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【高考】写作常见错误分析ppt课件

Many years ago, at the foot of deep, green mountains, was a little village. In the village lived a kind, simple fellow named Rip Van Winkle. He was a good neighbor, ready to help anyone. Everyone in the village liked him. The children of the village shouted with joy whenever they saw him. He played with them. He taught them to fly kites, and he told them long stories. The only problem with him was that he was very lazy and did nothing. He did not work on his own farm and just idled away his time. His house was falling to pieces. His cow was going astray. Weeds grew on his farm. Rip’s close friend was his dog, named Wolf. To avoid work, he often walked away into the forest with his dog.
On the beach, I sat on the huge piece of driftwood where my grandfather and I used to sit. The cool lake wind and the noise of the waves brought back my favorite memories of him…

英语写作典型错误例析PPT课件

纠正： 1. I have no difficult in finding your home
difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨：要减少中式英语必须做到：
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
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英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)PPT演示课件

③电视的亮度应调到最低。(turn down )
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe
mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
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四、典型错误4
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二、典型错误2 在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.
1. Using Ipods can listen to music and read e-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍） →Using Ipods , we can listen to music and read e-books. →Ipods can be used to listen to music and read e-books. 2. Through reading can obtain various knowledge. (通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识) →we can obtain various knowledge from reading. → Reading can help us obtain various knowledge.
help us make more friends.
②如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子，他们就能够获得更多的
知识。
→ If donating some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ If we donate some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ we donating some books to these children, they

作文语言失误例析PPT共21页

的阅读
❖ 知识就是财富 ❖ 丰富你的人生
71、既然我已经踏上这条道路，那么，任何东西都不应妨碍我沿着这条路走下去。——康德 72、家庭成为快乐的种子在外也不致成为障碍物但在旅行之际却是夜间的伴侣。——西塞罗 73、坚持意志伟大的事业需要始终不渝的精神。——伏尔泰 74、路漫漫其修道远，吾将上下而求索。——屈原 75、内外相应，言行相称。——韩非
33、如果惧怕前面跌宕的山岩，生命就永远只能是死水一潭。 34、当你眼泪忍不住要流出来的时候，睁大眼睛，千万别眨眼!你会看到世界由清晰变模糊的全过程，心会在你泪水落下的那一刻变得清澈明晰。盐。注定要融化的，也许是用眼泪的方式。
35、不要以为自己成功一次就可以了，也不要以为过去的光荣可以被永远肯定。
作文语言失误例析
31、别人笑我太疯癫，我笑他人看不穿。(名言网) 32、我不想听失意者的哭泣，抱怨者的牢骚，这是羊群中的瘟疫，我不能被它传染。我要尽量避免绝望，辛勤耕耘，忍受苦楚。我一试再试，争取每天的成功，避免以失败收常在别人停滞不前时，我继续拼搏。

写作常见错误与分析-PPT

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例： The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。) 剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不
连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八．措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。
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十．不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结

《写作常见错误》课件

表达不准确：由于句子成分过多或冗余，导致句子的意思不够准确，容易产生歧义
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冗余成分：句子中存在重复或不必要的词语，使句子显得啰嗦
影响阅读和理解：复杂的句子结构会影响读者的阅读和理解，降低文章的可读性
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段落组织错误
段落主题不突出
段落主题与全文主题不一致
常见错误：使用不恰当的词
汇或短语
原因：对词汇含义理解不准确或文化差异
解决方法：查阅字典获取更多词汇含义及
用途
举例说明：给出具体例子，如“他们”和 “它”的区别
词汇搭配不当
常见错误类型：名词与动词搭配不当、形容词与名词搭配不当、副词与动词搭配不当等。单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点
案例分析：例如，在一份关于计算机科学的PPT中，如果使用了过多的专业术语和缩写，就可能导致非专业人士难以理解。此时，可以通过添加注释或解释来帮助读者更好地理解。
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总结与建议
总结常见错误类型及原因
语法错误：包括主谓不一致、时态错误、语态错误等
拼写错误：包括错别字、拼写错误等
标点符号错误：包括逗号、句号、分号等使用不当
错误原因：对词汇的含义和用法理解不准确、语言习惯不当、语境理解不准确等。单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点
纠正方法：加强词汇学习、理解词汇的含义和用法、结合语境使用词汇、注意区分易混淆的词汇等。示例：示例：
“他很阳光地笑了。”（“阳光”不能修饰“笑”，应改为“开心地笑了”。）单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点

