高中英语短文改错百篇练习四(60-80)

短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76．_______________ achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．_______________ Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．_______________ to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．_______________ most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact , 80．_______________ they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．_______________ have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．_______________ they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．_______________ As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．_______________ home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．_______________ have gotten a good education .短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．_______________ like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．_______________ just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,78．_______________ since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．_______________ hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．_______________ to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81．_______________ may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．_______________ as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．_______________ So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84．_______________ was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．_______________ locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习（3）Get a good education is more important today than 76．_______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．_______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78．_______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79．_______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．_______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．_______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．_______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83．_______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．_______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．_______________ through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习（4）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 76.our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77.girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 78.All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the foot of 81.the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82.of water from one to other up to the hill. 83.We did not finish water the trees until it 84.was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习（5）A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76. _______________ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. _______________ speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. _______________ interested to begin studying another language. At the first 79. _______________ class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 80. _______________ in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. _______________ student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. _______________ kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 83. _______________ why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an84. _______________ American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85. _______________短文改错练习（6）It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many76．_______________ friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77．_______________ I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center of lake. 78．_______________ A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79．_______________ were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80．_______________ paddles（桨）and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81．_______________ over me or green water around me I was extremely 82．_______________ relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83．_______________ knew them. I came back home very l ate. I didn’t feel84．_______________ tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85．_______________短文改错练习（7）I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _______________ it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77_______________ everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78_______________ Things here are same now as they were before. The 79 _______________ final examination will take place in next week. So 80 _______________ I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81_______________ to think that the summer vacation is coming 82_______________ near. I can’t say much I want to se e you all again. 83 _______________ I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84_______________ Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85_______________短文改错练习（8）One afternoon , when I was on my way home , the sky 76．_______________ changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77．_______________ to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78．_______________or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79．_______________ Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80．_______________ me from behind . I turned to have a look and find that 81．_______________ he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82．_______________ offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83．_______________ the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I would have 84．_______________ got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85．_______________短文改错练习（9）I worried about the missed bag all the evening. 76．_______________ I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77．_______________ time I left the store until at the time I got home. I 78．_______________ remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79．_______________ was having lunch. So I must have it when I left the 80．_______________ store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81．_______________ But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82．_______________ to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83．_______________ was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84．_______________ lying on the floor. I should be much careful next time. 85．_______________短文改错练习（10）A kind of little car may someday take place of today’s big 76．_______________ ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．_______________ less pollution in there air . There will be more spaces for 78．_______________ parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．_______________ driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．_______________ per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．_______________ will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．_______________ are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．_______________ for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．_______________ the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．_______________ fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习（11）Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though you find 76．_______________ something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you. If you 77．_______________ can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78．_______________ it. I’m sure you would want someone to do same for79．_______________ you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80．_______________ it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81．_______________ I went to the office and found the person to who it 82．_______________ belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83．_______________ gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84．_______________ rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85．_______________ my heart.Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习（12）Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76. _______________ chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77. _______________ taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78. _______________ Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79. _______________ to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80. _______________ he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81. _______________ poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82. _______________ very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83. _______________ caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84. _______________ As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85. _______________ the students.