高中英语短文改错——一轮复习
1、（ 2011·浙江省诸暨中学高三12月月考）
下面短文中共有10 处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at
that mom ent, but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’ t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am
wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in
return. In this way, we can get along each other happily and peacefully.
答案：短文改错
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at
when hurt
that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing ^ happened until the class was over. Though I had
had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’ t tell anyone and even refused the offer of walking
help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am
a in was wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept
their help. Someday we can help him in
them
return. In this way, we can get along ^ each other happily and peacefully.
with
2、（ 2011 ·浙江省温州市十校联合体高三上学期期末联考）
On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their
parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the
poor could only have breads with porridge( 粥 ). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor
with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now
many people on the earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world
could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from
the poor and the rich and also to make the parents know that too much material life won't always
do good to the children.
答案
3、（ 2011 ·浙江省温州市高三上学期五校联考）
A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by,“ Let me cle your boots. It just spends you only a penny.” But the man refused. Then the boy tolde him that h
will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he
put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work.
The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty
one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence.
答案
1. 将第一个the 去掉
2. passed→ passing
3. spends→ costs
4. will→ would
5. boot→ boots
6. and→ but
7. if→ unless
8. 在 pay 前加 to
9. well- cleaning→ well-cleaned10. returned→ turned或将back去掉
4、（ 2011 ·浙江省温州八校高三上学期期末联考）
My car just wouldn’ t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away
from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I’ d have to
spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’ t have to walk far I found the small ho use standing in a field with a ligh t shone from the sitting room. I knocked at
the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story
carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’ t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.
答案
5、（2011 ·浙江省嵊州二中高三12 月月考试题）
In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he
reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’ se address. Worse even, h discovered he can’ t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
airport tried to think what his daughter’ s name was and where it was which she lived, but
with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he
caught a next plane back to England.
答案
短文改错（满分10 分）
In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/\ Kennedy Airport. When he
to
reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter even,’sheaddress. Worse
arrived still
discovered he can ’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
couldn ’ t either
airport tried to think what his daughter ’ s name was and wherewhichit shewas lived,but trying that
with much lu ck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he no
caught a next plane back to England.
the
6、（ 2011 ·浙江省宁波市八校高三联考）
When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home.
When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over $10,000, from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty minutes later, the burglars had gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. When the first policeman entered into the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.
答案
7、（2011 ·浙江省宁波市高三上学期期末试题）
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient
to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike
almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is
cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will be very carefully on my
bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore on my mother’ s b buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now I have two strong lock.
答案：
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find∧ very
it
convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I
exercise
use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in
mostly can ’ t ( 或 unpleasant)
winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will be
pour ing
very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to∧
careful a
bookstore on my mother’ s bike to buy some bookscomeand out to find the bike missing. Now I
came
have two strong lock.
locks
8、（ 2011 ·浙江省杭州市萧山三校高三上学期期中联考）
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
Should I choose a good major and a good university ? Some students prefer to consider majors
first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their
favorite jobs in the future. Ho wever, those who think differently believes that the environment is
important to one ’developments. They also believe that students graduate from
leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion , the best choice is to
choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a
good major, because no matter where we study,they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if
we try our best.
9、（ 2011 ·浙江省杭州市高级中学高三上学期第三次月考）
It would be difficult to imagine modern life with the telephone. It has become an useful instrument of communication, save much time and travel b y enabling people to talk one another over great distances. Nowadays it is so easy to talk cross a continent or even overseas as it is to
talk to one's next-door neighbor. Therefore, it is in emergencies which the telephone really proves
its usefulness. When there is a fire , and when someone is s uddenly ill , the first thing one thinks
of it is " Where is the nearest telephone?"
