浙江新高考英语作文概要和续写(完整资料).doc

第一节应用文写作（满分15分）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。

请你写信应聘，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, p icked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to takethe sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

A In a small village, the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper. The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words. While he forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbors avoided him. His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness. Unfortunately, all their attempts failed. Finally, the boy’s father came up with an idea.One One day, day, day, his his father father gave gave him a huge huge bag bag of nails, asking him to hammer one one nail nail to to the the fence every time he lost his temper. The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said. His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day! Over the next few days, days, the the the little little little boy boy boy found found found it it it very very very difficult difficult difficult to to to hammer hammer hammer the the the nails nails nails into into into the the the fence fence fence and and and decided decided decided to to control his temper. Gradually, the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none! Now, Now, his his his father father father told told told him him him to to to remove remove remove the the the nails nails nails every every every day day day as as as he he he had had had controlled controlled controlled his his his anger. anger. Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence. The father appreciated him and asked him pointing to one of the holes. “What do you see there?”The boy replied, “A hole in the fence!”He told the boy, “the nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people. You can remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence. The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! Your bad temper and anger were like that! Use words for good. Use them to show your heart !”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B Over the past few years, there has been a big increase in the number of people sharing information online. In this article, we will learn about some positive factors for people to share information online. We often share information with our friends in the office or at home to educate, entertain or pleasantly surprise them. In this way we can connect with others. This is also true while sharing information online. If you look at the Face book wall posts of your friends, you will realize that most of their updates are usually famous quotes, entertaining videos, inspirational images, funny jokes, etc. 94% of those who responded to a survey by the new York Times said they put a lot of thought into how the content they are sharing will be beneficial to others. A lot of people share information online to portray their true self to the outside world. Some people, especially those who are shy and not comfortable talking about their areas of interest in the presence of others, find it extremely convenient to share that information online with like-minded individuals. 78% of the respondents in the study of The New York Times said they shared information online because it helps them develop better relationships. Today, a lot of people do not have the time to meet each other in person, and the Internet has become a great substitute. A lot of people rants and pubs. now “meet” each other online, rather than in conventional places like restauLastly, when we share our thoughts online, we are actively engaging with the vast community of people who are a part of the World Wide Web. Sharing information will make a difference to the viewpoint of others, or add to their understanding about the world.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village. To help him give up his anger, his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn ’t lose his temper. Gradually the boy could control his temper. This story tells us just like holes in the fence, a bad temper and anger can hurt others forever. B People People increasingly increasingly increasingly share share share information information information online online online for for for several several several positive positive positive reasons. reasons. reasons. Most Most Most people people people hope hope what what they they they share share share will will will benefit benefit benefit others. others. others. Some Some Some people people people show show show their their their true true true self self self by by by sharing sharing sharing information information online. People also do this to keep in touch with friends and make new acquaintances. Quite a few people share their thoughts online hoping to influence others ’ viewpoints in a positive way. 。

浙江省高考英语续写类作文的题目及范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: My Exciting Adventure in a Haunted HouseI was so scared when I saw the haunted house in front of me. It was all dark and spooky, with cobwebs hanging everywhere. I could hear strange noises coming from inside. My friends dared me to go in, but I wasn't sure if I should. Finally, I plucked up the courage and stepped inside.As soon as I entered, the door slammed shut behind me. I screamed and tried to open it, but it wouldn't budge. I was trapped in the haunted house! I started to walk through the dark corridors, trying to find a way out. Suddenly, I heard a ghostly voice whispering my name. I turned around, but there was no one there.I felt a chill run down my spine as I continued to explore the haunted house. I saw spooky paintings on the walls and creepy dolls sitting on shelves. I could feel eyes watching me from the shadows. Just when I thought things couldn't get any scarier, I heard footsteps approaching.I turned around and saw a ghost floating towards me. It let out a blood-curdling scream, and I ran as fast as I could. I found a staircase and ran up it, hoping to escape. At the top, I saw a door leading outside. I pushed it open and stumbled out into the fresh air.I was so relieved to be out of the haunted house. My friends were waiting for me, laughing at how scared I looked. I was shaking with fear, but also exhilarated by the adventure I had just been on. I couldn't believe I had made it out alive!From that day on, I never dared to enter another haunted house again. But I will always remember the thrill of my exciting adventure and the courage I found within myself to face my fears. It was a day I will never forget!篇2Title: The Adventure of LilyOnce upon a time, there was a little girl named Lily. She lived in a small village in Zhejiang province. One day, Lily found a mysterious map in her attic. The map led her to a hidden treasure deep in the forest.Excited and eager for an adventure, Lily set off on her journey. She walked through the dense forest, following the twists and turns of the map. Along the way, she encountered many obstacles - a raging river, a steep cliff, and a dark cave. But Lily was determined to find the treasure, so she persevered.Finally, after hours of hiking and climbing, Lily reached the hidden treasure. It was a chest filled with gold coins, sparkling gems, and precious jewels. Lily's eyes widened in amazement as she gazed at the treasure. She couldn't believe her luck!But just as she was about to take the treasure, she heard a rustling in the bushes. Out popped a group of bandits, who had been hiding and waiting for someone to find the treasure for them. Lily's heart raced with fear as the bandits demanded that she hand over the treasure.Thinking quickly, Lily grabbed the map and started running. She knew that she had to get back home safely. With the bandits hot on her trail, Lily ran faster than she ever had before. Finally, she made it back to her village, where she showed the map to the village elders.The elders were amazed by Lily's bravery and quick thinking. They decided to use the map to uncover more hidden treasures in the forest, and Lily became a hero in her village. From that dayon, she was known as the bravest and most adventurous girl in Zhejiang province.And so, Lily's adventure came to an end, but her courage and determination would be remembered for generations to come.篇3Title: My Adventure in the Jungle ()Hey guys! I want to tell you about the coolest adventure I had in the jungle. It all started when my friends and I decided to go on a camping trip. We heard about a mysterious jungle in the outskirts of our town and we thought it would be the perfect place for an adventure.As we entered the jungle, we were amazed by the lush green trees and the chirping of birds. It felt like we were in a different world altogether. We set up our tents and started exploring the jungle. We saw colorful butterflies fluttering around and heard the distant roar of a lion. It was both scary and exciting!As we walked deeper into the jungle, we stumbled upon a hidden waterfall. The water was crystal clear and we couldn't resist the temptation to take a dip. We splashed around and hadthe time of our lives. The jungle seemed to be full of surprises at every turn.But then, disaster struck. We got lost in the jungle and couldn't find our way back to the campsite. Panic set in as we realized that it was getting dark and dangerous animals might come out. We stuck together and tried to find our way back, but it seemed like we were going in circles.Just when we thought all hope was lost, we heard the sound of a helicopter overhead. We frantically waved our arms and screamed for help. The rescue team spotted us and airlifted us out of the jungle to safety. We were relieved and grateful for their timely help.Looking back, our adventure in the jungle was a rollercoaster ride of emotions. It taught us the importance of sticking together and never giving up, no matter how tough the situation. It was an experience we will never forget and always cherish.So next time you go on an adventure, remember to be prepared for the unexpected. You never know what surprises the jungle might have in store for you!