2018高三短文改错二轮改错公开课

专题限时集训(二十六) 短文改错(Ⅲ)A(2018·潍坊市模拟)Last Sunday ，sixty students from our school pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum.The museum ，which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology ，covers area of 48,000 square meters.The moment when we entered the museum ，the exhibition caught their attention.In the museum ，we saw the latest progresses in science and technology.Moreover ，we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves.What appealed for us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.Though the visiting time was slight short ，we gained a lot.It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.【答案】Last Sunday ，sixty students from our school pay paida visit to China Science and Technology Museum.The museum ，which whosemain task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology ，covers ∧an area of 48,000 square meters.The moment when ﹨ we entered the museum ，theexhibition caught their our attention.In the museum ，we saw the latest progresses progressin science and technology.Moreover ，we did anamazed amazing scientific experiment by ourselves.What appealedfor to us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.Though the visiting time was slight slightly short ，we gained a lot.It is so suchan instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future. B(2018·成都市模拟)A terrible earthquake strike Wenchuan in 2008.Many people lost their lives and homes.After the earthquake under a fallen building ，a mother as well as her baby were found by some soldiers.When the soldiers were ready to taking them away ，they surprised to find the baby in the mother's arms still alive.The baby was sleeping but wasn't hurt at all.Between the dead mother and the living baby ，there was a cell phone with a short message on the screen.It read ，“Don't worry，my baby.Mom is for you.If you can survive ，don't forget that I lo ve you.” The story moved me deep.I couldn't hold back my tears when I read these word.Oneis great if he love others when he is in the danger.【答案】A terrible earthquake strike struckWenchuan in 2008.Many people lost their lives and homes.After the earthquake under a fallen building ，a mother as well as her baby were was found by some soldiers.When the soldiers were ready to taking takethem away ，they ∧were surprised to find the baby in the mother's arms still alive.The baby was sleeping but andwasn't hurt at all.Between the dead mother and the living baby ，there was a cell phone with a short message on the screen.It read ，“Don't worry，my baby.Momis for withyou.If you can survive ，don't forget that I love you.” The story moved me deep deeply.I couldn't hold back my tears when I read these word words .One is great if he love lovesothers when he is in the ﹨ danger. C(2018·宝鸡市质检)When we are happy ，we would like share our happiness with others ，making them know our enjoyment.When we are not in a good mood ，we wanted to get someone whom can listen to us.Be a listener is not easy.People always complain about our worries ，and a good listener should listen to them but learn to comfort them.To be a good listener can help us make good friend with others.The one who always listen to others tends to be easy-going.When he is in the trouble ，his friends will be willing to help him.So let's learn to be a good listener from then on.【答案】When we are happy ，we would like ∧to share our happiness with others ，making themknow our enjoyment.When we are not in a good mood ，we wanted want to get someone whom whocan listen to us.Be Being a listener is not easy.People always complain about our theirworries ，and a good listener should listen to them but andlearn to comfort them.To be a good listener can help us make good friend friendswith others.The one who always listen listensto others tends to be easy-going.When he is in the ﹨ trouble ，his friends will be willing to help him.So let's learn to be a good listener fromthen nowon. D(2018·河北省衡水中学模拟)Challenges of life remind me of my days in senior high school which I joined in the military training.It was the first time I have lived far away from my home ，so I found difficult to fit in.And the trained officer was strict with me.I once think I could not stick to the end.And anyway ，I succeeded.The trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life ，and the difficulty I came across have now all become a precious memory in my life.In a short ，I have learned to regard the challenges of life like a stepping stone to future success.【答案】Challenges of life remind me of my days in senior high school which whenI joined in the military training.It was the first time I have hadlived far away from my home ，so I found ∧it difficult to fit in.And the trained trainingofficer was strict with me.I once think thought I could not stick to the end.And Butanyway ，I succeeded.The trials made it much easy easier for me to adapt to life ，and the difficulty difficultiesI came across have now all become a precious memory in my life.In a ﹨ short ，I have learned to regard the challengesof life like asa stepping stone to future success.。

高考英语二轮复习：短文改错（1）一、改错题（共10题；共50分）1. ( 5分) （2021高三上·安徽开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Today I'll talk a little bit about Italian culture. Music plays a important role in the culture of Italy. Italian music is heavy influenced by its history. And the piano and the violin are said have been invented in Italy. Italians are fond of spend time with their families. In the old days, Italian families were used to be large. However, they are smaller in size now. Family member always get together at every festival. As for sports, one of the most popular sports in Italy are football. The Italian national team is one of the better in the world. Another popular sports include volleyball, basketball, boxing or bike riding.2. ( 5分) （2021高三上·蚌埠开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

1. 考点：方法和技巧的灵活运用一、句法错误（1）连词并列句缺并列连词；名词性从句作主语缺连词, 或者误用其他连词；关系代词、关系副词及从属连词在复合句中的使用是否正确；and, or, but, so, however, therefore 等词的运用是否正确。

短文改错对连词的考查仅限于上下文之间语意的连贯方面。

所以在做这类题目时, 重要的是要读懂上下文, 搞清楚上下句之间的关系。

掌握句式结构, 把握准语意关系是做好此类试题的关键, 如并列逻辑关系常见的词有and, both …and … not only …but also … as well as 等; 转折逻辑关系常见的词有however, but; 递进逻辑关系常见的词有what ’s more, moreover, besides 等。

例：Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.答案：was 改为were ；去掉were ；but 改为and思路分析：句意：我们四处逃跑，很幸运的是没有人受伤。

根据上下文语境可知表示并列关系。

（2）连接词与关系词的错误：这类错误主要出现在定语从句与状语从句中,正确地分析句与句之间的逻辑关系，才能选择合适的连接词与关系词。

例：Instead ，this other person told us a story ，it he said was quite well known…答案：this other 改为another ；it 改为which思路分析：后半句显然是一个非限制性定语从句修饰story ，所以应将 it 改为关系词which 。

二、行文逻辑错误（1）语意的颠倒这类错误多指在语意表达上用了相反的词，造成上下文逻辑推理上的自相矛盾。