广东高考英语基础写作指导

蒸 胜
近五年高考 英语广 东卷基础 写作解读
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高考基础 写作命题解读
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１ 近 ５年基础写作命题 总结。 ． 年份 ４
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年的体裁 都选 择 了应用 文和说 明文这 两种体 裁 ，可
（９ １）建设 文明校 园 ；
（０ ２ ）快乐 的秘诀就是 ：记住美好的时光；
（１ ２）对大学 的选择情况 ；
（２ ２ ）专家呼吁限制垃圾食品广告 ；
（３ ２ ）高中生梦想的调查 。
二 、高考基础写作范文解读
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16、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。——华盛顿 17、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。——罗素·贝克 18、最大的挑战和突破在于用人，而用人最大的突破在于信任人。——马云 19、自己活着，就是为了使别人过得更美好。——雷锋 20、要掌握书，莫被书掌握；要为生而读，莫为读而生。——布尔沃
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广东英语高考之基础写作指导
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广东高中英语基础写作技巧（精选）
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广东高考英语基础 写作题解读及备考策略
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间） ５ 用 个句子表 达所提示 的全 部写作 内容 ， 要求 做到句子结 构准确 、 息内容完 整 、程 小明 。 目 一 深圳 市宝安 中学 古 和添 篇 章结构连贯 信 近 三 年基 础 写 作 题 的特 点 和 涉 及 到 的语 言基 础如 下表 ：
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新题型基础写作训练
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
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I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
人们对学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用 如何 思 英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介 整理 考 信息? 绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法. 赞成的理由 反对的理由

广东新高考英语作文指导随着广东省新高考改革的推进，英语作文对于广东考生来说变得更为重要。

本文将为考生提供一些指导，帮助他们在新高考英语作文中取得好成绩。

1. 理解题目要求在写作之前，首先要仔细阅读并理解题目要求。

注意关键词，了解所要求的主题、角度以及要求的文体。

这样可以帮助你更好地掌握写作的方向。

2. 确定立意在写作之前，要先确定自己的立意。

可以通过思考、头脑风暴等方式，找到对于所给主题最合适的观点或主张。

立意要明确，确保思路清晰。

3. 选取合适的素材写作过程中，选取合适的素材可以使文章更具说服力和可读性。

可以通过举例、引用数据、引用名人观点等方式来支持自己的观点。

但需要注意的是，引用的内容必须经过确认，避免引入无法确认真实性的内容。

4. 合理组织文章结构文章结构的合理性对于作文的质量至关重要。

可以采用“提出观点-列举理由-总结观点”的结构，或者根据具体情况选用其他结构。

段落之间要有过渡自然，保持逻辑的连贯性。

5. 注意语言表达作文中使用准确、生动的语言表达可以增加文章的表现力和吸引力。

要注意使用恰当的词汇和句式，避免重复和冗余。

注意语法和拼写错误，确保语言准确无误。

6. 增加亮点在写作过程中，适当增加亮点能够引起阅卷老师的兴趣，提升作文的质量。

可以通过使用比喻、修辞手法、适当的幽默等方式来增加文章的亮点。

7. 注意篇幅控制在新高考英语作文中，篇幅控制很重要。

要根据题目要求合理安排文章的篇幅，控制在适当的字数范围内。

以上是关于广东新高考英语作文的一些建议和指导。

希望以上内容能对广东考生在新高考英语作文中有所帮助。

加油！。

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作步骤：
第1步 审题
1 体裁格式 2 内容 3 人称、时态 4 信息点的整
合和排列
写信 描述高三学生现状。 第一人称。一般现在时。
6项
第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。
1) 每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间3～4小时。
Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. 2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。
2、如何做到句式灵活？ 1)并列句 2)复合句
(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构
Ex:按要求改写下列句子。
1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句)
5) (合并为定语从句)
6) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.
5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句)
a. We hardly have any time for relaxation.

