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英语应用文写作——建议信1．审题通读写作要求，从所给的提示中明确需要写的是一封建议信。
然后，确定人称和时态。
建议信通常用第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2．布局谋篇首段：介绍写信意图。
注意要简明扼要，目的明确地陈述事由，语气委婉。
主体段落：首先可以肯定对方的优点，再写出对方需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议。
注意建议要有合理性和说服力，不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，注意要有礼貌，使读者容易接受。
也可以表明希望建议得到采纳并祝愿，或盼望回复。
3．形成初稿按照三段式结构，开始写作。
写作时，注意涵盖所有要点，结构紧凑，段与段之间或者句与句之间要连贯。
4．修改润色做到全文没有拼写错误和语法错误，准确使用较丰富的语法结构，运用高级词汇和短语，展现出较强的语言运用能力。
这样，才能写出一封好的建议信。
Dear ××，I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ________ (别人求助的内容).Here are my suggestions. To get started, you had better ________ (建议一). Besides, it's a good idea to ________ (建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to ________ (建议三).With all the factors taken into consideration, I'm sure you will ________ (成功解决问题)．Best wishes.Yours sincerely，××开头常用句式：1．I am writing to offer my advice concerning environment protection.我写信来是要提出我对环境保护的建议。
高中英语书面表达集建议信 Letter of suggestion一、简介1 建议信写作注意事项; 写作目的是提出建议或忠告..观点要合情合理;注意礼貌当先..2 写作方法①首段：说明目的;注意语气..②主体：提出具体建议；首先肯定优点;再写改进内容;否则变成投诉信；经常进行交流;注意对方感受;时时提到你和我;否则容易跑题写成议论文;因为内容与议论文相似..尾段：总结建议;注意礼貌;易于接受..3 写作流程图一．1. some advice;2.learn from4.in addition;8. widen their eyes.10. A majority of students11. What is known to us is that12. for the reason that二．key sentences1. Thank you for trusting me and I’d like to give you some advice.2. I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration.3. I am sorry to learn about your problem and I’d like to give you some advice.写作指导首段：表明写作意图;陈述事由..It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on ...I am writing to express my views concerning ...主体：提出建议并阐述理由..I would like to suggest that ... If I were you; I would ...In my opinion; it would be wise to take the following measures ...I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...我建议……I’d like to suggest that ……In my opinion ……I would like to make a recommendation that …I am writing to advise you to ……If I were you; I would ……I think it would be more beneficial if you could……I feel that it would be beneficial if…结尾：希望收信人接受建议..注意措辞要有礼貌;使对方容易接受..1. In the end; I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.2. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions.3. I believe you will take my advice into account / consideration.4. I hope you will find these suggestions practical / useful / helpful.5. I do hope you will consider my suggestions.6. I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered.7. 请仔细考虑我的建议;谢谢..Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.8.. 英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.Whatever you decide to do; good luck with your studies/workI am looking forward to your reply.范文一：假如你叫李华;最近一名手臂有残疾的美国学生Bruce和父母来中国定居;转到你们班;他很担心同学们会嘲笑他;因此他感到很沮丧..请你用英语写信给他..1.表达欢迎新同学的心情2.点出对方的问题;并给出你的建议3.告诉他同学们都愿意做他的朋友Dear Bruce;I am glad that you have become a member of our class. However; I find you are always depressed these days. I may know the reason why you are so worried .In fact; there is no need for you to be worried. The teachers and students are all friendly ; so you needn’t be afraid of being laughed at . In addition; you cancommunicate with others as much as possible; then you will surely find your worry is really unnecessary. Having a disability does not mean life is not satisfying. Do you think so Comparing with many other disabled people; you may find you are not that unfortunate. Do you think soWe are all ready to be your friends and wish you happy in our class.据报道;7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌lung cancer后处于极度的痛苦之中;美国抗癌协会ACS决定;每当Amy收到一封慰问信;就给她增加3美分的治疗款..假如你是新华中学的学生李华;请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信;主要内容包括：1.自我介绍 2.得知的情况 3.表示鼓励 4.打算为她做什么 5. 祝她早日康复注意：1. 信的格式已为你写好2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况..3. 词数100左右..4. 请在答题卡上作答..Dear Amy;I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. 不唯一Dear Amy;I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.At present; ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty; no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends; schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you; which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.试题分析：本文是一篇应用文;首先对题目进行审清;先对自己进行自我介绍;并表达得知她的遭遇后同样感到很伤心..再对所知的情况进行描述;将表示鼓励的话语表达出来;可以使用诸如inspire sb to take the steps towards future life.鼓励某人朝着未来的生活迈进..这样的话语进行行文;并表达相信她一定能成功..最后;说出自己如何帮助她;可用上诸如try one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大的努力做某事;这样的表达来起句子;并表达对她的祝福..点评：对于应用文写作是高考常考的文体;把握好各个应用文的写作格式也是平时学习过程中必须注意的;同时平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆;万能句型的积累;高中作文写作;要注意在写作之前;首先对题目进行认真的审清;并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来;这些单词、句型都应是经典的;不会错的..写的过程中;多注意灵活使用定语从句;包括非限制性定语从句..要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯;遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句;强调唯一性..平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达;考试时才能游刃有余;胸有成竹..Dear Amy;I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.At present; ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you wi ll make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty; no matter how h ard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends; schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you; which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.May you recover soon.Yours;Li Hua试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作..