篇4Title: The Amazing Adventure at the Ancient TempleOnce upon a time, me and my friends went on a trip to an ancient temple in the mountains. It was so cool because the temple was super old and had lots of mysterious legends. We were so excited to explore it!As we entered the temple, we saw a big statue of a dragon. It was so lifelike, we thought it might come to life at any moment! We bravely went closer to examine it, and suddenly the eyes of the dragon started glowing! We were so scared, but then we heard a voice coming from the statue."Welcome, young adventurers. I am the guardian of this temple. If you can pass my tests, you will be granted a special treasure," the voice said.We were so thrilled and ready to take on the challenge. The first test was to solve a riddle written on the wall. It was tricky, but we worked together and finally figured it out. The statue nodded in approval and opened a secret door for us.Inside the door, we found a room filled with ancient artifacts and jewels. It was like a real-life treasure hunt! We had to use our wits to avoid traps and solve puzzles to reach the final treasure. It was so much fun and exciting!Finally, we reached the end of the maze and found the treasure. It was a magical crystal that glowed with a bright light. We knew it was a special gift from the guardian of the temple.We left the temple feeling amazed and happy. It was the best adventure we had ever been on! We couldn't wait to tell our friends about it and plan our next exciting journey. The ancient temple had truly given us a once-in-a-lifetime experience that we would never forget.And that's how our amazing adventure at the ancient temple came to an end. It was a day full of excitement, mystery, and treasure. We couldn't wait for our next adventure to begin!篇5Title: The Adventure of Lily and Her Magical PenOnce upon a time, in a small village called Sunshine Valley, there lived a little girl named Lily. Lily was always curious and adventurous, and she loved to explore every corner of the village. One day, while she was playing in the woods, she stumbled upon a sparkling, magical pen.Excited and curious, Lily picked up the pen and started drawing on a blank piece of paper. To her surprise, whatever shedrew with the pen came to life! She drew a beautiful butterfly, and it fluttered off the paper and flew around her head. She drew a big, juicy apple, and it appeared in her hand, ready to be eaten.Lily knew she had found something special, and she decided to use the magical pen to go on an adventure. She drew a magnificent castle with towering turrets and a sparkling moat, and she stepped through the drawing into a magical kingdom.In the kingdom, Lily met a friendly dragon named Sparky, who had lost his fire. With the magical pen, Lily drew a new flame for Sparky, and they became best friends. Together, they went on many adventures, exploring the kingdom and helping others in need.As they journeyed through the kingdom, Lily and Sparky encountered many challenges and obstacles. But with the power of the magical pen and their friendship, they overcame every obstacle and always came out stronger in the end.After many exciting adventures, Lily and Sparky returned to Sunshine Valley, where they shared their stories with the villagers. The villagers were amazed by Lily's magical pen and her incredible adventures, and they celebrated her bravery and creativity.From that day on, Lily and Sparky continued to have many more adventures together, using the magical pen to explore new worlds and help those in need. And they lived happily ever after, knowing that with a little bit of imagination and courage, anything is possible.And that's the story of Lily and her magical pen, a tale of friendship, courage, and the power of creativity.篇6Title: The Adventure of Jerry and His Magic PencilHi guys, I'm Jerry! I want to tell you all about my amazing adventure with my magic pencil. It all started one day when I was doodling in my notebook during English class. Suddenly, my pencil started glowing and vibrating! I was so shocked but also excited.I couldn't resist picking up the pencil and drawing a door on the back of my notebook. To my surprise, the door opened and I was sucked into a magical world full of talking animals and flying unicorns. I couldn't believe my eyes!I met a friendly dragon named Sparky who told me that I was the chosen one to save their world from an evil witch. I wasscared but also determined to help. With my magic pencil, I was able to draw a shield to protect myself from the witch's spells.Together with Sparky and a brave bunny named Fluffy, we embarked on an epic quest to defeat the witch and save the magical world. Along the way, I drew a flying carpet to help us travel faster and a bridge to cross the lava river.Finally, after a thrilling battle, we defeated the evil witch and saved the day. The magical world was saved and I was hailed as a hero. I couldn't believe that all of this happened because of my magic pencil!As I said goodbye to my new friends and returned to the real world, I knew that I would never forget the incredible adventure I had with my magic pencil. Who knew that a simple doodle could lead to such an amazing journey?So, kids, always remember to believe in the power of imagination and never underestimate the magic of a pencil. You never know where it might take you! Just like me, Jerry, the hero of the magical world.