写作常见错误ppt课件共17页

*On the one hand, this makes us healthy; on the other hand, it can save us money.
---For one thing… for another…
*I wish they are happy forever.
---I hope they will be happy for ever.
*There are many ways we can learn English well. --- There are many ways for us to learn English well.
*Money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. ---They spend money on what they need.
*Some people think it is justified, others think it is unfair.
Some people think it is justified, while others think it is unfair.
*There are a lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.
*Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.
Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.

初二叙事作文《错误》600字(共9页PPT)

初二叙事作文《错误》
有一次，我忘记把自己的作业本
老师交上去，
居然没有发现。我
有些不安，又有些得意。开始以为这是值得炫耀和庆幸的事。
从那以后，我做作业不如以
用心往那样认真了，也不怎么
了。
再后来有一次不交作业时，被老师当
作典型，当着全班的面揪了出
来。
关键词：一次,忘记,自己,作业
本,交上去,老师,居然,没有,发现, 有些,不安,有些,得意,开始,以为, 值得,炫耀,庆幸,从那以后,做作业, 不如,以往,那样,认真,不怎么,用心, 后来,一次,作业,老师,当作,典型, 当着,全班,出来。
初二叙事作文《错误》
好友有时，会有几个
塞上一块巧
名字克力，央求不记她们的
，我
推开这些小玩意，当然也没有在欠
作业的“光荣榜”上记上名字。
我以为老师会数本子的个
数，可长期以来，老师对科代表
的信任度已经十分高了。
关键词：有时,几个,好友,塞上,
一块,巧克力,央求,不记,她们,名字, 推开,这些,小玩意,当然,没有,作业, 光荣榜,上记,名字,以为,老师,会数, 本子,个数,长期以来,老师,代表,信任度,已经,十分。
初二叙事作文《错误》
付出就要赢得回报，这是永恒的真理，自古以来很少有人能突破它。然而，如果有人能够超越它的限制，付出而不求回报，那么他一定会得到得更多。
再见
初二叙事作文《错误》
那位慈眉目善的老太太——
语文老师，问我怎么少了那么
多作业本。我慌忙替自己开释：
很多人忘记带了，所以没交。她又问：好像也没有你的，是不是也忘带了呢？
这些讽刺的语气令全班哄堂大
笑。
关键词：那位,眉目,老太太,语

英语写作常见错误ppt课件

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2. 误用平行结构。所谓平行结构，或对称结构 (Parallelism)，是指用相同的语法结构表示几个意思上密切相关内容的修辞手法。这一修辞手法极其有用，使用得当，可使句子结构紧凑，对称协调，语意鲜明，逻辑性强。但是，许多学生由于对这种修辞手法知之甚少，对其对称照应的特点掌握不好，常常写出一些结构不均衡，文意欠通顺，逻辑混乱的句子。如：
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四、悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻
辑关系混乱不清.例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died.这句中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather，如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died. 例：To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚。改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
23八措词毛病troublesindiction?diction是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题囿于教学时间紧迫教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲斟酌的习惯
常见错误
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中国人学英语总是受到汉语的干扰。英语写作是语法概念、词汇知识、修辞手法等交流手段的综合运用。缺乏对英语习惯表达法的了解及缺少写作技巧的基本训练，英语写作中就会出现各种错误

