托福考试作文侃哥讲义 ppt课件

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托福口语讲义ppt课件

To begin with, they have a wonderful cook who can make really delicious food. Every time I go there, I couldn’t help but eat a lot until I find myself too full.
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Structuring up your answer
主题句: Well, I’d like to talk about the shopping center nearby my home/ 5 minutes
away from my university. (It’s a 4-storey building.)
I guess that’s why I love going there so often.
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Aquarium
Well, the place I’d like to talk about is the aquarium half an hour away from my school. I love going there for three reasons.
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Sample answer: TST
T: Topic sentence (one sentence) S: Supporting ideas (personal
experience, examples, figures, reasons) T: Transition (first, second, also, finally,
To begin with, I really feel relaxed when I see the beautiful fishes of different colors swim freely in the water tank.

托福写作机经全分类229页PPT

举例的探讨
假设第三人称 Suppose one/ a student/ an individual--,
第三段
好处On the other hand, the specialization on one subject allows a student to develop a deep understanding of it, and therefore, apply the knowledge of it into practice.
反驳However, I cannot fully approve of their opinion.
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关键在于
多思考，多换位
机经分析篇
教育篇
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分类
学校
活动与学习
教师
学生
选课
分数学习重点
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活动与学习
Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries.
定义
A University is an institution of higher learning providing facilities for studying and research and authorized to grant academic degrees.
一种观点 A notion that the distribution of school budget on libraries and sport activities should be balanced is advocated by some social critics.

《托福综合写作》课件

无法准确捕捉关键信息
考生在听听力材料时，可能无法准确捕捉到关键信息和细节，导致写作时无法准确回应阅读材料中的观点。
笔记部分常见问题解答
笔记过于详细
考生在记录关键信息和细节时，可能会过于详细，导致笔记混乱，难以在写作时快速回顾和整理信息。
笔记缺乏条理
考生可能无法有效地组织笔记，导致信息缺乏逻辑性和条理性，影响写作时的信息整合和回应。
托福综合写作考试内容
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阅读材料
提供一篇约500字的学术文章，主题涉及社会科学、人文科学或自然科学等领域。
听力材料
一段约200字的讲座节选，与阅读材料主题相关，主要反驳或支持阅读材料中的观点。
写作要求
基于阅读和听力材料，撰写一篇议论文，字数要求为250字左右。
托福综合写作评分标准
掌握阅读技巧
学会快速浏览、跳读、略读等技巧，提高阅读效率。
扩大词汇量
掌握常用词汇和短语，减少阅读中的障碍。
提高听力水平
多听英语材料
如新闻、讲座、电影、电视剧等，提高英语听力理解能力。
练习听写
听一段英文材料，尝试将其中的重要信息记录下来，有助于提高听力细节把握能力。
精听与泛听结合
既要注重细节，也要把握整体意思。
内容相关度
文章内容是否与阅读和听力材料紧密相关，是否准确理解并
回应了材料中的观点。
篇章结构
文章结构是否清晰，段落划分是否合理，逻辑关系是否严密。
语言表达
文章的语言是否准确、流畅，用词是否得当，语法和拼写是否正确。
句子结构和词汇运用
文章中是否有丰富的句型和词汇运用，是否能够运用较难的
词汇和句型来表达思想。

TOEFL-WRITING-托福写作PPT课件

• Try :在过去的二十年中，花在食物上的钱逐渐减少了。
• In the last two decades ,there has been a gradual decrease
• in the amount of money that is spent on food.
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• e.g. Where there is a will ,there is a way.
• famous→ • renowned / noted / celebrated.
• e.g.He was soon one of the most celebrated young painter in
England.
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• clever → • intelligent / brilliant /ingenious(不仅聪明，还具有原创性）
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• notes:
• 高端词：significant / considerable / substantial
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increase : n. / decrease
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定从
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in the last decade(s)
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significant / gradual / slight
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number / amount (修饰不可数n）
• e.g. 2. 有其父，必有其子。
• 改为：有其师，必有其徒。 • 模仿作用：精确性、可读性。
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• e.g.1. Do you speak English?
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Do you speak Mandarin?
• e.g. 2. Prices have risen sharply in the last decade.

