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2013年3月2日托福写作真题解析托福综合写作题目阅读：科学家发现到达North America的最早的inhabitants是欧洲人并不是之前认为的亚洲人，给出了这个thesis三个理由一是科学家在欧洲和北美都发现了spear points，而且都是single，large and sharp blade，但是亚洲的spear point很小，二是有一个human bone被发现可以证明这个结论，三是欧洲人可以穿越Atlantic Ocean，因为海路相对方便，并且一路上的ice可以用作resource of water听力：反驳。
北美和欧洲的spear point发展过程是独立的，欧洲的spear大是因为他们要hunt mammals，然后人骨只是一个single sample更多的其他人骨发现不是欧洲人，最后是那个时期，在欧洲人那儿没有发现boat、钓鱼工具等等，说明他们对航海没啥经验，a lack of experience of sea travel会让他们不容易存活下来。
托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Our society today is so busy and crowded that people do not need to be polite to each other.People today enjoy great material wealth due to hardwork, but some complain that people today are less polite than they used to be. Extremists argue that people do not need to have the conventional social norms, such as saying hello to other people, because those manners are a waste of time. However, I think politeness isimportant in many aspects of modern life.First, in dealing relationships with family and friend, people need to be polite and considerate. Many young people today claim that they are too busy to call their parents and contact their friends. Once, I refused to spend time talking with parents, using the excuse that I had too much work. The consequence was that my mother got angry and hung up the phone. Our relationship was strained, but I soon realized my rudeness and apologized to my mother. My mother forgave me because I showed my respect and concern for her. This situation is also true for friends. Politeness is a bond in relationships with close family members and friends.Second, in a working environment, one needs to obey the basic social norms of courtesy for interpersonal communication. Consider a rude colleague who is always short and unpleasant with his coworkers. Not many people are willing to work with him, because he does not show any basic skills or ability to deal with people. On the contrary, a coworker who smiles and acts respectfully towards others will certainly be more popular and easier to work with. Obviously, politeness will never be outdated, no matter how busy the world becomes.Third, in the political realm and entertainment industry, celebrities need to show a gracious and friendly manner in order to maintain a positive image. All politicians have a hectic agenda. But when they are giving a speech to the public, politicians need to dress appropriately and speak in a certain way. Patience when answering questions is also a must. Similarly, a famous movie star or a pop singer needs to show a friendly attitude towards any crazy fan. Otherwise, the printingmedia will make a big deal out of his/her unappreciative manner towards fans.In conclusion, though the world today drives people to work like machines, politeness is a prerequisite for people to have a satisfying home life and a fulfillingcareer.。
托福写作原创语料库：我们是否有理由对于他人无礼貌我们在备考托福的写作的时候可以积累一些精彩写作语料，帮助我们拓展写作思路。
下面小编给大家带来托福写作原创语料库：我们是否有理由对于他人无礼貌。
祝福大家文思泉涌，妙笔生花，破题如竹。
托福写作原创语料库：我们是否有理由对于他人无礼貌【抽象类】There is never good reason to be impolite to another person. 我们没有理由对于他人没有礼貌，是否认同?(2012年3月18日) 【作家立场】礼貌待人是一种值得推荐的美德，但是，对于值得尊敬的人，我们才应该一直以礼相待。
【思路拓展】为何应该对人有礼貌：1. 有礼貌是一种美德，体现了一个人较高的涵养和良好的教育，容易使人在社交生活中化解矛盾，赢得他人尊重。
调查研究显示：在公共场所，发生摩擦的时候，待人有礼可以有效地化解矛盾，减少冲突。
2. 这个争议使我想自己的故事，我曾经在美国短暂旅行和留学，礼貌使我赢得了尊敬和友谊。
具体而言，我积极地和周围的人问候，不在公共场所喧哗或者外放音响，做事前，经常询问他人的意见。
新东方托福写作语料库：远走他乡是否比久居故土更加幸福People who move out of native village or town are more successful and happier than people who stay in their native village or town. 远走他乡这比久居故土者更加成功幸福?【相关提问】It is no good for people moving to a new town or country because we lose our old friends，do you agree or disagree? 人们最好不要移居到新的城市，因为他们会失去老友，是否认同?(2014年9月21日)作家立场：远走他乡比久居故土者更加成功和幸福。
2014.3.2作文预测小作文：线图表格柱图大作文：全球化Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of one international organization instead of state or national governments. Do you agree or disagree?Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who need help in the world, so we should be only concerned on our own communities and countries. Agree or Disagree?People are eating a variety of foods these days which encourages the flow of food from every corner of the world to a local supermarket. Do you think this is negative or positive development? Why?教育Teaching primary school students foreign languages has more advantages than disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?Some people think distance learning has more benefits than schools so schools will disappear from our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? As computers and technology develop, they can be used to teach children and teachers won’t be necessary soon. Do you agree or disagree?Some people think that to have a successful life you have to have university education, while others thi nk it’s not that important. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on personal experience and knowledge.Some people think that teachers at school are more responsible for children’s intellectual and social development than parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What is your personal opinion?Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. What is your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?微爱黑岩/shuhuangla_4956/社会Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?Often new commercial centers are planed with respect to green areas and sport facilities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Why?Nowadays in some countries, single young adults prefer to live outside of their parents homes, they usually leave to study or work in different places. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?//Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are there more negative or positive sides to it?//Nowadays we communicate less with our family members. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Group and team activities are more important than the actives done alone, because they teach us important life skills. Do agree or disagree?心怀鬼胎黑岩/shuhuangla_5002/More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.犯罪Police in some countries like England don’t carry guns. Some people don’t approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.环保Some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos become extinct because of natural processes. So, it is not necessary to try and prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?Many people say that companies and private tour operators should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?In many countries prices of airplane tickets have dropped. Is it positive or negative situation? Write about your personal experience or knowledge.Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Some people think that individuals are not able improve the environment, only government and companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2。
托福写作话题分析之教育总结历年的托福独立写作题目，不难发现，教育类的写作话题也是考试中的高频题目之一。
因此托福考生在复习的过程中，也要多进行这类题目的练习，这有助于我们更好地来备考这类题型。
下面小编给大家带来托福写作话题分析之教育。
托福教育类独立写作题目整理1) Some people think that giving students time during a class to discuss ideas with each other is a good way to help students learn; others think giving students time for discussion is ineffective or a waste of time. Which idea do you agree with, and why?2) Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.3) Some people believe that taking field trips (for example, going to the museum) is an important part of children’s education. Others believe that it is better for children to studying at school. Which opinion do you prefer?4) The best way for a teacher to help students interested in a subject is to explain that subject will help them outside school.5) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.6) Universities should require all their students to learn about foreign cultures as well as their own culture.7) Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.8) Some people say that teachers and parents should decide what assignment or activities children should do after school. Others say that children should make these decisions on theirown. Which view do you agree with?9) Do you think children’s after scho ol activities should be arranged or should be chosen by children themselves?10) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: These days, children spend more time in doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want.新托福写作范文解析之教育类话题范文题目：It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?题目有关教育中的”课程选择“并联系职业规划。
2013.9.1托福独立作文范文+解析侃哥Kevin题：A or DA: Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth w atching.题型：绝对题观点：让步角度：具象拆分开头：话题引入+双方/对方观点呈现+我方观点With r emarkable p rogress o f p eople’s l iving s tandard, w atching m ovies s eems t o be a dispensable part of people’s lives, as movies not only entertain the viewers but also enlighten them. Some people claim that only movies that can teach us something a bout r eal l ife a re w orth w atching. H owever, I r egard t his a ssertion a s arbitrary and unilateral, because there are at least 2 other kinds of movie that are also worth watching: comedy and scary movie. And my reasons and examples a re g iven b elow.中间段1：喜剧片让人哈哈一乐，放松心情。
（主题句+说理论证句+细节扩展）Comedies a re w orth w atching, f or t hey g ive u s a r eal g ood w ay t o r elax o urselves. It is because the only goal that the comedies try to achieve is to make people laugh and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of best medicines to alleviate p ressure, p ain o r d epression. I s till c an r emember w hen I w as p reparing for the college entrance examination-‐-‐a make-‐or-‐break exam that evendetermines one’s future-‐-‐the most enjoyable thing was to watch a Jim Carrey movie after a whole day’s hard work. Through those hilarious plots and exaggerating a cting o f J im C arrey, m y i ntense m inds s uddenly g ot r elaxed.中间段2：恐怖片让人能在安全的环境下体验恐惧的刺激。
