2011-2019年高考英语全国卷短文改错真题及答案
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短文改错(2013---2019全国卷高考)真题汇编(共18篇附答案详解)一、2013年全国卷(新课标I卷)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.76.【参考答案】holding改为hold【考查内容】固定结构【解析思路】used to do sth 过去常常做某事。
77.【参考答案】passes改为passed【考查内容】时态【解析思路】过去时态。
78.【参考答案】much改为well【考查内容】副词【解析思路】我非常记得我的祖父79.【参考答案】shoulder改为shoulders【考查内容名词复数【解析思路】是双肩。
80.【参考答案】toward改to【考查内容固定结构【解析思路】turn to 。
(2019年新课标卷1)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was inprimary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.B(2019年新课标卷2)Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.C(2019年新课标卷3)I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.E(2018全国二卷)When I was little, Friday’s night wa s our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.F(2018全国三卷)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instruct or’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.H(2017全国二卷)Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!I(2017全国三卷)When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.K(2016全国二卷)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.L(2016全国三卷)The teenage year from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However,my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.N(2015全国二卷)One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman sawhim drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.O(2014全国一卷)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes( 圣女果)in our back garden. Since then- for all these years-we had been allowing tomatoes toself-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomatoplants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!P(2014全国二卷)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time withafter-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .Q(2013全国二卷)The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Ha ve tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.R(2013全国二卷)Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world fi nd we don’t have enough wa ter. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely,Li Hua。
I was often troubled by lack of confidences。
So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term。
The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education。
At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools。
While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people。
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving。
【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences。
So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidence aThe exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education。
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Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是校排球队队长李华。
高考短文改错 12011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.第一节(10分,每小题1分)1.cousin –cousin’s2. rich – richer3.on --- in4.put ---put it/that5. enjoy to --- enjoy6.faced --- face7. Late --- Later8.slow --- slowly9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never高考短文改错 22011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three perweek. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Followthis explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.注:文章红色部分为需要修改的地方!第1个考查主谓一致,were—was;第2个考查名词单复数weeks--week第3个考查介词从外面来,介词应该用from.第4个考查冠词the--a第5个考查非限制性定语从句注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。
2011-2019年高考全国卷短文改错真题汇编2011年(全国卷I)One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.2011年(全国卷II)Dear George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours, Mike2012年(全国卷I)Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won't easy, I know,but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?2012年(全国卷II)Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is bec oming less and less. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from blacktoward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2013年新课标2The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.2013年(全国一卷)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the freehigh-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 2013年(全国二卷)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2014年(全国I卷)Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! 2014年(全国II卷)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many h omework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. Theteachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(2015全国I卷)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to d o so, we’ll live to regret it.(2015全国II卷)One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.(2016新课标I)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncles tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. (2016新课标II)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Someclassmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.(2016新课标III)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.(2017新课标I)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.(2017新课标II)Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden , that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!(2017新课标III)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, Ientered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.(2018全国卷1)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(2018全国卷2)When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we wo uld play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unw illing to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.(2018全国卷3)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.” Immediate, I raised my hand.2019全国卷1I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.2019全国卷2Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.2019全国卷3I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.11-19年全国卷短文改错汇编答案2011年(全国卷I)76.把memory改为memories。
2011年(全国卷I)One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me.Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.2011年(全国卷I)76.把memory改为memories。
77.在lunches前面加the。
78.把hold改为held。
79. 把Since改为When/After。
80.me改为I 81. 把was去掉。
82. 把specially改为special。
83. 把them改为it。
84. 把or改为and。
85. 把over改为of。
2011年(全国卷II)Dear George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It was really a nice experience.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours, Mike2011年(全国卷II)76. after---since 77.them---us 78. for---with 79. That改为Where 80.去掉much81.staying---stay 82.day---days 83.fly---flew 84.trip 前a 85.better---more2012年(全国卷I)Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country.To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won't easy, I know,but we have to start anywhere.What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil.Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home.For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?2012年(全国卷I)1. efforts改为effort 2.off改为down 3.把to删掉4. won't be 5.anywhere---somewhere 6. and—or 7. Other---Another 8. electric—electricity 9.and改为but 10 television后加on2012年(全国卷II)Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving.Water is important.We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water.To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water.Next, no drinking water should left running.Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2012年(全国卷II)76.you后加my 77.animal-animals 78.or-nor 79.seemed-seems 80.we-they81.a-the/this/that 82.though-because/since/as 83. left 改为be left ing-used 85.去掉for2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2013年新课标11.hold改为hold2.passes改为passed3.much改为well/clearly4.shoulder改为shoulders5.toward 改为to/into6.himself改为him7. he was改为and he was8.去a9.during改为when 10.never改为ever2013年新课标2The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.2013年新课标2 1.