2.3 书面表达建议信-2020年高考英语专题训练系列
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应用文写作-建议信1、假定你是李华。
新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议,请给书店经理Mr. Davis写一封建议信,内容包括:1.拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验;2.提供咨询、讲座等服务;3.其他建议(至少一条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________2、假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试,最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。
请根据以下要点,给她写一封书信提一些建议。
信的内容应包括下列要点:1.正确认识考试;2.积极为考试做准备;3.注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)。
求助信一、词汇积累1. have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难2. do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助3. ask for help/seek for help寻求帮助4. encounter some problems 遇到一些问题5. be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth. 忙于做某事7. make preparations for. . . . 为某事做准备9. put . . . in use 学以致用10. let sb. down 让某人失望11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧12. be anxious/eager to do sth. /long to do sth. 渴望做某事13. take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事14.offer some constructive guidance 提供一些有益的指导15. be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb. for sth. 因某事感激某人二、句式积累篇首:请求帮助1. Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3. I wonder if you could do me a favour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙,这是我叔叔第一次来访,所以我希望你能到机场接他。
建议信1.假如你是红星中学高一学生李华。
近日你收到你的英国笔友Jim的来信,他跟你一样也刚进入新的高中学习,感觉压力很大。
请你给他写封回信,安慰他并告诉他如何减压。
内容包括:1. 安慰对方;2. 提出减轻压力的建议。
注意:1. 词数140以内;2. 信的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 2.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
你的英国好友Jim最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何健康饮食,请你给他回信。
内容包括:1. 对Jim表示关切2. 提出合理建议3. 表达祝愿内容注意:1.词数100 左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 3.假如你是红星中学高三1班班长李华。
2020届⾼考英语全国卷书⾯表达专项整合--建议信Word版建议信⼀、词汇积累1.给某⼈提建议give sb. some advice(on)2.如下as follows3.在做某事时遇到困难have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.4.利⽤make use of m5.向某⼈征求意见ask sb. for advice6.制定计划make a plan7. 认为……有⽤find . . .helpful/useful/beneficial8. 参加take part in/participate in9. 听从某⼈的建议follow one's advice10. 把……考虑在内take sth. into account/consideration11. 得到改善get improved12. 有所好转change for the better13. 依我看来in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你…… I have received your letter saying that y ou. . .15. 我建议…… I would like to suggest that . . . /I would like to make a recommendation that . . . /I am writing to advise you of . . . /If I were you, I would . . . /May I suggest that . . . /I would like to put forward the suggestion that . . .⼆、句式积累篇⾸:说明写信⽬的。
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble... Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在……⽅⾯有困难。
2020届高考英语书面表达专项训练建议信建议信主要是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。
建议信可以写给个人,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
写建议信时,时态以一般现在时为主,人称多用第二人称。
一、谋篇布局建议信通常包括以下三部分:1、首段:简介自己,不要罗嗦;说明目的,注意语气。
2、主体:提出建议,说明理由首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信;注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。
3、尾段:希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。
二、常见句型【首段】说明写信目的1. I'm sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in ****). Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在****方面有困难。
这样的问题是很正常的。
可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying ****. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。
信上说你******。
可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of ### so as to ****.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善#####的一些想法,以******。
4.You have asked me for my advice on ***, and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于***询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
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高考英语作文建议信篇1Dear president,I am writing to express my views concerning the way to improve student’s physical condition. I understand that you pay much attention to it for a long period of time.First, it is necessary to improve student’s eating food. It is no doubt that food can provide us with a lot of energy to live every day. Therefore, a scientific and reasonable meal is important for us to become stronger and healthy. Second, exercise does good to student’s physical health. So the school should arrange enough physical education lessons for students. Last but not least, the school should advocate some necessary physical knowledge to students.Thank you for your consideration of my suggestions.Truly yours,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇2Dear Mr. Principal,I'm a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen in our school.In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes tastes delicious. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high. Besides, we can all only have a limited variety of dishes with little changes every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to students. Therefore, may I suggest something be to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?Thanks for your consideration.Sincerely yoursLi Hua高考英语作文建议信篇3Dear President,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school. I am writing to share some advices with you. We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study. However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us.I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax. Therefore, according the opinions of our students, I would like to advise that set an afternoon and a night for students to have a good rest. Proper rest can help students focus on study better. I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇4Dear Lily:I think you had better feed a hamster,the trendiest kind ofpet these days is the small hamster. People like them because they are quiet and clean. I have a hamster named Tom,it's very cute and easy to take care of,and it's cheaper than rabbits or cats,so I bought it. She's my best company,because she reads books and listens to music with me every night.However,life with a hamster isn't always perfect,she sometimes noisy at night ,she love sleep all day,too. So,sometimes she is very boring! How do you think?Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇5Dear Headmaster,I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely,Liu Bo高考英语作文建议信篇6Dear editor,I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to kno w more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.Yours Sincerely,Li Lei高考英语作文建议信篇7Dear Mr. President,I am writing to put forward some suggestions concerning the ways to improve student’s physical condition in your university. My proposals are as the following.First and foremost, I propose that we should take advantages of physical education classes on our campus, and not only educate students to realize the significance of the classes, but also to encourage students to take an active part in the classes. More importantly, we should attach importance to the role played by extra-curricular activates. For example, we could plan and organize a large number of such ball games as football games, basketball games and so on.It’s my honor to share my opinions concerned with you. If you could take my advice into consideration, I will be highly grateful.Sincerely yours,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇8Dear President,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school.I am writing to share some advices with you. We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study. However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us. I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax. Therefore, according the opinions of our students, I would like to advise that set an afternoon and a night for students to have a good rest.Proper rest can help students focus on study better. I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇9Dear master:I have some advise about our new class rules.I must say these rules are useful,and they are good.But to myself, I like listen to the music after class,but the first rule of our new class rule is "Don't listen to music or have snacks in classroom",it make me very sad.I don't think that listen to the music will influnceMy study life,what's more,it can relax myself.So I think we can listen to the music after class,of course,weWon't continu it to the next class.And other part,I'd love to play basketball,it's good to our health,but if we " Don't stay at school after 4:30 p.m. ",I will have no time to play basketball.I have troubles on these parts,and I think it present many students' problems,so I want to be gave answers,thank you.I hope our new class rules can make our class rise to a higher place.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇10Directions:Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern,I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration. To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇11Dear Wang Mei,I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.Now I’mwriting to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / essential.You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.What’s more,try to your classmates in English out of class.In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English st but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way./The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.Yours sincerely,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇12Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!Sincerely yours,Li Hua。
建议信----A Letter of Suggestion一、假定你叫李华,最近,你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应,不知道如何结交新朋友。
请你用英语给他回一封信,提出一些建议。
提示:1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要,这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……(你的建议)才能:talent注意:1.词数130左右,信的格式已给出,但不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文(一)Dear Lin Hao,I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care aboutyour schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.YoursLi Hua范文(二)、Dear Li Ming,In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below.First, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I hope you will find these ideas usefulYours,Li hua二、根据提示,写一篇150词左右的建议信。
建议信【文体概述】建议信是向别人提出合理的建议让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题。
建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
同时,建议信要简洁明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。
通常包括:1. 说明写信目的;2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
【常用语块】1. 给某人提建议_________________________________2. 如下_________________________________3. 在做某事时遇到困难_________________________________4. 利用_________________________________5. 向某人征求意见_________________________________6. 制定计划_________________________________7. 认为……有用_________________________________8. 参加_________________________________9. 听从某人的建议_________________________________10. 把……考虑在内_________________________________11. 得到改善_________________________________12. 有所好转_________________________________13. 依我看来_________________________________14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你……_________________________________15. 我建议……_________________________________【套用句式】1. 你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
________________________________________________________________________2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。
________________________________________________________________________3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。
________________________________________________________________________4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。
________________________________________________________________________5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
________________________________________________________________________【短文改错】(做短文改错,背经典范文)Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advices to how to learn Chinese well.Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, bec ause by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese the next time.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li Hua 【课堂练习】假定你是李华,请根据所给材料,给Lora写一封回信。
要点如下:1. Lora打算利用暑假打工;2. Lora父母不同意的理由;3. 你给Lora的具体建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Lora,I have just read your letter in that magazine.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.Yours truly,Li Hua【课外作业】假定你是李华,最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。
这是她第一次远离家乡,很想念父母及家人,有时候思念至深,常常独自一个人深夜暗泣。
对此,请你给Jenny写一封建议信,要点如下:1. 鼓励Jenny坚定求学信心,志存高远,四海为家;2. 就Jenny的目前状况,提两到三个建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jenny,I am so glad to have a talk with you.__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua建议信常用语块1. give sb. some advice (on)2. as follows3. have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.4. make use of5. ask sb. for advice6. make a plan7. find...helpful/useful/beneficial8. take part in/participate in9. follow one’s advice10. take sth. into account/consideration11. get improved12. change for the better13. in my opinion/in my view/f rom my point of view14. I have received your letter saying that you…15. I would like to suggest that…/I would like to make a recommendation that…/I am writing to advise you of…/If I were you, I would…/May I suggest that…/I would like to put forward the suggestion that...套用句式1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2. I feel that it would be beneficial if…3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.4. I trust you’ll take my suggestion into account./I trust you’ll take good consideration of my suggestion.5. I would be more than happy to see...短文改错作者就如何学习汉语给Roy写信提建议。