短文改错练习（13）I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76. _______________that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77. _______________reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78. _______________when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79. _______________fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80. _______________water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81. _______________ became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82. _______________ glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83. _______________ increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84. _______________is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85. _______________then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习（14）Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．_______________ example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．_______________ basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．_______________fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．_______________to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．_______________ father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t 81．_______________ make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．_______________are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．_______________ are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．_______________you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．_______________短文改错练习（15）Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．_______________ make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．_______________all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．_______________ go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．_______________ lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．_______________ talks about work and study . 81．_______________ Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．_______________ what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．_______________ do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．_______________ be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．_______________短文改错练习（16）Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you .76．_______________ I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．_______________ further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．_______________ for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．_______________ my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．_______________ going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．_______________ for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．_______________ can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．_______________ in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to co ntinue living with 84．_______________ them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ? 85．_______________Best WishesJane短文改错练习（17）I used to love science class—all of them—76．_______________ biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．_______________ liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．_______________ understand what the world works. For example, 79．_______________ when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one 80．_______________ class, I learned why it rained. I think science classes 81．_______________ clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 82．_______________ mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? 83．_______________ That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．_______________ Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．_______________ saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习（18）Some Americans judge success on the length 76．_______________ of his vacations . The man who gets a m onth’s 77．_______________ vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．_______________ than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．_______________ to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．_______________ get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．_______________ teachers who teach the three classes consider 82．_______________ themselves less successful than that who teach 83．_______________ only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．_______________ work Americans do , the less successful they 85．_______________ consider themselves .短文改错练习（19）As is known, that is interesting to teach children to 76．_______________swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．_______________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78．_______________ babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79．_______________in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．_______________the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．_______________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．_______________ water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．_______________can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can 84．_______________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85．_______________短文改错练习（20）Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76. _______________where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77. _______________if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78. _______________the mistake about the price. You looked at two different 79. _______________price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80. _______________21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81. _______________yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82. _______________your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83. _______________get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84. _______________yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85. _______________ I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习（21）In many western countries heavy industry is high developed 76．_______________ The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77．_______________ the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78．_______________ machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79．_______________ smaller objects required for various purpose in our home 80．_______________ and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the 81．_______________ general level of economic or industrial development. 82．_______________ In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83．_______________ decrease （减少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84．_______________ Local supplies of the coal or electric power for their operation 85．_______________短文改错练习（22）It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .76．_______________I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road .77．_______________Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to78．_______________see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell79．_______________down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes .80．_______________She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel81．_______________and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went to82．_______________apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me .83．_______________The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action .84．_______________And now ,after I do everything , I’ll think carefully whether85．_______________it’s right or wrong . I’ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习（23）Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters 76．_______________in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So 77．_______________he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua 78．_______________University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle 79．_______________school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. 80．_______________He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a 81．_______________lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in 82．_______________physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83．_______________In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps 84．_______________and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85．_______________短文改错练习（24）Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job 76._______________ interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to 77._______________get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking 78. _______________for several week now and haven’t found anything. 