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 4

1. 托福独立写作—结尾段 *“具象拆分”角角度的归纳： Owing to the limitation of room, I am unable to give more examples, but I believe that the cases of … and….have already proven the validity of my point of view. *例题：与过去相比比，现在的广广告变得不诚实了 *结尾：To put it in a nutshell, in today’s world, advertisements are indeed less honest than they were in the past. Owing to the limitation of room, I am unable to give more examples, but I believe that the cases of restaurant and training school have already proven the validity of my point of view.
1. 托福独立写作—让步段（堵漏） [例1] 学生生是否应该兼职？ *观点：Students should take part-‐time jobs. *主题句1：Students can make some pocket money to reduce their parents’ Pinancial burden. *主题句2：Some working experience will be accumulated, which is benePicial for their future career. *让步段结构：打工工—学业下降—只要合理安排时间

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 1

*人人批&机器批？
1. 托福独立写作--评分标准
1）有效地针对话题完成任务（跑题：没看懂题目；缺少因果关系；没注意限定）；!
例1：同不同意：the government should offer the Internet access to the public free of charge.
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托福强化写作! （1）! !
@谢侃老老师!
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课程进度
课次 1! 2! 3! 4! 5-6!
教学目标独立写作评分标准（投其所好）、审题（制定策略）
如何写开头段、中间段总论如何写中间段（论点+论证+论据）如何写让步段、结尾段；*范文讲解如何处理综合写作（信息解构+信息重组）
《侃哥托福范文文》怎么用用？!
*题型：应不应该+选择 *角度：利弊分析 *观点：同意家长应该帮孩子做作业（一一种诡异的价值观，注意：托福评分无无所谓观点是否奇葩，只在乎语言言。因为他们认为“任何一一种观点都值得尊重”。逻辑上只要说得通就好了。）! a) 可以让作业出类拔萃，建立孩子信心； b) 可以引导孩子形成良好的学习思维。
• 25篇原创范文文! • 中文文翻译! • 素材整理（论证+例子子）! • 好词好句的整理!
1. 托福独立写作--评分标准（5分）
1. effectively addresses the writing task 有效地针对话题完成任务；
2. is well organized and well developed 结构清晰、充分展开； 3 . uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis 使用适当的解释和例证去支持论点； 4. displays consistent facility in the use of language 体现出连贯性； 5. demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, though it may have occasional errors 句式丰富，措辞合适，允许小的错误。

新托福写作PPT课件

petitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics) 12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable) 13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way) 14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid) plain=grumble (complain something in a badtempered way) 18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe) 20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel
二、新托福独立写作模板

托福综合写作pptppt课件共44页

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① 看首句找主旨
• P145 Unit 8 食物问题
• 主旨：
• The university is planning to change the food-service system on campus.
• The university decides to foodservice system
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• 2. Charitable gifts can also be made for reasons involving personal interest.
• Personal interest is another reason for charitable gifts.
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• 3. In addition to tax benefits, donors often receive favorable publicity for making donations, and they have an opportunity to influence the world around them.
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少 ~ → ↓ choice
• Cost: 比 → c ↓
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No比→ ↑
• Serv：good
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bad
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• Sch plan: 多cmpy→ ↑choice
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少 ~ → ↓ choice
• We have many choices about food among many companies. Conversely, the choices are less if there are one or tow companies.

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 3

1. 托福独立写作—中间段总论 *意义不重合 *例题：Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. *A同学的理由 1）说真话可以建立好人际关系 2）说真话可以得到朋友的信任 3）说真话可以不用圆谎
1. 托福独立写作—中间段主题句 3）与主观点构成直接的因果关系 *主观点是果，主题句是因；【题】苹果手手机和三星手手机，哪个好？ A同学：苹果手手机好：1）well-‐honed hardware；2） user-‐friendly software B同学：苹果手手机好：1）a big fan of Steve Jobs；2） have a dislike for Korea
1. 托福独立写作—中间段说理论证 3）对比比论述【题】 Agree or disagree: it is easier to be well-‐ educated than it was in the past. *主题句1：互联网网的出现 *说理论证：Before the emergence of the Internet, traditional classroom was where students received education, yet the scarcity of educational resources deprived many people of the opportunity to be well educated. Thanks to updated information technology, everyone can enjoy high-‐quality education equally in front of a computer with Internet access.