篇7Title: What Happened at the Summer Camp?Hi everyone! I want to tell you about my amazing experience at the summer camp in Zhejiang province. It was so much fun and I can't wait to share all the cool things we did!First, we arrived at the campsite and met all the other kids in our group. There were kids from different schools and cities, but we quickly became friends and had so much fun together. We played games, sang songs, and even had a talent show where we showed off our skills.One of the best parts of the camp was the outdoor activities. We went hiking in the mountains, had a picnic by the lake, and even went swimming in the river. I was a little scared at first, but my friends encouraged me and we had a blast splashing around in the water.At night, we gathered around the campfire and roasted marshmallows. We told stories and sang songs until it was time to go to bed in our cozy cabins. I was a little homesick at first, but my new friends made me feel better and we stayed up late talking and laughing.Overall, the summer camp experience was unforgettable. I made new friends, tried new things, and had so much fun exploring the beautiful nature of Zhejiang province. I can't waitto go back next year and make even more memories with my friends. Summer camp rocks!篇8Title: The Unexpected AdventureOnce upon a time in a small village in Zhejiang province, there lived a group of friends who loved to go on adventures together. One sunny day, they decided to explore a mysterious cave that no one had ever dared to enter before.As they entered the cave, they were met with a gust of cool air and the sound of dripping water. The friends were a little scared, but they knew that they had each other for support. They held hands and ventured deeper into the cave, their footsteps echoing off the walls.After what seemed like hours of walking, they stumbled upon a hidden chamber filled with glittering jewels and precious stones. The friends couldn't believe their eyes - it was like they had discovered a real-life treasure trove! They carefully collected some of the jewels as souvenirs, knowing that they would always remember this amazing adventure.Just as they were about to leave, they heard a rumbling noise coming from the depths of the cave. They realized that they had triggered a trap set by the cave's ancient guardians! The friends quickly grabbed each other's hands and ran as fast as they could, dodging falling rocks and overcoming obstacles that blocked their path.Finally, they saw a faint light at the end of the tunnel and emerged from the cave, panting and sweating but exhilarated by their narrow escape. They knew that this adventure would be a story to tell for years to come, a memory that would bond them together forever.As they walked back to the village, the friends looked at each other with wide smiles, knowing that they had just experienced the most unexpected and thrilling adventure of their lives. And they couldn't wait for the next one to begin.篇9Title: My Adventure at the Zhejiang Province High School English ExamOnce upon a time, I went to the Zhejiang Province High School English Exam. It was a big day for me, and I was both excited and nervous. The exam room was big and filled withstudents from all over the province. The air was tense but I tried to stay calm and focused.When the exam started, I read the first question and felt a bit puzzled. But I remembered what my teacher told me - to read the questions carefully and choose the best answer. So I took a deep breath and started answering the questions one by one.There were some questions that I found easy, and others that were a bit tricky. But I didn't give up, I tried my best to think and solve them. I wrote down my answers neatly and checked them over before moving on to the next question.After what seemed like hours, the exam finally came to an end. I handed in my paper and felt a sense of relief wash over me.I did my best, and that's all that mattered.A few weeks later, the results were announced. I was so nervous to see how I did. When I saw my score, I couldn't believe it - I did great! I was so proud of myself for what I accomplished.Overall, my adventure at the Zhejiang Province High School English Exam was a challenging but rewarding experience. I learned that with hard work and determination, I can achieve anything. I can't wait to see what other adventures await me in the future.篇10Title: The Adventure of Tommy and His Magical PencilOnce upon a time, there was a boy named Tommy who had a magical pencil. This pencil could bring to life anything that Tommy drew with it. Tommy loved to draw and he would spend hours creating amazing creatures, landscapes, and adventures with his magical pencil.One day, Tommy decided to use his pencil to go on an exciting adventure. He drew a magnificent dragon soaring through the sky and climbed onto its back. With a flick of the pencil, the dragon took off into the clouds, swooping and diving through the air.As they flew over the mountains, Tommy saw a dark cave nestled in the rocks. He urged the dragon to land so they could explore. Inside the cave, Tommy found a hidden treasure chest filled with gold coins and sparkling jewels. He couldn't believe his luck!But suddenly, a loud roar echoed through the cave as a giant troll emerged from the shadows. Tommy quickly drew a brave knight with his pencil to protect him. The knight battled the troll with his sword, and after a fierce fight, the troll was defeated.Tommy and the knight emerged from the cave victorious, carrying the treasure chest with them. As they flew back home on the dragon's back, Tommy realized that with his magical pencil, he could go on endless adventures and never be bored again.And so, Tommy's amazing adventure with his magical pencil had only just begun. Who knows what incredible journeys and challenges lay ahead for him? The possibilities were as endless as his imagination.。