79. _______________The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I 80. _______________am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you 81. _______________could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, 82. _______________but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you 83. _______________ decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you 84. _______________can think about get a bike later. 85. _______________Love短文改错练习（25）Dear Abby：How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you76．_______________I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77．_______________further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam78．_______________for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore,79．_______________my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my80．_______________going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me81．_______________for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They82．_______________can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83．_______________in th e capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them.84．_______________How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?85．_______________Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习（26）I went to see film after supper. On my way to the 76. _______________ cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her 77. _______________ way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards 78. _______________ her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her 79. _______________ great change had taken place in the past few years and she 80. _______________ told me something about Britain and her family. 81. _______________ Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, 82. _______________for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also 83. _______________ practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at84. _______________ English, I would have been able to help her. 85. _______________短文改错练习（27）I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _______________it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that 77. _______________everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78. _______________Things here are the same now as we were before. 79. _______________The final examination will take place of next week. 80. _______________But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to81. _______________think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t 82. _______________say much I want to see you all again. 83. _______________ Looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84. _______________Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 85. _______________短文改错练习（28）Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76．_______________us English when I attended training course two77．_______________years before. Helen always made good preparations78．_______________for the lessons, she tried her best to make her79．_______________classes lively. I used to being poor in English,80．_______________especial ly in written English. But now I’m able81．_______________to write English letters and reports correct.82．_______________I still remember how she helped me for my83．_______________English patiently. Teachers’ Day’s come. I’m going to84．_______________send to her a card and give her best wishes.85．_______________短文改错练习（29）ow I'd like to tell you why I learn English．76．_______________ I often read English aloud and try learn something 77．_______________important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and 78．_______________form the good habit of thinking in English．79．_______________I listen to a lot and talk with others in English．80．_______________ In this way, I was improved both my hearing 81．_______________and my spoken English．I keep a diary in English every day but my 82．_______________spoken English is becoming better and better．83．_______________I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge．By this means, I can express itself 84．_______________in English correct．That's the way I have been learning 85．_______________English．I hope it will be useful to you．That's all．Thank you．短文改错练习（30）I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could 76. _______________ never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend 77. _______________ several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant 78. _______________ cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to 79. _______________ make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then80. _______________ he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still 81. _______________ couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82. _______________ microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something 83. _______________ and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked.“That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted,84. _______________ and he bent ov er and looking into the microscope. “That’s your85. _______________ eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习（31）One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came, 76．_______________she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. 77．_______________The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. 78．_______________She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never before 79．_______________ suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful examination, 80．_______________the doctor said, “You are in a very bad state of health for a woman81．_______________of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of 82．_______________old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will mostly 83．_______________clean up in spring!” “Nonsese, doctor!” she said, “My left knee is84．_______________ perfect, and it is exactly same age as my right.”85．_______________短文改错练习（32）May I have you attention please? I have a few 76. _________things to tell you. When you have a class here in the 77. _________language lab, please be here a little early. Change 78. _________your shoes before enter the lab. Don't bring anything 79. _________here except your text books. When you are into, 80. _________please don't touch these machine without permission. 81. _________Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you 82. _________should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders 83. _________ can be used make a copy of the listening materials. 84. _________ When class over, turn off your machines and leave 85. _________ the lab one by one.短文改错练习（33）Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested 76. _________ activity, in which children and their parents play the rich 77. _________ and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious 78. _________ food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). 79. _________ Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the 80. _________ children. They hoped that their children could be taught the 81. _________ lesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. _________ Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. _________ The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. _________ differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. _________ know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习（34）We'll never forget the day which my classmates and 76. _________ I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. 77. _________ It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It 78. _________ looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, 79. _________ grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some 80. _________ workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We 81. _________ talked to them and learned a lot. We understood 82. _________ them further. On the way home we felt tiring. 83. _________ We all thought that we had a very good day. We 84. _________ really hoped that we could get more chances of 85. _________ leave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习（35）One morning Mrs Jenkins went to department store 76. ___________ to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store 77. ___________ before she got there. She had to wait. Then a fat lady. 78. ___________ came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve 79. ___________ for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy 80. ___________ a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she couldn't do. 81. ___________ The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let Mrs Jenkins 82. ___________ explain anything but insisted that Mrs Jenkins 83. ___________。

