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雅思写作常见错误分析：措辞毛病
本文收集整理了雅思写作常见错误分析：措辞毛病。
希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助！
措辞毛病(troubles in diction)
措辞是指在特定的句子中如何恰当地选用词语的问题，由于很多因素的制约，比如上课时间有限，老师在这方面作的指导相对来说就比较少，因此导致了学生在平时写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。
他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。
所以作文中措辞不当的地方比比皆是：
1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业中不断增加的化学物质的使用也造成了污染)
分析：
显然，考生把“obstacles ”“障碍物”当做“物质”来使用了，另外，“the increasing use ”(不断增加的使用)应该改为“abusive use ”(滥用)。
改为：The abusive use of chemical substance in agriculture also leads to pollution.。
雅思写作常犯语法错误总结写作考试往往能够将同学们的语法错误暴露出来，那么我们在写作中的常见语法错误有哪些?我们又该如何正确使用语法知识呢?希望以下内容对大家的雅思备考有所帮助!雅思写作常见语法错误之1：非谓语动词使用不当原：Comparing with the money people earns， the sense of achievement is more important。
改：Compared with the money people earns， the sense of achievement is more important。
评：此处是动词compare的.现在分词和过去分词使用混淆了。
在英语中，动词的现在分词往往表示的是主动的意思，过去分词则表示被动的含义。
原句想表达的是“将成就感与钱相比”，“把…与…相比”是明显的被动含义，因此应该使用compared。
雅思写作常见语法错误之2：时态混乱原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager， I always dreamed about having a job。
改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager， I always dreamed about having a job。
评：虽然雅思写作以议论文为主，为了表示客观性，基本上使用的都是现在时态，但是在举例的时候还是会涉及到一些过去时态，例如上面的句子，切记：主从句时态要保持一致。
雅思写作常见语法错误之3：表述累赘原：Internet plays an important and indispensible role in people’s life today。
改：Internet plays an indispensible role in people’s life today。
Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree.正文：Nowadays, environmental problems is (are/have been) one of the most serious phenomenon (Chinglish, 改为dangerous issues)that threat almost some(every) industrialized countries are facing. However, whether only countries use the resource in environment to increase the quality of life is a controversial issue. （我觉得应该改为：Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development.）In my opinion, it is unavoidable that countries break the surrounding(破坏环境？不这样搭配) if they want to develop the industry and the level of life. (In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result.)Nowadays, environmental problems have been one of the most dangerous issues that threat almost every industrialized countries. Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development. In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result.First, it is obvious the purpose of long-term human activity is to make industrial development（make development没有这个用法哦）and improve the quality of life. This means that there are more and more rubbishes when we are working.（为什么用这么多there be 句型呢）Therefore, if we want to promote the economic （promote economy）, we may damage our environment in the daily life.（in the daily life 很生硬, 改为in unconscious ways）Firstly, the very existence of human beings indeed exerts various influences on the natural environment, such as water pollution, disafforestation and the greenhouse effect. Besides that, human waste pollution has become more and more noteworthy with the fast sprawl of urban districts concerning the unprecedentedly speed of economic development.Moreover, with the population growing by （没这个搭配哈, with the amount of population growing/increasing 差不多）, we need a loads of resource（resources）to support our life. For example, it is allowed by government that every family can get child more than one since 2014 in China.(普遍二胎政策不是这样翻译的哈，还是自己要多查资料) So it maybe（may）consume more resources than before. (it consume，it指代的是什么？)Moreover, larger pollution demands greater amounts of resources to support, a phenomenon that consequently adds more man-made pressure to the natural environment. For instance, Chinese government has issued the universal two-child policy which originally aims at optimizing the demographic structure but may simultaneously bring greater demands of natural resources from the environment.That is not to say we must damage(damage用太多了) our environment if we want to get an increase. Of course, we can raise public's green awareness or encourage low carbon lifestyle when we are working in). But still, it is bad for environment when we develop our)However, it is not always vicious with the intention to develop national strength especially for industrialized countries. If proper measures were taken by both the nation and individuals, a great deal of waste and pollution can be avoided during the development of industries and improvement of civic life quality. For the government, certain restrictive policies on overexploitation of natural resources are beneficial to build a better environment. As for citizens, appropriate appeals to abstemious awareness as well as low-carbon lifestyle can be supplementary solutions to a brighter future.In sum(有这个短语吗？), there are a loads of（重复用了两遍）disadvantages to environment if we want to increase the level of our life（level 不用increase）. Meanwhile, we should not ignore there are some methods to decrease the damage（damage不用decrease）.To sum up, although disadvantages can be arisen in the process of national proceeding and individual advance, it is the cooperative endeavors of the country and the public that can prominently reduce the damage caused by economic growth.问题小结：1.动宾搭配问题很严重，标黄色的部分都是搭配不得当的。
【导语】为了⼤家能够更好地备考雅思考试，今天特意为⼤家整理了雅思写作⾼分模板：利弊分析型，希望对⼤家有帮助！
1、AAA has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important
role in our daily life. The benefits AAA brings to us are far more than its
disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its problem.
