高考英语基础写作练习
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毛额市鹌鹑阳光实验学校广东卷假设你是下图的李华。
请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。
)注意:1. 词数:80—1202. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程范文:1.About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient.I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'“Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely."Thank you very much.' I said and went back to continue my study.2.About 9 o'clock yesterday evening, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow's test when suddenly loud noises came into my room. My neighbor was watching a football game on TV in his room. The noise was so loud that I couldn't go on studying. I covered my ears with hands, but it was no use. I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. After hearing what I said, my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. I thanked him and went back to continue my study.3.Last night I was preparing for the coming examination when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me. The noise went on and on. It was so loudly that I could hardly pay attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbour’s house and said to him: “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? I’m preparing tomorrow’s examination.” Having heard these words, his face went red. And he said, “Ok, I’ll turn it down. Li Hua, I’m very sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football was very wonderful. I was too excited to control myself.I won’t do that again. Good luck in your coming examination. ” After that, I got down to my study.广东卷Michael是一名中学生,在学校里选修汉语。
高考写作4– 常用句式句式(一)表目的学习内容:so…that/such….that/ in order to…/ in order that…/ too…to…/ …enough to do…Step1.学习下列句子并翻译成中文1. He was so excited that he couldn’t say a word.2. The little boy saved every coin so that he could buy his mother a present on Mother's day.3. He is so clever a boy that everybody likes him.4. He is such a clever boy that everybody likes him.5. Their performances were humorous enough to be copied by other.6. Others think the earth got too much hot for the dinosaurs to live on any more.7. He ran fast in order to catch the train.8.I get up early in order that i can catch the early bus.归纳出以上句型的意思:so…that:_____________________________ so that:________________________ such…that:__________________________ enough to do:____________________too… to:____________________________ in order to/that:___________________Step2.学习难点1.so…+adj/adv…+that…:如此…以致…so that…:引导目的状语从句(句中含有情态动词)引导结果状语从句(句中不含情态动词)They got so excited that they cried out.(结果:因此)The little boy saved every coin so that he could buy his mother a present on Mother's day.(目的:为了)2. …so +adj/adv+a +名词+that…=…such+a+adj/adv+名词+that….: 如此…以致My father was so hard-working that he always forgot his meals.=My father was such a hardworking man that he always forgot his meals.=My father was so hardworking a man that he always forgot his meals.3…to+adj/adv…+to :太…以不能He is too young to look after himself.He got up too late to catch the first bus.注意:①此句型本身已含有否定意思,句中不需再另加否定词。
湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载(9)及参考范文【广东省茂名市二模】基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)假设你的同学因自己的肥胖而苦恼,请根据以下建议写一篇英语短文。
[写作内容]Don’ts Dos不要吃过多油腻的食物;睡觉前不要吃零食。
否则可能增加体重或消化不良(indigestion)。
要保持均衡饮食;每天需要至少一个小时的运动,比如可以选择步行上学,这样既有利于减肥,又可以保护环境。
做到持之以恒,只有这样才会在不久的将来拥有苗条的身材。
[写作要求]1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2. 首句已经给出,不计入总句数。
[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear classmate,I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions.On (the) one hand, you shouldn't eat too much fatt y food or eat snacks before you sleep. Otherwise, you may gain weight or suffer from indigestio n. On the other hand, you should keep a balanced diet. Meanwhile, doing exercise for at least one hour per day is needed, like walking to school, which is not only beneficial for your weight loss, but also helps protect the environment.Above all, you should be persistent, because only in this way can you become slim in the near future.【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达(满分30分)假定你是中学生李华。
高考英语写作---汉译英基础训练篇一.翻译部分词组短语:1. 给某人让座2. 跳到地上/桌上3. 下了一整天雨4. 听到呼救声5. 把…带到安全地带6. 向某人道歉7. 给某人提建议8. 得到好的治疗9. 接受某人的建议10. 加入球队/俱乐部/小组/委员会/公司11. 向某人解释…12. 治愈某人的病13. 匆忙赶往医院/学校/邮局/派出所/火车站/汽车站/飞机场14. 提出付100元钱15. 收100元钱16. 付100元钱17. 打车18. 浑身湿透了19. 下载文件20. 外出钓鱼/爬山/郊游/游泳/划船/野营21. 转身离开22. 陷入沉思23. 返回取某物 24. 走过去看一看发生了什么25. 与某人同住一间房间/同打一把伞/同玩一件玩具/同一志趣26. 对某人大声喊叫27. 使劲移开那块大石头28.背着一个沉重的包29. 去吃饭/开会/晚会/观光/聚会 30. 背负沉重的课业负担31. 约某人32. 顺道拜访某人33. 看家34. 跑过去搀扶盲人/老人35. 等候某人吃饭/开会/回家36. 下车37. 站在门口38. 坐在窗前39. 靠在墙上/树上40. 逆风而行41. 下大雨/大雪42. 刮大风43. 起雾44. 熟睡45. 举手46. 步行回家/开车回家/乘车回家/骑车回家47. 突然停止48. 把某人救到河岸上49. 结束50. 为某人喝彩51. 登门拜访52. 真相大白53. 伸手去够某物54. 紧紧抓住某人的手/衣领/胳膊 55. 询问究竟是怎么回事56. 经过公园/邮局/市场/广场/电影院/体育馆/学校/医院/宾馆/剧院/火车站57. 查阅字典/电话号码/住址/网址 58. 热情接待某人59. 认真对待某事60. 小心提防某事61. 严格要求某人62. 严格对待某事63. 在火车站/飞机场接人64. 顺道接人65. 抓小偷66. 直着往前走67. 把…冲走68. 破坏心情/假日69. 突然转弯70. 请某人吃饭/喝茶71. 从口袋里掏某物72. 腾空抽屉/壁橱73. 苦思冥想74. 做大扫除75. 往后/四周/上下看76. 点灯/蜡烛77. 生火78. 开灯/电视/收音机79. 关灯/关煤气/水龙头80. 与某人握手81. 帮某人一把82. 昂着头83. 过马路/桥/河84. 收拾房间/桌子85. 系鞋带/扣扣子86. 与某人相处好87. 擦汗88. 组织课外活动89. 参加社会实践90. 接到某人的电话91. 完成写作92. 在河中挣扎93. 获一等奖94. 得到1000元奖励95. 与某人谈心96. 到达现场97. 不辞而行98. 收割小麦/水稻/庄稼99. 与某人争论有关…100. 把…放归自然101. 摘棉花/苹果/桃/草莓/西瓜/梨102. 告诉某人真像103. 打工104. 往瓶子/壶/杯子/脸盘里倒水105. 分成4组106. 中断会谈107. 切断电源108. 打长途电话109. 与某人争吵某事110. 得第一111. 为某事责备某人112. 向某人挥手致意113. 往前走100米114. 报名参加竞赛115. 申请职位116. 泄密117. 送某人到门口118. 呈现高兴的神情119. 在操场站队120. 坐在第一排121. 记下某人的名字/电话号码/姓名/家庭住址122. 走来走去123. 动身前往…124. 哄某人睡觉125. 熬夜126. 在小旅馆住宿127. 严肃对待某事128. 把…钉在门上129. 向某人保密130. 建议不做某事131. 不鼓励做某事132. 退学133. 开除某人/解雇某人134. 一脚踩空135. 把某物收捡起来136. 绊了一跤137. 摔了好几跤138. 打中了某人的头139. 牢记140. 占太大空间141. 扑灭火灾142. 阻挡洪水143. 识破阴谋144. 苏醒过来145. 闲逛146. 看门147. 看病148. 看日出149. 看书150. 误拿了某物151. 