英语：短文改错百篇练习四（60-80）61A kind of little car may someday take place of today’s big 76．ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．less pollution in there air . There will be more spaces for 78．parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .76. take^ place——the 77.would ——will 78.spaces ——space 79.crowd ——crowed80.正确81.so——but 82.stop^ ——for 83.去掉that 84. another——other85.third-three62Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though you find 76．something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you. If you 77．can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78．it. I’m sure you would want someone to do same for79．you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80．it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81．I went to the office and found the person to who it 82．belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83．gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84．rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85．my heart.Yours,Li Ming76．do→don’t 或者agree→disagree 77．去掉but 78．去掉back 79．do∧same, the 80．√81．see→seeing 82．who→whom 83．get∧back, it 84．get→got85．another→one63Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76.chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77.taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78.Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79.to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80.he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81.poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82.very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83.caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84.As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85.the students.76．teaches→taught 77．and→but 78．good→well 79．lesson→lessons 80．to→with 81．was去掉82．poorly→poor 83．had→have（或had去掉）84．在with前加up 85．√64I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76.that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77.reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78.when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79.fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80.water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81.became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82.glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anythin g, but this 83.increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84.is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85.______________then I have been more frightened.76. Look —Looking 77. reason－reasons 78. √79. had后加an 80. taught后加to81 danger－dangerous 82. 去掉ones 83. but 改为so 或and 84. your－my 85.see－saw65Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t 81．make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．76．them→it 77．example→examples 78．run with→run 79．should→will 80．what→that 81．Right 82．race-horse→a race-horse83．more→most 84．you→yourself 85．told→are told66Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．talks about work and study . 81．Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．76. from→of 77.make→makes 78.times→time 79.having→have 80.him→them 81.√82. try→try to 83.what→that 84.could→can 85.happier→happy67Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84．them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ? 85．Best WishesJane76．去掉a 77．have^—have been 78．exam—exams79．was—were 80．strong—strongly 81．too—so82．去掉of 83．live—living 84．√85．fact^—fact that68I used to love science class—all of them—76．biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．understand what the world works. For example, 79．when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one 80．class, I learned why it rained. I think science classes 81．clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 82．mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? 83．That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．saw how I could use it in my daily life.76．class—classes 77．or—and 78．it—they 79．what—how 80．去掉the 81．√82．is—are 83．mysteries^—mysteries to 84．learn—learning 85．practically —practical69Some Americans judge success on the length 76．of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s 77．vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．teachers who teach the three classes consider 82．themselves less successful than that who teach 83．only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．work Americans do , the less successful they 85．consider themselves .76．on-by 77．his-their 78．consider-considers 79．the man-the man who 80．√81．get-get a 82．删去the 83．that-those 84．in- at 85．less-more70As is known, that is interesting to teach children to 76．swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78．babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79．in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can 84．master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85．76．that—it 77．the前加of或去掉the 78．particularly—particular 79．from去掉80．√81．month—months 82．child前加a 83．teaching—taught 84．with—without 85．him —himself71Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76.where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77.if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78.the mistake about the price. You looked at two different 79.price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80.21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81.yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82.your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83.get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84.yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85.I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua76．in→at 77．√78．if→when 79．the→a 80．price→prices 81．so→but(and) 82．my→out 83．have left→had left 84．去掉in 85．you→to72I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76.that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77.reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78.when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79.fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80.water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81.became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82.glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83.increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84.is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85.______________then I have been more frightened.76. Look —Looking 77. reason－reasons 78. √79. had后加an 80. taught后加to81 danger－dangerous 82. 去掉ones 83. but 改为so 或and 84. your－my 85.see－saw73Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t 81．make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．76．them→it 77．example→examples 78．run with→run 79．should→will 80．what→that 81．Right 82．race-horse→a race-horse83．more→most 84．you→yourself 85．told→are told74Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．talks about work and study . 81．Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．76. from→of 77.make→makes 78.times→time 79.having→have 80.him→them 81.√82. try→try to 83.what→that 84.could→can 85.happier→happy75Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84．them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ? 85．Best WishesJane76．去掉a 77．have^—have been 78．exam—exams79．was—were 80．strong—strongly 81．too—so82．去掉of 83．live—living 84．√85．fact^—fact that76I used to love science class—all of them—76．biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．understand what the world works. For example, 79．when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one 80．class, I learned why it rained. I think science classes 81．clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 82．mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? 83．That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．saw how I could use it in my daily life.76．class—classes 77．or—and 78．it—they 79．what—how 80．去掉the 81．√82．is—are 83．mysteries^—mysteries to 84．learn—learning 85．practically —practical77Some Americans judge success on the length 76．of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s 77．vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．teachers who teach the three classes consider 82．themselves less successful than that who teach 83．only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．work Americans do , the less successful they 85．consider themselves .76．on-by 77．his-their 78．consider-considers 79．the man-the man who 80．√81．get-get a 82．删去the 83．that-those 84．in- at 85．less-more78As is known, that is interesting to teach children to 76．swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78．babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79．in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can 84．master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85．76．that—it 77．the前加of或去掉the 78．particularly—particular 79．from去掉80．√81．month—months 82．child前加a 83．teaching—taught 84．with—without 85．him —himself79Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76.where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77.if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78.the mistake about the price. You looked at two different 79.price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80.21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81.yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82.your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83.get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84.yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85.I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua76．in→at 77．√78．if→when 79．the→a 80．price→prices 81．so→but(and) 82．my→out 83．have left→had left 84．去掉in 85．you→to80In many western countries heavy industry is high developed 76．The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77．the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78．machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79．smaller objects required for various purpose in our home 80．and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the 81．general level of economic or industrial development. 82．In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83．decrease （减少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84．Local supplies of the coal or electric power for their operation 85．76.high→highly 77.are→is 78.produce →produces 79. ∧produce ;to 80. purpose →purposes 81.∧country; a 82. or→and 83. cheap→expensive 84. ∨85. the coal→coal。