写作是四项语文技能中不可分割的一个重要部分，更是语言生成能力的重要表现形式。

该部分要求考生考生根据题示进行书面表达。

考生应能：(1)准确使用语法和词汇语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重要方面，因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输。

应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准中的一项重要内容。

(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思任何一篇文章都需要有一个主题,作者应该围绕该主题，借助一些句型、词组等的支持，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。

浙江卷写作第二节，读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。

读后续写。

提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容：1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4.上下文的连贯性。

概要写作。

提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；3.上下文的连贯性；4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。

样题第二节:读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks likeyou’ve got a problem,”Arthur said.“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，”Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just asArthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loug noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Carsstopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened？”But everyone had a different answer.Arthur，still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase！She thinks I’m the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2016.10（读后续写）Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Looking through the thick darkness, she felt a strong sense of regret of despair surging through her body. “If only I had not quarreled with Tom.” She thought to herself. However, she didn’t lose heart, keeping shouting in her mind, “Focus! Tom must have called for those helicopters. I have to guide him tomorrow.” She picked up her courage again and managed to find a shelter to stay from the bones-chilling night. Shortly after, she collapsed in fatigue and barely kept her eyes open, sweetly dreaming of seeing Tom.Para2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.She ate some berries and then made her way along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Exhausted but full of hope, all of a sudden, she spotted a huge flat rock. She made a great effort to climb onto it and waited with patience. The minute the helicopter came into sight again, she waved the yellow blouse violently and yelled at the helicopter with full-strength. Much to her joy, it did capture the attention of the helicopter and the helicopter landed near the big rock slowly. Without hesitation, Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom like a flying arrow in floods of tears, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alone!”2017.06（读后续写）Para1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul rolled down the window and yelled, “Come on，get in the car.” Without any hesitation, Mac jumped off the bicycle and dashed into the back seat of the car. “What a narrow escape!” Mac sighed in a shaky voice. All of a sudden, Mac let out a scream of terror with eyes wide open. The wild wolf almost caught up. Paul swung his car around immediately and headed straight towards the fierce wolf at a fantastic speed. Mac was too terrified to open his eyes, with fingers firmly crossed praying for safety. Sadly, the violent collisions directly ended the wolf’s life. Para2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Seeing a breathless wolf lying in a pool of blood and Mac frozen with terror, they frowned in puzzlement. “Good to see you two again.”Mac came up to them in floods of tears, holding them tightly in arms. After figuring out what had happened moments ago, they gave Paul and Becky a tight hug and conveyed heartfelt thanks. When Mac gradually regained his calm, three friends waved goodbye to Paul and Becky until their car disappeared into a line of sight. And the three friends continued their bicycle trip to Alaska pleasantly.2017.11（读后续写）Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I cast a look at Dad, hoping he could turn down her crazy idea again. Much to our frustration, he agreed unexpectedly. Mom’s eyes twinkled with pleasure. She pulled over the car and searched for the tent instantly. All of a sudden, she let out a cry of anxiety. “Oh, gosh! We left the tent in the hotel!” she burst out crying like a child. Absolutely speechless as we were, we made up our mind to head back to the hotel. Luckily, we managed to retrieve the tent and even enjoyed a night in our tent for the first time. The next day, we continued our trip pleasantly.Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The vast bright blue sky, the limitless fresh green grass, the blossoming wild charming flowers, the group of adorable sheep kept me spellbound. However, all the breathtaking and picturesque scenery faded away compared to my absent-mind and forgetful mom, it dawned on me that without all the unnecessary trouble caused by mom, the journey wouldn’t be such a fan tastic and amazing experience to treasure in my childhood. It was her who brought light to our plain life. I really love my Mum. 2018.06（读后续写）Para1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Startled by the white fluffy rabbit, the horse almost threw me off its back. I hurriedly tightened my grip and couldn't help letting out screams. But after we regained our calm, I was amused both by the thrill and the innocence of the little creature. Seeing it fleeing, cheerily, I turned to my dad, “Dad, can we follow it?” My dad nodded with a tolerant smile. Soon without consciousness, we were miles away up into the mountain and we lost track of the rabbit and of course, the track Uncle Paul had asked us to keep to.Para2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We had to get off the horses and tried to figure out the way back, but after many attempts, we still failed---we got lost. I grew a bit anxious, but with dad around, I felt all right. As darkness thickened, dad believed it was safer to stay on the spot and waited for help. It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature---the warm breeze ruffling through the trees，the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds… This serenity ended as we heard shouts and torches came into our sight. At this time, I felt extremely grateful, to Paul and Tina, to this vacation with my dad, and to natur. 2018.11（概要写作）It’s a wise choice for you to pay a personal visit to the college before you apply for, especially the ones that close to you. （要点一和二）In order to avoid being regretful, you should at least visit the colleges you desire to attend. （要点三）If you are short of time and money, it will be helpful as well to search the online college fairsCollegeWeekLive where you can obtain necessary information. （要点四）2019.06（概要写作）（原文）Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward." We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.（参考范文）Nowadays parents tend to overpraise their children, which may have bad effects.(要点1）However, inadequate praise can be equally harmful. （要点2）Experts suggest parents pay attention to the quality of their praise and that they should praise the effort rather than the result. （要点3）Parents should also be aware that praise needs to be task-specific and match the amount of effort their children have made. （要点4）2019年2月温州市二模For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students’ confidence and understanding of materials.But in the past few years, students have started calling for an end to in-class presentations as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. This week, a tweet posted by a 15-year-old high school student declaring “Stop forcing students to present in front of the class and give them a choice not to” received more than 130,000 retweets and nearly half a million likes.In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression as the leading mental-health issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.These students want more options. They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in ways that speak to those strengths. This might mean presenting alone in front of the teacher, or choosing between several alternatives like producing a piece of art or an essay for private judgment instead of presenting their work orally.Educators have begun to take it seriously. They agree teachers should listen to students and hear their voices and respond to that. If students’ feelings are ignored, they might just walk away. However, not everyone is convinced. Some hold the view that pushing students out of comfort zones is a big part of what they should do as some students are deathly afraid to do it.参考文章：Giving in-class presentation has been considered beneficial to students’ growth, especially confidence building. （要点1）Yet recently students are urging it to be cancelled for its improper to those with anxiety, for the heavy burden from homework. （要点2）They can show their individual strengths(strong points) in different ways. （要点3）Educators acknowledge the importance of students’ feelings but some insist on urging students to give in-class presentation to increase their confidence. （要点4）。