绝妙的错误 Microsoft PowerPoint 演示文稿

5、【解析】从第4-7段可以概括出注意原子弹、热核反应的作用和重水的作用。 ①用作制造原子弹的中子减速剂；在原子能反应堆中用作中子减速剂；提取氘，用于制造氢弹；提取氘，可以应用于热核反应发电。 ②作为中子减速剂，用于制造原子弹或建造原子能反应堆；作为提取氘的原料，用来制造氢弹或（将）应用于建造热核反应发电站。
7、示例一：合适。 ①“古怪”一词形象生动，能够引起读者兴趣。 ②“古怪”准确地表现了重水稀奇少见的特点。 ③正文重点写重水与普通水在特性、功用方面的巨大差异，文题一致。 ④重水有多种用途，它既可以用来制造武器，给世界带来巨大灾难；也可以用于工农业生产，给人们带来巨大利益，是矛盾的统一体。（答出两条即可）
4、提示①内容上用地方普通却被间谍重视的对比写出重水的重要作用 ②结构上讲述故事吸引读者阅读兴趣引出对下文重水的介绍与第三段 “重水因之成为举足轻重的战略物资。当年德国人失去重水之后整个制造原子弹的计划不得不推迟”照应。【解析】从内容和结构两方面回答。
①突出表现小工厂所生产的产品的重要性。 ②构成悬念，激发读者的好奇心。 ③引出下文对重水的说明。
2、科普文的目的在于普及科学知识，所以它的语言除了准确严谨外，还具有趣味性、形象化、通俗易懂的特点，深入浅出，帮助读者轻松理解科学知识。 ① “惨淡经营”常用于指创业的艰辛，拟人手法，用在这里形象地写出了DNA艰难复杂的发展过程，能够引起读者的阅读兴趣。 ② “玩意儿”一词极富口语化的特色，能让读者在轻松诙谐中开始思考到DNA发展过程中的绝妙的错误，充满了趣味。 ③白搭：运用口语词，赋予俏皮意味，通俗而明确地表达了DNA的内在机制是人类所无法设计的。 ④让进：运用拟人手法，表述核苷酸的“旁移”和新元素的“加入”，形象、简明地说明了人类在进化过程中复杂而深奥的突变。

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典型错误 1.语法错误 First of all, I’m going to be a professional farmer. Don’t be amazed. This is my dream. Because nobody can live without food. And there still are many persons who are lack of food. First, I want to study agriculture, which lifes base on. I believe I must be succeed. The first lesson I would like to learn is agriculture. As a result of agriculture is the
张冉冉 You asked me what profession I would major in at college last week. Here I’d like to show you my thoughts in this question. Firstly, I plan to major in agriculture. Persona I think agriculture is the fundamental of huma existence. And I know, there are many peopl suffering from hunger. My ambition is that I want all of people to lead a comfortable and happy life. Whatever I do and wherever I am the only thing I want to contribute to human beings. So it’s ok for me to learn medical obj
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施庚辰 130.5 张政121.5 陈巍元 121 任贺 119.5 姜文涵123.5
典型错误 1.汉式英语 People can live in the world is based on the agriculture. Whether people can live in the world depends on agriculture. People living in the worlsss There are quantities of people still suffer from the famine. I also think study to be doctor in college. Looking forward your reply. Have you studied to study which in
1.上个星期 2. 学习农业 3. 主修课目 4. 遭受饥饿 5. 被饿死 6. 在大学 7.人类的生存 8.…的基础 9.选择科目 10.遭受（过去式）现在分词 11. 医药学
12 收到某人的来信 13 首先 14 选择（动词）名词 15. 用我的努力
典型错误 1.语法错误 In addition, studyห้องสมุดไป่ตู้and become a doctor is a good thing as well. There are so much people doesn’t have enough food.
苏莹璐 1.I think it’s only when we make up our minds to work heart and soul that we will live our lives to the fullest and realize our dreams at last.
张政
technology and I want to change the world. I also take an interest in medicine. I would appreciate it if you could give a piece of advi to me. Looking forward to your reply.
张政 I’m very glad to receive your e-mail last weekend. I have thought about what you asked me for a long time. The most thing I want to learn in university is agriculture. Our lives are based on the food. And how to use the agricultural technology better is a determined factor of getting more grains. Nowadays, the development of the whole world is not balanced and many people are still suffering from hunger. My dream is to improve the