雅思写作改错练习（附答案）

英语作文改错真题及答案Possible essay:English Writing: Correcting Errors in Sentences。

As English learners, we often make mistakes in our writing. These errors can range from minor typos and misspellings to more serious grammatical and structural problems. To become better writers, we need to identify and correct these errors. In this essay, I will provide some examples of common errors in sentences and show how to fix them.1. Error: The sun rises at the east.Correction: The sun rises in the east.Explanation: We use "in" to indicate a location or direction, while "at" is used for a specific point or time.2. Error: I'm very exciting to see you again.Correction: I'm very excited to see you again.Explanation: "Exciting" is an adjective that describes something that causes excitement, while "excited" is an adjective that describes someone who feels excitement.3. Error: She don't like to eat sushi.Correction: She doesn't like to eat sushi.Explanation: "Don't" is the contraction of "do not", which is used with plural subjects or the pronoun "you". "Doesn't" is the contraction of "does not", which is used with singular subjects.4. Error: He is taller than me.Correction: He is taller than I am.Explanation: In comparisons, we use the subject pronounafter "than" to complete the implied verb. Therefore, wesay "than I am" instead of "than me".5. Error: They're going to they're house.Correction: They're going to their house.Explanation: "They're" is the contraction of "they are", while "their" is a possessive pronoun that shows ownership.6. Error: I have too much homework to do.Correction: I have too much homework.Explanation: The verb "to do" is redundant in this sentence, as it repeats the meaning of "homework". We can simply say "I have too much homework" to convey the same idea.7. Error: He is a good friend of mine.Correction: He is a good friend.Explanation: The phrase "of mine" is unnecessary inthis sentence, as it does not add any new information. We can simply say "He is a good friend" to convey the same idea.8. Error: She is more intelligent than any other students in the class.Correction: She is more intelligent than any other student in the class.Explanation: The word "student" should be singular, as it refers to one person in the class. We use "any other" to compare one person with the rest of the group.9. Error: I'm going to the store, do you want to come with?Correction: I'm going to the store, do you want to come with me?Explanation: The pronoun "me" is needed to complete the phrasal verb "come with", which means "come with me".10. Error: He has a lot of experience, he worked in many different countries.Correction: He has a lot of experience, as he worked in many different countries.Explanation: The second clause is a dependent clause that needs a conjunction to connect it to the first clause. We can use "as" to show the cause-and-effect relationship between the two clauses.In conclusion, correcting errors in sentences requires attention to detail, knowledge of grammar rules, and practice. By identifying and fixing common errors, we can improve our writing skills and communicate more effectively in English.。

歌深基宛(菜悶何蛍葎俐個坪否)1. The invention of computers enables people to live more comfortably and conveniently.2. Don¨t put your hand in your pocket.3. Many traffic accidents occurred, which is the result of carelessness.4. Last night it was too cold.5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages; for example, it is very clean and cheap.6. Some people claim that fast food will replace traditional food.7. Although he is very diligent at study, he still cannot pass the IELTS test.8. I finished my homework and went out of the dormitory for a drink.9. Though the Internet has many benefits, it also has some drawbacks.10. If it is convenient to you, please give me a hand.11. In the past, the price of milk was so high few people could afford it.12. I left my watch at home.13. Smoking is harmful to your health.14. With help, we passed the IELTS test.15. The two types of design have difference.16. The fact is that he never offers help to others.17. There are many people planning to study abroad.18. Keeping pets is very popular among people who live in the big city.19. If let alone at home, many old people are very likely to get into danger.20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease; however, it seldom does so.21. Today it is very hot, so I stay home.22. When talking to the interviewer, I feel that my heart was beating very fast.23. He gave the lovely lady the rose that he had bought for his wife.24. Compared with the performance of Linda, Kent¨s is far from perfect.25. The big noise makes me unable to sleep well.26. My suggestion is that more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.27. The price of milk is higher than that of rice.28. The number of bikes will decline in ten years.29. Smoking is harmful to one¨s health. For one thing, it can cause lung cancer. For another, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is that the city life is more convenient and colorful.31. People think that developing space research will cost a huge sum of money.32. Now going abroad becomes very easy.33. The computer is a useful tool for students learning English.34. Raising pets is good for old people and children.35. Pets like dogs and cats accompany them.36. Keeping a pet in the big city is not allowed.37. Many medical reports reveal that keeping a pet can prevent heart disease and help patients to feel comfortable.38.Discuss /complain about/enter the room/contact /39.There arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.40. Pursuit of fashion costs much money and wastes much time.41. However, other people suggest that college students doing the part-time jobis quite beneficial.42. Young people living and studying by themselves is of great significance to their future career.43. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.44. I find it difficult to work and study there due to my roommate¨s inconsiderate behavior.45. It is very difficult for me to write essays in English.46. When one is over 70 years old, he is prone to danger if left alone at home.47. I hope this letter would draw your attention and you will look into the case.48. Last year saw a rapid rise in the volume of output.49. A thief entered my room and some valuables in my room were stolen last night.50. I would like a single room to live and study in.51. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone call that day asking me to return home immediately.54.My sister and I like pets very much. Therefore we are strongly against the ban on pet-raising.55. They may be very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.56. The curve rose sharply in the past few days.57. After three days¨ meeting, we drew a conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.囘房亟恬灸侏危列(基宛)。