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 5

1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构） *如何深度解构听力力材料 1）听力力开头段：反驳阅读观点 *听力力开头举例：（1）Many scientists have problems with the arguments you read in the passage. They don’t think those arguments prove that dinosaurs were endotherms. （2）Unfortunately none of the arguments about what the Chaco great houses were used for is convincing.
1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构） *如何深度结构阅读材料 2）阅读中间段：主题句1+说理论证2 *开头中间段例1： Paradoxically, “vast working experiences”, which were believed to be the precious asset of old workers, were turned against them. This is because after many decades of working on the same position and dealing with similar situations, employees in their Cifties feel bored of going to ofCices every day. Therefore, retiring early seems to be a luring remedy for exhausted old workers. à 怎么速记？记完整因果链！
1. 托福独立写作—综合写作（解构）

《托福写作教程》课件

Q1
托福写作的评分标准是什么？
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托福写作的评分标准主要包括内容、组织和语言三个方面。内容方面要求观点明确、逻辑清晰；组织方面要求文章结构合理、段落分明；语言方面要求语法准确、表达流畅。
Q2
如何提高托福写作的语言表达能力？
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提高语言表达能力的有效方法是多读、多写、多听。多读可以培养语感，熟悉常用表达方式；多写可以锻炼语言组织能力，提高写作技巧；多听可以增强语感，熟悉英语表达方式。
综合写作范文解析
总结词
综合写作范文解析部分主要介绍托福考试中综合写作题型的答题技巧和范文示例。
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详细描述
这部分内容将重点讲解如何进行有效的阅读、听力和写作的整合，并提供一些综合写作题型的答题技巧。同时，将提供一些优秀的范文示例，帮助考生更好地理解综合写作的评分标准和要求。
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CATALOGUE
《托福写作教程》ppt课件
CATALOGUE
目录
• 托福写作简介 • 托福写作技巧 • 托福写作题型解析 • 托福写作范文解析 • 托福写作模拟试题及答案 • 学生常见问题解答
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CATALOGUE
托福写作简介
托福写作考试目的
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评估非英语母语者的英语写作能力
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确保考生具备足够的英语表达能力，以适应国外大学的学习和生活
独立写作题型解析
总结词
独立写作要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇150-225词的作文，就某一话题阐述自己的观点。
详细描述
独立写作题目通常涉及教育、文化、科技、社会等话题，要求考生在有限时间内清晰、有条理地表达自己的观点，并使用具体例子和细节支持论点。
评分标准
独立写作的评分主要依据内容、语言、结构和例子四个方面，要求考生在文章中展现出良好的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。

侃哥托福真题范文集(2014.9.1-2014.4.19)

2013.9.1托福独立作文范文+解析侃哥Kevin题：A or DA: Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth w atching.题型：绝对题观点：让步角度：具象拆分开头：话题引入+双方/对方观点呈现+我方观点With r emarkable p rogress o f p eople’s l iving s tandard, w atching m ovies s eems t o be a dispensable part of people’s lives, as movies not only entertain the viewers but also enlighten them. Some people claim that only movies that can teach us something a bout r eal l ife a re w orth w atching. H owever, I r egard t his a ssertion a s arbitrary and unilateral, because there are at least 2 other kinds of movie that are also worth watching: comedy and scary movie. And my reasons and examples a re g iven b elow.中间段1：喜剧片让人哈哈一乐，放松心情。

