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2022高考英语作文范文及点评(全国甲卷)今年高考英语作文的主题是什么呢?你考前背诵的英语作文模板有派上用场吗?今年的英语作文有出现新颖的话题和材料吗?今天小编在这给大家整理了2022高考英语作文范文及点评(全国甲卷)，接下来随着小编一起来看看吧!● 2022高考英语作文点评及范文(全国甲卷)第二节书面表达你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性;2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________第一段：作用：开篇。
要求：开门见山，点名主题，篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。
Do you have idea about June 8? It is not only the college entrance examination to Chinese senior school students, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans.第二段：作用：文章主体内容。
三年（2021-2024）年高考英语小作文真题全解全析专题03 2023年新I+II卷养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
真题原文假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题 2.提出建议注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,I’m Li Hua from Class 3._______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua 真题解析2023年新高考新I卷、新II卷是一篇应用文写作，主要内容为针对外教Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组好进行课后口语练习这一行为，以电子邮件的形式提出问题并给出具体的建议。
整体看，这篇作文题目为考生创设了接近现实生活的交际语境，明确了交际场合与参与人的身份，话题场景性和真实性突出，注重考查真实的任务和情景中考生的语言表达能力。
2023年全国甲卷范文1【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Confucius 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。
请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。
注意：1.词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
A Famous Figure in Chinese History—ConfuciusI'd like to introduce one of the great figures in Chinese history, Confucius，who was born in the State of Lu (presentday Qufu, Shandong Province) . As a great philosopher, educator, and politician, he left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and munities in China and beyond.The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, passion, and social responsibility.范文2【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Li BaiA Famous Figure in Chinese History—Li BaiAs we know，our country has a long history of five thousand years，and there are many famous poets，such as Li Bai，Du Fu, Du Mu, Ou Yangxiu and so on. As for the famous figure whom I admire most, it must be Li Bai.Li Bai，born in the 701 AD，is a romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty，with the name of poetry god. He is cheerful and generous，likes drinking wine，writing poetry and making friends. And he has many famous works，such as Invitation to Wine «将进酒»，Jing Ye Si «静夜思» ，Difficult Roads in Shu «蜀道难» and so on.Li Bai’s poems are not only works of art，but also spiritual food. They give people a tasteful spiritual enjoyment，so that readers can feel the beauty and meaning of life while they are enjoying the poetry, whichcan encourage people to overe difficulties. Maybe I can’t achieve as much as him, but I am determined to bee a person like him, a person of great creativity，optimism and inspiration.范文3【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Fan ZhongyanThe Historical Figure in China—Fan ZhongyanAmong the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged，Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Here are the reasons.Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty，Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make our country prosperous. Besides, he proposed the establishment of a national school system, which had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system.What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life: "Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness." Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.范文4 思想家教育家孔子The Great Thinker and EducatorConfucius假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
专题03 建议信——新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板(原卷和解析)1.(2022高考英语考前作文热点预测)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Leslie最近来中国某中学交换学习，她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处，请你给她回一封信。
