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1. 仔细审题,提炼和归纳主题句 2. 开头万能句型: 1) ....plays an important part in the... 2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more.... 3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in ....
As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.(即总括又阐明看 法)
Make a topic sentence.
1、Smoking
As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.
Many students say smoking is fun, but I don’t think so. As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.
结尾画龙点睛,首尾呼应
1. 与开头呼应,再次重申自己的观点, 注意避 免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型: At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that· · · 我们希望 Let’s try our best to .... I believe if we can..., ... will be .... What a ...! / How...!
句式富于变化
1. We are good friends. We should help each other. ( good) 2.We are good friends and we should help each other. (better)
句式富于变化
1. I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word. 2. I was_____ moved ______ say too to a word.
三、中考评分标准:
作文一律按档给分,与错误个数无直接关系。 影响作文分数的因素:
1 题目要求、内容要点;
2 句子准确、通顺; 3 层次结构清晰; 4 拼写、语法等错误; 5 卷面整洁度;
做题步骤:
1 审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节; 2 列提纲(文章结构框架):分几段,以及每段大体 内容; 3 写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;
写作训练
生活中充满了爱,有父母的爱,有兄弟姐妹的爱,有 朋友的爱,有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题,简要描 述一件发生在你身边的事。 要求:1、语言规范,书写工整。 2、80个词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 3、文中不要出现真实的人名,校名和地名 Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. ____________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ ______________________
4 复查:2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;2 遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;
5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。 *总之做到三审:体裁、时态、人称; 三思:词汇—>短语—>句式; 三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
中考作文高分秘诀
• 1. 谋篇布局 ——写好篇章结构
• 2. 运用连接词 ——赋予语言灵气
谋篇布局——写好篇章结构
Beginning topic sentence 主题句 开头 ----说出文中的要点、核心问题
Middle 正文
supporting sentences支持句
----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题 开展叙述、讨论 concluding sentence 结论句
Ending
结尾
Make a concluding sentence
Keeping healthy
Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.
Helping others
----对全文的总结和概括。
作文一般框架:
文章分3段: (1)综述:概括性强,最多2-3句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型 连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2-3句话内结束,尽量升华。
Good beginning is half done.
正文:巧用连接词,赋予语言灵气
按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1)Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2)first, then/next, after that/ next, finally 3) soon, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during 表示并列 not only... but also, both... and, either ...or, neither...nor,on (the) one hand…on the other hand
谋篇布局——写好篇章结构
在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做 家务活吗?请你根据提示用英语写一篇80 字左右的短文,描述你平时所做家务以及 你对家务的看法。 提示:1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗 要求:语句通)
中考英语书面表达训练 (大作文)
学习目标
• 1.了解写作的篇章技巧,使文章具有整体性。 • 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型,令作文更有灵 气 • 3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求: 1.根据中文提示,写一篇60-80字 左右的英文表达。 2.内容完整,用词准确,句子通顺、 连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确, 书写工整。
表示举例或补充 1)for example 2)besides / what’s more/ what’s worse 表示转折 however, but,although, instead of 表示原因 thanks to, because of,because 表示结果 as result (of) , so ,so...that, such...that, 表目的 in order to, so that 表比较 the same as, than, of all ...
I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
Make a concluding sentence
to protect the environment Let’s try our best to protect the environment. In a word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment. Beijing How beautiful Beijing is!
Make a topic sentence.
3. Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English.But I don’t think so.
正文:巧用连接词,赋予语言灵气
Which sentence is better? 1. I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. ( good) 2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. (better)
Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?