新东方托福综合写作课件

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托福独立写作篇章结构126页PPT

(today和were became时态不搭) I am having to emphasize the importance of
doing exercise in the morning When Jack was five years old, he has
managed to recite more than 300 Chinese classic poems 注意动词的时态
classrooms Girls had better be bring up in a rich
environment (be brought up表被动) 动词要正确的使用
减少语法错误
3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers
独立写作题型分类
1.支持或反对 agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
减少语法错误
2. Work at home can bring us a lot of benefits (Work改成working，动名词做主语) Many students are like studying AP history (are和like只能保留一个) The Internet can instead of teachers in many

托福独立写作范文详解ppt课件

Be simple and sweet
This is convenient. This is easy. This is beneficial. This is easy, convenient and beneficial. Many find it easy, convenient and
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Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
When we talk about dependence of today’s young people, it is hard to be precise or clear.
But as we talk about psychological dependence of teenagers between 16 to 18, we have a better idea that young people are indeed more autonomous than 30 years ago.
How To Use Language in TOEFL Writing

课件：托福强化写作---30分钟结构

课程进度
第六课
Objective Required Material
0-30 30-60 60-90 90-120 120-150
段落展开
第五课
课程进度因果对比例证（1）（一般性例子、个人生活经历）例证（2）（假设情况，名人例证）范文分析
第七课
Objective Required Material
0-30 30-60 60-90 90-120 120-150
综合写作
第五课
课程进度利弊分析类（1）阅读、听力部分技巧利弊分析类（2）写作模板理论证明类（1）阅读、听力部分技巧理论证明类（2）写作模板
练习
60-90min 90话题、证明现象）例证列举范文分析
第五课
Objective
Required Material
机经串讲
第六课
0-30 30-60 60-90 90-120 120-150
09年机经 09年机经 09年机经 10年机经 10年机经
课程进度 Introduction Body paragraphs Topic sentences Conclusion 综合练习
第三课
Objective
Required Material
第三课
观点选择
1. 官方指南第三版 2. 自编讲义
0-30min 30-60min 60-90min 90-120min 120150min
TOEFL iBT 强化班写作课程结构模板
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引言
本模板以15小时(2.5*6)的托福写作课程为例，示范每节课的 1.Objective 教学目标 2.Required Material 配套教材 3.Syllabus 课程体系 4.Recommended Reading 推荐材料

托福ppt课件4(xdf)精编版

1 effectively addresses the topic and task • 内容：切题
2 well organized and well developed, using appropriate explanations, exemplifications and details
• 展开充分：解释、例证、细节。
二、独立写作的语言运用（第一部分） • Section1 用词合理 • Section2 句式多样 • Section3 表达地道
独立写作语言运用的误区： • 低频词越多越好 • 句子越长越好 • 文章字数越多越好
Section 1 用词合理
• 低频词的合适搭配较少，使用时要注意准确合理。不恰当的低频词的使用破坏语言的一致性。
Savings are quite important for all families. A plenty of money in the bank account can help us get through emergencies and accidents. I have a friend named Victor. He is really a handsome boy with over 1.8 meter height. Also, his physical condition is so admirable for everyone. His family kept a good habit of depositing money into bank account each month. Last year, he was involved in a horrible accident in the rush hour. He injured terribly and a large amount of money was immediately required to get an operation. Most of their family’s deposit was put into use and howevertherefore, he got through this nightmare. He feels so grateful for the habit of saving money. This incident makes me realize how significant deposits are. (127 words)

托福综合写作讲义-202X年学习资料

托福综合写作讲义-202X年学习资料TOEFL Integrated Writing Lecture Notes - Study Materials for 202XIntroduction:- Welcome to the TOEFL Integrated Writing Lecture. Today, we will discuss the key strategies and techniques to improve your performance in the TOEFL Integrated Writing section.- The Integrated Writing section requires you to read a passage and listen to a lecture on a particular topic. You will then need to write an essay summarizing the main points from both sources and provide your opinion.- This section assesses your ability to read, listen, and writein English, as well as your critical thinking and analytical skills.Understanding the Prompt:- Before you start writing, it is crucial to understand the prompt fully. Read the passage and listen to the lecture carefully.- Identify the main topic or issue discussed in both the passage and the lecture. Highlight the key points and arguments presented in each source.- Pay attention to any contrasting or supporting ideas between the passage and the lecture. Take notes to help you structure your essay.Organizing Your Essay:第1页/共4页- Start your essay with an introduction that briefly summarizes the topic and introduces your opinion. State whether you agree or disagree with the main ideas presented.- In the body paragraphs, discuss the main points from the passage and the lecture. Use specific examples and references from both sources to support your arguments.- Present contrasting or supporting ideas in separate paragraphs. Clearly indicate which source supports or opposes a particular point.- Use transitional phrases to guide your reader through the essay and make it easy to follow your ideas.- Finally, end your essay with a conclusion that restates your opinion and summarizes the main points from the passage and the lecture.Writing Style and Grammar:- In the TOEFL Integrated Writing section, it is essential to demonstrate your English language skills. Pay attention to your writing style, grammar, and vocabulary.- Avoid simple or repetitive sentences. Use a variety of sentence structures to showcase your language proficiency.- Ensure that your grammar is accurate. Avoid spelling mistakes and punctuation errors.- Use academic vocabulary and phrases to express your ideas effectively. This will enhance the overall quality of your essay.Time Management:- Time management is crucial in the TOEFL Integrated Writing section. Plan your time wisely to allocate sufficient time for reading, listening, and writing.- Use the available time to read the passage carefully and take notes. Then, listen to the lecture attentively and compare it with the main points from the passage.- Allocate enough time to outline your essay. This will help you organize your thoughts and ensure a coherent structure.- Reserve ample time to write your essay. This includes drafting, revising, and editing.- Remember to leave a few minutes at the end to review your essay for any grammar or spelling mistakes.Practice and Feedback:- Practice is key to improving your performance in the TOEFL Integrated Writing section. Familiarize yourself with various topics, practice reading and listening skills, and write timed essays regularly.- Seek feedback on your essays from English teachers or native English speakers. They can provide valuable insights and suggestions for improvement.- Review sample essays and analyze the strengths and weaknesses of each. This will help you understand the scoring criteria and identify areas for improvement.- Focus on improving your ability to effectively summarize the main points from both the passage and the lecture, as well as providing clear and logical arguments in your essay.Conclusion:- The TOEFL Integrated Writing section may seem challenging at first, but with practice and the right strategies, you can improve your performance significantly.第3页/共4页- Remember to understand the prompt, organize your essay effectively, use proper grammar and vocabulary, manage your time wisely, and seek feedback to continually improve.- Good luck with your TOEFL Integrated Writing preparation, and remember to practice and stay confident!。