内容包括：1.写信的目的；2.具体建议及理由；3.表达个人期待。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Leslie,I’m glad to know that you have come to study in China. As for the problem of how to get along with new classmates, here is my advice.First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively. I think the cultural difference is a good topic. Second, you should care about your classmates and offer help to those in need. After all, being friendly is always a good way to make friends. Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Wish you a good time in your new school.Yours,Li Hua 【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。
全国Ⅰ卷适用地区：河南、河北、山西、江西、湖北、湖南、广东、安徽、福建全国Ⅱ卷适用地区：甘肃、青海、内蒙古、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、新疆、陕西、重庆全国Ⅲ卷适用地区：云南、广西、贵州、四川、西藏全国新高考Ⅰ卷适用地区：山东全国新高考Ⅱ卷适用地区：海南2020年高考自主命题地区：北京、天津、上海、江苏、浙江12020年全国Ⅰ卷你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1. 人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respectThere are many respectable people around us.点评：全国I卷书面表达要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题写一篇短文，引导学生关注身边平凡而又伟大的人物。
范文1The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.范文2For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.22020年全国Ⅱ卷上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。
2003届高考英语试卷（全国卷）点评及应试策略江苏省盐城中学吴干城2003届英语高考卷给今年高考考生带来一股清心凉风，给他们以巨大的自信心，让考生看到希望，看到了未来，增强了他们坚持考下去的信心。
究其原因，我们想大家都知道，前一门——数学卷使考生们心灰意冷，感触甚多，相当多的学生认为，继续应试已是“亡羊”而“补牢”，又有何用？2003年英语高考卷无论是从题型还是难度而言，与去年相比均无太大的变化，给人一个平和温柔的感觉，不少考生反映说“这才是高考试卷，有一定的难度，但不失风范，这才是我们可以接受的”。
2003年英语高考试题总体上体现了稳中求发展，稳中有变的原则，该试卷贴近生活，贴近时代，生活气息浓郁，实际应用体现浓烈，今年高考试卷较去年在难度上略有逊色，但它更加强调语言的运用理念，试卷内容也更具有时代气息，现就试卷几大题型分析如下：一、听力。
今年继承去年传统，再次以30分计入总分，强调了英语教学的实际应用，极大程度的纠正了一直困扰我们中学教学中的“聋子英语”现象。
因为听力的分值使我们教师不再为学生“不肯听”而“伤”心“痛”骨。
今年测试时间把握得很准，耗时18分钟，其语速恰当（较去年稍有回落），难度适宜。
在设题上侧重考查考生在规定时间内对所听的材料的反应能力和理解能力。
录音由去年的美式英语改成了明显的伦敦英语，听力内容在选材上注意了生活这一源泉，贴近生活，贴近时代，学生在应试时听起来感亲切，仿佛置身其中。
十段听力内容的安排是：1、两人讨论——“room”稍有“a little hot”于是开窗。
2、秘书接电话、对方告知票已定好。
3、儿子想看球赛录像带，希望妈妈不要告诉结果，妈妈应允但说：你可能对结果很失望。
4、通知考试时间改变，并且具体讲述时间（一小时）。
5、本题涉及内容很多，真正有用的就是“office’s old number has changed”。
6、老板与秘书间上司对下属经常迟到表示不满。
高考英语书面表达03-01：考场作文评析〔2〕假设你是某高生会主席李华，最近，你校学生会对学生课外阅读情况进行了调查，现在请你根据下面的图表所反映的情况为某英语报写一篇有关这次调查的报道，并谈谈你的看法〔至少两点〕。
学生课外阅读的情况〔每百人所占比例〕没看过文学作品的原因〔每百人所占比例〕图表1 图表2要求：字数150左右〔开头句已经写好，不计入总字数〕。
Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. …【考场习作】Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. (1)Results of this survey are as follows. (2)Half of the students are fond of reading newspapers or various magazines. (3)There are 20% students usually read cartoons. (4)The percentage of students who choose to read literary books is only 10, which is thesmallest. (5)The rest of the students like reading others.(6)According to these statistics, it’s easy for us to find the fact t hat the number of those who choose to read literary books is small. (7)But what causes this phenomenon？(8)At first,50 students complain they are too busy with their homework to read literary books. (9)The second reason for this phenomenon is that school’s library only opens for several hours every day and there isn’t enough books available.(10)Thirdly, it’s the high price that discourage someone from reading literary books.(11)Last but not least, p arents’ disagreement is also responsible for this phenomenon. (12)They believe it does no good to exams.(13)As far as I am concerned, it’s meaningful for us to read more literary books, which can not only enrich our school life but also broaden our horizon. (14)Schools are supposed to take effective measures to encouragestudents to read more, as reading literary books can be beneficial for study.【习作评析】在评析考生考场习作之前，先让我们来看一看该书面表达的最根本的要点是什么。