改错练习题及答案（精选8套）Error Correction:Directions: This part consists of a short passage. In this passage, there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to change a work, add a work or delete a work. Mark out the mistakes and put the corrections in the blanks provided. If you change a word, cross it out and write the correct word in the corresponding blank. If you add a word, put an insertion mark (∧) in the right place and write the missing word in the blank. If you delete a word, cross it out and put a slash (/) in the blank.(1)Most people work to earn a living and theyproduce goods and services. Goods are eitheragricultural (like maize) or manufactured (likecars). Services are such things like education, 1._________medicine, and commerce. These people provide 2.__________goods; some provide services. Other people provideboth goods or services. For example, in the same 3.__________garage a man may buy a car or some service whichhelps him maintain his car.The work people do is called as economic 4.__________activity. All economic activities taken together makeup the economic system of a town, a city, a country,or the world. Such economic system is the sum-total 5.__________of what people do and what they want. The workpeople do either provides what they need or providesthe money with that they can buy essential 6.__________commodities. Of course, most people hope to haveenough money to buy commodities and services whichare essential but which provide some particular 7. __________personal satisfaction, such as toys for children, visits 8. __________the cinema, and books. The science of economics is basic upon the facts 9. _____of our everyday lives. Economists study our everydaylives and the general life of our communities in orderto understand the whole economic system of which weare a part. They try to describe the facts of theeconomy in which we live, and to explain how itworks. The economist methods should of course be 10. __________strictly objective and scientific.(2)Americans this year will swallow 15000 tons ofaspirin, one of safest and most effective drugs 1.__________invented by man. The most popular medicines in the 2.__________world today, it is an effective pain reliever. Its badeffects are relatively mild, and it is cheap.For millions of people suffered from arthritics, 3.__________it is the only thing that works. Aspirin, in short, istruly the 20th-century wonder drug. It is also thesecond largest suicide drug and is the leading cause ofpoisoning among children. it has side effects that, if 4.__________ relatively mild, are largely unrecognized between users. 5.__________ Although aspirin was first sold by German companyin 1899, it has been around much longer than that.Hippocrates, in ancient Greece, understood the medical valueof the leaves and tree bark which today is known to 6.__________ contain salicylates, the chemical in aspirin. During the19th century, there was a great number of experimentation 7.__________ in Europe with this chemical, and it led in the introduction 8.__________ of aspirin. By 1915, aspirin tablets were availablein the United States.A small quantity of aspirin(two five-grain tablets)relieves pain and inflammation. It also reduces down 9.__________ fever by interfering with some of the body's reactions.Specifically, aspirin seems to slow down the formationof the acids involved in pain and the complex chemicalreactions that cause fever. The chemistry of these acidsis not fully understood, and the slowing effect of aspirin 10.__________ is well known.(3)Crime has its own cycles, a magazine reportedsome years before. Police records that were studied 1.__________for five years from over 2400 cities and towns showa surprised link between changes in the season and 2.__________crime patterns.The pattern of crime has varied very littleover a long period of years. Murder reaches its highduring July and August, as does rape and other violent 3.__________ attacks. Murder, however, is more than seasonal: it is a 4.__________ weekend crime. It is also a nighttime crime: 62 percentof members are committed between 6 p.m. and 6 a.m.Unlike the summer high in crimes of bodily harm,burglary has a different cycle. You are most likelyto being robbed between 6 p.m. and 2 a.m. on a Saturday 5.__________ night in December, January, or February. The mostuncriminal month of all? May--except for one strangestatistic. More dog bites are reported in this monththan in an other month of the year. 6.__________Apparent our intellectual seasonal cycles are 7.__________completely different from our criminal tendencies.professor Huntington, of the Foundation for the Studyof Cycles, made extensive studies to discover theseasons when people read serious books, attend scientificmeetings, make the highest scores on examinations,and to propose the most changes to patents. In all 8.__________instances, he found a spring peak and an autumn peakseparated by a summer low. On other hand, Professor 9.__________ Huntington’s studies indicated that June is the peakmonth for suicides and admissions in mental hospitals. 10.__________June is also a peak month for marriages!(4)Only a generation ago, Mauritania's capital city wasmany day's walk from the Sahara. Today it is in the Sahara. 1.__________The sand blows through the city streets and piles up in 2.__________walls and fences. The desert stretches out as far as theeye can see.In some parts of the Amazon rain forest in Brazil, allthe trees have cut down. The earth lies bare and dry in the 3.__________hot sun. Nothing grow there anymore. 4.__________Over vast areas of every continent, the rainfall andvegetation necessary for life is disappearing. Already 5.__________more than 40 percent of the earth's land is desert and 6.__________desert-like. About 628 million people--one out of seven--live in these dry regions. In the past, they have managed tosurvive, but in difficulty. Now, largely through problems 7.__________ caused by modern life, our existence is threatened by the 8.__________ slow, steady spread of the earth's deserts.Many countries first became concerned in 1970s after 9.__________a terrible drought and famine destroyed Africa's Sahel,the fragile desert along the south edge of the Sahara.Thousands of people died even though there was a worldwideeffort to send food and medicine to the starved people. 10.__________(5)For centuries the gypsies have lived as a unfettered people 1.__________ who traveled through half the countries of the world,abiding to their own laws. Scorning discomfort, 2.__________enduring persecution, accumulating only meager possession, 3.__________ they sacrificed all for their freedom.To be settled people they seemed both fascinating or fearful, 4.__________ while to the gypsies the settling people were equally fearful. 5.__________ Gypsies acquired in ancient times their traditional occupationslike smiths and horse traders. They plied their crafts 6.__________from village to village, presenting entertainments to attract townsmen. So they became musicians, magicians, animal trainers, and acrobats.A folk saying held that when a gypsy woman predicted misfortuneit always came fact because she stole something from the victim. 7.__________The gypsies were known also for the big trick which they 8.__________deceived the credulous.A typical trick was to convince a peasant to bury his money, 9.__________ promising that it would be multiplied by magic powers; when the peasant returned to dig them up, the money and the gypsies were both gone. 10.__________The term “gypsy” soon became synonymous with all the robbers and brigands who infested （骚扰）the countryside.(6)There is a popular belief among parents that schools areno longer interested in spelling. No school I havetaught has ever ignored spelling or considered it 1.__________important as a basic skill. There are, however, vastly 2.__________different ideas about how to teach it, or how muchpriority (重点) it must be given over general languagedevelopment and written ability. The problem is, how to 3.__________encourage a child to express himself freely andconfidently in writing without holding him back with thecomplexities of spelling?If spelling becomes the only focal point of his teacher’sinterest, clearly a bright child will be like to 4.__________“play safe”. He will tend to write only words with his 5.__________range and choose to avoid adventurous language. That iswhy teachers often encouraging the early use of 6.__________dictionaries and pay attention to content rather thantechnical ability.I was shocking to read on the bottom of a sensitive 7.__________piece of writing about personal experience: “This workis terrible! There are far too many spelling errors andyour writing is eligible.” It may have been a sharp 8.__________critici sm of the pupil’s technical abilities inwriting, but it was also a sad reflection at the teacher 9.__________who has omitted to read the essay, which contained anybeautiful expressions of the child’s deep feelings. Theteacher’s wrong not to draw a ttention to the errors,but if his priority centered on the child’s ideas, as 10.__________expression of his disappointment with the presentationwould have given the pupil more motivation to seekimprovement.(7)Word came from California of a new weapon in the war on household pests．Two scientists work for a firm in California developed 1．__________a new method to eliminate insects with using dangerous chemicals．2．__________ The new weapon—hot air．The basic idea is thatinsect pests can adjust to temperature much above normal．3．__________In laboratory experiments，cockroaches and termites can’t survivemuch more than a quarter of hour at 100 degrees 4．__________Fahrenheit or about fifty degrees centigrade． The new method involvescovering a house with a huge tent，and fill it with air heated to 5．__________ around 65 degrees centigrade．Hot air is forced in with fans and the tent keeps the heat inside the house．Although termites try to escape by hiding in wood beams，6．__________the heat treatment must be continued by four to six hours．7．__________But when it's all over and the insects are dead，there are no toxic residues to danger humans or pets，and no 8．__________funny smells．Scientists claim that there's no danger of fire too．9．_________ Since very few household, materials will burn at 65 degrees centigrade. In fact, wood is prepared for construction use by dryingin the ovens at 100 degrees centigrade, that is substantially hotter. 10._________ (8)The white House began to be built in 1792, but it was notcompleted until ten years later. Every American president livedin it except for George Washington, although he did have a 1.________majority part in designing it. 2.________The government held a competition to choose the bestdesign for the president's house. The winner was a young man of 3.________South Carolina, James Hoban. His design was a three-levelhouse of stone. And President Washington made some changesin the winning design. He made the house long and wider, and 4.________ changed it into a two-storied house instead of three.The second president, John Adams, was first to live in the 5.________White House. When he and his wife moved onto the new house 6.________in November, 1800, work was still going on, although the mainlive area was completed. The whole work did not finish until the 7.________ administration of the 3rd president, Thomas Jefferson.Twelve years later, the British army invaded Washingtonand burned the White House. The fire completely destroyed theinside of the building and experts said that the White House was so 8.__________dangerous to live in. Later on workers rebuilt the inside of theWhite House. More offices were added, most of which underground. 9.___________ None of the work, however, changed the appearing of 10.___________the building. Ma ny people asked why the president’s house iscalled the White House. Historians say it has been so called simply because it was painted white.。

