读后续写必背片段〔1〕
片段1：
When we were standing backstage, nervousness/tension came flooding over me.(心情做主语)
I could feel my heart in my mouth when my name was called.
While I was walking onto the stage , I could feel my palms sweating, heartbeat racing uncontrollably. However, the hall packed with audience made me even more nervous.(心情加深:站在台上看到观众后，让我觉得更加紧急)
My heart beat wildly and my legs trembled.
With butterflies in my stomach, I breathed deeply.
I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, wondering what to do next.
Therefore, I reached to grab her hand, only to find her freezing fingers sweating and trembling. (Only to do 表出乎意料的结果)。
片段2:
On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of Mom(无灵主语:心情做主语的现象)
Mom insisted that(此处省略了should insist的虚拟语气用法) we go camping in the next village , her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement.(主格，眼睛闪光)
When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to zoom out and excitedly urge d us to put up the tent.
Then, Mom walked towards the lake and then came an excited scream/and then came a scream of excitement(倒装结构)
Enjoying the beautiful view Mom could hardly contain her excitement.
Certainly as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled.
Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement.【Cherry老师为何选这段】。
本段侧重描写家人兴奋快乐的心情。本段大家可以关注“互动〞措写，妈妈和孩子们之间的互动动作支撑起来整段话的核心情节。妈妈要求孩子们搭帐链等。其中这几个高级结构需要大家重点积累:主格结构:her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement.倒装结构:then came an excited scream.
片段3：
Looking at Anne's face wet with tears, I began to feel regretful and guilty. Suddenly, Anne let out a cry of regret,“ I'm so silly.〞Then she dashed out before I could say a word ,leaving me dumb with deep regret . I froze there, with regretful tears in my eyes. If only I had not quarreled with Anne!(虚拟语气:要是...就好了，该句型多用于表达“懊悔懊悔〞的心情) Finally with guilt and regret flowing in my mind(with的复合结构)，I rushed out to apologize to Anne.
【Cherry老师为何选这段】.
本段侧追描写仆人公懊悔和愧疚的心情。除了常见的惭愧相关的动作措写，
这段话中的“if only〞表达“要是…就好了〞的意思，为虚拟语气的常用结构。该句型常用语“懊悔、沮丧〞的心情表达，例句如下，
1.“要是我当时听取了妈妈的建议该多好!〞小女孩低声对自己说。.
“If only I had listened to my mother's advice!" the little girl whisper ed to herself.
2.要是她没有把留在汤姆的包里就好了。。
If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.
