高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)

2、句子的结构：一般来说，高考书面表达的篇幅大约 是10句，其中多数是简单句，少数复合句。建议使用十 句作文法训练。
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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（范例）
高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.

英 语 书 面 表 达 指 导
Beautify your Composition
高考作文的华丽变身
遇遇 难易 心心 不更 慌细 ，。
1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活， 实际具有时代特点，紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。
2.词数要求100，既要求表 达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考 生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。
1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first
prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (用同位语改写)
,
, won the first prize in Men’s 110
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
2、地道原则
［原文］Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

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◆ Sixty per cent of the students don’t agree with students’ carrying mobile phones at school.
◆ There are sixty per cent of the students who don’t agree with students’ carrying mobile phones at school.
• Having viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. 10(总结句)
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◆正反观点题型◆
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现状
作文写作
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十句作文法
• 其基本模式为： • 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点
明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支 持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明 情况，第二句点明主题。 • 第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出 本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。 第四至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。 句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理， 结构得当。 • 第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句， 它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论 点。
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自己的观点
◆ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that … It is not only because …, but also because ...
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• 写作典例： 电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要 的地位，电视传播不断深层次地影响 着每一个人。请以“Television” 为题， 写一篇有关其所带来的积极影响的英 语短文。

Step 5: Evaluation(评） Step 6: Checking（检）
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Learning procedure
3'
Step 1.
Leading in 导入
1.看书法 （培养审美观）
2.听英语 （树立正确价值取向）
• Emotional Encouragement（情感激励法）
润物细无声
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
My Teaching Strategy
Step 1: Leading in (导 ) Step 2: Reflection (思) Step 3: Discussion (议) Step 4: Showing (展)
思考，自主学习的能力，体现了由现 象到本质，深入钻研的思维过程。
Step 3.
Discussion( 议)
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小组讨论 保证每个成员的积极 参与
合作学习 构建完整学习框架
设计意图
• 这样发挥了生生间的相互交流，协作功能 ，挖掘了个体学习潜能，并且会达到1+1大 于2的学习效果。在小组讨论的过程中，各 个层次的的学生都会有所收获，优等生在 帮助他人的同时，也使自己的知识条理化 ，逻辑思维得到培养;中等生如鱼得水，在 他人启发下，跳一跳摘到了“桃子”;学困生 有了更多发问的机会，觉得这节课会更接 地气。
教材 学情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis 情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis of students :学生的心声

高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
Exercises： 1.我们地理老师不愿意打扫他的房间。（用unwilling表达） Our geography teacher is unwilling to clean his room.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT) 高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
We must include all the key points in our composition.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
1. Decide on the style of your composition. 2. Use exact grammar, especially tenses. 3. Use proper and exact vocabulary and structures.
2. 在当代社会，信息越来越重要。（用play a…part/role 表达） Information is playing an increasingly important part/role in modern society.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
5. 表列举要点：
in the first place; first of all; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; for one thing…, for another…; to begin (start) with; last but not least； firstly…; secondly..; thirdly…; finally…

二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。

some extent/degree. I think that... ③ From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that…大众观点 ④ Therefore, as stated above, …
中间段： (正)Some agree to the viewpoint that…They hold this opinion due to…What’s more,… (反）However, others have a different opinion considering
that…besides… 结尾段： From my perspective, we high school students are not supposed to... As for the reasons, first and foremost, … Additionally, ... Last but not least,
高考英语总复习课件：高考话题作文 写作技 巧PPT课 件
高考英语总复习课件：高考话题作文 写作技 巧PPT课 件
结尾段： From my perspective, we high school students are not supposed to take the mobile phone to school. As for the reasons, first and foremost, it is a great waste of time and energy; consequently, our study will be badly affected. Additionally, it will undoubtedly do harm to our physical and mental health. Last but not least, it will gradually get you addicted to it, which never fails to cause endless trouble and various problems.(万能句型）

They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!

Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
校园话题作文常用词汇：
遵守纪律
keep/observe discipline
违反规章制度 break the rules
考试作弊
cheat in the exam
乱扔垃圾
throw rubbish everywhere
观点展开段 ① Some agree to the viewpoint that…They hold this opinion because/in that…What’s more,… However, others have a different opinion considering that… ② On the contrary, there are some people in favor of … ③Some people suggest that … While others argue that…
结尾段：
From my perspective, we high school students are not supposed to take the mobile phone to school. As for the reasons, first and foremost, it is a great waste of time and energy; consequently, our study will be badly affected. Additionally, it will undoubtedly do harm to our physical and mental health. Last but not least, it will gradually get you addicted to it, which never fails to cause endless trouble and various problems.(万能句型）

句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句 、主从复合句、分词状语等。
I hope my pen friend is a girl. And she likes sports, travelling and pets.
It is better be a girl who likes sports, such as running, swimming and so on. If she likes travelling that is much better, which I can travel with her together. What's more, loving pets and being friendly with others would attract me. Warm-hearted and humorous if she is, which I do really favor.
年龄的表达
1. sb is 数词 She is seventeen. 2. 数词+ years old或 数词 years of age
She is seventeen years old. She is seventeen years of age. 3. 数词+ year-old She is seventeen year-old. 4. of +数词 She is a beautiful girl of eighteen.
用一两个单词或者短语写出 每句话的细节要点。
3. 连词成句 将上述词语拓展成句子。
书面表达五个步骤
4. 连句成文 注意： ① 主语和谓语 ② 适当添加时间/地点/条件 ③ 逻辑关系 ④ 开头和结尾 ⑤ 语篇衔接
5. 检查修改，规范抄写

ormance last night was very good. ➢The performance last night was really amazing/fantastic/fascinating. 2. He went home directly after school. ➢He headed home directly after school. 3.The program made our life interesting. ➢The program enriched our life. 4. You should say sorry to him. > You should apologize to him.
4. I _______ to tell you that I can’t make it..我很抱歉.. 5. I ______ ______ much trouble in writing an essay…. 遇到困难 6. Your prompt _______ will be highly a________. 如能尽快回复将不胜感
3. 用高级的句型代替普通的表达
• 1. I realized that I wouldn’t pass the exam. • > It occurred to me that it would fail the exam. • 2. I’m very happy to attend the competition. • > It’s my pleasure to take part in the competition. • 3. I want to go to the party very much. • > I can’t wait to go to the party. • 4. He does best in our class in math. • > When it comes to math, he is second to none in our class.

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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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