搜查152. 嚎啕大哭153. 自带午餐154. 收集事实/资金155. 合着音乐唱歌/跳舞156. 在红绿灯处转弯157. 把某事留给某人158. 感到寂寞159. 在…取得进步160. 达到目的161. 走100里路162. 编造谎言163. 使劲敲打164. 敲门165. 在…有难处166. 带某人参观…167. 牵手168. 弯腰169. 坐/站直170. 驱散人群171. 享有同等的权力172. 做…是对/错的173. 把…绑在…上174. 铺开一张纸175. 传开176. 热泪盈眶177. 参加考试178. 通知某人某事179. 提醒某人某事180. 抢劫某人某物181. 安排某人做某事182. 组成183. 请三天假184. 放鞭炮185. 踩刹车186. 量体温187. 把脉188. 追尾189. 在…大量训练190. 为集体争光191. 以某人为榜样192. 给某人树立榜样193. 以…为例194. 一天喝3次药195. 对某人鞠躬196. 头/腿/肚子疼197. 对某事有浓厚兴趣198. 保暖199. 保持传统200. 祖传201. 为…引以为自豪202. 做自我介绍203. 对某事负责204. 站不住205. 倒在地上206. 摇下车窗207. 想出好主意208. 挡道209. 以高价卖出210. 畅销211. 为某事付出昂贵代价212. 下班回家213. 克服困难214. 向某人求教/助215. 把…撞倒/翻216. 追求217. 交叉双腿/手218. 乘坐汽车去…219. 向…进发220. 提供优质服务221. 免费参观222. 监视某人223. 给某人一个惊奇224. 正在玩耍/吃饭/工作/休息/购物225. 索回/要回226. 调查某事227. 罚款228. 撕/切/推开229. 因…批评某人230. 对…羞愧231. 张开双臂拥抱某人232. 讲礼貌233. 挣扎着站起来234. 追赶某人235. 情绪高涨236. 为…做准备237. 团结在一起238. 帮助某人摆脱困境239. 取消会议240. 全力以赴做某事241. 超速242. 减速243. 研究某事244. 泡茶/咖啡245. 端饭246. 摔成碎片247. 带某人旅行248. 依然如旧249.塑造性格250. 发展个性251. (身体)垮了252. 去(来)营救某人253. 站起来254. 远道而来翻译句子:1. 他迅速走过去把老人扶起来。
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校广东高考英语基础写作专题训练1.写信介绍北京假设你是李华,你的网友Peter 来信,他想北京奥运会期间来北京旅游,你回信给他,介绍北京。
内容要点如下:[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总句数。
[评分]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
参考词汇:国家体育馆 National Stadium 国家游泳馆 National Swimming Stadium Dear Peter,Welcome to Beijing.I am looking forward to the day you come to Beijing. See you then. Yours truly, Li Hua2.介绍2008奥运火炬传递假设你是李华,学校广播站的英文编辑。
你请根据一下信息,写一篇英语短文,要向学校师生介绍一下北京奥运的火炬传递情况。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总句数。
[评分]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
参考词汇:希腊古奥林匹亚遗址ancient Olympia, Greece 火炬 torch3. 通知假设有一批澳大利亚学生到广东香城游学,你是项目的负责人,在出发前你简要向学生们介绍这次安排。
请写一个简要的发言稿,主要内容如下:[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总句数。
[评分]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
Attention please, everyone:Now I would like to tell you the arrangement for the journey.…That’s all. Thank you.4. 郊游日记请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英文日记(题头已写好)。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
2022高考英语语法及写作基础专题十(花样句式总结)1.他们的饮食以蔬菜为主。
①Their diet consists largely of vegetables.②③④⑤⑥2.由于天气恶劣,所有航班被取消。
①Weather is really bad,as a result,all the flights have been cancelled.②③④⑤⑥3.她不但懂英语,日语也说得很好。
①Besides knowing some English,she speaks Japanese very well.②③④⑤4.他沉迷于科学研究之中。
①He is addicted to scientific research.②③④⑤5.当今越来越多的家庭买汽车。
①Nowadays,more and more families have bought cars.②③④⑤6.那个问题太难了,我无法解决。