答案
1. with — without
2. an–a
3. save— saving
4. talk — talk to 或 with
5.so — as
6. cross— across
7. Therefore —However
8. which — that
9. and— or 10. 去掉 it
10、（ 2011 ·浙江省杭州二中高三11 月月考试题）
Dear Abby ,
How are you? Today I ’ ve got wonderful news to tell you. I has been offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty student took
exams for it, but only few were chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents don’ t
subscribe it. They strongly against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will
not see me for a whole year. Besides, they are afraid of that I will feel lonely. They can't
imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I can be
able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?
Best Wishes!
Jane
答案：
短文改错
1.has have
2. student students
3. few a few
4. subscribe to
5. are strongly
6.too so
7. 去掉 of
8. live living
9. can will10. fact that
11、（ 2011 ·浙江省杭州二中高三10 月月考试题）
Looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered
by water. However, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. But it is true. You see, 97% of
the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. So only 3% of the
water can be drunk or used for man. And the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and
underground. Man even can ’uset them completely, because the water contains icebergs and
glaciers. All what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted.
How can we drink? So something must be done to protect water from polluted.
答案
1. and --- /
2. are --- is
3. it --- which
4. salt --- salty
5. can --- can ’ t / ^ not
6. for--by
7. them --- it
8. what --- that
9. drink^it10. from ^ being
12、（ 2011 ·浙江省 2011 届高三第一次五校联考试题）
More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family. They turn
to “ strangers” . While they need advice, they don to people’tusuallytheyknowgo. Instead many
of them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice on many different subjects
included family problems, the use of language, health, cooking, child care, clothes, and even on
how to buy a house or a car. Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems.
Along with letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solve
such problems. Some of these writers are doctors, others are lawyers and educators. But two of the most famous writers of advice are women who without special training for this kind of work.
答案
改错： More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family. They
turn to dislikes
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them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice on many different subject s write magazines
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how to buy a house or a car. Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems.
regularly
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such problems. Some of these writers are doctors, others are lawyers and educators. But two of the
or
most famous writers of advice are women who﹨without special training for this kind of work.
13.【河北省易县第二高级中学2013 三模】
One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was in low spirits ．
When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise． Seen her so happy ，I quick took out of my Chinese exam paper ．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily ．At that moment, I couldn’ t．help cry
I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my mother’ s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her．slaps
14.【贵阳市 2013 高考英语】
Once l waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute, no bus came.I couldn't wait any longer but decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited
for one more minute,1 would have caught. If l wanted to take to the next bus,1 would have to wait
for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being impatient will
waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our study and work,
With it we can achieve greater.
Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus.
【参考答案】短文改错
Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute , no bus came. I couldn’ t wait any longer
minutes
but decided to walk to my school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had
waited for one more minute, I would have caught∧. If I wanted to take to the next bus, I would
and than
have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being
it
impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our
study and work. With it we can achieve greater.realize
Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus.
Patience an
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waiting
Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we
passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and
pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping
the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’ t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself.
I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’ forget his
good nature or character.
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Dear Brad,
I ’ m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post -80s in China. Actually I
am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much
hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to
marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’ t think love built on house and
cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.
As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts
live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.
Li Hua
17
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read
our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly.
Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’ re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same.
Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell
them we want them to trust us as many as we’ d like to trust them. If you don’ t think you can to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it.
Thank you!
18
We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best
season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’ t too many tourists in Octob We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by
foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the
National Gallery.
We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though,
was going to theatre. We don’ t have the chancewtonderfulseeso plays at home .A lot of people
say English food is very badly. We didn’ t think so. It’ s true that most of the restaurants are Frenc or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.
19
Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as
usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He
was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’ t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to
study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They
bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom
enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air.
On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better
weekend.
答案
1.1. was—were
2. 去掉over
3. stopped—stopping
4. slows— slowed
5. 在pull后加up
6. immediate—immediately
7.where—which/that
8.them—it
9. help—helping10. but—and
2.1.ask__asked 2. the__a
3. Comparing__Compared
4. hard___harder
5.expensively___expensive
6.删 with
7.Therefore__However
8.house__houses9.we__us10.efforts 后加 to
3.
4.
5.
