the edge of Fresh Pond in Fort Salonga. Growing up on Long Island in the 1960s and 1970s, my friends and I couldn't wait for school break between Christmas and the new year.It was time to get out the ice skates and play hockey. Back then, in December, many ponds and lakes would freeze. One of my favorites was Blanchard Lake in Northport, or what we called "the cove." It would get too crowded, though, so we'd go to Centerport's Mill Pond, which looked like deep water, but it wasn't.Back to that morning when I was dropped off at Fresh Pond. My friends and I realized that we forgot to bring the goal to shoot the puck(冰球）into，so while they went back, I was going to test the ice. I started along the edge and felt it was solid. We had just had a cold snap（寒流）for a few days，so I didn't think there would be any problem. As I risked farther out, the ice got clearer, and it was exciting to see underwater plants under the ice.Suddenly, I heard a massive cracking sound that seemed to be all around me. I instinctively bent to my knees to not break through the ice like a straight torpedo (鱼雷）.It was too late Before I knew it, I was in the water with just my head sticking out and my arms waving while still holding my hockey stick. No one was around except one person at the far end of the pond who couldn't hear my cries for help.I was short of breath while trying to solve my crisis.Paragraph 1:Using all my strength, I hammered the cutting edge of my stick into the ice ahead of me.Paragraph 2:The danger, however, wasn't over.Paragraph 1:Using all my strength, I hammered the cutting edge of my stick into the ice ahead of me.It worked, for a while. As I struggled to climb back up, the sound of a crack pierced through my ears and heart. Holding the stick tightly, I froze, icy currents numbing my body and washing my hope away. Everysecond past was a torture with the sensation of my extremities robbed by the cold. Finally, at the moment when I began to lose consciousness and grip of the stick, I heard the most wonderful sound, my friends calling my name.Paragraph 2:The danger, however, wasn't over.After I responded with my trembling voice, they carefully walked towards me. Yet the pressure that came with approaching steps become the last straw. With a loud crack, the stick fell and my heart sank. Unwilling to surrender, I squeezed however infinitesimal strength I had in me and swam towards my friends while they lay on the ground, feet in hands, with my friend at front reaching dangerously and desperately out for me. On that coldest day of my life, I was lucky enough to have caught the warmest thing—my friend’s hand.Paragraph 1:Using all my strength, I hammered the cutting edge of my stick into the ice ahead of me.（首段剧情根据两句提示语决定首尾。

读后续写之悲伤情绪素材表达讲义读后续写之悲伤情绪的描写一、单词荟萃二、单句积累赏析1.I tried to fight back tears.我努力忍住眼泪。

fight back此处是遏制（泪水）的意思2.He brimmed over with sorrow.他满是悲伤。

brim over (with sth)满溢，相当于overflow3.She burst into tears and r an out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。

burst into tears=burst out cr ying突然哭起来4.They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。

glum/ɡlʌm/：adj.忧郁的5.The news cas t a clo ud of gloo m over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。

此处为无灵主语的运用，gloom/ɡluːm/：n.昏暗6.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。

后半句为独立主格的运用7.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。

此处为明喻的运用，有关键词feel like8.Her face was twisted with pain and sorro w. 她的脸因痛苦和悲伤而扭曲着。

twist/twɪst/：v.使扭曲（成一定形状）9.When he embraced me with his ar ms open wide, I felt my throat cho ke with so b.当他张开双臂拥抱我，我感觉自己的嗓子哽住了。

choke/tʃoʊk/：v.（尤指感情激动而）说不出话来，使哽咽10.Finally my s is ter broke down, sobbing into her handkerchief.我姐姐终于再也控制不住自己的情绪，捂着手绢呜咽起来。

读后续写：Mike, aged 14, was a music fan, especially a fan for violin. He expected to be a music star one day. Unfortunately, born into a poor family depending on delivering newspapers and milk, he couldn’t afford a violin. He had thought of asking his parents to pay for one but finally he abandoned possessing the impossible musical instrument.Mike’s neighbor, Joseph, happened to be a violinist. The greatest pleasure Mike found after school every day was enjoying the beautiful melodies floating out of Joseph’s window. Not until did it turn dark did Mike sneak into his own room. And every time Mike’s mother asked him why he came home late, Mike would say he was lost in music.“Why not spend more time in your lessons instead, sweetheart? After all, m usic can’t make money if you’re not so famous.” In order to prove he could realise his dream, he knew he must have his own violin and practise more.Mike found a job at a nearby church, running errands for the servicemen. One day, another music player happened to learn about Mike’s situation and offered him an old violin as a gift. He even promised to teach him how to play after church services at the weekends. Months later, Mike learned violin very well.The first performance he made was on the roadside of a lonely street. From time to time passersby stopped to watch him play. And a few even left some coins in his hat lying on the ground. When it was time for Mike to go back, he heard a woman’s cry. Following the sound, Mike spotted her and discovered the truth that she was called Connie, a trainee in a cafeteria, and that she had just had an awful day at work and was yelled by the boss.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。