（主题句+说理论证句+细节扩展）Comedies a re w orth w atching, f or t hey g ive u s a r eal g ood w ay t o r elax o urselves. It is because the only goal that the comedies try to achieve is to make people laugh and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of best medicines to alleviate p ressure, p ain o r d epression. I s till c an r emember w hen I w as p reparing for the college entrance examination-‐-‐a make-‐or-‐break exam that evendetermines one’s future-‐-‐the most enjoyable thing was to watch a Jim Carrey movie after a whole day’s hard work. Through those hilarious plots and exaggerating a cting o f J im C arrey, m y i ntense m inds s uddenly g ot r elaxed.中间段2：恐怖片让人能在安全的环境下体验恐惧的刺激。

Toefl speaking 基础 part .ppt

OVERALL COMPETENCY LIST IN SPEAKING PART
My instructor understands me when I ask a question in English. When I speak English, other people can understand me. I can give prepared presentation in English. I can talk in English for a few minutes about a topic I am familiar
PRONUNCIATION
Listen to yourself. Slow down. Picture it... Get physical. Watch yourself. Copy the experts. Practice makes perfect. Find a language buddy. Be poetic. ( intonation & stress ) Sing a song.
TOEFL SPEAKING
AMANDA
WHAT IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING YOU HAVE TO SHOW IN THE
TOEFL SPEAKING TEST? Communicative ability / Fluency -- smoothness, speed,
English.
TOEFL SPEAKING---SIX QUESTIONS
Personal experiences (15/45)---easy Personal preference (15/45)---easy Personal opinion / discussion (30/60)---easy General concept / specific (30/60)---difficult Solution (20/60)---easy Summary (20/60)---difficult

TOEFL Online 谢侃托福写作方法课讲义 2

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⻅见!
话题引入入部分---没有抓住“核心心词”!
1. 托福独立写作—话题引入
*定义法：分析该核心词的含义或意义（好处） *核心词：体育、社会活动、学术课 *话题引入部分：Sports and social activities areห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ not only conducive to students’ physical quality, but also contribute a lot to their emotional quotient.
1. 托福独立写作—他人观点
2）这个现象引发了社会上的热议 *句型： a) Thus, an interesting discussion (heated debate) arises: + 稍作改变的题目 b) With this phenomenon comes an interesting discussion: +稍作改变的题目 c) This phenomenon(It) brings(triggers, arouses) an interesting discussion: +稍作改变的题目
1. 托福独立写作—开头段总论 *例题：同不同意：高官也应享受“隐私权”？请排序： 1. 最近高官频频落马让大家开始关注某一特殊群体的 “隐私权”----名人隐私权。 2. 作为公众的表率，高官应该牺牲掉一部分的隐私权。 3. 我的观点基于下述的理由和例子。 4. 隐私权是一个人最基本的权利之一。
1. 托福独立写作—话题引入
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1. 托福独立写作—他人观点
*3种“他人观点”表达方式： 1）有些人认为… 2）因此，社会上出现了一个有意思的讨论/热议的话题:… *3）当涉及…，通常有…种方式

托福独立写作范文详解ppt课件

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Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
Teenagers 30 years ago did not have the instant access to computers and Internet connection.
They will be more reliant on their parents for answers should they encounter problems.
beneficial. The option seems to be easy, beneficial
and convenient.
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Yes, I agree. Young people are less dependent. It is because young people can make money. It’s because young people are mature. It’s because young people are emotionally independent.