高三英语写作指导资料——“读写任务”专题指导一、常用文章开头、睁开及结尾的句式：1. Summary:1).In this passage, the writer (author) explains/writes about......2).The passage/article points out/presents/states/compares/introduces/mainlytells us......3).We can learn from the passage that......4).The passage tells us a story of......, who........ Through the story,theauthor presents an idea that...... (记述＋寓意)5).As can be learned from the passage,6).The passage compares the benefits of A with B. Some argue in support of A,believing that..., while others prefer B, stating that......（谈论文）7).The writer sets some examples to tell us2.过渡句：1).I can’t agree more with the author.2).I agree with what is presented above.3).The view sounds right /reasonable but it is hardly practical.（谈论文）4).Personally, I prefer ......5).Different people have different opinions on this point.Some...,.. Others.....（两种看法）6). In my opinion, it is right for sb. to do......7). This story reminds me of an accident that I witnessed.8). Another example that jumps into my mind is......9).I have a similar (the same) experience.10).What Peter did reminds me of a story that happened two years ago.（记述文）3.结束段（句）：1).In conclusion/short/brief,...2).As is stated above, sth.has both advantages and disadvantages.My opinion isthat...（响应文章主题或标题）3).In a word, we have to strike/achieve a balance between A and B.Only if/when/after/by/in......, can we do......4).From what has been discussed above, we may safely （讨论两种事物经常用）draw the conclusion that...5).Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration， ..4.解题技巧：A. 标题：一般要有， 07 高考写信无法再拟标题。

谈谈怎样教广东高考英语基础写作摘要：2007年高考英语广东卷体现了新课程改革精神，有浓厚时代特色，综合考查学生能力、情感、态度和价值观，重视对英语学习的最终“产出”（output）层面的考查，写作占的全卷分值比重大。

本文旨在分析广东高考英语基础写作的特点并对如何进行基础写作的课堂教学提出自己的见解。

“写”的活动是高级认知活动，是一个人思维能力的最完美体现。

广东高考英语写作题由基础写作和读写任务两部分组成。

其中，基础写作题要求用五句话来表达题目所给的全部信息并组成连贯的短文，属于带指引的写作（Guided Writing）。

本文将从基础写作的特点和课堂教学建议这两方面来探讨怎样进行基础写作的课堂训练。

一、基础写作的特点。

广东高考英语基础写作的目的还是考查考生最基础的书面表达能力，即用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。

评分时强调了句子的复杂性、准确性、完整性和连贯性。

1、写作内容半开放。

写作内容被规定，考生必须把题目要求的所有信息完整地表达出来，但可以自主构建信息的先后次序及表达方式。

2、文章限用五句话。

基础写作要求用五句话，超过或少于五句话都要扣分。

这就要求考生有较强的信息组织能力及良好的句子表达能力，能熟练使用并列句、复合句等句式来表达多个信息点。

高考大纲说明中提到，英语科考试强调考查考生对英语语言基础知识的掌握和理解程度，注重考查考生在特定的语言环境中运用语言完成任务的能力和综合运用英语语言知识的能力。

二、课堂教学建议。

下面以一范例来探讨怎样进行基础写作题的课堂训练。

基础写作:假设你是王强，拾到电子词典一部，请失主前来认领。

[写作内容]时间：2008年11月11日晚地点：学校图书馆阅览室特征：新、白色、比名片稍大、杂志般厚联系地址：C楼305房联系电话：28250001[写作要求]1. 标题：Lost and Found2. 必须用五个句子介绍全部所给内容；3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。

广东高考英语作文提纲一、引言1. 介绍高考英语作文的重要性2. 阐述作文在英语考试中的分值比重二、作文类型1. 议论文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧2. 记叙文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧3. 说明文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧4. 应用文- 定义- 常见题型（如书信、通知等）- 写作技巧三、作文结构1. 开头- 引入话题- 明确观点2. 正文- 论点阐述- 论据支持- 段落结构3. 结尾- 总结全文- 重申观点- 展望未来四、写作技巧1. 词汇运用- 准确使用同义词 - 避免重复词汇2. 句型变化- 使用复杂句型- 避免简单句型重复3. 逻辑清晰- 论证逻辑清晰- 段落间逻辑关系4. 时态运用- 正确使用时态- 时态一致性五、常见错误分析1. 语法错误- 时态错误- 语态错误- 名词单复数错误2. 拼写错误- 单词拼写错误- 专有名词拼写错误3. 标点符号错误- 标点符号使用不当- 标点符号遗漏六、备考策略1. 阅读理解- 通过阅读提升词汇量- 学习文章结构和写作技巧2. 写作练习- 定期练习写作- 模拟考试环境下写作3. 作文批改- 自我批改- 同学互批- 老师批改七、实例分析1. 历年高考作文题目2. 优秀作文示例3. 错误作文示例及改进建议八、结语1. 强调作文在高考中的重要性2. 鼓励学生积极备考，提高写作能力九、附录1. 高考英语作文评分标准2. 高考英语作文常用词汇表3. 高考英语作文常用句型集锦十、参考文献1. 教育部门发布的高考英语考试大纲2. 高考英语作文指导书籍3. 英语写作教学论文此提纲旨在帮助广东地区的考生系统地准备高考英语作文部分，通过结构化的内容安排，确保考生能够在考试中取得优异的成绩。