去of 2.Have改为Having 3.that改为which 4.becomes改为became 5. of day改为of the day 6. Interesting 改为Interestingly 7.by改为with/to 8.drank改为drunk 9. good cup改为good cups 10. grow改为growth2013年(全国一卷)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 2013年(全国一卷)1.visit改为visited 2.but改为and/so 3. comfortably 改为comfortable 4.were改为was 5.for改为with 6.for→with 7.taking→taken take 8.dish→dishes 9.such后加a such 10.me→mine2013年(全国二卷)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2013年(全国二卷)1.before改成ago;2. for去掉;3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately4. week 改为weeks;5.so 改为but;6.will改为would;7.myself改为me8.farther改为far;9.interested改为interesting;10.truth前面加the2014年(全国一卷)Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.As result, the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!2014年(全国一卷)2014年(全国二卷)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon.We di dn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities.For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.2014年(全国二卷)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessonTherein the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework.don’t muchTherefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do readingforfor one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.hoursMy dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowerslooksand trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by thesit lake listening∧music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only ourto helpfulteachers but also our friends.2015(全国一卷)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.2015(全国一卷)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am livingthoughtin a city, but I miss my home in∧countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.the andUnfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of withstudies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airsserious airwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways toMany findprotect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.our/the2015(全国二卷)One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2015(全国二卷)71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly2016(全国一卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that love.Though not very big, but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016全国一卷71. that →where 72. but去掉73.had→have 74. honest→ honesty 75. or→ and76. using →used 77. becoming前加of 78. the→a 79.our→his 80. steady → steadily2016(全国二卷)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.2016(全国二卷)1.how改为what2.chose改为choose3.take改为taking4.but改为and5.about后加the6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should9.thought改为think 10.many改为much2017 IIn the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”“Slow down!” “Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.71. eight een →eighteenth 72. first前加the 73. so →but/yet 74.goes →went 75. word → words 76. Turning →Turn 77. much去掉78. late→later 79. suddenly →sudden 80. on→of2017 IIMr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet.When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!1.【答案】all-both【考察语法点】代词【解析】此处指代前文当中的Mr. and Mrs. Zhang,all指代三人及以上,both指代两人。
高考短文改错 12011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again。
I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.第一节(10分,每小题1分)1.cousin –cousin’s2. rich – richer3.on --- in4.put ---put it/that5. enjoy to --- enjoy6.faced --- face7. Late --- Later8.slow --- slowly9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never高考短文改错 22011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three perweek. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study all such reports,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article,which saidthat all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remainded above the previous level.注:文章红色部分为需要修改的地方!第1个考查主谓一致,were—was。
短文改错11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher’s help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then,I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make small changes to protect our water resources.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough.However,we should take exercise regularly to improve our health.First of all,taking PE classes seriously.In PE classes we can build up our bodies with thecareful guidance of PE teachers.Secondly,it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks.In addition,it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested.As the old saying go,"The first wealth is health." Let's do more exercise to live a better and healthy life.3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2019年高考英语短文改错真题汇编(名师剖析解题思路与技巧+实战训练,建议下载练习)一、高考真题再现首先请同学看下面的一篇短文改错,这是一篇高考真题。
熟悉题目要求,了解试题难度。
高考真题:第四部分写作(共两节;满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are somuch that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!二、具体学习1下面我们步入短文改错的知识学习。
2011-2019高考英语短文改错真题及答案2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three perweek. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,WayneTyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)Last Sunday morning,when l was having a walk in the park near my home,I cameacross a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seeneverywhere.I was reallydisappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was rightthere in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!2011高考英语试题My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend,he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.2012年浙江高考英语试题Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited thereunless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.Much loveFiona2012全国英语高考真题陕西卷My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. Fromthe time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. Iwas happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry andbroke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they beganto see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, myfather said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(四川卷)Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think forsome time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry beca use we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?2013年浙江省高考英语试卷真题Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2018全国卷1During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit mygrandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2017全国卷1In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2016全国卷1My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2015全国卷1When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in isgetting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then- for all these years-we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2018全国卷2When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I di dn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.2017全国卷2Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!2016全国卷2The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.2015全国卷2One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice tosee you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2014全国卷2My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We di dn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .2018全国卷3It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017全国卷3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2016全国卷3The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything a nd could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2019全国卷一I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school,I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.2019全国卷二Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.2019全国卷三I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like“Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.11。