英语短⽂写作句⼦改错练习_⾼级综合英语（含答案）英语短⽂写作句⼦改错练习<2>1．指代⽅⾯1）Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the students have to bear.2）People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.改为:People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, whichoften proves useless.3) Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly,provides us with avivid, colorful world.2．修饰⽅⾯1）To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.改为:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give offpoisonous gases, to the countryside. 2）Without television, people can't get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.改为:Without television, people can'timmediately get information whichcomes from other parts of the world. 3）At the age of six, my father began to teach me English.改为:When I was six, my father began to teach me English.4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people's living standard has greatly improve改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved livingstandard.5) To improve one's writing skill, regular practice is essential.改为:To improve one's writing skill, we need regular practice.3．平⾏⽅⾯1）While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.改为:While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can beincreased.2）The price of milk isn' t higher than grain.改为:The price of milk isn' t higher than that of grain.3）The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and human beings.改为:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, to theworld, and to human beings.4）But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.改为:But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and that awise man will never lose it wheneverit arises.5）Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.改为:Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of thedifficulty of the course and of thelength of it.6）Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement ofour environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our citiesbeautiful.改为:Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as itsimprovement of our environ-ment, its contribution to ourindustry and its beautificationof our cities4. 语法⽅⾯1）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents.2）A great change has been taken place since then.改为:A great change has taken place then.3）But it may occur some new problems.改为:But some new problems may occur.4）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.改为:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.5）Green trees can protect our air from polluting.改为:Green trees can protect our air from being polluted.6）Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.改为:Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.5. 搭配⽅⾯1）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.改为：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.2）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.改为:In the past the price of milk was so highthat most families could not afford it.3）We should study/learn as muchknowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.改为:We should get as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared forthe future.4）The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English.改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be less if one cannot speak Eng-lish.6. 赘⾔问题1）In my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.改为:In my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.2）People try to find a solution to solve the problem.改为:People try to find a solution to the problem.3) Many visitors who visit our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.改为:Many visitors of our city have the impression that there are few treesin the street.4) The reason why people choose to livein the country is because there is no pollution or noise there.改为:The reason why people choose tolive in the country is that there isno pollution or noise there.5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.7. 汉化问题1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that Shanghai has over ten million people.改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of thereasons is that there are over ten millionpeople in Shanghai.2）My level of English has thus been improved.改为:My English has thus been improved.3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.改为:Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.4) With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.改为:With the development of cities, there is less andless green land.5) Smoking will do harm to our body.改为:Smoking will do harm to heath.6) We should put out hearts into the study.改为:We should pay attention to the study。