照对区爱民学校广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列1）要求：1. 不得照抄短诗原文。

2. 必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。

3. 短文不能写成诗歌形式。

4. 只能使用价值个句子表达全部的内容。

广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列2）高考英语基础写作指导(II)第二讲记叙文：如何叙事？一、写作指导叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。

好的记叙文具有描述事件具体、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。

高考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也需要具有记叙文写作的一般特点，但要求相对比较低，其考查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息点表述完整等方面。

写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题：1. 严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点，不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。

2. 信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点。

3. 记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其它时态。

4. 叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。

二、常用语句1. 表达时间a long time ago, at six o’clock in the morning, at the end of, at the wee kend,before he came here, by the end of last term, during the summer holidays, in a few years’ time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in Augu st 2002, inwinter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, not…until, while , etc.2. 表达地点at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at t he foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind th e park, besituated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangd ongProvince, in the middle of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the b us, infront of the bus, in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, onthe other side of the street, on both sides of the road,on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.3. 表达因果as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, conse quently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that… , It turns out to be… , The primary reason is … , etc.4. 事件话题(1)学校生活及学习成绩be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be g ood at ,be poor at , be tired of one’s work, be weak in, do one’s homework, do sports afterschool,do well in; education for all-round development(素质教育), examination-oriented education system(应试教育), fail in the test, get a doctor’s degree, get on well with English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, giv e sb. a passing grade, have a good command of the language, have eight class es every day, help with each other, lay a good foundation in, learn…by heart, major in history, make friends with sb., make progress in, put one’s heart int o, pass the examination, study in groups,succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity,take several courses at school, work out a problem, work on a maths problem , work hard at, etc.(2)师生关系及其活动be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with one’s pupils, be strict in one’s work, be satisfied with , blame sb. for sth, correct th e students’homework carefully, devote all one’s time to work, fo rm a good habit of, get on wellwith sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth, mak e one’s lessonslively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrow’s lesson, question sbon, teach sb. English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.(3)课余活动及周末生活do some reading, enjoy a family trip, enjoy doing sth., go swimming, go for an outing, go to the cinema, have an outing at the seashore, have a swim, have dances on weekends, have a picnic at the weekend, have a party, hold a sports meeting,Internet bar, net friend, online love affair(网恋), play the piano, play chess (ba sketball), see the sights of Beijing, spend one’s time in many different ways, t each in afamily, etc.(4)交通情况a big traffic jam, a traffic accident, be very crowded in the street, be seri ouslyinjured, by bus (train / ship / boat), drive a car, flight No. 2130, in a small b oat,give sb. a lift, keep right, lie on the street, meet sb. at the station, on the bus (train),on board, on one’s way to London, on the journey, one way only , pic k up sb., ride a bike, ride a horse , see sb. off at the airport, self-service tick et , take a flight to New York, traffic light, travel through China, turn right, e tc.(5)度假旅游New Year’s Day, Women’s Day, May Day, Youth Day, Children’s Day, Tea chers’ Day, Mid-Autumn Day, National Day, valentine’s Day, the Spring Festiv al, a hot spot, a place of interest, a tourist destination, a five-star hotel, a goo d restaurant, a return ticket, a single ticket, a city with a long history, a quiet village, a three-day tour, an experienced guide, Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, beautiful scenery, in peak touristseasons, natural attraction, on one’s way to France, on the back way , one of thegreat wonders of the world, spend one’s holidays on the sea , the 11th Asian Games, travel agency, the tour route, the inner-ring road, travel to England, the Great Wall , the Summer Place , Zhongshan Park , etc.(6)环境保护a good environment, area pollution, air pollution, air quality standard, Antarctic Circle, atmospheric chemistry, a heavy rain, a heavy snow, be polluted, be hot, be cold, be cool, be cloudy, be rainy, be sunny, be flooded, climate, carbondioxide(CO2), chemical change, chemical cleaning of coal, climate change, dirty, drought, dry, flood, early warning system, environmental behavior, environmental quality, feel comfortable, global warming, minus 20 degrees centigrade(-20°), 30 degrees above zero(30°)，sea level, warning center, wastes, water surface , water treatment, water pollution control, weather, windstorm , etc.三、典型例文参考范文：Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school. It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and it has a history of over 80 years. Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior stud ents It has three teachingbuildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all aro und, soit’s very beautiful. In our school we learn Chinese, mat hs, science, English, co mputer,PE, arts and some other subjects.We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 参考范文：A brief Introduction of the Chinese Spring FestivalThe Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year, which is usually in February. There is a name for each year, such as th e dog, themonkey, the tiger or one of the twelve animals, and this year is the year of t he pig.Before the New Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a good cleaning and on the last evening of the old year, all the members ofa family willget together and have a big meal. On the first or second day of the new year, peopleusually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky mon ey to children.I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival.参考范文1.On July 27th2007, Friday, we 18 classmates, including John from Britain, Sinba from India and Keith from the USA, went to Lee Farm to help the far mers. Westarted off at 8 o’clock in the morning, and after an hour’s ride on the bus, w e walked for another 15 minutes. Lee Farm is about 60 kilometres northwest t o our school. A few days ago it was hit by a strong tornado, and many apple s were blown ontothe ground, so we helped to pick up the apples and put the good ones in the baskets.We felt very tired after the work, but all of us thought it was a great help to thefarmers.2. Last Wednesday I gave a lecture about China’s culture and history to t he 7thstudents from 9-11:30 in the morning. This is the first time I gave a lesson, s o I felt very nervous and great pressure. I presented for one and a half hours, introducingfrom the dynasties in ancient times to the revolutionary in recent times, but I spent a lot more time on present China, the renovation, the open policy and th e economicdevelopment. In the following hour we exchanged ideas and had a good discus sion,but I was sorry to find that they knew little about China and raised a lot of s trange questions. I think we need more cultural exchange of this kind, because we can get more practice and the foreign students can understand more about China.广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列3）第三讲如何写图表类说明文一、写作指导图表类作文一直是高考的热点，其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。