托福独立写作主体段写法技巧——单一观点篇托福独立写作对于很多托福考生来说是取得高分难以逾越的一道鸿沟，这不仅需要大量的练习，还需掌握其中的诀窍。
今天，小编为各位考生带来托福独立写作主题段单观点的写法点拨，希望对各位考生有所帮助。
托福独立写作主体段写法技巧——单一观点篇通常对于独立写作我们都会选择五段式的结构，这个结构包括三个主体段，按照题型我们可以将写作类型分为三个：支持反对类(单观点)、对比比较类(双观点)、自主定义类。
首先我们要明确一下定义，单观点话题就是说题目只要求考生表明自己的态度，支持或反对，并且题目中没有任何要求拿来作比较的对象。
今天，闫玲娟老师跟各位考生分析一下有关单观点类题目的写作技巧，下面是一道典型的题目：Topic 2007.11.3People who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.这道题就是一道典型的单观点题目，“那些因为有足够的钱而不去工作的人，他们鲜少开心。
”针对单观点话题主体段的展开有两种方式，举例我们支持是A观点，先来看第一种写法。
1. A+A+A这种写法代表着我们需要用三个理由支持自己的选择。
Topic：It is desirable to know about events from all over the world even if it is unlikely to have any effect on your daily life.了解世界各地发生的事情是好的，纵使这些事不会对我们的日常生活产生任何影响。
1. To begin with, being aware of these cultural events means having more topics for communication.2. In addition, learning news about science is necessary for us to form correct world views in today’s fast-changing society.3. In the end, understanding political incidents serves as an excellent method to broaden our horizons.在这种写法里考生可举出了三个论点正向支持自己的态度，认为了解这些事情是必要的。
托福写作话题解析：政府应该立法保护环境在托福写作部分中，出现关于政府发展经济还是保护环境的题目，需要同学们表明个人立场并且大量举例，并且以对比的写作方法进行写作，今日小编将为同学们整理托福写作话题解析：政府应该立法保护环境。
托福写作语料库关于政府发展经济还是保护环境Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：economic growth seems to be more important than environmental concerns. 是否同意：经济发展比环境保护重要?作家立场：保护环境比发展经济更加重要。
托福写作思路拓展为何保护环境更加重要：1. 保护环境可以为人们提供更加健康的生存空间，因此，可以提高人们的健康指数和幸福感。
2. 保护环境也有助于实现资源的可持续性发展，同时，吸引更多的投资。
例如，大连是一座花园城市，因为绿化和环保的成功，其吸引了更多的旅游投资，环保成为促进经济发展的重要因素之一。
3. 保护环境有助于为子女后代营造更加健康的生存环境。
为何发展经济也是重要的：我承认，经济发展可以增加人们收入，提高人们的生活质量，创造更多的就业机会。
但是，经济发展对比保护环境，后者理应受到政府更多的支持和重视。
托福写作语料库1. environmental pollution = environmental contamination 环境污染2. environmental issues = environmental problems 环境问题3. various environment-related issues n 各种与环境相关的问题4. environmental conservation环境保护5. environmental protection环境保护6. environmental preservation 环境保护7. in terms of greenism 在环保方面8. raise the environmental protection awareness amongst the general public 提高公众的环保意识9. Ironically，we, human beings, are now facing a series of environment-related issues such as global warming or the depletion of natural resources although our economy keeps on soaring. 具有讽刺意味的是，尽管我们的经济在不断攀升，但是，我们人类却面对着一系列和环境相关的问题例如全球变暖以及自然资源的消耗。
新东方托福强化写作讲义一、托福作文概述独立写作•A or B型%) Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students.Which point of view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.•agree or disagree型(33%) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study thecourses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.•发散型%)What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.综合写作二、写作分数的明白得530%29%28%27%425%24%22%21%320%18%17%15%三、评分标准详解ADDRESSES THE TOPIC AND TASK5 Effectively addresses the topic and task4 Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated3 Addresses the topic and task2 Limited development in response to the topic and taskORGANIZATION AND DEVELOPMENT5 Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or details4 Is well generally organized and well developed, using appropriate and sufficient explanations, exemplification, and/or details3 Using somewhat developed explanations, exemplification, and/or details2 Limited development in response to the topic and task. Inadequate organization or connection of ideas. Inappropriate or insufficientexemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the taskUNITY, PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE5 Displays unity, progression, and coherence4 Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression or unclear connections3 Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connections of ideas may be occasionally obscuredGRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY5 Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammaticalerrors4 Displays facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and range of vocabulary, though it may have occasional noticeable minor errors in structure, word form, or use of idiomatic language that do not interfere with meaning.3 May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning.May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary2 A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms; an accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usageADDRESSES THE TOPIC AND TASK1.Rephrase the topic – raise the issue2.answer the question – give your conclusion opinion = unsupported conclusion conclusion = supported opinionEg. 1 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Do you agree or disagree: this change has improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.(1) I agree with this point.(2) I agree that having food that is easy toprepare has improved our lives.At present, various foods are available in markets so that people can easily access them and prepare a happy dinner. I think such a phenomenon is desirable.Eg. 2 Agree or Disagree: Government should spend the large amount of money that is channeling into artistic and cultural projects on basic infrastructure projects instead.Some people are critical of the government using taxpayers’ money to set up statues in the streets or other public places, complaining that this money should be spent more wisely, say, for helping needy people. I beg to differ.Eg. 3 Agree or Disagree: It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible and you cannot have both together.(1)It is a fact of life that the development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. In my opinion, this is not necessarily a bad thing, because some aspects of traditional culture hamper progress andshould be abandoned.(2)It is an undeniable fact that scientific and technological developments bring great benefits to people. Especially since the Industrial Revolution took place, our lives have been made much more convenient by inventions such as trains, planes and computers. But I think that the loss of our traditional culture is too high a price to pay for this.With the fast development of science and technology, …Every coin has two sides. … are a double-edge sword. … have both advantages and disadvantages.Eg. 4 Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?As my personal experience, I can really clearly to feel about these improvement, such as communication technologies andtransportations.Eg. 5 Agree or Disagree: Universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Nowadays, recruiting exhibitions holds frequently in many cities. Students graduating from universities and colleges lately are usually worried to take part in because quite a lot of them could not find a satisfying job. What makes it so serious?Eg. 6 Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better. Opponents argue that technology creates new problems that may threaten or damage the quality of life. Which side do you support? Why?Technology is used in everyday life. People use it in different ways. It can make our lives better, but I think it can be cruel if it’s used for bad purpose.小结：Address the topic and task要幸免：•把题目狭义（举例不妥、说明过度）•把题目中的conclusion当做opinion•把题目中的opinion当做conclusion•表态含糊，没有直接、明确地回答下列问题I partly agree.I prefer the former with some conservation.1. 语序倒置some people ...1 others (2)Make life convenient and easy →easy and convenientLoss of respect and discipline →indiscipline and disrespect3.词性转变Is difficult to …→ has difficulty toHarm sth. → do harm to sth.Make life convenient →bring convenience to life → facilitate/ease life4.换一下主语Sports benefit people. →people benefit from sports.Food is easy to prepare. → People prepare food easily.主动语态<-> 被动语态5.同义词替换6.代词<->名词This → such a practicePhenomenon, behavior, idea, opinion, approach, methodactivity, attitude7.加减修饰语Others believe …→ Other people deem …Some people think → Some believeIt provokes widespread discussion about …It provokes widespread discussion that / whether …… be faced with such a dilemma: whether …There is a growing tendency for sb. to sth.A criticism often heard today is that …I am always amazed when I hear people saying that …When it comes to the issue that …, I/some people believe that …Some deem that …, while others believe that …Deem, think, believe, considerClaim, hold, maintainSupport, advocate, bolster, buttress, sustain, championArgue, contend, dispute, opposeSome claim that …, while others differ. I side with/support the former/ the latter.I deem that schools should require students to attend classes.Schools, I deem / as for me / as I see it / from my perspective, should require students to attend classes.Schools are considered by many should require …Formulated writingI think sports benefit people.ORGANIZATION AND DEVELOPMENT•Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.•Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. •Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.•Using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or detailsThink: specific, detailExplanation = reason + exampleI think I deem, believe, maintain Something, someone, somebody, sometimes, often, used to, in the future, somewhere, a place, an area, many, someKnowledgeIf I am a good person, she will marry me.If I were a good person, she would marry me. Ads make many mass media inexpensive. The media like newspapers and TV receive their major income from the ads, so they do not have to charge much of the buyers. For example, GZ Daily costs only one yuan. We can watch a large number of TV programs by paying only some twenty yuan per month. Otherwise / In contrast / On the contrary / However, if there were no ads, these media would not be the extent that they are today. They might be more expensive, …Enable me to make friends.Help extend my social network.If 一样此刻时，一样以后时。