2、On the positive side, AAA has enabled us to (1) 此处填⼊ AAA 的优势之⼀。
For
instance, ( 2 )举例说明优势之⼀。
Besides, (3)AAA 的优势之⼆。
Nowadays, (4) 举例说明优势之⼆。
In
addition, ( 5 ) AAA 的优势之三。
3、On the negative side, (6) 此处填⼊ AAA 的劣势之⼀。
For example,(7)
举例说明劣势之⼀。
Besides,(8)AAA 的劣势之⼆。
Furthermore,(9)AAA 的劣势之三。
4、All in all, we can not live without AAA for the conveniences it brings to
us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern
life.。
灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）第一篇：灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题雅思考试时很多考生候遇到过这种情况，在考试前准备了很多大作文需要的素材和材料，但奇怪的是真正到了考场，碰到某些题目这些素材好像就没有用了，心情就变的紧张起来从而影响正常的发挥。
根据笔者这几年所积累的教学经验，雅思大作文绝大多数情况下出题还是比较常规和正常的，但也确实存在着某些偏题或者难题、怪题（大家不用紧张，雅思怪题和难题出现的频率不高）。
于是今天朗阁海外考试研究中心的雅思培训专家就给大家介绍一下如何应对雅思大作文偏题怪题。
Example 1 Advertising encourages people to buy in quantity rather than promoting itsquality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?广告鼓励人们购买大量的产品而不是促进提升产品的质量。
你同意还是不同意？其实这道题目是典型的广告类题目：考生拿到这个题目，首先要读三遍，理解题目本质的含义。
广告的本质之一其实就是帮助卖家(selling agencies)或者厂商(manufactures)提升产品知名度(increase the brand reputation),从而打开市场(explore the wider markets), 提升产品的销售额(boost the sales rates),怂恿或者引领消费者购买更多的产品(encouraging and leading the consumers to spend their salaries to purchase large quantities of products), 所以考生从正面来回答(agree)的话，就可以从以上这些角度来入手，写起来应该不难。
而且考生们还要知道厂商或者销售商是付钱给广告商的(advertisement agencies receive payment from manufacturers）, 如果人们买得多，对广告商本身也有好处。
雅思写作中的常见问题和解决方法雅思写作是许多考生面临的一大难题。
许多考生在准备雅思写作时，会遇到许多问题，如语法错误、词汇问题和逻辑不清等。
本文将具体列举并解决雅思写作中常见问题，帮助考生们更好地备考。
一、语法错误语法错误是雅思写作中最常见的问题之一。
在写作中，考生们往往会在句子结构、时态和主谓一致等方面出现错误。
为了解决这个问题，考生首先应该加强自己的语法基础，了解基本的语法规则。
其次，在写作过程中要注意认真检查和润色自己的句子，尽可能避免语法错误的出现。
最后，考生可以多阅读一些范文和词汇量较大的文章，以提高自己的语法水平。
二、词汇问题词汇问题是雅思写作中另一个常见的问题。
考生常常会用一些重复和简单的词汇，造成文章单调和缺乏亮点。
要解决这个问题，考生可以通过以下几种方法来扩充自己的词汇量。
首先，多阅读一些英语书籍、杂志和报纸，扩大自己的词汇储备。
其次，背诵一些常用的词汇和短语，通过实践应用来巩固记忆。
最后，多进行写作练习，尝试使用一些新的词汇和表达方式，提高自己的写作水平。
三、逻辑不清逻辑不清是雅思写作中常见的问题之一。
考生在写作时，往往会出现思路跳跃、逻辑不连贯的情况，导致文章不够连贯和有说服力。
要解决这个问题，考生可以通过以下几种方法来改善。
首先，进行合理的写作规划，明确自己的观点和结论，并按照一定的逻辑顺序进行组织。
其次，使用一些连接词和词组，如“firstly, secondly, moreover, furthermore”，来连接自己的论点和例证，使文章更加连贯。
最后，多进行练习，培养自己的逻辑思维能力，提高写作的逻辑性。
四、字数不够字数不够是雅思写作中常见的问题之一。
在考试中，如果字数不够可能会导致分数降低。
为了解决这个问题，考生可以采取以下措施。
首先，合理安排自己的时间，不要过于拖延写作进度，以免导致字数不足。
其次，多进行写作练习，培养自己的写作速度和思维的连贯性，这样就可以更快地完成文章。
雅思写作雅思审题联系到两大失误你就玩完了写作审题很重要，直接关系到你会不会写偏题。
我们今天会跟同学们讲到审题的两大误区，题干主次不分以及问答遗漏或不充分。
接下来一起来看看店铺带来的雅思内容：雅思写作审题联系到两大失误你就玩完了雅思写作雅思审题联系到两大失误你就玩完了一、题干主次不分众所周知，一个完整的雅思大作文考题，一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成，而提干部分通常有一到两个句子，两句话之间可以是因果关系，也可以是转折或者并列关系。
当题干部分是因果或者转折关系时，意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了，于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思，如：Scientific and technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However, most scientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?一些考生认为这道题就是在作文里“至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。
”如果这么写就悲剧了，这句话的逻辑关系是转折，转折以后的部分还是提干。
还不清楚?那我们再举另一个例子：More and more women now go out to work. Hence, it is government’s responsibility to provide daycare service for the children of working mother, free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree?在这句里，很明显就能看到题干二个句子的逻辑关系是因果，所以我们应该把重点放在“政府是否有义务为这些工作妇女提供免费照顾孩子的服务上”上，从“赞同”或“反对”入手。
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。
此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。
雅思作文考题审题误区分析雅思作文考题审题误区分析下面雅思为大家整理了雅思大作文审题误区分析，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。
雅思大作文审题误区题目的题干主次不分一个完整的雅思考题，一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成。
题干部分通常是一到二个句子，这二个句子之间的逻辑关系一般为因果，转折或者并列。
若是并列关系的话，前后这二个句子意思的重要性是一致的，但是若题干部分是因果或者转折关系时，意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了，于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思。
而很多考生在考试或者平时训练时，往往会很想当然地把题干中一些比较熟悉的单词当作题目的重心，然后马上就提笔展开写作。
其实这是很不对的。
下面我们来看一个考题：Scientificand technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However，mostscientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree？可能读了这个题目后很多考生会觉得接下来的'作文里至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。
其实如果你写了这个内容的话那么就大错特错了。
题干的逻辑关系是转折，这就意味着转折词以后的部分是题干的主要意思，前面那个句子只是用来进行背景铺垫或者对比的作用。
因此，我们在对这篇作文进行段落布局的时候一个方面是要去论述一下为什么科学家很难找到解决科技进步所造成问题的解决方案，而另外一个方面则需说明一下科学家们已经或者可以或者有能力找到所有或一些解决办法。
这样的双边论证从思路上才是正确的。
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雅思写作常见错误之单复数单复数误用应该是雅思写作错误排行榜的top2的存在了。
错例：One of the most challenging problem are who should be responsible forlooking after the elderly people.正解：One of the most challenging problems is who should be responsible forlooking after the elderly people.改错练习：1. What our modernsociety values are the personality and creativity.2. Private car willexert adverse impacts on the environment and traffic ofthe whole society.3. Long-distance education provides students interesting way to learn.雅思写作常见错误之标点大部分的标点错误出在逗号上。
逗号表示句子内部的一般性停顿。
两个具有独立含义的句子，在没有连词的情况下简单地被一个逗号隔开是不正确的。
改正这样的错误须用句号或分号代替逗号，或用并列连词(and，but，or，so，nor，yet)连接两个句子，或用从属连词(because，as，although等)，否则会导致句子出现语法错误。