高中英语短文改错技巧 2017-07-08 高中英语短文改错技巧（1） 体裁和句式： 体裁以为主，句子结构以简单句为主过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，由于多数句子不是只占一行，所以只有读完整个句子，仔细分析，才能发现错误、纠正错误。但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。归纳短文改错错误类型: （一）词法的测试 1.名词：主要是查名词是否可数，与其修饰语是否一致。 eg: 1） I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music. Hobby是可数名词，在这要用复数形式；playing football是一项运动，football只是一种球； sing和listen to 要用动名词形式。 2） Do exercises do good to our healthy. exercise作运动讲是不可数名词，do exercise作主语要用动名词形式，谓动用单数；healthy是形容词，这里要用名词形式。 3） Reading books is one of my hobby. one of 后的名词应用复数形式。 2. 代词：对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的 内容及在句中的作用，注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致，常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。 1）He drove too fast, and the police stopped her. 前面提到的是he而后面却用her来代，故应将her改为him. 2）This is the best film which I have ever seen. 先行词前有最高级修饰应用关系代词that 而不是which。 3. 冠词：英语中只有三个冠词，但用起来却很复杂，在短文改
【解题技巧】 1、通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误（比如前文用mike，后文代词用she等）。在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行分句改错。 2、分局阅读，逐行找错。在完成第一步后，要进行逐行主句的改错。这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇角度着重分析和特别注意。 3、最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿。 【考查要点】 1 词法的测试： 2 定冠词和不定冠词的用法，即a, an, the三者的转化与增减。例：A beauty of the West Lake is more than I can describe.正解：A--The 3 名词的单复数和名词所有格。 例：More than one students can’t take in it.正解：students—student 4 动词的时态、语态、语气，情态动词和非谓语动词。
例：He is good at sing songs.正解：sing—singing 5 人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等用法。 例：The book is her.正解：her—hers 6 词性的变化。 例：John deep believed that the God knows everything.正解：deep—deeply 7 并列连词、从属连词的用法。 例：She insisted that the boy told was a lie.正解：that—what 8 形容词、副词以及比较级与最高级的用法。 例：They all exacting by the exacted news.正解：exacting—exacted ; exacted—exacting 9 固定搭配与习惯用法。 例：It happened all of sudden.正解：of 后加a 11、句法的测试： 12 考察英语的一致性现象，主要包括：主谓不一致、代词不一致、
专题练习一 A (2017·山西省大同市灵丘县模拟) The Art of War is an ancient Chinese military book __1__(date) from the 5th century BC.__2__ (write) by the ancient Chinese military strategist Sun Tzu (“Master Sun”，also spelled Sunzi), the book consists of 13 chapters, each of __3__ is devoted to one aspect of warfare. It is__4__ (common) thought of __5__ a great work on military strategy and tactics(战术). It __6__ (place) at the head of China's Seven Military Classics in 1080 by Emperor Shenzong of the Song Dynasty , __7__ it has long been the most influential strategy text in East Asia. It has had__8__ influence on Eastern and Western military thinking, business tactics, legal strategy and beyond. Its first complete English translation was completed and published by Lionel Giles in 1910. __9__ (leader) such as Mao Zedong, General V o Nguyen Giap, General Douglas MacArthur and so on have drawn__10__ (inspire) from the work. 答案与解析 文章介绍了“孙子兵法”这本中国古代杰出的军事作品，以及对后人的影响。 1．dating考查非谓语动词。此处dating from是现在分词短语作定语，修饰book。 2．Written考查非谓语动词。分析句式可知，write和句子主语the book 之间是被动关系，故用过去分词形式表示被动。 3．which考查关系代词。根据句式可知，此处是一个非限制性
短文改错练习（1） Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high school students . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76．_______________ achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．_______________ Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．_______________ to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．_______________ most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact , 80．_______________ they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．_______________ have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．_______________ they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．_______________ As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．_______________ home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．_______________ have gotten a good education . 短文改错练习（2） Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．_______________ like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．_______________ just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,78．_______________ since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．_______________ hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．_______________ to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81．_______________ may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．_______________ as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．_______________ So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84．_______________ was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．_______________ locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday. 短文改错练习（3） Get a good education is more important today than 76．_______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．_______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78．_______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79．