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应不应该题············A 现象证明题············B 比较题（横向比、纵向比）·····C 绝对题··············D
1.托福独立写作—题目分类（题型识别练习）
*政府花钱：政府应偏重投资于艺术还是体育？ *科技进步：科技让孩子变得更有创造力了吗？ *环境问题：保护野生动物和环境重不重要?
a)求职就业，需要政府增加就业机会； b)购房问题，需要政府抑制房价，保障房廉租房
1.托福独立写作—题目分类
1）按照话题分类（掌握话题相关素材及表达）
社会（政府花钱、科技进步、*环境问题）教育（*教育方法、儿童成长、大学教育、教师发展）媒体（电视电影、广告媒体）生活（休闲娱乐、旅游度假、交友问题）工作（个人成功、团队合作）
1.托福独立写作—题目分类
2）按照题型大致可分：（明确写作角度）
3. uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis 使用适当的解释和例证去支持论点；
4. displays consistent facility in the use of language 体现出连贯性；
5. demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, though it may have occasional errors
句式丰富，措辞合适，允许小的错误。
*补充：人批&机器批；哪个占比高？
1.托福独立写作--评分标准（评分标准）
1. 有效地针对话题完成任务（不跑题）；
*例1：The best leaders are willing to admit when they made a mistake. *例2：Nowadays, it is much easier for a person to achieve success without family’s help than in the past.
1.托福独立写作--评分标准（评分标准）
2.+3. 能充分展开，结构清晰；使用适当的解释和例证
1）主题句：英语是国际性语言； 2）解释：因为英语大国很发达，主导世界，其他国家为了学习其先进文化和科技，鼓励学英语，客观上使得ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ 语成为国际通用语言； 3）例证：去日本旅游，可以用英语沟通。
1.托福独立写作--评分标准（评分标准）
1.托福独立写作—写作角度
1）利弊分析—大多适用于应不应该题 2）具象拆分—大多适用于绝对题、现象证明题 3）原因挖掘—大多适用于比较题、现象证明题
1.托福独立写作—写作角度（利弊分析）
题：Agree or disagree: government should tax drivers when the traffic is in great amount. *题型：应不应该题 *角度：利弊分析 *观点：“政府应该开征拥堵税”，请分析它的“利” a)通过增加开车上路的成本减少驾驶员用车
如何写结尾段，用原创范文回顾如何处理综合写作（解码+编码）
第一节课
• 评分标准 • 题目分类
1.托福独立写作--评分标准（5分）
1. effectively addresses the writing task 有效地针对话题完成任务；
2. is well organized and well developed 结构清晰、充分展开；
*休闲娱乐：你认为20年后人是否会变得更休闲？
*旅游度假：人们要把钱存起来以备未来之需还是花在旅游度假上？
*交友问题：最佳交友的方式：1旅游；2体育；3社区活动 *个人成功：一个人要想成功，应该与众不同还是步人后尘？
*团队合作：在一个团队里面，听不进他人批评的人不会成功。
第二节课
• 写作角度 • 观点选择 • 文章结构
A.应不应该题; B.现象证明
题； C.比较题； D.绝对题。
*教育方法：学生从专业课收获多，还是从课外活动收获多？ *儿童成长：孩子要不要从小学理财?
*大学教育：大学生应不应该一边上课一边兼职？
*教师发展：教师要不要每5年进修一次? *电视电影：国外电影电视好看还是国内电影电视节目好看？
*广告媒体：现在的广告比以前更诚实了还是更不诚实？
4. 体现出连贯性
*transitional words：表逻辑关系的衔接词（并列、因果、转折、解释说明、递进等等）
1.托福独立写作--评分标准（评分标准）
5. 句式丰富，措辞合适，允许小的错误
1）句式变化： It is, there be, 人为主语，物为主语，时间为主语…（*中国-30年-巨变；*备考托福-能力提升） 2）措辞合适：语言地道，减少中式英文（*耐心有限度，复制品很逼真） 3）允许小错误： *Typo：people(poeple); nowadays (nowaday) *Minor语法错误三单、大小写； *Major语法错误句式杂糅（run-on）There are a lot of students wants to study abroad.
托福强化班 —写作
主讲人谢侃（侃哥Kevin）
前杭州新东方北美部总监 8年托福写作教学经验大陆首批ETS访问学者美国亚利桑那大学英语系访问学者 100教育首批签约教师
课次 1 2 3 4-5 6 7-8
9-10
课程安排
教学目标独立写作评分标准如何投其所好
如何审题制定写作策略如何写开头段
如何写body段（论点+论证+论据）如何写让步段
b)政府所获款项可以用来治堵，比如修路等
1.托福独立写作—写作角度（具象拆分）
题：Agree or disagree: since most people can solve problems by themselves or with the help from their families,the help from government is often not necessary. *题型：绝对题 *角度：具象拆分（在一个具体的情形下探讨） *观点：不同意，很多地方都需要政府的支持，比如：