错例：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject，others think that’sa waste of time.正解：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject. However，others think that’s a waste oftime.或：Some people believe children in secondaryschool should studyinternational news as a subject，but others think that’s a waste of time.改错练习：1. Students should do some housework，it is goodfor them to beindependent.2. They are far away from parents and friends，theycan deal with everythingby themselves.雅思写作结尾模板分析他对于雅思大作文结尾段的理解：Conclusions are actually quite simple. The purpose of the conclusion is toanswer thequestion in the title. Do this by referring to the points you havealready made in the main body. Don’t repeat whole sentences，just summarise themain points. It is also important that you do not raise any new ideas in theconclusion. The conclusion need not be long. Keep it brief and make sure it isdirectly related to the question.雅思作文的结论部分事实上相当简单。
出国考试：雅思写作经典错误与分析-出国考试
雅思写作经典错误与分析
一．不一致（disagreements）
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等．
例１．when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致．
改为：
once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二．修饰语错位（misplaced modifiers）
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例
１．i believe i can do it well and i will better know t he world outside the campus.
剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末．
三．句子不完整（sentence fragments）
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．
例
１．there are many ways to know the society. for example
by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂
for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：
there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,r adio ,and newspaper.
四．悬垂修饰语（dangling modifiers）
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：
at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂
at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明”谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了．
改为：
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例１．to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚．
改为：
to do well in college, a student needs good
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;grades.
五．词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．
例１．none can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：
none can deny the importance of money.
六．指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不
一致。
试看下面这一句：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to b e her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。
)
读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。
如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。
这
个句子可改为：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例
1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。
改为：
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七．不间断句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例
１．there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。
简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside worl d. 或：
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted
with the outside
world
八．措词毛病(troubles in diction)
diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。
他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。
所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。
例１．the increasing use of chemical&nb
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sp;obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。
)
剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。
另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)”应改为
“abusive use (滥用)”。
改为：
the ab
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usive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/l eads to pollution.
九．累赘(redundancy)
言以简洁为贵。
写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。
能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。
如：
in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：
in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例
１．for the people who are diligent and kind, money is ju st the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。
改为：
diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they nee d.
十．不连贯(incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。
这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例
１．the fresh water, it is the most important things of t he earth.
剖析：the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。
it 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为：
fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一．综合性语言错误(comprehensive misusage)
所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述十种错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。
例
1．today, money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
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