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1 Futurism , an early twentieth - century movement in art , rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion .2 But , for a small group of students , professional training might be the way to go since well - developing skills , all other factors being equal , can be the difference between having a job or not .3 For a group of remaining in existence , a profit - making organization must , in the long run , produces something consumers consider useful or desirable .4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandablein the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments ， she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure .5 At the same time , young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills , which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents .6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion , it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at , for , however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today , it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal .。

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV.What do you think I should do Do you think I should continue to love him and give up改错四Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your pe nfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games What your favorite sport I look forward to hearfrom you soon.Yours, Li HuaTwo months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them，there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改错六Dear Li Ming,I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Dear Sally,Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.改错八Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.No. 9I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with thechanges had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral EnglishMy classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.No. 11Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.No. 12Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.No. 13Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.No. 14In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls tostudy and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.No. 15It is known to us, a severe tusnami oc curred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.No. 16The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.No. 17One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!No. 18Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.No. 19One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can do what I like with what was mine.”No. 20An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a wh ile, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came thereNo. 21Show respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Do’s” have worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily. They includ: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.No. 22Welcome to Holland! I hope yo u all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! We have many be autiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.No. 23This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard o f you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”No. 24I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encou raged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’desk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.No. 25When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happenedthat there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived for many years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countries there much tea and coffee are drunk.No. 26My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.No. 27One day I happened to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely.No. 28The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers around the world. Once you’re connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You don’t need know how the Internet works in order to use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge !No. 29Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.No. 30Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesn’t care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and onher bed the doctor found a letter, in which he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.答案：改错一：who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 改为in 后加were 改为homework 后加to 改为found 改为immediately 前加the改错二：the改为a 2.正确前加to 改为going 5.去掉been 6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had 改为at 改为her改错三：后加on或along 改为been 前加a 改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 改为watch 9正确改为or改错四：1. learn 改为learnt或learned。

studying abroad大作文学生习作原文--- 感谢暑假班的某位同学First Draft & First Proof Read第一段：Nowday, as much people know how important study abroad by increased availability, expecially in language. In China, every school open the English course, start at infant school. As part of student choice go abroad study, they can broaden their horizons, knowledge of culture and learn survival skills.请找出其中的错误，并提出修改建议。

第一段词句修改及翻译：Nowday, as much people know how important study abroad by increased availability, expecially in language. 当今由于出国留学越来越普及, 很多人意识到出国留学的重要性，特别是外语学习。

Nowadays, many people know the importance of overseas study due to its increasing availability, especially language education. In China, every school open the English course, start at infant school. 在中国从幼儿园开始每个学校都开设英语课。

In China, every school has English course, starting from infant school. As part of student choice go abroad study, they can broaden their horizons, knowledge of culture and learn survival skills. 另外，出国留学还可以拓宽学生的眼界，学习文化知识和生存能力。