短文改错专练（四）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push her car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes,the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythi ng went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for usingmy time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinksshe is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s books regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案：A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → s omething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such。

《高考短文改错——专项训练30篇——及答案解析》1. 短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.All the best!Yours,Li Hua1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______6.______7.______8.______9.______ 10.______2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn．Some families are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies．3.51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

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AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to p ush her car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, asit was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, ever ything went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized thatsomething had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to betwo year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read childre n’s books regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案：A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → as ked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... 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I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → see n8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... 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高考英语短文改错练习题及答案（写写帮整理）第一篇：高考英语短文改错练习题及答案（写写帮整理）(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it‟s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain，we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school.Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.No one worriesmuch about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（三）I‟m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we‟ve won several games.There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn‟t play basketball once more.His parents askedhim to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination.I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son.So my friend had no choice.He wanted to make their parents happy.(四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.（五）Dear Ralph, I‟m a newcomer here of a small town.I would describe myself asshy and quietly.Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them.I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool.So I feel happy every day.Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn‟tseem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours，Xiao Wei（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town.I may go to a film, or a concert.Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So then, a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts.If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right.That‟s how I' m going to do.（七）Dear Susan, I‟m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday.Unfortunately, I won‟t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.You won‟t find difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we‟ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours, Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It‟s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books.Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes.Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all information are good to society.For example, you can find such information like how to kill people.The problem will become more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun.And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime.Starting your collection of stamps are easy because they are nowhere.Holiday and birthdaypostcards from relatives and letters from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world.So once you‟ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors‟Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions.They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing.Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion.A president of a developing country once said;“It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to …produce‟child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us 第五行：visiting 改为visited第六行：pictures；passed 第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改为on第二行：many改为some第三行：because of 第四行：删去 be；read改为reading第五行：programs第六行：noisy 第七行：On改为In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(4)第一行：write后加in第二行：去掉第一个in第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should第五行：talk改为talking 第六行：me改为myself 第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but 第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the第二行：although改为because / as 第三行：find 后加it第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right 第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about 第七行：Having 改为Have（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy 第六行：are改为is第七行：what改为how（9）第一行：age改为ages第二行：interested改为interesting 第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that 第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为 is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere 第六行：for改为with；So 改为But第七行：去掉in 第八行：exist改为exists（10）第一行：去掉a第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to第五行：在you前加do第六行：on改为in 第七行：us改为we第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly第二篇：高考英语短文改错练习题十组短文改错练习题十组（一）My parents are both interested in reading and music , and1_________ my father prefers to history books while my mother likes2_________ to read novels and woman's magazines.In music , their3__________ tastes are similar , and they had never tired of folk music.4__________ Most of the time , they are in agreement on bringing up5__________ children , They both believe in giving their children loves ，6__________ and none believes in punishing a child physically.7__________ for times , they agree with each other ,but sometimes8__________ they seem differently.Perhaps that is why none of 9__________ their children knows for sure which parents he should follow.10_________（二）There was an old say in England :“See a pin1___________ and pick it up , all the day you have a good luck.”2____________ It is 8:30 a.m.Ted , a little Londoner got to the3____________ underground railway station.It was such a busy 4____________ hour when too many people were rushing in.5____________ Ted happened to see a pin in the ground.To have 6____________ good luck he decided to pick up.When he stopped ，7____________ a very fat woman fall over him.Poor Ted could see8___________ the pin very clear , but not many people could see Ted9____________ and fat woman.Unfortunately , men and women were on top of them!10___________（三）Two friends were traveling across the forest1___________ when they met with a bear.The one who was in big2___________ fear , climbed up into a tree and hide himself，3___________ without thinking of his friend.The another one 4____________ found that had no chance to running away, so 5____________ he threw himself on the ground and pretended to dead.For he had heard that a bear6___________ could never touch a dying body.7___________ as he thus lain, the bear came up to8____________ his head , and smelt at his nose and ears.9____________ but the man held his breathe , and the beast 10___________ supposing him to be dead , walked away.（四）Jack London was a famous America writer.He was1__________ born in January 12th , 1876 , in San Francisco.His family2__________ was very poor , Jack had to leave for school to make3__________ money.He worked hard in much different jobs.4___________ Later Jack returned school , but he didn't stay.He 5___________ wrote , “Life and pocket book were all too short.”6___________ In 1887, He went to Alaska to find out gold.He7___________ returned home and started to write.His writings were successful , 8___________ and he became rich and famous.Jack was no a happy man , 9____________ however.In poor health , he took off her own life in 1926.10__________（五）Yesterday I bought a new coat in a shop , and I1____________ found it so big for me.This morning , I went to the shop2____________ and change the coat I bought yesterday.But the 3____________ salesgirl treated me coldly.Firstly , she didn't admit4____________ that I buy the coat in her shop.Then she said5___________ I made it be dirty.So I got very angry and6___________ quarreled with him , pointing to the rules on the wall.7___________ Just then , manager turned up.He said sorry 8____________ to me.At last they changed other one for me.9____________ in satisfaction, I said good-bye to them and took 10____________ the new coat home happily.（六）In the eighteenth century , cities becamelarger and larger.People have moved from1____________ the country and small towns in cities ，2_____________ because there were more work for them to3_____________ do in cities.In Sundays and Holidays , people 4____________ liked to go to the country to have a good time there.But no every family had a horse and carriage.5____________ Inventors tried to meet the need.The first bicycle , that was very simple ，6____________ appeared in 1790.People called it as “the horse7____________ on the wheels ”.Then in 1861 with many8____________ improvements ,bicycle became a practical form of transportation.9___________ People liked bikes because of they were less expensive than horses.10__________（七）You are a middle school student , are you ?1___________ So of course , you have a teacher teaches you English.2____________ And under the help of your teacher , you do a lot3___________ of listening , speaking ,reading and writing in the 4____________ class.That's right.you should follow your teacher study5____________ hard.But , I think , if you want improve your6____________ English fast , I'll give you an advice that after7___________ class or in your free time , you should listen to 8___________ BBC English from London in the radio or watch TV.9____________ CCTV broadcast good English Programmes , too.10___________（八）Tables manners are important in China.If1____________ one is invited to dinner , he should not late2____________ and should bring some small gift for the host.3____________ The oldest sits facing the door or the 4_____________ window and the other gests sit in order of his 5____________ age.One should begin eating until everyone6____________ was seated.It is bad manners to eat7____________ only from the best dish , to talk with the mouths 8____________ full and eat neither too fast or too slow.9____________ If one finishes eating and wish to leave ，10___________ he should say “ Take your time , please ”to the other guests.（九）When Joe left university , he was got a job in a factory ，1____________ but after he had been where for some years , he decided that2____________ he have a change , so he put a notice in several newspapers，3____________ said what experience he had and the kind of job he would4____________ like to have.One of the answer received was from a man5____________ who was looking a job , too.This man wrote to him , “Dear , sir 6____________ when you get a new job , be kind enough to give your name and 7____________ address to your present master as I have been tried to find8___________ a position like yours for a long time ,”After he read the letter ，9____________ he audden realized that what he had done was really foolish.10___________（十）All the world people enjoy sports.Sports1___________ help to keep people healthy , happily and help them to live2___________ longer.Many people like to watch the others3__________ to play games.They buy tickets or turn up4___________ their TV to watch them.Often they get very5___________ happy w hen “their” players or team win.Some 6___________ sports are very interested and people everywhere7____________ like them very much.Football , for example ,played8___________ around the world.Swimming is popular at9___________ all countries near the sea or in those of10___________ many rivers or lakes.参考答案：have 5.◊women's 4.had◊but 2.to 3.woman's◊（一）1.and right At 9.different 10.◊neither 8.For ◊love 7.none◊6.loves parent（二）1.saying 2.a 3.was 4.right5.that◊when on 7.^ it 8.fell9.clearly 10.◊6.in ^the(fat)other◊great 3.hid 4.another◊though 2.big◊（三）1.across 5.run dead y 9.right 10.◊6.^be dead7.dying breath many 5.^ to ◊on 3.for 4.much◊(四）1.American 2.in his◊not 10.her◊both 7.out8.right9.no◊ 6.all but◊（五）1.and bought◊to 4.right 5.buy◊too 3.and◊2.so6.be7.him With◊her8.^ the manager9.another 10 In ◊ to ◊（六）1.have 2.in not◊On 5.no ◊3.was 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?not 6.that?which 7.as 8.right 9.bicycles 10.of（七）1.第二are?aren't 2.teacher ^ who 3.with 4.the 5.teacher ^and 6.^ to 7.an 8.right 9.in?on 10.broadcasts（八）1.Table 2.^ be 3.for ?to 4.sit 5.his ?their 6.should not 7.was ?is 8.right 9.neither?either 10 wishes（九）1.was 2.where?there 3.he^ would 4.saying 5.answers 6.looking ^ for 7.your?my 8.trying 9.right 10.suddenly（十）1.All ^ over 2.happy 3.the 4.up?on 5.right 6.wins 7.interesting 8.^ is played 9.at? in 10.of?with 3第三篇：2015高考英语阅读和短文改错能力练习题及析2015高考英语阅读和短文改错能力练习题及析（5）完形填空Here You Grow Again “You’re having problems? No problem.”That’s what I try to tell myself when I begin to feel overwhelmed.And then I 1 myself that the only people I am aware of who don’t have 2 are gathered in peaceful neighborhoods.There is never a 3 , never a moment of stress to ruin a day.All is calm.Most 4 have at least one such worry-free zone.We call them 5.But if you’re still 6 , you have difficulties.It’s the way of life.And believe it or not, most of your problems may actually be 7 for you than you think.Let meexplain.Maybe you have seen the Great Barrier Reef, 8 some 1, 800 miles from New Guinea to Australia.Tour guides regularly take visitors to 9 the reef.On one tour, the guide was asked a question.“I notice that the lagoon(浅水湖)side of the reef looks 10 and lifeless, while the ocean side is lively and colorful, ”a traveler observed.“ 11 is this? ”The guide gave an interesti ng answer, “The coral(珊瑚)around the lagoon side is in 12 water, with no challenge for its survival.It 13 early.The coral on the ocean side is constantly being 14 by wind, waves, storms—surges of power.It has to fight for 15 every day of its life.As it is challenged and tested it changes and 16.It grows healthy.It grows strong.And it reproduces.”Then he added this telling note, “That’s the way it is 17 every living organism.”Like coral 18 by the sea, we grow.19 demands can cause us to grow stronger.Mental and emotional stress can produce strength and determination.Spiritual testing can produce 20 of character and faithfulness.【文章大意】大堡礁上经常受到海水冲击的珊瑚生命力更加旺盛, 但是那些没有受海水冲击的反而会死得更早。