①That problem is too difficult for me to solve.②③④⑤⑥课后写作Daniel Hernandez always knew he wanted to help people. Before he’d even graduated from high school, he trained to be a certified nursing assistant and volunteered at a nursing home. A big kid with a gentle, efficient manner, he learned to use needles to draw blood, to lift patients in his strong arms, and to respond swiftly and calmly to every emergency.He never quite got around to taking the exam to become fully certified, though, because by then he’d decided he wanted to work in public service. He felt inspired by the good that responsible lawmakers can do, so in his junior year at the university, he declared a major in political science and began volunteering in political campaigns. One hero of his was his local congresswoman (国会女议员), Gabrielle Giffords, the kindest, warmest human being he thought he had ever met in his entire life.He was overjoyed when he was picked for an internship (实习期) with her, and he gladly gave up a part-time sales job for the chance to work on her team. So eager was he that he started work four days earlier than he was supposed to. On Saturday morning, he arrived at his workplace, where about 30 people were gathering to meet Giffords. It was Hernandez’s job to sign people in and guide them into a queue in order to get each to have a photo taken with the congresswoman.At 10:10 a.m., Hernandez heard loud sounds. “Gun!”someone yelled. He heard people screaming and saw them falling to the ground. Hernandez was standing 30 feet away from Giffords when she fell down. In seconds, figuring there was danger to the congresswoman, he was at her side.Before the doctors came, Hernandez tried his best to remain calm at that fateful moment. Giffords was lying on the sidewalk with blood streaming down her face from a bullet wound to her head. Gently, Hernandez lifted her into a sitting position against his shoulder so she wouldn’t choke on her blood. Then, with his bare hand, he applied pressure to the wound on her forehead to stop the bleeding.续写要求:1. 所续写短文词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
英语写作---汉译英基础训练一.翻译部分词组短语:1. 给某人让座2. 跳到地上/桌上3. 下了一整天雨4. 听到呼救声5. 把…带到安全地带6. 向某人道歉7. 给某人提建议8. 得到好的治疗9. 接受某人的建议10. 加入球队/俱乐部/小组/委员会/公司11. 向某人解释…12. 治愈某人的病 13. 匆忙赶往医院/学校/邮局/派出所/火车站/汽车站/飞机场14. 提出付100元钱15. 收100元钱16. 付100元钱17. 打车18. 浑身湿透了19. 下载文件20. 外出钓鱼/爬山/郊游/游泳/划船/野营21. 转身离开22. 陷入沉思23. 返回取某物 24. 走过去看一看发生了什么25. 与某人同住一间房间/同打一把伞/同玩一件玩具/同一志趣26. 对某人大声喊叫27. 使劲移开那块大石头28.背着一个沉重的包29. 去吃饭/开会/晚会/观光/聚会 30. 背负沉重的课业负担31. 约某人32. 顺道拜访某人33. 看家34. 跑过去搀扶盲人/老人35. 等候某人吃饭/开会/回家36. 下车37. 站在门口38. 坐在窗前39. 靠在墙上/树上40. 逆风而行41. 下大雨/大雪42. 刮大风43. 起雾44. 熟睡45. 举手46. 步行回家/开车回家/乘车回家/骑车回家47. 突然停止48. 把某人救到河岸上49. 结束50. 为某人喝彩51. 登门拜访52. 真相大白53. 伸手去够某物54. 紧紧抓住某人的手/衣领/胳膊 55. 询问究竟是怎么回事56. 经过公园/邮局/市场/广场/电影院/体育馆/学校/医院/宾馆/剧院/火车站57. 查阅字典/电话号码/住址/网址 58. 热情接待某人59. 认真对待某事60. 小心提防某事61. 严格要求某人62. 严格对待某事63. 在火车站/飞机场接人64. 顺道接人65. 抓小偷66. 直着往前走67. 把…冲走68. 破坏心情/假日69. 突然转弯70. 请某人吃饭/喝茶71. 从口袋里掏某物72. 腾空抽屉/壁橱73. 苦思冥想74. 做大扫除75. 往后/四周/上下看76. 点灯/蜡烛77. 生火78. 开灯/电视/收音机79. 关灯/关煤气/水龙头80. 与某人握手81. 帮某人一把82. 昂着头83. 过马路/桥/河84. 收拾房间/桌子85. 系鞋带/扣扣子86. 与某人相处好87. 擦汗88. 组织课外活动89. 参加社会实践90. 接到某人的电话91. 完成写作92. 在河中挣扎93. 获一等奖94. 得到1000元奖励95. 与某人谈心96. 到达现场97. 不辞而行98. 收割小麦/水稻/庄稼99. 与某人争论有关…100. 把…放归自然101. 摘棉花/苹果/桃/草莓/西瓜/梨102. 告诉某人真像103. 打工104. 往瓶子/壶/杯子/脸盘里倒水105. 分成4组106. 