浙江2024高考英语读后续写首考满分范文全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: A Test of Success: The Perfect Score in the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Comprehension SectionIntroduction:In the year 2024, thousands of high school students across Zhejiang province embarked on a journey towards their academic dreams – the high school entrance examination. Among the various subjects tested, the English reading comprehension section proved to be a significant challenge for many. However, for one exceptional student, this test became a platform to showcase their impeccable comprehension skills and achieve the ultimate goal – a perfect score.Main Body:The reading comprehension section of the Zhenjiang 2024 high school entrance examination consisted of five passages, each with a set of questions testing the students' understanding of the text. The passages covered a wide range of topics, from science and technology to literature and history. For the averagestudent, this section required careful reading, critical thinking, and effective time management. However, for the student who scored a perfect 100%, these challenges were mere stepping stones towards success.The student's journey towards excellence began long before the examination day. With a passion for reading and a thirst for knowledge, they devoured books, newspapers, and online articles on a daily basis. Their dedication to improving their English language skills was unparalleled, and it reflected in their performance on the reading comprehension section.As the examination day arrived, the student remained calm and composed, knowing that they had prepared diligently for this moment. They tackled each passage with precision, carefully analyzing the text, identifying key information, and answering the questions with confidence. Their ability to understand complex ideas, infer meaning from context, and make logical connections between ideas set them apart from their peers.In the end, when the results were announced, the student's hard work and determination paid off. They had achieved a perfect score in the English reading comprehension section, a feat that seemed unimaginable to many. The student'sachievement was not only a testament to their academic abilities but also a source of inspiration for their peers and teachers.Conclusion:The story of the student who achieved a perfect score in the Zhejiang 2024 high school English reading comprehension section serves as a reminder of the power of dedication, perseverance, and passion. By setting high standards for themselves and committing to their goals, this student was able to overcome challenges and achieve success. Their achievement is a testament to the limitless potential that lies within each of us, waiting to be unleashed through hard work and determination. As we look towards the future, let us remember the lessons learned from this remarkable student and strive to reach our own goals with the same level of determination and commitment.篇2Title: A Bright Future: The Story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance ExaminationAs the sun set on the bustling city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province sat in eager anticipation, their hearts pounding with excitement and nerves. It was the year 2024, and the much-anticipated college entrance examination was aboutto begin. For many, this was the culmination of years of hard work and dedication, and the gateway to a brighter future.The first rays of dawn broke through the horizon, signaling the start of the examination. The testing rooms were filled with the sound of pencils scratching against paper, as students poured their knowledge and skills onto the answer sheets. The questions were challenging, but the students were well-prepared, having spent countless hours studying and practicing for this moment.As the day wore on, the students emerged from the examination halls, their faces a mix of relief and exhaustion. Some lamented the questions they had struggled with, while others beamed with confidence, knowing they had given it their all. But one thing was certain – they had all left their mark on the test, showcasing their abilities and potential.Weeks went by, and the results were finally announced. The students gathered in the school auditorium, hearts pounding once again as they awaited their fate. The atmosphere was tense, but as the names were called and the scores revealed, a sense of pride and accomplishment filled the room. Many had achieved outstanding results, with some even scoring a perfect 100%.They had proven themselves on the biggest stage, and the future looked brighter than ever.As the students celebrated their achievements, they knew that this was just the beginning. The college entrance examination was a stepping stone towards their dreams and aspirations, and they were determined to seize every opportunity that came their way. With their scores in hand, they began to apply to their dream universities, armed with the confidence and determination that had carried them through the examination.The year 2024 had been a monumental one for the students of Zhejiang province. They had faced the challenges of the college entrance examination head-on, and emerged victorious. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the road ahead would be paved with obstacles and hardships, but they were ready to face them with courage and resilience. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination would go down in history as a testament to the power of hard work, perseverance, and the unwavering spirit of youth. And as the sun set once again on the city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province knew that their futures were bright, and that they were ready to take on whatever challenges came their way.In conclusion, the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a turning point for the students of Zhejiang province, a momentous occasion that marked the beginning of a new chapter in their lives. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the opportunities before them were endless, and that with determination and perseverance, they could achieve anything they set their minds to. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a shining example of the power of education and the resilience of youth, and it would be remembered for years to come as a testament to the potential of the next generation.篇3Title: A Bright Future: Reflecting on the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading TestThe Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a milestone in my academic journey. The diverse range of texts challenged my understanding of society, culture, and literature. As I sat down to write the essay portion, my mind raced with ideas and insights that the test had sparked.The first passage, a contemporary poem, spoke of the struggles of modern life. It resonated with me, as I consideredthe pressures of school, society, and family. The questions that followed pushed me to analyze the author's use of language and structure, deepening my appreciation for poetry as a form of expression.Next came a scientific article on climate change. The urgency of the topic struck a chord with me, as I considered the impact of our actions on the environment. The questions prompted me to think critically about the causes and effects of global warming, and the potential solutions that we can collectively pursue.The third passage, an excerpt from a classic novel, transported me to a different time and place. I immersed myself in the author's vivid descriptions and complex characters, contemplating the universal themes of love, loss, and redemption. The questions challenged me to interpret the text through a historical and literary lens, expanding my understanding of the novel's cultural significance.Finally, the essay prompt asked me to reflect on the connections between the three passages and my own experiences. I drew upon my personal insights and observations to craft a cohesive argument that synthesized the themes of individuality, responsibility, and resilience. As I polished my finaldraft, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride in my ability to articulate my thoughts in a clear and persuasive manner.In conclusion, the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a rigorous yet rewarding experience that tested my analytical skills and critical thinking abilities. It challenged me to engage with diverse texts and perspectives, inspiring me to approach literature and life with a newfound curiosity and insight. As I look towards the future, I am confident that the lessons I have learned from this test will guide me towards success in my academic and personal endeavors.。

