CET4写作部分讲义
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Persistence and Perseverance
CET-4 各项分值一览
项目 分值百分比 总分 及格分 答题时间
作文 15% 106.5 63.9 30min
听力 35% 248.5 149.1 30min
阅读 词汇理解 5% 248.5 149.1 40min
长篇阅读 10%
仔细阅读
20%
翻译（段落） 15% 106.5 63.9 30min
PART ONE： 写作
一． 考试要求
四、六级考试改革已开始，虽大纲和改革要求都没有对写作部分做特殊的规定，但根据改革的总体方向和趋势可知，写作将朝着更加实用的方向发展：写作题材将更贴近日常生活和社会热点，（如学习、工作或课余生活、科普话题等）题材将更具实用性。
改革后的四级考试写作部分的考试时间仍为30分钟，分值为总分的15％。在规定时间内紧扣主题、层次清楚、段落分明、用词恰当地表达自己的思想是考生取得写作高分的关键所在。
二． 评分标准
1.四级写作满分为15分，阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。
2分
条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分 基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。
8分
基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。
11分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量的语言错误。 14分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。
2.另外，作文词数未达要求也会酌情扣分。
累计词数 110--119 100--109 90--99 80-89 70-79 ＜60
扣分 1 2 3 5 7
9
3.由此可见只要能对症下药，做好如下三点，写出一篇11－13分的作文并不难。
①“切题”＝审清题目
②“表达思想清楚”＝言语有层次
③“文字通顺连贯”＝提彩句、模块句的使用
4．高分作文的特点：
结构清晰 句式多 出现亮点
文章框架要合理
文章结构要完整
文章主题不偏离
段落衔接要自然
各段详略要得当
长句短句错落有致
主动被动合理运用
倒装强调适当穿插
比较结构巧妙使用
句与句间衔接紧密
遣词用句准确地道
开头结尾突破常规
适当运用修辞手法
恰当使用警句格言
三． 文章的基本构架与展开方式（万能通用模式总揽）
1. 短文的宏观框架：
Title（给出） Introduction(综述，引出话题) Body(正文，论点与论据)
Ending(总结全文、前后呼应)
2. 正文的写作
Ⅰ.首段的写作：
i.对立法：
①When
asked about/When it comes to/faced with
, most/many people
believe that , other people regard
as /consider it differently；②Now,
it‟s generally acknowledged that . But I doubt
whether ; ③ When it
comes to
, people‟s opinions differ. Some hold
the opinion that
, while
others claim that ; ④ There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the
role/view/idea of . Some people claim that , while others believe
that .
ii.现象法：
①Recently, the rise in the problem/phenomenon of has aroused
public/popular/wide concern; ②Recently, the issue of has been brought into
focus/brought to public attention； ③There is a general discussion today about the
issue/problem of . Those who criticize argue that . They believe that… But people who advocate , on the other hand, argue that .
iii.观点法：
① Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that ; ② Most of
the people are of the opinion that… But I personally believe that .
iv.引用法：
①“ ” is the remark made by . It has been shared by more and more
people; ② “ ”. How often we hear such statements/words as these.
v.比较法：
①For years, have been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look
now. With the growing , people ; ②People used to think that /In the
past, … … But now people share the new idea of
vi.问题法：
①Should/What ? Options of vary greatly: some , while others .
But in my opinion, .
常备句型及应用
2.1：引出话题的常用句式：
● ____ is one of the most striking(apparent, evident, manifest, crystal-clear,
staggering, arresting, amasing, eye-catching, astonishing, alarming, shocking,
unprecedented ) subjects of the modern society.
____是现代社会一个最为引人注目的话题。
空间探索是现代社会一个最为引人注目的话题。
Space exploration is one of the most striking subjects of the modern society.
● The issue of ____ has aroused (attracted, sparked, intrigued, captivated,
evoked, yielded) much attention (debate, dispute, controversy, concern)from the
general public.
____问题已经引起了公众的极大关注。
环境保护问题已经引起了公众的极大关注。
The issue of environmental protection has aroused much attention from the
general public.
● ____ has sparked an increasingly heated debate among ____ .
____ 引发了____ 越来越热烈的讨论。
计算机广泛应用于教育领域引发了使用者越来越热烈的讨论。
The wide use of computers in the field of education has sparked an increasingly
heated debate among users.
● The problem of ____ has been in the limelight(a focus) since _____.
自从____以来____问题已成为人们的注意中心。
十多年以来青少年犯罪问题已成为人们的注意中心。
The problem of juvenile delinquency has been in the limelight since more than a
decade ago.
● Recently, the problem of ____has attracted such widespread attention that
_____.
近来, ____问题引起了人们的广泛关注，以致____。 近来环境污染问题引起了人们的广泛关注，各级政府已把它列为首要议程。
Recently, the problem of environmental pollution has attracted such widespread
attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
● A vigorous debate over the issue of whether or not ____ has intrigued the
public.
关于是否____问题的激烈讨论引起了公众的兴趣。
关于教师是否在教育领域不再起重要作用的问题的激烈讨论引起了公众的兴
趣。
A vigorous debate over the issue of whether or not teachers are no longer
important in pedagogy field has intrigued the general public.
● One of the most +形容词（形容词的最高级）+problems(issues, topics)
facing(confronting)____ today is that ____.
目前____所面临的最____的一个问题就是____。
如今年轻人所面临的最主要的一个问题就是就业压力越来越大。
One of the most leading problems facing young people today is that there are more
and more employment pressures.