广东高考英语基础写作及范文一、基础写作广东高考英语基础写作第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。

以下是调查数据：[写作内容]根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1．调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2．男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3．“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4．男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5．你的偶像及理由。

VersionLast week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on the “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.2008年广东高考英语基础写作第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。

[写作内容]Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.Version 2It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896's three events to today's seventeen.2009年广东高考英语基础写作第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。

高考写作指导---基础写作1.考查方向:1).整合信息技能2).选词造句技能3).连句成篇技能切记：考生不需要再发挥命题特点：1．写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活2．写作的题材主要是故事性描述和应用文3．内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性4．用5句话表达对考生的要求：1．信息组织能力。

2．运用复杂句子的能力。

信息组织能力包括：1.信息归类2.信息排列--如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等3.信息表达--意思连贯、语言畅谈、逻辑严密复杂句子主要有三类：第一类是复合句或含有非谓语动词、介词短语的复杂句。

第二类是并列句或带有并列成分的复杂句。

第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it 开头的句子等。

2. 评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

细则如下表：【评分标准】语言(满分8分)7 —8 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。

5 —6 具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

3 —4 语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。

1 —2 语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不正确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。

0 语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。

备注每多写或少写一个句子，扣1分。

内容（满分5分）：5 包括了所有信息内容4 包括了大部分信息内容3 包括了基本信息内容2 包括了小部分信息内容1 包括了少许信息内容0 没有包括所提供的信息内容连贯（满分2分）：2 内容连贯，而且结构紧凑1．5 内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑1 内容连贯性教差，而且结构不够紧凑0 内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散备注文不对题，给0分上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查（survey）。

广东高考英语卷写作指导第一讲记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。

写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。

2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。

重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。

3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

4．注意运用正确的时态。

描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。

二、常用词语外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent,kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative，warm-hearted，wise，etc.出生年龄：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life,spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was asmall boy, etc.兴趣爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his researchwork, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, lookforward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heartinto, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景：be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test，a master’sdegree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ，go abroad tofurther one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, hisfather was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history,receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹：become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research intothis field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics,serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, considersb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文：Dear Manager，I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I cameto study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studiedcomputer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player.He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but threeyears younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He wonthe first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon afterthat. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she cameto school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part inthe National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is verystrict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2．请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。