英语短文改错习题精选及答案1Many years ago a poor man grew an orange tree. 1. _______ On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found 2. _______ one of them was so big as a football . He took it 3. _______for the king . The king was so happy that he gave the 4. _______ poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it , 5. _______ he said for himself , “ I’ ll take my gold cup to the king 6. _______and he will give me much money . Next day the king received7. _______ from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told8. _______the rich man,“ I have an orange . It beautiful than the cup,9. _______so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money.10. _______2One day a doctor was starting his morning works. Suddenly 1. _______a man ran his room. His face was red and he could 2. _______ only say“ Quick! Quick! ”The doctor thought he can be 3. _______ very ill. His assistant helped to get the poor man sit in 4. _______a chair. The doctor gave the man some medicine to make 5. _______ him to sleep. Then he looked into the man's mouth and 6. _______ pulled out all the bad tooths. As soon as the man woke7. _______ up, he said“ Quick, doctor, Quick, ”with a low voice.8. _______“It's all over now,” the doctor told him.“ You don't understand,”9. _______said the man.“ I came to tell you your house is on the fire. ”10. _______3Every morning John goes to work by trains. He always 1. _________buys a newspaper , it helps to make the time pass more quickly . 2. _________One Thursday morning, he turned on the sports 3. _________page . He wanted to see the report about an important 4. _________football match the night before . The report was such 5. _________ interesting that he forgot to get off at his station . He didn’ t know it when he saw the sea. He got off 6. _________at the next station , and had to wait long time for a7. _________train to go back . Of course, he arrived very late8. _________at the office . His boss were very angry when Tom told him9. _________why he was late .“ Work is very more important than football10!. _________”4Dear Ralph,I ’ m a senior student. I have be in love with a boy 1.————for three years.But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 2.————to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter 3.————he said, “We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait 4. ———— tosee until we have any chance after graduation. ” So 5. ————after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about 6.————go out . But he said he didn ’ t want to. He just 7. ————wanted to sleep and watched TV. 8. ————What do you think I should do? Do you think9. ————I should continue to love him and give up?10.————5Nowadays,almost every family has TV set,and almost 1_______.everyone likes watching has become part of our lives 2___________________. TV has many advantages,for example,it informs us the 3___________________. latest news which is happening in the world;it can open our 4___________________. eyes,enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 5___________________. about the world.But,it also has some disadvantages.People 6___________________. waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 7___________________.and work are affected.To the children who they spend too 8___________________. much time in watching TV,it can do harmful to their sight 9___________________. and healthy.So we should control the time of watching TV. 10___________________.6Dear Tom,I am very sorry to have learned that your parents killed in 1___________________. the September 11th Incident.In this attack the World 2___________________.Trade Center,that was one of the tallest buildings 3___________________.in the world,was completely destroyed and thousand of 4___________________. people lost their lives.I'm very angry with the terrorist 5___________________. activities.We against all forms of terrorist activities 6___________________.and supported the war against the terrorism.7_______.Don't be too sad.Don't lose your heart.After all,the majority 8___________________. of the people in the world love peace.I wish you can recover 9___________________. from the sad as soon as possible.Do take care of yourself. 10___________________. Best wishes.7Li Ming,who has been working as postman for 1___________________.two years,always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2___________________.He worked with care as well as with effort.He 3___________________.serves for the people heart and soul.Every day he 4___________________.gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5___________________.He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6___________________.One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7___________________.to be raining hardly outside.But he set out immediately. 8___________________.He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9___________________.he managed to hand letter to the right person. 10_______________8On Saturday,July 22nd,there will have a few visits to 1___________________.different places.Everybody is welcomed.All the visitors 2___________________.will be divided into four groups,Each groups of visitors 3___________________.can visit one of the place such as a factory,a farm,a 4___________________.school or hospital,Please sign your name at the Service 5___________________.desk by 9:00 pm and say which place you wish to visit it. 6___________________.We'll set out after the breakfast at eight in the morning 7___________________.and came back in the afternoon.We'll have lunch at the 8___________________.place of visit.We hope you a pleasant journey. 9___________________.Do tell me your choice by 9:00.That's all,thank you. 10_________________9It is on Sunday today.Early in the morning my 1___________________.classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant 2___________________.trees.As soon as we got there,we began work. 3___________________.Some were digging,some planted,and there were 4___________________.still some watering.Both of us were trying hard to 5___________________.plant as much as we could.All of us were afraid of 6___________________.falling behind.After work,we were wet all over.Looking 7___________________.at lines of young trees,we forgot our tiredness.We 8___________________.came back at 12.we all think it is necessary of us to take 9___________________.part in this kind of physically labor. 10___________________.10Dear editor,My name is Xiao Hai,boy student in senior Three. I don't think it is necessary to writ e the “ S” in a capital letter what do you think, Editor? 1___________________.Recently I've read in Shanghai Students' Post that 2___________________.you need some students reporters.I am anxious to 3___________________.be one of them.I very like English.I have been 4___________________.learned it since eight years ago.Now I can talk 5___________________.with foreigners with English.I can read China Daily. 6___________________.I took the first place in writing an English composition 7___________________.contest.Besides,I do well in a computer competition. 8___________________.Would you be so kind as to receive me? 9___________________.I am looking forward to hear from you soon. 10___________________.11A group of cows refused to across yellow lines which 1___________________.had painted on a road near their farm in Somerset.The 2___________________.markings were painted as a traffic calming measure,but 3___________________.experts think the cows may believe in it is a cattle grid (格子 ). 4___________________. Farmer Gordan Brinson said he was surprised on the reaction 5___________________.the animals has to the lines.“ We were bringing them in for 6___________________. the winter,but had to get them over the yellow lines lots 7___________________.of yellow stripes across the road.When the cattle came the 8___________________.lines,they stopped and would not go.The cattle was not the 9___________________.only animals unused to the new lines.The horses had troubles 10___________________.going over it as well they tried to jump the lines. ”12Dear Tom,How time flies!It's two weeks after the beginning 1_________of our summer holiday.How are you going along recently? 2___________________.I've been staying with my uncle.I found interesting 3_________to live here.However,I feel a bit alone,because I have 4___________________.no friends to play but my five year old cousin.My 5___________________.uncle permitted me to invite you to here.Therefore, 6_________.I send the email to you and hope you to come here. 7__________.Please write to me as quickly as you make up your 8__________.mind.Take Bus No.225 from Xiamen Road and it 9__________.will spend you an hour to get to the bus stop.I'll meet 10___________________.you there.Yours truly,Li Ming13I live in the country and my father was a farmer. 1. __________He is now forty-five year old. Because of years of 2. __________hard work ， he looks old than his age. When I was 3. __________young， he is used to tell me the importance of study. 4. __________Father knows little about English and other subjects ， 5. __________but he usually gives me some good advices on how 6. __________to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me 7. __________but also very strict in me. With his help ， I ’ ve made 8. __________great progress. I’ ll never to forget what he taught 9. __________me. I think my father is best father in the world. 10. _________14Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________choice of the two courses ， I ’ d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________language. I’ d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________a few new friends. In all the subjects I’ m learning 7. __________ at school， I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________in England this summer.15Mr. Huang is sixty years old. He has retired. He taught our1Chemistry when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old ， and2he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr.3 Huang usually made good preparations for lessons and was4strict in us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework ，5he would ask us correct them. At one time ， I was rather poor in6 chemistry. Mr. Huang often helps me with my study very7 patiently. With his help ， I made a great progress and caught8us with the class. He wasn't always very kind to every student. As9an experiencing teacher， he was respected and loved by all the students. 10短文改错答案11. √2. Some → one3. so→ as4. for → to5. lots→ lots of6. for → to7. Next →The next8.from9. beautiful →more beautiful10. instead→ instead of21.works → work2.ran 后加 into3.can→must4.在 sit 前加 to5.√6.去掉 to7.tooths→ teeth8.with → in9.去掉 all10.去掉on 后边的 the31. trains →train2. it → which3. on →to4. see→ read5. such→ so6. when→ until7. long 前加 a8.√9. were→ was 10. very→ much41.been2.first3. feelings4. to5. if / whether6. to7. going 8. watch 9.√10. or51. TV前面加a。