高考英语作文点评及范文（精选多篇）1. My Dream SchoolMy dream school is one that values creativity and individuality. In this school, students would be encouraged to express themselves through art, music, and writing. They would have access to state-of-the-art technology and equipment to help them pursue their passions.My dream school would also place a strong emphasis on community service and social responsibility. Students would have the opportunity to volunteer and give back to their community, both locally and globally. They would learn about different cultures and ways of life, and would be encouraged to develop empathy for those in need.In addition to academic courses, my dream school would offer classes on life skills such as cooking, budgeting, and time management. These skills would prepare students for the real world and help them become responsible adults.Overall, my dream school would be a place where students can grow both academically and personally. They would be encouraged to take risks, express themselves, and develop into well-rounded individuals.点评：这篇作文很好地展示了作者对理想学校的设想，尤其突出了创新性和个性化的要求，也提到了社区服务、全球视野、实用技能等方面，论证了多方面的优势。
2013高考英语书面表达03-01：考场作文评析（2）假设你是某高中学生会主席李华，最近，你校学生会对学生课外阅读情况进行了调查，现在请你根据下面的图表所反映的情况为某英语报写一篇有关这次调查的报道，并谈谈你的看法（至少两点）。
学生课外阅读的情况（每百人所占比例）没看过文学作品的原因（每百人所占比例）图表1 图表2要求：字数150左右（开头句已经写好，不计入总字数）。
Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. …【考场习作】Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. (1)Results of this survey are as follows. (2)Half of the students are fond of reading newspapers or various magazines. (3)There are 20% students usually read cartoons. (4)The percentage of students who choose to read literary books is only 10, which is thesmallest. (5)The rest of the students like reading others.(6)According to these statistics, it’s easy for us to find the fact that the number of those who choose to read literary books is small. (7)But what causes this phenomenon？(8)At first,50 students complain they are too busy with their homework to read literary books. (9)The second reason for this phenomenon is that school’s library only opens for several hours every day and there isn’t enough books available.(10)Thirdly, it’s the high price that discourage someone from reading literary books.(11)Last but not least, p arents’ disagreement is also responsible for this phenomenon. (12)They believe it does no good to exams.(13)As far as I am concerned, it’s meaningful for us t o read more literary books, which can not only enrich our school life but also broaden our horizon. (14)Schools are supposed to take effective measures to encouragestudents to read more, as reading literary books can be beneficial for study.【习作评析】在评析考生考场习作之前，先让我们来看一看该书面表达的最基本的要点是什么。
图表1图表2没看过文学作品的原因①课业负担重，没有时间看文学作品的占了一半；②学校图书馆开放时间短，藏书有限；③文学名著太贵买不起；④家长认为阅读文学名著对考试无用，不予支持。
以上要点必须在书面表达中有所表述，缺一不可。
【习作的亮点】全文共14句202字（不包括已经给出的句子），字数超标。
要点表达齐全，较好地完成了题目所规定的任务。
阅卷老师判分为20分（满分为25分）。
1.习作根据作者自身水平较多使用了复合句。
同时也注意使用并列句、简单句以及强调句句，增加了文章的可读性。
显示了作者的扎实的基本功。
2.习作注意了过渡词、过渡句的使用。
如第二段中：(8)At first,(10)Thirdly, (11)Lastbut not least, …(13)As far as I am concerned,等。
这样的运用使得文章表达连贯；3.习作注意了高级词汇及句型的运用的使用使文章增色不少。
如：various，Thepercentage，this phenomenon，complain，available，is also responsible for，are supposed to等等。
4.习作在描述两幅图表时注意运用了不同的表达手法法。
比如：(2)Half of the studentsare fond of reading newspapers or various magazines. (4)The percentage of students who choose to read literary books is only 10, which is the smallest. (5)The rest of the students like reading others.5.习作在谈谈看法（至少两点）时，咳嗽得很恰到好处地紧紧围绕图表2中所反映的（家长方面的和学校方面的）两个原因来谈谈自己的看法，增加了文章的亮点。
【习作的缺点】1.句型的运用上有致命的错误。
这也许是该习作为什么被扣分的最主要的原因。
如：(3)There is 20% students usually read cartoons.按照作者的基本功，根本就不应该出现这种中国学生在书面表达中经常出现的典型错误。
应改成：There are 20% students who usually read cartoons.或There are 20% students usually reading cartoons.再如：(9)… and there isn’t enough books available.按照作者的基本功，根本就不应该出现这样的低级错误。
应改成：… and there are n’t enough books available.2.因为有重复，所以表达显得过于冗长，这也许是该习作为什么被扣分的另一个主要原因。