高中英语改错题及答案【篇一：高中英语短文改错(含答案)】ike riding my bike. though it is not very new, but it ismy best friend. i find very convenient to go anywhere with abike. ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. iuse my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warmand dry. it can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold andrain is pouring down. it can also be very danger. of coursei will be very careful on my bike. in facts, accidents are notthe only problem. one day i went to school and come backto find his front wheel was missing. it was a long walk tothe repairer’s shop. now i have two strong locks.【答案与解析】1. 去掉 but。

汉语可说“虽然……但是……”，但英语习惯上不能相应地说though…but…。

(注：不能去掉 though，因为这样还会涉及大小写的改动，而高考短文改错每行只允许改动一处。

)2. find 后加 it。

此 it 为形式宾语，真正的宾语是其后的不定式。

3. ride 改为 riding。

动词原形不能用作主语，要改为动名词。

4. on 改为 in。

表示在某个季节，用介词in。

5. can 后加 be。

高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of theirown. The people’s life here has become rich or colorf ul. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check itcarefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you so on.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex tounderstand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no g ood using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so getothers confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set aboutdoing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It is so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’tmind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one le g.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt somethingburning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neig hbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in pic ture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDstogether and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged bylaw．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of thatwe had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn tha t you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Thenwe began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an onlyschool in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Stud ents’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter s aying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

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〔一〕How time flies! A week have passed before I noticed it. Looking back on the things that happening last week,I found the life here full with happiness and interests. I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. Icame to my bedroom by myself. When I opened a door, I saw a girl with short hair seating in a chair with a bookin her hand. She must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought myself at the time. After we said hello to each other, other girl came in with a big noise. Her name was Rose. She was so outgoing and humor that both Cherryand I couldn’ t help laughing at her words. Then we had studied and had meals together, and became good friends.I can’ t forget the day when we spent together no matter where we are in the turefu.〔二〕Dear Li Hua,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand how sad you are as they have to transfer to other school. But everything will be fine when you adapt to your new surrounding. In your letter, you asked me about my first school.In my memory, my first school was very large with each classroom beautiful decorated. There was a bigsquare lies in the center of the schoolyard. And I could have good view of the square from my classroom windows. My favorite teacher was my English teacher which was patient with me. Besides, I had met my best friend Peter inthe school, to whom I still keep in touch even though we are in different schools now. I hope you will make new friends but enjoy your time in the new school.〔三〕In a couple of week,we will say goodbye to our school.How the time flies!I will never forget the past threeyears that I have enjoyed a wonderfully journey with all of my teachers and classmates.To make the journey fruitful,our teachers devoted his time and energy to us.Thanks so much to your help and guidance,my dear teachers!I really appreciated it.Before long,we'll start a new journey,and there may be a lot of difficulties in do everything in the future.Iknow there are no end to the things that we can accomplish,and tomorrow is the beginning of the hardest part ofour life.May you happy and successful all the time in your new life!〔四〕My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go towork in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved allthe people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.〔五〕Last Friday,1 was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi-booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cell-phone. Soon it came, and l stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high-tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app. Solater,1 was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cell-phone to get the next order. It was just then whenI began to worry about my safety. What’ sbad, the driver’informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi-booking app the next time.〔六〕Dear Mr.Green,I ’ m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together.That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.(完满版)高中英语短文改错专题练习及剖析Some of the columns you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea.“ Cultural Express〞give us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different part of the world have different values,it ’ s necessary tolearn from each another.Besides,it is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oralEnglish.“ Entertainment 〞 is also cool! The popular singers,actors or celebrities are so attractively that youabsolutely can ’ t miss this part.Teenagers are to fond of popular things,too.Well,I really can’ t wait to read this magazine.Yours,Li Ming〔七〕One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my momtakes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said,“ Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn ’dot very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to acceptthis reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.〔八〕Last weekend I visited my best friend in London , which was supposed to be excited . Melina , whom Ihave not seen for three years , offered to take me on a sighting tour by car .Unfortunate , she ended up doing everything but that ! First , she showed me around the building where shehad gotten her first job . Then she drove me to the caf where she had meté first boyfriend . Before I could sayeverything , she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her . I wasvery disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car ! Besides , she kept talk about herselfall day long ! I was fed up with it , but I couldn’ t make her to stop . When she finally decides to call it a day turned around and found me asleep !〔九〕A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations canmake people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted bythe beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers evenbegin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.〔十〕Keeping a diary in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability.First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings.By keeping English diaries, we can easy formthe habit of thinking about in English.Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diary-writing.If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help.This is also a kind of learning.If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselvesin English freely.In a word, it was of great benefit to keep diaries in English.短文改错专题参照答案及剖析〔一〕1.have 改 has，主是 a week 故用 has.2.happening 改 happened，状是last week，用一般去。