改错练习：每篇短文中均有十处错误。

（1）Last night it snowed heavy. When Susan and I got up in this morning, we found the whole garden was covere d∧thick snow. So we decided∧clear the path. We got two spades(铲子) but began our work at once. We both worked so hard that the path was clear soon. Seeing this, our father felt very surprising. He smiled happily at us, telling us that we have done a good job and that he was proud for us. Finally father gave us some pocket money as a reward for the Spring Festival. Susan and I was happy because we had all got the money through labor(劳动).(2)Dear George,It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to the Washington D.C.,where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experence. If you’d like to make∧trip to our city some day, I will be happily to be your guide.(3) My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It feels very strange to travel without any luggage. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feels very happy that I could change my clothes at last.(4) Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is the first time that I’ve been awa y∧my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became friends soon after we meet each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friend, one of whom has been to China several times. I just can’t wait.(5) I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one in particular I had always want. I pu t∧into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at the age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Later on, my aunt drive me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.(6) Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to ge t∧. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked ou t∧a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt !(7) Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late with work. His boss wanted to fire him if he didn’t start coming on time, but he went to the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. The man did as told and slept really well, wake up before the alarm had even gone off.(闹钟响) He has time for a proper breakfast and was still the first∧reach the factory. “Boss,”he said, “that medicine really works !”“I’m pleasing to hear it,” said the boss, “but where are you yesterday?”。

雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。

介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。

有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与grow up之间是主动关系。

雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。

介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。

有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与grow up之间是主动关系。

语法改错练习1. Many countries, especially developing countries, exist environmental problem.2. Environmental problems have been become seriously in the developing countries.3. High unemployment rate is remained a problem, even if in those developed countries.4. The development of tourism industry contribute to effectively promote economic growth, especially in remote areas.5. Travel agencies provide tourist a large number of informations about destinations.6. Study overseas allows people study foreign languages, such as study English.7. In most time, globalization can make the culture of a country be well-known.1.Many countries, especially developing countries, exist environmental problem.错误1：exist不及物动词，不能加宾语。

错误2：problem可数名词，要加复数，或者冠词。

2.Environmental problems have been become seriously in the developing countries.错误1：been become 两个系动词错误2：seriously副词，不能充当表语错误3：developing countries已经是复数，除非特指，否则不需要加定冠词the注：使用have been becoming现在完成进行时态不恰当，因为要用一般完成时态强调结果。

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错例：One of the most challenging problem are who should be responsible forlooking after the elderly people.正解：One of the most challenging problems is who should be responsible forlooking after the elderly people.改错练习：1. What our modernsociety values are the personality and creativity.2. Private car willexert adverse impacts on the environment and traffic ofthe whole society.3. Long-distance education provides students interesting way to learn.雅思写作常见错误之标点大部分的标点错误出在逗号上。

逗号表示句子内部的一般性停顿。

两个具有独立含义的句子，在没有连词的情况下简单地被一个逗号隔开是不正确的。

改正这样的错误须用句号或分号代替逗号，或用并列连词(and，but，or，so，nor，yet)连接两个句子，或用从属连词(because，as，although等)，否则会导致句子出现语法错误。

错例：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject，others think that’sa waste of time.正解：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject. However，others think that’s a waste oftime.或：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject，but others think that’s a waste of time.改错练习：1. Students should do some housework，it is goodfor them to beindependent.2. They are far away from parents and friends，theycan deal with everythingby themselves.雅思写作结尾模板分析他对于雅思大作文结尾段的理解：Conclusions are actually quite simple. The purpose of the conclusion is toanswer thequestion in the title. Do this by referring to the points you havealready made in the main body. Don’t repeat whole sentences，just summarise themain points. It is also important that you do not raise any new ideas in theconclusion. The conclusion need not be long. Keep it brief and make sure it isdirectly related to the question.雅思作文的结论部分事实上相当简单。