如：“(6)According to these statistics, it’s easy for us to find the fact that the number of those who choose to read literary books is small.”与上文的“(4)The percentage of students who choose to read literary books is only 10, which is the smallest.”就是重复的。
再说与上文联系的也不紧密。
似应改成“Why are so many students unwilling to read literary works?”或“Why are so few students who choose to read literary works?”。
这样一改“(7)But what causes this phenomenon？”这一点就可以去掉而改成“According to Chart 2”，然后叙述原因，这样显得紧奏又顺理成章。
3.某些表达不准确，似有Chinglish之嫌。
如：(12)They believe it does no good to exams.该句老外可能也看得懂，但是绝对不是英语中表达的方式。
还是应改成：“They believe reading literature won’t help their children at all with their exams.”为妥当。
再有“(10)Thirdly, it’s the high price that disco urage someone from reading literary books.”句型倒是个好句型，所用词汇也比较好，但是所表达的意思根本就不符合逻辑。
似乎应改成：Thirdly, it’s the high price that makes them unable to afford to buy literary books.4.词汇的搭配上有错误。
如：(14)…, as reading literary books can be beneficial for study. 应改成：…, as reading literary books can be beneficial to studying our subjects.【修改后的习作】Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. As is shown in Chart 1,half of the students are fond of reading newspapers or various magazines. 20% students usually read cartoons. The percentage of those who choose to read literary books is the smallest, only 10%. The rest students like reading others.Why are so many students unwilling to read literary works? According to Chart 2, firstly,50%enrich ourschool life but also broaden our horizon. Schools are supposed to take effective measures to encourage students to read more, as reading literary books can be beneficial to studying our subjects.【参考答案】Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. Chart 1 shows that 50 percent of the students spend their time reading newspapers and magazines.20 percent of the students separately choose to read cartoons or other kinds of booksin their leisure time. However, only 10 percent enjoy reading literature.Why are so many students unwilling to read literary works? According to Chart 2, half of the students say they have no enough time because of their schoolwork burden. Some complain that literature works are too expensive for them to afford to buy and still some students’ parents simply think that reading literature won’t help their children at all with their exams, so they do not support. Besides, about 30% of the students are not satisfied with the opening hour of the library and limited book collections there.As far as I’m concerned, books play an important role in our study. Especially reading literature works can broaden our horizon. What’s more, it can provide us with good examples of writing.让学生尝试评析另一篇考场习作并修改Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. ①Chart 1 shows that half【修改后的习作】Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. Chart 1 shows that half of the students prefer to read magazines and newspapers. 20% of the students spend their spare time reading cartoons for relaxation, which is equal to the numberof the students who read other kinds of books. Much to our surprise, only 10 percent students enjoy reading literature..Why are so few students who choose to read literary works? According to the second Chart 2, first of all, they are under great pressure of study and have little time. Besides, parents think reading literature won’t help their children at all with their exams so they do not support. The limited open time and books of the libraries are another two important reasons and the high price of literature works also account for such a phenomenonAs far as I am concerned, reading literature works does do good to our development in the long term. It can help us form language sense and improve our writing skills. So we should not being buried in subjects all day long. but spare time to read literature works.。
