短文改错公开课课件

生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。 写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。
Proof Reading 短文改错
Play a game
Find the wrong words and correct them.
be strict at sb be responsible with sb/sth be in business have sth on common have an effect in sb lose the heart make a great progress the war was broke out the accident was happened in the hurry share sth for sb apair of shoe a lot of equipments general speaking as soon as possibly
hold is
6.Among the park’s trees there are a science hall, an art centre a gym,…and…
归纳总结
时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、
错误主要错在 非谓语动词（to do/ doing/ done）
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国) If they had said was true, I would have a
Therefore
convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively. 5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.
patiently
归纳总结
a
back in the US, which was very interested.
interesting
2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. buying 3. Since then—for all these years—we had been allowing
completed
3.(2012全国) I win a national prize for painting last week.
won
4.(2013全国) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups
drunk
without handles. 5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
an
归纳总结
名词错误主要错在 单复数；可数与不可数；
泛指与特指；a.an.the 混用 冠词错误主要错在 漏用和多用
小试牛刀
1.(2012全国) My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. pleased 2.(2014全国) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
myself
again that I’ll concentrate more on studies. 3. Every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own .
their
指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用； 归纳总结 主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合 错误主要错在 句，名词性、定语从句）
词性错用，副词混用； 原级、比较级 错误主要错在 最高级的混用
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国)Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.
her
2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over
名词
Proof Reading
冠词 代词
介词 形容. 副词
近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表
考查内容 动 时间 词
名 词
介 词
连 词
冠 词
代 词
形容 副 词 词
2010年
3
1
2
1
1
1
0
1
2011年
2012 3 1
2
1 2 1
2
2 2 1
1
1 1 1
1
0 1 1
0
2 0 0
Homework--Check your answers
I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the ______ ∧being platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys . ______ giving and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . ______ and growing up. I am always young when I was staying . ______ am with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You . ______ it have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . _____ knowledge you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . ______ teach friends with your pupils and take good care of him. . ______ them Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win ______ respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work
改错步骤
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行 找错） 3. Read the passage again, check your answers. （检查核对，敲定终稿）
the a was was
with for on in on
a with Shoes equipment Generally possible
What is proof reading?
1. correct some grammar mistakes 2. connection between sentences 3. the main idea of the whole passage
归纳总结
并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用， 错误主要错在 上下文逻辑关系理解错用
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
luggage
2.(2014全国) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.
in
2.(2014全国) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our
of
father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in
cups
3.After learning English for several years, I have made a great progress. 4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
the
another 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life.
知 短 文 改 错 则 百 战 不 殆
设错方式？ 改错格式？
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你 同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
be
as very hard to make my dream come true.
______
6
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
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