托福议论文写作PPT课件

• What is your opinion?
2021/3/7
CHENLI
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标准化写法：对立opinions陈述
• No one can deny that the strongest or the most powerful athletes often win the sports games. However, some people tend to believe that mental attitude plays a vital role.
完全型单边支持
TOPIC
Idea 1
Idea 2
Idea 3
Detail 1
Detail 2
Detail 3
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Detail 1
Detail 2
Detail 3
CHENLI
Detail 1
Detail 2
Detail 3
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修正型单边支持
TOPIC
Concession
Idea 2
Idea 3
托福议论文写作
2021/3/7
CHENLI
1
关于审题
• 跑题，偏题，漏题 • There is an increasing number of juvenile
delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon, and offer some recommendations. • Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

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• 阅读内容准确把握要点，但若大段抄阅读内容则会扣分；
• 听力内容准确把握要点，但如果细节遗漏（或写错）得4分；
• 阅读与听力之间的关系阐述或有不清楚之处；
• 语言上出现了影响理解文章的某些严重错误。
综合写作3分标准
• 阅读内容把握要点，但若大段照抄阅读内容则会扣分；
• 听力内容漏掉（或写错）一个要点直接得3 分；
听力题材不确定电脑打字
Summary Comparison
结构式笔记
Structured Notes
Team responsible for plan/ get work done
free-ride people not do much—recognition Real contribution—not recognized attitude opporeading
综合写作
Integrated Writing 汪昭
综合写作模式
• A完全反驳
• B完全赞同 • C原因措施
综合写作5分标准
• 阅读内容准确把握要点； • 听力内容准确把握要点以及细节； • 阅读与听力之间的关系阐述清楚； • 可以容忍一些语言上的不至于影响理
解的小错误。
综合写作4分标准
• 阅读与听力之间的关系阐述不清或有错； • 语言上出现了较多错误以至于影响理解。
综合写作2分标准
• 大段照抄阅读内容； • 听力内容有要点以及细节，但如果漏掉
（或写错）两个要点得2分； • 阅读与听力之间的关系没有阐述清楚； • 阐述自己观点； • 语言上出现了较多错误。
综合写作1分标准
• 写了听力和阅读内容中的只言片语。
First, in 1882, several decades after Austen's death, Austen's family gave permission to use the portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters. Austen's family clearly recognized it as a portrait of the author. So, for over a century now, the Austen family itself has endorsed the claim that the girl in the portrait is Jane Austen. Second, the face in the portrait clearly resembles the one in Cassandra's sketch, which we know depicts Austen. Though somewhat amateurish, the sketch communicates definite details about Austen's face. Even though the Cassandra sketch is of an adult Jane Austen, the features are still similar to those of the teenage girl in the painting. The eyebrows, nose, mouth, and overall shபைடு நூலகம்pe of the face are very much like those in the full-length portrait. Third, although the painting is unsigned and undated, there is evidence that it was painted when Austen was a teenager. The style links it to Ozias Humphrey, a society portrait painter who was the kind of professional the wealthy Austen family would hire. Humphrey was active in the late 1780s and early 1790s, exactly the period when JaneAusten was the age of the girl in the painting.
综合写作0分标准
• 写的不是英文； • 写的不是正常人类能够看懂的字符； • 写的内容跟阅读和听力完全没有关系。
Jane Austen (1775-1817) is one of the most famous of all English novelists, and today her novels are more popular than ever, with several recently adapted as Hollywood movies. But we do not have many records of what she looked like. For a long time, the only accepted image of Austen was an amateur sketch of an adult Austen made by her sister Cassandra. However recently a professionally painted, full-length portrait of a teenage girl owned by a member of the Austen family has come up for sale. Although the professional painting is not titled Jane Austen, there are good reasons to believe she is the subject.