_______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．_______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．_______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．_______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83．_______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．_______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．_______________ through grade 7 or 8. 短文改错练习（4） Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 76. our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77. girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 78. All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 79. with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80. began to water it.The water was at the foot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83. We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85 短文改错练习（5） A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76. _______________ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. _______________
高中英语短文改错技巧总结 短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数; 注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别;习惯用法要记住;句子成分多分析;逻辑错误须关注。 一. 动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如： My favourite sport is football. I was member of our school football team. (is) Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are) 上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念，注意短文内容发生或存在的时间，保持时间概念的一致性。 二. 名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如： …so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects) 三. 区分形和副 及区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如： I'm sure we'll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful) Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately) 需要注意的是，形容词多用来做定、表、补语等，而副词只能在句子中作状语，修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time，第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。 四. 非谓动词细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误，也包括不定式类错误。例如： …in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. (interested) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also …(playing) My parents love me…and will do all they can ∧make sure…(to) 上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语，和不定式作目的状语。一般的，现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义，而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义，不定式有将来时态的含义。 五. 习惯用法要记住 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如： It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and…(of) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ourselves. (of) 六. 句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：They ∧eager to know everything about China and…(were) I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (which) 第一例漏掉了谓语动词were，这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符，where是副词，不能作主语。 七. 逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误，常是这类错误的考查对象。例如：The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (their) First, let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉more) …no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. (everyone) 上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩)，因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思，才开始告诉别人，怎么能说“再告诉你
高中英语短文改错专题练习（10篇） 答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 A While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. 1. _______________ A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He 2. _______________ took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office. 3. _______________ and took me to there himself. The next day, he came 4. _______________ to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with 5. _______________ him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but 6. _______________ we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks 7. _______________ to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern 8. _______________ for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned 9. _______________ that communication can take place without much actual 10. ______________ language at all. B The Internet is playing a important part in81．＿＿＿＿＿ our daily life. On the net, we can learn about82．＿＿＿＿＿ news both home and abroad and some other83．＿＿＿＿＿informations as well．We can also make phone calls，84．＿＿＿＿＿ send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and85．＿＿＿＿＿ learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we86．＿＿＿＿＿ can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the87．＿＿＿＿＿ chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，88．＿＿＿＿＿ make a chat with others and make friends with them．89．＿＿＿＿＿ In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．90．＿＿＿＿＿ C A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 81. part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 82. speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 83. interested to begin studying another language. At the first 84. class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 85. in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 86. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 87. kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 88.