中断会谈107. 切断电源108. 打长途电话109. 与某人争吵某事110. 得第一111. 为某事责备某人112. 向某人挥手致意113. 往前走100米114. 报名参加竞赛115. 申请职位116. 泄密117. 送某人到门口118. 呈现高兴的神情119. 在操场站队120. 坐在第一排121. 记下某人的名字/电话号码/姓名/家庭住址122. 走来走去123. 动身前往…124. 哄某人睡觉125. 熬夜126. 在小旅馆住宿127. 严肃对待某事128. 把…钉在门上129. 向某人保密130. 建议不做某事131. 不鼓励做某事132. 退学133. 开除某人/解雇某人134. 一脚踩空135. 把某物收捡起来136. 绊了一跤137. 摔了好几跤138. 打中了某人的头139. 牢记140. 占太大空间141. 扑灭火灾142. 阻挡洪水143. 识破阴谋144. 苏醒过来145. 闲逛146. 看门147. 看病148. 看日出149. 看书150. 误拿了某物151. 搜查152. 嚎啕大哭153. 自带午餐154. 收集事实/资金155. 合着音乐唱歌/跳舞156. 在红绿灯处转弯157. 把某事留给某人158. 感到寂寞159. 在…取得进步160. 达到目的161. 走100里路162. 编造谎言163. 使劲敲打164. 敲门165. 在…有难处166. 带某人参观…167. 牵手168. 弯腰169. 坐/站直170. 驱散人群171. 享有同等的权力172. 做…是对/错的173. 把…绑在…上174. 铺开一张纸175. 传开176. 热泪盈眶177. 参加考试178. 通知某人某事179. 提醒某人某事180. 抢劫某人某物181. 安排某人做某事182. 组成183. 请三天假184. 放鞭炮185. 踩刹车186. 量体温187. 把脉188. 追尾189. 在…大量训练190. 为集体争光191. 以某人为榜样192. 给某人树立榜样193. 以…为例194. 一天喝3次药195. 对某人鞠躬196. 头/腿/肚子疼197. 对某事有浓厚兴趣198. 保暖199. 保持传统200. 祖传201. 为…引以为自豪202. 做自我介绍203. 对某事负责204. 站不住205. 倒在地上206. 摇下车窗207. 想出好主意208. 挡道209. 以高价卖出210. 畅销211. 为某事付出昂贵代价212. 下班回家213. 克服困难214. 向某人求教/助215. 把…撞倒/翻216. 追求217. 交叉双腿/手218. 乘坐汽车去…219. 向…进发220. 提供优质服务221. 免费参观222. 监视某人223. 给某人一个惊奇224. 正在玩耍/吃饭/工作/休息/购物225. 索回/要回226. 调查某事227. 罚款228. 撕/切/推开229. 因…批评某人230. 对…羞愧231. 张开双臂拥抱某人232. 讲礼貌233. 挣扎着站起来234. 追赶某人235. 情绪高涨236. 为…做准备237. 团结在一起238. 帮助某人摆脱困境239. 取消会议240. 全力以赴做某事241. 超速242. 减速243. 研究某事244. 泡茶/咖啡245. 端饭246. 摔成碎片247. 带某人旅行248. 依然如旧249.塑造性格250. 发展个性251. (身体)垮了252. 去(来)营救某人253. 站起来254. 远道而来翻译句子:1. 他迅速走过去把老人扶起来。
(1)第Ⅲ卷写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)假如你是某班班长,最近你和班委们要组织一次郊游,有关本次活动的信息如下:游览地点白云山郊游原因郊游目的12出发时间本周日上午8:00集中地点学校门口参考词汇:高考College Entrance Examination【写作内容】请你根据上面表格提供的信息,向同学们介绍组织这次郊游的原因和目的等情况,动员全班同学参加这次活动。
【写作要求】1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2.文章的开头和结尾已经为你写好(所给句子不计入5个句子之中)。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
We have decided to go for an outing to Baiyun Mountain this weekend.I hope all the students can take part in the activity.One possible version :activity活动pressure压力balance平衡leisure休闲breathe呼吸sunshine阳光scenery风景Meanwhile同时ease安逸efficient有效率的expected预期的Entrance Examination入学考试第二节读写任务(共l小题:满分25分)阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。
Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, threebrothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay.But three years later, they received different wages. So their fatherwas confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told himthat he would let his sons explain for themselves.The three brothers were asked by the superviso r to go to theairport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead ofgoing to the airport himself. Frank, the l, 000 dollars a monthbrother with a list of more cargoes. George, the l, 500 dollars amonth brother came back with detailed information and also didsomething extra without being told.cargoes货物received被一般承认的wages薪水themselves他们自己supervisor管理者cargo货物inventory详细目录information数据detailed详细的extra额外之物being told.被告诉。
写作解读及预测(一)基础写作样题解读样题一姚明是我国著名的篮球运动员,也是国家篮球队的主力。
现在姚明在NBA发展,他是否应该为了在NBA的发展而退出国家队?人们的观点如下:1、退出国家队伤害了球迷的心,球迷会认为他背叛祖国2、去留应该由他自己决定,哪个对他未来发展好就应该选择哪一个3、无论去留都不应批评或者提倡【写作内容】根据以上内容,选择你支持的观点,说明你的理由。
【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整、连贯解读:根据考试说明来看,基础写作主要着眼于考察考生整理信息和谋篇布局的能力。
具体来说就是要求考生能够提取信息、分析信息、构筑信息、处理信息和表达信息。
用五句话表达所有信息对考生的语言组织能力提出了很高要求。
这篇基础写作内容有关中学生熟悉的人物姚明。
考生要用适当的句型表达出所给的信息,同时要注意适当发表自己的见解。
由于篇幅所限,重点应该在于题目所给出信息的整合,自己的理由应该只用一句话表述即可。
切不可因为发表自己的理由而漏掉了写作内容所给的信息。
由于所给信息里有三种看法,考生应该适当使用并列句和复合句来融合可以融合的信息,尽量在篇幅限制内把信息表述完整。
具体写作时,应该首先把所给出的信息进行整合,形成五层需要表达的意思.然后每一层意思就是一句. 根据该题目的内容,提出问题可以作为一层,使用一个特殊疑问句引出话题.第一种观点是第二层,该句考虑使用并列复合句.第二种观点是第三层,由于该句内容较少只需要一个简单句即可以表达完毕。
第三种观点是第四层,同时作为自己所选择的观点,使用复合句为最后说明理由做好铺垫。
最后一层用以说明自己的理由。
写作之前对题目所给信息进行整合可以避免写作过程中或者写完后出现句子数量不够或者句子数量超过题目要求的情况发生,同时能使自己的文章层次分明。
最后,需要注意的是,信息层次的划分应该建立在自己对英语句型的把握和选择上。
范文:Whether Yaoming should quit from National Basketball Team or not?Some hold the view that if Yaoming quit National Basketball Team, this maybe hurt some basketball fans who love and admire him and they may think Yaoming betray his motherland. Others think that Yao should make the choice which is better for his future development.From my perspective, no matter which he chooses finally, we should not criticize or support him.Whether in NBA or National Team, only if he plays well we should clap for him, because it was China that brought him up.样题二最近你班上进行了一场有关“学校是否应组织学生去春游”的讨论,假定你是班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论况.【写作内容】【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整、连贯解读:这篇基础写作题材较为常见,贴近学生的生活。
基础写作——句子结构准确,内容完成、连贯(A studying plan)新星高级中学熊德智前言:2007年广东省高考英语试卷结构已经作出重大改革,其中作文题由原来的1篇变成2篇、分数由原来25分增加为40分,与阅读(含信息匹配)等值,因而有专家认为“得写作者得天下”。
I. Decide whether the following passage is a good writing.(Students are required to read aloud together or read silently individually)I am in great need of your help. I am filling in my wills about universities soon, including my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one should be put first. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University. What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University.Looking forward to your advice and thank you very much.Yours truly,Du Li(07潮州市质量检测卷, 收集于东莞教研网) 学生判断所读内容优劣的依据是:2007年《考试大纲说明》对基础写作的要求:1.句子结构准确 2.内容完整、连贯3.________(笫3点不属于《考试大纲说明》中的内容,但学生应自主猜测(内容为“卷面整洁”)II. 如何做到句子结构准确?(学生主要从写作中常用的几种句型入手:简单句,复合句,并列句等)1.如果是简单句,句子结构是否符合简单句的5种基本结构。
哪5种?1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______5),________(Key 1)请从简单句的基本结构分析并找出下列句子中的错误(注意谓语部分)。
a. I afraid that I can’t pass the exam.b. Most students against buying gate tickets when entering the park.c. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.2.如果是复合句,句子结构是否符合复合句的相关结构。
什么是复合句?_______________________________________(Key 2)英语写作中常的复合句有:A.名词性从句,包括1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______ (Key 3)●常用的引导名词性从句的引导词:____________________________________________等。
(Key 4)●特别注意不要将that 和what混用,该如何区别?_____________________________(Key 5)用that 和what填空。
1.It worried her a bit ____ her hair was turning grey.2._____ I need is more time.3.My brother isn’t ___ he used to be.4.____ he has become a rich man is known to all in our town. (Key 6)B. 定语从句(常用关系代词:which…, that…, who…, whom…..,whose…, when…, where…, why…等)C. 状语从句(常用引导词:when, where, before, after, because, so that, if , though, although, as if , as though, unless,as soon as, once…等)●使用复合句时,注意引导词的运用。
注意下列句中划线部分的错误。
a. Before went to bed, I used to watch TV for a while.b. Though English is hard to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well.c. When stayed in the country , I made a foreign friend.1.如果是并列句,检查并列连词(常用:and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而),or, otherwise, for, so, therefore, not only…but also…, either… or…, both…and…, etc)是否使用正确,并列结构的主语和谓语有没有混用。
1).并列句与复合句的区别:(在括号内填上并列名或复合句)a. T hough English is difficult to learn, I’ve managed to learn it well.( )b. English is difficult to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well. ( ) <Key7>(并列句是句与句之间的并列,对等,平行关系;复合句是包含与被包含的关系,即:主句包含从句、从句被主句包含)2.在基础写作中,祈使句和感叹句用得比较少,但如使用,必须做到结构正确(祈使句常以动词原形开头,e.g. Finish your homework quickly. Don’t eat snacks in the class.)如果是感叹句,请正确使用how , what e.g. How hard our English monitor studies! What a hard-working girl our English monitor is!●试分析以下5个句子是否结构准确,并找出句中的一处错误,在错误之处划线,并改正在后面横线上。
1.I’m Lu Shumin, and born in Dongguan in August 1988. __________________此句结构为:_______________________________________2.From 1994 to 2000,I studied in Dalang Primary school , going to Donghua Middle School of Dongguan thefollowing one year, then I came to study in New Star School 5 years ago.__________________此句结构为:_______________________________________3.The main subjects included Chinese, maths, English, physics, politics, chemistry and computer that I studiedat school. __________________此句结构为:_______________________________________4.I like English and piano best or I am very good at them.__________________此句结构为:_______________________________________5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, playing piano, but also I love driving a car.__________________此句结构为:_______________________________________<Key8>III. 如何保证内容完整?1.尽量利用好原材料的要点信息(按序给出的句子、列举的要点或提供的图片),以便节省时间。
2.据要表达的内容自己重新组织安排要点,尤其是表格题。
Example 1.(From潮州市质量检测卷),将笫一,笫二句合成一个要点。
“梅州市位于广东东北部。
总人口491万(2003年)。
”写成:“Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million.”Example 2.(From潮州市质量检测卷)将笫四句拆分成二个句子。
“客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。
”写成“The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community.”Example 3:笫四部分表格中,“车程所需时间”一栏,用一个句子(However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.),而“课程设置”一栏却拆分成二个句子(What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University)附:07潮州市质量检测卷:梅州市位于广东东北部。