改错练习1.Before 1973, abortion was illegal in America unless the woman's health was threatened・ In March of 1970, Jane Roe, a single woman, instituted this federal action against the District Attorney of the country・ The original idea was that women who truly did not want a baby should not have to have it. _1_ Since pregnacy may be a blessed act when planned or wanted, _2_ forced pregnacy, like any force bodily invasion, is anathema to American values and traditions. As legalized abortion has become an everyday part of American life, a different side to it has emerged out. —3— Where women once were aborting because they did not want a child, the reasons being given now were becoming very different. _4_ Abortion has turned into something that women are being coerced from boyfriends^usbands* unwilling to be fathers, out of fear _5_ of the financial pressure, out of the panic from losing their jobs, out of panic from having to quit the school, or becoming —6— homeless, or out of fear of their parents kicking them out into the street. Abortion for these reasons can lead to problems which develop when a woman is unable to get round her emotional responses _7_ from the trauma of an abortion. There are women who abort and do so completely of her own free will. These women have no _8_ regrets, no remorse, but are happy they had this choice available・ _9—But a growing number of women are speaking up about how abortion effected them adversely. —10—2.Several years ago, we began construction on a new church building・ In the beginning, the workmen dug a big pit in the ground and then they began to pour footings. Footings are cement piers under —1— which the entire building rests. They are crucial to the strength of the finished structure ・ After the foundation hole is dug, the footings must be poured quickly, before the composition of the soil is changed by the wind, air, or water; With a similar way in these brief early _2_ years, parents of young children have the challenging job of lying _3_ the foundation that will support family friendships in later years.Physical affectation and verbal affirmation are necessary in laying _4— a strong foundation for friendship. Hug, hug, hug. Even if you are not —5— raised in a hugging family, hug your kids anyway・ They need the warmth of physical contact and so do you need・ A young child will try to _6_ manipulate and be in the charge・ He will attempt to get his own way. _7_ Since the child may not be consciously trying to control, this is _8_ what he is doing. A wise parent must not permit to happen. —9— When a child respects his parents, he will also respect the others. —10—3.Thirty or forty years ago, when most mothers in the United States didn't have jobs, homes were busier places. Children went to school from 9 A.M to 3 PM. and spent the most of the time in the house under their_1— mother's watchful eyes. Children played, watched TV, and did homework, and while they weren't in the house, —2— they were outside in the front or backyard or playing nearly with other neighborhood children. Though this situation still exists in some communities today, it is becoming rarer and rarer as more and more mothers have work inside the home. These "two-income—3— families11 create a different kind of home— ne that is a place to stop temporarily in the midst of a busy schedule _4— of activities. Because working parents often leave the house by 8 A.M and return at 5 or 6 P.M, children go to school and then a series of highly-programmed after-school activities._5_ So when school lets out for two or three weeks at New Year's time, many parents may face with a troubling situation._6—Some researches show the kind of child-care problem the holidays can have for busy parents- Even in those families _7_ in which the mother is home, there is often many active —8— neighborhood full of children playing since most of the other children are involved in activities. This result from the irony _9_ of both parents and children anxiously look forward to the end—10_ of their vacation.4.Poverty exists because our society is an unequal one^ and there are powerful political pressures to keep it that way. Any attempt to redistributing wealth and in _1_ come in the United States will inevitably be opposed by powerful middle and upper class interests. People can be relatively rich only if you are relatively poor, and as _2_ power is mainly in the hands of the rich, public policies reflect their interests than —3— those of the poor As Mr. Herbert Gans has pointed out, poverty is actually functional from the point of view of the non poor. Poverty ensures that dirty work gets doing. If there _4_ were no poor people to scrub floors and empty bedpans, there jobs will have to be _5_ rewarded with high incomes before anyone would touch them. Poverty creates jobs for many of the non poor, such as police officers, welfare workers, and government bureaucrats. Poverty makes life easier for the rich by providing them with cookers, —6— gardeners, and other workers to perform basic chores when their employers enjoy _7_ more pleasurable activities. Poverty provides a market for more inferior goods and _8_ service, such as day old bread, run down automobiles, or the advice of competent _9_ physicians and lawyers. Poverty also provides a group that can be made to absorb the costs of change・ It is just that poverty is an inevitable outcome of the American economic system, in which the poor are politically powerless to in fluence or change ・—10—5・ Pronouncing a language is a skill. Every normal person is expert in the skill of pronouncing his own language, and —butl—few people are even moderately proficient at pronouncing foreign languages・ Now there are many reasons about this, —for2_ some obvious, some perhaps not so obvious・ But 1 suggest that the fundamental reason why people in general do not speak foreign languages very () better than they do is that _3much_ they fail to grasp the true name of the problem of learning to pronounce, and consequently never set about tackling it by the right way. Far too many people fail to realize —nature4—that pronounce a foreign language is a skill; one that_pronounce_5— needs careful training of a special kind、and one that cannot be acquired by just leaving it to take care of himself. _itself6_ I think even teachers of language, while recognizing the importance of a good accent, tend to neglect, in their practical teaching, the branch of study concerning with speaking the—concerned?_ language. So the first point I want to make is that English pronunciation must be taught; the teacher may be prepared to —should8— devote some of the lesson time to this, and by his whole attitude to the subject he should get the student to feel that here is a matter worth of receiving his close ttention.—去掉9— So, there should be occasions where other aspects of English, _when _10_ such as grammar or spelling, are allowed for the moment to take a secondary place・改错【答案】1l.it——one. it和one用来指代时，it通常用于特指，one通常用于类指。