高考英语短文改错新题型 下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分 Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital． Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allo wed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for u s to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
逻辑错误部分 短文改错在试题中属于写作部分，但设置的逻辑性错误却让人感觉有点幼稚，因为我们在写作时一般不会出现这样的低 级错误。譬如，我们不会用she 来指代一个男孩，不会分不清but 和and 的用法，也不会混淆here 和there 的词义。但是在短文改错中要找出这样的错误却不是件容易事。为什么还要设置这样的题呢？因为它能反映出考纲考查“语篇”和“逻辑”的要求。 因此，我们在做短文改错题时，不仅要留意语法，还要留意行文逻辑。本讲把高考中常设置的逻辑性错误归纳在一起， 好让大家对逻辑性错误的常设点有个清楚深刻的认识，以便快速提高查找逻辑错误的能力。要做好逻辑性错误题，必须认真细心来读懂文章，要认真读懂每一句话才行。走马观花地看文章，有一些错误是不容易找出来的。 考点1. so, and, but, or连接句子或并列成分时，要认真分析前后逻辑关系 1. 【2012 陕西】It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go anywhere from the hotel by public transport. 2. 【2009 全国Ⅱ】I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was held up on my way back. 3. 【2016 全国Ⅱ】If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. 4. 【2013 四川】We were warned not to cheat again, so she would need to see our parents. 5. 【2017 新课标I】I thought I had learned the instructor ’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank. 考点2. 连接并列项时，肯定句常用and，否定句常用or 连接。肯定句用or 表选择，译为“或者” He has a car and a house. He doesn ’t have a car or a house. I need a pen or a pencil. 我需要支钢笔或者铅笔。 注意：He has no sister or brother. =He has no sister and no brother. 即：no A or B=no A and no B 6. 【2016 全国Ⅰ】Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking. 7. 【2008 全国Ⅰ】I ’d like to stay there for half a month, visiting places of interest or practicing my Englis h as well. 8. Ten days later, it didn ’t ring and send messages. 9. Earmuffs ( 护耳) consist of two thick soft pieces of cloth jointed by a band, which you wear over your ears to protect them from the cold and loud noise. 考点3. 遇到人称代词时，要留意其是否用错。几乎每篇短文改错都有这样一个题 A. 性别指代错误。例如，前面提到是 a boy，后面却用she来指代 10. 【2013 辽宁】I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. 11. 【2010 全国Ⅱ】Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. 12. 【2016 浙江】Every time he arrived home at the end of the day, we reet her at’t h e d dgoor. B. 单复数指代错误。例如，前面提到people，后面却用he 来指代 13. 【2012 全国新课标】I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did go wrong, I got angry and broke it. 14. 【2015 浙江】Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. 15. 【2009 全国Ⅰ】The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place. C. 对象指代错误。例如，前面用的we，后面却用their
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新短文改错练习题8篇 1WhenIwasinhighschool,'"Whenyoubowtosomebodynexttime,youcancount'January, February,March,"Inwhatmonthdidhegoaway" ’,来 源:Inaword,ifeverybodyhastheawareofreducingthewasteandtakesaction,wecanco ntributetooursociety ,youwouldfindthereareallsortofnews:accidents,floods,fires,wars,sports,boo ks,答案 改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。Mostof决定了名词必须用复数形式。改为one【解析】考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。改为which【解析】考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用前加for【解析】考查介词用法。此处askmyfather的目的应该是钱。askmyfather与themoney 之间需要加表目的的介词。改为I【解析】考查代词用法。由前句hesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为改为when【解析】考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。改为later【解析】考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。改为gave【解析】考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。9.去掉happy前的much.考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。 改为happiest【解析】考查形容词。此句意为，今天是假期中最高兴的一天。故将原型happy改为最高级happiest。2.去掉but【解析】考查表转折的连词。因为本句的句首用Although，所以此处不再用but。故将but去掉。改为taking【解析】考查动词ing的用法，of是介词，其后用动词的ing形式，即动名词形式。改为me 【解析】考查动词后宾语的使用形式。此处谓语动词drive后应该用“我”的宾格形式，即me。改为didn’t或did后加not【解析】上文说到，通常我害怕坐公共汽车，汽车难闻的气味让我发疯，使我感到晕车。且下文说，我最终打败了晕车的习惯。所以上下文表达的是转折的意思。故此处意为“但是今天我不晕车了。”所以加上not。改为liked【解析】考查动词的时态。这句话的意思是，晚上我和一位我曾经喜欢的老朋友一块出去。故将现在时改为一般过去式。改为both【解析】考查代词。我们两个人用both，三人或三人以上用all。改为with【解析】考查固定搭配bebusywithsth忙于做某事。改为that【解析】考查so和such的区别。So后通常接形容词或副词，such后接名词，此处surprised是形容词，意为“惊讶的”。所以将such改为so。改为after【解析】这句话要表达的意思是“起初，我以为我们毕业后将不会再见面了”，所以把before改为after。 改为therefore【解析】考查副词。这句话的意思是“跳舞是我的爱好，因此当我听到…”，otherwise意为“否则”；therefore意为“因此”。故将otherwise改
短文改错专项训练 下面短文中每篇各有10 处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分 Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007．I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west．I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital． Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is import ant for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
短文改错 My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! 二 Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 三 Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes !