作文范文之雅思小作文地图题给分
雅思小作文地图题给分
【篇一：雅思小作文地图题】
雅思小作文题型多样，其中就包括地图题，本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。评分标准
?ta – task achievement 任务完成情况
?cc – coherence and cohesion 意合与形合
?lr – lexical resource 词汇资源
?gra – grammatical range and accuracy 语法广度与精确度
审题
the map below shows the development of the village of ryemouth between 1995 and present.
文章结构
第一段
第二段
描述1995年的地图
第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比
第四段
总结全文
第一段
this report compares how the village of ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.
题目：the map below shows the development of the village of ryemouth between 1995 and present.
第二段
as is clearly described in the first picture, ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. in the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the
north-east. a block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market?
第三段
in the second picture, the village changed a lot. the fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. in addition, ?
第四段
overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
writing task 1
you should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
the diagram below shows the development of the village of kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
write at least 150 words.
新东方樊黎明：a类雅思地图题写作攻略
首先注意两个点：
1. 时态：本文的时间是明确的，是三个过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划，那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型)，则按照空间顺序来写。
下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段：引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成three maps/ illustrations. 原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成changes，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】the three maps illustrate how the village of kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段：介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单
一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒
