对外经济贸易大学远程教育学院
2011-2012学年第一学期
《商务英语写作》课程期末考试复习题
（答案供参考）
一．请你判断(40%)
请你仔细阅读本课程教材《商务英语写作》第4章和第5章，然后对以下两份简式报告的写作质量做出判断。
请你参照上述两章中的体例，采用该教材第61页上说明的标记方法（采用英语字母A, B, C和D来分别代表“错”、“差”、“对”和“对且好”），在所给填空处写下你的评分，然后就每份提出至少三个问题和修改意见。
1. (A Short Report)
Report on a Place for Rest (Opening Conference Room)
Dear Sir,
We‟d like to ask for your permission to open the conference room for all the staff to have a rest during lunch break. We would be appreciated for Necessary recreational facilities, such as cards and Chinese chess, etc. With a nice rest, we‟d be more energetic in our work. Thanks for your consideration.
All Staff
我认为这份报告得分为___C____（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：
We would be appreciated for Necessary recreational facilities, such as cards and Chinese chess, etc. Necessary 不需要大写直接将Necessary改为necessary.
All Staff 落款应该是Yours faithfully,
2. (A Short Report)
Dear Sir,
In order to ease the pressure of work every day, we would like to have a better place for rest at noon. And here is our proposal:
1. Open some of the conference rooms from 12:00-13:00 for staff
2. Supply some appliance, such as newspapers, Chinese chess, and etc in the conference rooms for staff.
We are looking forward to your approval.
Yours sincerely,
我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：
3. (A Short Report)
Dear Sirs,
We are so happy to have a relaxing time at noon. But now our problem is no place to do it. Would you kindly open a place for us? Thanks a lot and hope your kind reply.
Best regards
All staffs
我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：
4. (A short Report)
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to apply for the daily opening of the meeting room.
A good rest in the noon is necessary for work effective in the afternoon. Due to the busy work, we hope for your permission to open the meeting room from 12 am to 1pm on work days. Some recreational activities like Chinese chess or cards will be also are highly welcomed.
Jack, on behalf of the staff
January 12, 2011
我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：