要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信..要点都已经给出;信件要点包括：自我介绍;得知的情况;表示鼓励;打算为她做什么;祝她早日康复;审题时注意时态的选择;描述要尽量选择简洁的语言;运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出..难点在于选择词汇和句型;可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述..象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty; no matter how hard it is.使用了no m atter how引导的让步状语从句;还有I will try my best to ask all my frie nds; schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you; which may h elp you.用了非限制性定语从句..还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来;这样文章显得更连贯..点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括;不能有遗漏和省略..同时注意谋篇布局的顺序;运用合适的连接词连接全文;同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采..Dear AmyI am LiHua from XinHua Middle School;I am a boy at age of 14 years old.I learntthat you are suffering a terrible Lung cancer.It's said that you would get 3 cents fromAmerican Anti- Cancer Association if you could receive a letter of of consolation.I was quitemoved When I know about your bad experience.And now I give you my sinceregreetings and blessing ;you certainly will be good soon;don't worry;believe that The Godwill bless you .Now I have decided to write this letter to you ;and sent my best wishes toyou ;give you my allowance my father gave me .Finally;I wish you a speedy recovery.yours ;LiHua。
建议信一、定义：当别人遇到困难时，请求你给予一些建议。
二、三段式作文思路：第一段要说明写信的目的；第二段要给出具体的建议，并加上理由；第三段要提出希望，传达鼓励。
三、示范：话题-如何学习中文【第一段】1.1 am writing to give you some suggestions. 我写信的目的是给你一些建议。
【第二段】词汇：英文歌English song交中国朋友make Chinese friends中文学习班take a Chinesecourse [ko ： s]句型一：..You should你应该Eg.你应该学唱英文歌。
You should sing English songs.句型二；Why not…•…?为什么不……?Eg.为什么不参加中文学习班？Why not take a Chinese course?句型三：It is a good idea to是—个好主意Eg:交中国朋友是一个好主意。
It is a good idea to make Chinese friends.【第三段】I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
【连接局部】Here are some advice.Firstly,Secondly,・・・・・・ Thirdly,In a word,全国卷II假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据以下要点写回信.要点：1.参加中文学习班；.看中文书刊、电视；2.学唱中文歌曲；.交中国朋友。
注意：1.词数100左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.开头语已为你写好。
June 8, 2008Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. I am writing to give you some suggestions. Here are some advic已Firstly,you should sing English songs. Secondly,Why not take a Chinese course? Thirdlyjt is a good idea to make Chinese friends.In a wordj hope you will find these ideas usefuLBest wishes.Yours,Li Hua 四.练习话题-如何交友.你应该对别人友好。
高考英语求助信
尊敬的家长/老师/亲友：
我是一名即将参加高考的学生，我正在为高考英语备考遇到困难，希望能得到您的帮助和指导。
首先，我在阅读理解方面遇到了一些困难。
长篇阅读文章内容繁杂，题目类型多样，我常常在理解文章主旨、细节和推理等方面出现困难。
我不确定如何选取正确答案，而且速度也不够快，影响了我的答题效率。
我希望能获得一些建议和方法来提高我的阅读理解能力。
其次，我对写作部分也感到困惑。
我在写作表达方面有时会出现思路不清晰、词汇使用不准确以及语法错误等问题。
我希望能够提高我的写作水平，包括提升我的写作思维能力和增加词汇量。
如果您有一些写作技巧和方法可以分享，我将非常感激。
最后，口语和听力也是我需要加强的部分。
在平时的练习中，我发现自己的口语表达能力比较有限，尤其是在回答问题和自由发言方面，常常无法流利表达自己的观点。
听力方面，有时听不清对话或者理解其中的细节信息。
我希望能得到一些提高口语和听力的建议和方法，以便能在高考中取得更好的成绩。
非常感谢您抽出宝贵的时间阅读我的求助信。
我深知高考对我的重要性，也愿意努力学习并克服困难。
如果您有任何建议、指导或者推荐的学习资源，我将非常感激。
期待您的回复，谢谢！
此致
敬礼！
某高考学生。
建议信1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。
2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。
因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。
陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
(注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。
)A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)1．After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that … 2．I know you have trouble in…after readingyour letter3.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----4. You have asked me for my advice with on…and I’ll try to make some suggestions.5.I am writing to express my views concerning.....B. 表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you co uld …2. I would like to suggest/recommend that…3. If I were you, I would…4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5.I suggest that… 6. You would better do/ not do… 7. You may consider doing… 8. first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．C.建议信结尾常用句式1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.模板:Dear____,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the followingactions: _____.I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss thismatter with you to further details.Good luck with you.Yours,XXX历年考题:(2017 北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
高中英语写作建议信完美格式和句式Dear Zhang Ming。
I was ___。
___ in learning English。
I am writing to ___.Firstly。
it is essential to prepare for class by doing the required ___。
This will help you follow the teacher's ___ ns.Secondly。
during class。
you should pay close n to what the teacher says and take notes。
This will help you ___.Thirdly。
after class。
you should ___.Fourthly。
it ___ English every day。
You can listen to English songs。
watch English movies。
or ___.Finally。
___.I hope these ns will be helpful to you。
and I am confident that you can master this beautiful language in no time。
I look forward to hearing about your progress.Best regards。
Li HuaWriting is a great way to express oneself and release ns。
including anger.There are many benefits to writing。
including making some extra money to buy ___。
writing can help ___ individuals make the most of their time and enjoy life from a different perspective。