雅思语法改错练习雅思语法改错练习澳大利亚西蒙国际外语雅思培训部 Jack Stone写正确的句子:常见错误解析•1、成分完整：主谓宾的叙事框架不可缺亦不可多•It often swaying the customers by using the data that how many people are using their brands saying how awesome the particular product is.•Generally speaking, television computer just like a library, they are conveniently and simply provided something what children want to understand.•If there were no math how could build so many mansion without accidents happen frequently.•It is true that all those great projects which represent the trace of our history will beyond our ability without math.•Young person committed crime is higher in the whole of criminal rate because some young adults are not have a steady income.•Conversely, children who spend time on these things, they also bring a large quantity of benefits.•In the same way, children often face computer and television not only reduce time to participate in social activities or play in sports, but also alienate from the others in their life.•2、时态正确、准确、一致I was always holding the opinion that philosophy has less contribution to our life. •We have just being told that there are billions of male and more than female, especially in China.•Some people might questioned that if the universities’ behavior can arouse citizen’s anger because of the unfair treatment. •However, my favorite place is a Chinese city—Xin Jiang—which I have visit for two times.•That is also has positive effects on our market economic system.•However, there's a somewhat aggressive perspective said that we can't neglect the bad part of the science and technology…•In conclusion, I prefer to forwards. Even with the advent of science and technology in the 21st century. Children should spending time effectively•In conclusion, advertisement more or less conveyed the information of a country. •Therefore I firmly held the opinion that to protect local culture from extinction weight heavier than that in regard to the relationship between tourism and local culture.•3、a / an / the 的使用必须准确•名词不可裸奔原则•The second time I went there is for the traveling.• Advertising has a irreplaceable role in today’s business world. •The colleges and universities today offer the students choice to choose their teachers.•4、主谓一致•The history of science and technology have accompanied the evolution of human civilization. •Then, some excellent television program such as DISCOVERY HISTROY or English Language Teaching can open their mind and develop ability to thinking.•Moreover, customs and rituals of a nation is always the significant factor that all the companies are concern about which obviously can be seen from the way they do their advertising campaign.•Economic situations can also be translated into the slogans the company are using to express their concern on the latest issues such as rising oil prices.•Nowadays, research in growing numbers proves that experience we enjoy in our life do a declining effect on our personal character and development than the identity we are born with.•5、代词正确、前后一致•My mother acquired me to write a plan for what you will do next year.•My first reason is that some of the advertising exaggerate greatly. It seems their goods are able to copy with most of the problems, if not all.•Therefore I firmly held the opinion that to protect local culture from extinction weight heavier than that in regard to the relationship between tourism and local culture.•For visitors, following local customs and behavious is a significant approach to understand the colourful culture of host country in depth, because whatever you have already known about other nation is only a tip of the iceberg, a part of the reality, an experience of other people.6、词性、词形(主被动、可数、不可数、分词)正确•Nowadays technology is developing fastly andsome of us feel uneasy.•… a large amount of endeavor citizens made has been damaging the originate view of the nature…•Admittedly, if there are enough number of male and female students study all the subject, it must cause a large amount of waste which can result in the students’ skill training inefficiency.•Worse more, the quantity of unemployment people might dramatically increase.•Some consumer goods advocated by advertising makers, far from advantage, might impair our health, especially for babies. •However, as far as I concerned, try to keep these traditional skills and way of life is really have great meanings.•The final reason, and possibly the most significant one, is that prevents crime and advocates peace should be propagated by government at school and family. Children need to be educated on the dangers of commit crime.•The exceedingly density of population will trigger the tension of traffic, banking and eating. •Some people argue that young students of different abilities should be mix together while many others contend that it has detrimental impact for talent children.•7、避免出现“CHINGLISH”—汉化表达•While there are some advertising which are so excellent that might provide recreation and refreshment to fatigued urban dwellers, however, they are only the tip of the iceberg. •Different background people hold different attitudes toward this issue.•So we can discuss this argumentation from positive and negative perspective in modern-day society.•8、注意句子中并列成分的正确性•that’s not only good for those major’s student quality but also benefit for improving the society’s efficiency and stabilized the develop balance.•I’d like to explain that it is not only just male have more major selecting opportunities that female but also have a lot of major which male get less chance.•9、避免串句、断句、破句•For example, if you taught everybody of a poor country philosophy, they can use this subject to make them rich which can make them don‘t have to eat the roots of trees and grass to feed their family, and grass to feed theirthey can’t use it to make live peacefully which allow them sleep with an eye open all through the night.•As to this matter I hold the opinion that the society and the universities should treat female and male fairly but there are several jobs exist which men can do them better than women or women are more suitable for them, compared with men.•By all accounts, above 90 percent nurses in hospital are female, what made that happened?。

雅思写作改错练习(附答案)为了帮助大家备考雅思作文，提高写作水平，下面小编给大家带来雅思写作改错练习(附答案)，希望大家喜欢!雅思写作改错练习(附答案)1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters tomagazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.参考答案1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.错误: and并列连接两个谓语，应该是平行结构。