初三英语下学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元易错题难题测试基础卷
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。
某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。
2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。
要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80左右。
One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________
【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when ma king fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇话题作文。
【详解】
根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。
第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。
根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。
这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。
第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。
3．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。
要点：
要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.____________________________【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.It save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the computer.Therefore they are active in class. Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.doczj.com/doc/db12553214.html,puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games.
I think students should use iPad in class.The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.It is good for students to use iPad in class.
【解析】
【详解】
根据题意近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【点睛】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.doczj.com/doc/db12553214.html,puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.这些重点短语和句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
4．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。
要求：1.写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4. 词数不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear editor，
I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to come．We will give each other gifts and give our best wishes.After that，one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．
This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．
Yours，
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。本题是一篇图表作文，信息提示简洁明了，但是必要的补充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻译句子，必须通过适当的连词保证文章通顺，就本题而言，介绍三项活动时，要有必要的顺序词．
【点睛】
文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will
read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。
5．（·重庆中考模拟）假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。
要求：
1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;
2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；
3.请求帮助的事项。
Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?
I expect to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句
式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。
参考要点：
1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;
2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；
3.请求帮助的事项。
6．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。
内容：1、健康饮食；
2、早睡早起，不熬夜；
3、参加运动，强身健体。
要求：
1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、80词左右；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】Healthy habit
I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?
First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d be tter go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.
As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，
句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（·湖南中考模拟）情景作文
阅读现在已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。请根据提示的内容，以“Reading Is Very Important”为题，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。要求内容连贯，并进行合理拓展， 80 词左右。 good points ， get lots of knowledge ，so much fun ， keep happy ，a good way to relax， enjoy reading ， after school, write down ，think ， begin now Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to read books.
【答案】Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to read books. And there are so many good points when we do that. First of all, we can get lots of knowledge we didn’t know, esp ecially when we are reading some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a long-day work, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.
Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关
系，语意连贯。
8．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己的梦想和理想，为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。
要求：1.参考提内容，可适当发挥
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整
3. 文中不得出现任何真实（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to
be________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.
To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.
All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每
个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1．文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2．条理淸晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
Nowadays, reading is becoming more and more popular among us. ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying” To open a b ook is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】
【详解】
越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根
据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。用一般现在时来写。根据汉语提示，灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
文章从读书好；好读书；读好书，分别介绍了读书的重要性，文中要到了一些好的句型：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．；They introduce us different kinds of knowledge；They lead us down the road to success给文中增色
不少。
10．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:
1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.
3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动的观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in
sports._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。
11．（·山东中考模拟）假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。
要点如下：1.少开汽，多走路。2.停止向河内排放废水。3.少用餐巾纸，塑料袋。4.节约水电，多植树。
要求：1词数：80--100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥。3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear classmates,
As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.
The Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
12．（·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）
假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。
注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.
My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
13．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。
提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。
3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。
要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。
14．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她
分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一）
内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；
（2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；
（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；
（4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；
（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。
参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。
写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Li Lei,
I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last
year,___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Mei 【答案】Dear Li Le,
I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.
She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.
Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.
I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Wang Mei 【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达顺应了当今的热门话题，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悦。
【详解】
这是篇材料作文内容要点给的比较详细，考生主要把所有要点表达清楚连贯就是篇不错的短文；参考词汇中，给了一些很好的词汇，考生一定要把它们融合到作文里。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
15．（·扬州市江都区第三中学中考模拟）毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim,请根据下表的提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报。
要求：
（1）：表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）：必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
（4）：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge o f my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Jim
【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I
can talk to my friends about it.
However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.
Yours sincerely
Jim
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。在毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim，要求根据表格的提示内容，用英文
做一个简短的汇报。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
16．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。
提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos
提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?
What are you going to do on the show?
What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend.
______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________
We’re looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.
I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful
with your help.
We’re looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
17．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
初中生活即将结束。在这三年里你的生活中定不乏难以忘怀的人或事，请以“An unforgettable in my school life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。讲述
一个你最难忘的人或事。
要求: 1.请补全题目，如teacher. classmate或trip等:
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名;
3.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺，80词左右。
【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life
For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是话题作文，介绍自己难忘的人或事。
【详解】
1.本篇要求学生自己补全题目，确定写作的目标，写自己3年初中校园生活里难忘的人或事，描述难忘的人用第三人称，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时，开头和结尾一般性阐述，用一般现在时；书写时要围绕中心“unforgettable”，叙述清楚具体的事件或情节，文章结构要清晰明了，注意短语、句型的正确使用。
2.本篇例文叙述难忘的英语老师，开头句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主题，正文部分详细描述了老师如何耐心的多方面的帮助自己，结尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.呼应中心词unforgettable。整篇文章结构严谨，紧扣主题，前呼后应。
3.高分亮点：巧用连词，not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有机结合；短语how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也为文章的语言增色不少。
18．（·广东南方求实教育集团中考模拟）《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等文化类节目唤醒了中国人的阅读情结。为了激发市民们的阅读兴趣,广州开展了“书香羊城”活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对阅读的看法,并对如何培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动提出建议。
注意:1.参考词汇:《朗读者》（Readers）: 作品: works （n.）
2.文章应包括所有要点:
3.词数80词以上（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）:
4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分.
The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________
【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for qu ite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，内容包括提示内容以及谈谈自己对阅读的看法，并对培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动方面提出建议，人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时，同时注意恰当使用连词使文章逻辑关系更为紧密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不仅能帮助我们更多地了解这个世界，而且能带给我们幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列连词短语。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天坚持阅读是一个好习惯。Keeping reading every day动名词短语作主语。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.另外，我们的教室里还可以设置一个读书角，以便课后随时阅读。此句是一个复合句，主句是含有情态动词的被动语态，so that引导的是目的状语从句。
19．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）按要求完成大作文（80词左右）
节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请以“My Green Life”为题写一篇短文，简单谈谈“绿色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡导的“绿色生活”方式。
写作要求：词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得透露姓名等个人信息。
【答案】My Green Life
As the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.
【解析】
【分析】
本文主题关于绿色生活，环境保护，注意文章内容。
【详解】
首先点明如今的生活环境，越来越差，绿色生活势在必行。其次点明绿色生活的重要性。然后说我在日常生活中对绿色出行作出的贡献，骑自行车，出门关灯等。最后呼吁大家一起努力。
【点睛】
首先正确理解作文题目，不要偏题，本文是关于绿色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何践行绿色生活的。其次，在语句正确的基础上，多运用连词，使文章升华，长
短句结合，使文章更上一档次。
20．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。
提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。
例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。
21．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。