续写A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was elven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we would ever see them againFinally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathroom if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout 放哨 while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ”“WhatOh, Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quite.”We were never actually left in a strange city, but we were not about to take any chance.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections反对. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语;Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.提炼原文情节1. My mother’s forgetfulness filled our life with much surprise and amusement.2. During a family trip, my family had to return back to fetch our purse and traveler’s checks as my mother forgot to bring.3. She advised us to put up a tent in a stranger’s family, because she thought others were as nice as herself. But my father turned down the idea. we finally spent a night in a hotel.Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.开头句出现了the brand-new tent, 可以围绕这个新的帐篷展开,结合妈妈比较健忘这个特点,可以把这两个结合起来;比如前面是我们在酒店里住了一晚,会不会妈妈把帐篷丢在酒店呢我们为什么会想到帐篷呢是不是有可能要野营已给词汇：absent-minded, forgetful, trip, David, camping, tent, Mom, Dad, trouble, nice步骤三：Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. The night before, we turned down Mom’s idea of camping in the house’s backyard. In order to realize her dream, we made our minds to spend a night in the wild. What surprised us was that along the way, a nice camping site, located by a lake, came to our eyes. In the moment we pulled over, we found many travelers busy setting up their tents. The sunset cast an orange light over the lake and glorified the green grass, which attracted us immediately. Having greeted our neighbors, we began to set up our brand-new tent. However, out of our expectation, the sleeping bags were missing. Yes, my mother forgot to pack up them. My parents had to turn to our neighbors for help. To our surprise, a neighbor offered their spare bags, making us able to spend the night in our tents.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a great trip, and we were drowned in the beautiful scenery. Finally, we arrived at my grandparents’ house where we shared the fantastic experiences with them all the way. When they heard my mother’s funny stories, they made fun of her. Despite Mom’s being absent-minded, she was still a kind and nice Mom.。

高中英语浙江新高考读后续写预览说明:预览图片所展示的格式为文档的源格式展示,下载源文件没有水印,内容可编辑和复制2020年07月浙江英语新高考读后续写在刚刚过去的浙江高考中，英语一科最后的读后续写，依然是人与动物，也依然是野外遇险，与2017年的那篇“人狼大战”有一些相似的地方。

小编今天帮大家详细分析一下这篇题目。

2020年07月浙江高考英语读后续写One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” —the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar be ar, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws （爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇）, I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. Thespray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫）, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。